I need your help, since I did everything on my own, it took me one month in order to finish this first episode. I'd love to continue working on the series, but I need your support. If you can share this episode with people who loves Naruto, it will help me greatly.
I’m glad to see that my work is reaching the right audience. Get comfortable, there is online beer in the refrigerator, and don’t-go-to the basement. The Episode 2 script is 40% done as of now.
Good start, but prolly try to flesh out the characters more. Make sure that whatever you do it can be backed by scenes and it still makes some sense and familiar to the source. Could use a bit more of gags for comedy purposes, otherwise it is just dialogue that might get dry after awhile. Also the dialogue seems a tad stilted. Nothing wrong with that. You really did a good job for doing it on your own. Try to do some deeper cuts and don't fall on bathroom humor. It never ages too well. Again, you did an awesome job and I def subscribed. Would love to see another fleshling abridger make it with the others. Also, careful with the pokemon gags, I don't think it will hold up. I could be wrong tho. I ain't a pro. Lol Good luck with this and it is okay to learn while you create, make mistakes, find out what works and what doesn't. Ghost nappa is a good example of that. Anyways, good luck! I'll be watching. ^.^
Yea I definitely agree That's kinda my problem too, the humor I have my own little 4 rewrite/ fanfic that are incomplete becs, I always have the same problem, humor So I try for very long time to actually finish them but I still have a lot of work on some weak points
@@nicolas._.2294 I wrote a concept for a Gundam wing abridged a long time ago. With a manic suicidal... I forgot fucking name. Lena? The choc, the pilots are all fun loving himbos, and the world is kinda this chaotic melodramatic mess they obliviously navigate through on accidnet because they been brainwashed to believe it is all a game. FunDumb Pilots is what I wanted to call it.
I appreciated the feedback. Your assessment is correct. I watched the TFS abridged commentary, and they mentioned how difficult was editing things in the begging. But they builded a team and ended up producing excellent results in the end. On the other side, I have more than 15 years experience as a filmmaker and VFX artist, so it gives me an edge. But again I am just a single person and writing a lot of different characters is always a challenge when there is so little material in the pool to craft a new story. The reason the voices sound like that is because that’s how they speaks in the original dub. And the voice models copy the speech cadence. And since the voices I’m making sound just like original actors, copying the cadence and pitch patterns is a good way to avoid uncanny valley results. So there are big limitations to what I can do with my voice. So I have to be conservative while writing and delivering lines. So far so good. I’m writing episode two. And I have an excellent idea how to do the first Sabusa fight. Thank you for the support.
I’m glad to heard that. I trained the AI models with the original dubbed and act the scenes, so It is very challenging and limiting. I waited years in order to make this, I am happy that is actually working. This episode took me an entire month to make. If you think someone could like it as well, I’d appreciate if you could share it with them. I take any support I can get at this early stage.
Give me some feedback, any new ideas on how to make the show better are welcome. What would you like to see in the future.? What were your favorite moments? Would you like to collaborate? Just let me know.
I need your help, since I did everything on my own, it took me one month in order to finish this first episode. I'd love to continue working on the series, but I need your support. If you can share this episode with people who loves Naruto, it will help me greatly.
this is pretty well edited and quite funny
Thank you. My goal is to finish making the first season for now. This takes a lot of time.
BRO THIS IS SO GOOD, I WAS THINKING OF SOMEONE DOING ONE OF THESE. Besides the ai this is so good keep it up
I’m glad to see that my work is reaching the right audience. Get comfortable, there is online beer in the refrigerator, and don’t-go-to the basement.
The Episode 2 script is 40% done as of now.
Good start, but prolly try to flesh out the characters more. Make sure that whatever you do it can be backed by scenes and it still makes some sense and familiar to the source.
Could use a bit more of gags for comedy purposes, otherwise it is just dialogue that might get dry after awhile. Also the dialogue seems a tad stilted. Nothing wrong with that. You really did a good job for doing it on your own. Try to do some deeper cuts and don't fall on bathroom humor. It never ages too well. Again, you did an awesome job and I def subscribed. Would love to see another fleshling abridger make it with the others. Also, careful with the pokemon gags, I don't think it will hold up. I could be wrong tho. I ain't a pro. Lol
Good luck with this and it is okay to learn while you create, make mistakes, find out what works and what doesn't. Ghost nappa is a good example of that. Anyways, good luck! I'll be watching. ^.^
Yea I definitely agree
That's kinda my problem too, the humor
I have my own little 4 rewrite/ fanfic that are incomplete becs, I always have the same problem, humor
So I try for very long time to actually finish them but I still have a lot of work on some weak points
@@nicolas._.2294 I wrote a concept for a Gundam wing abridged a long time ago. With a manic suicidal... I forgot fucking name. Lena? The choc, the pilots are all fun loving himbos, and the world is kinda this chaotic melodramatic mess they obliviously navigate through on accidnet because they been brainwashed to believe it is all a game. FunDumb Pilots is what I wanted to call it.
@@nicolas._.2294 but yeah, humor is hard unless you ground the characters and world first and figure out what you want for the humor.
I appreciated the feedback. Your assessment is correct.
I watched the TFS abridged commentary, and they mentioned how difficult was editing things in the begging. But they builded a team and ended up producing excellent results in the end. On the other side, I have more than 15 years experience as a filmmaker and VFX artist, so it gives me an edge. But again I am just a single person and writing a lot of different characters is always a challenge when there is so little material in the pool to craft a new story.
The reason the voices sound like that is because that’s how they speaks in the original dub. And the voice models copy the speech cadence. And since the voices I’m making sound just like original actors, copying the cadence and pitch patterns is a good way to avoid uncanny valley results.
So there are big limitations to what I can do with my voice. So I have to be conservative while writing and delivering lines.
So far so good. I’m writing episode two. And I have an excellent idea how to do the first Sabusa fight.
Thank you for the support.
We all have been there.
I love it, more please
I’m already writing the second episode.
@@TheFunDimension bro you replied!? Awesome! I’m supporting this shit
Is this ai voice either way it is great
I’m glad to heard that. I trained the AI models with the original dubbed and act the scenes, so It is very challenging and limiting. I waited years in order to make this, I am happy that is actually working.
This episode took me an entire month to make. If you think someone could like it as well, I’d appreciate if you could share it with them. I take any support I can get at this early stage.
Is this Naruto abridged?
Yes it is, I just made it. I am working on the next episodes. So far so good.
Give me some feedback, any new ideas on how to make the show better are welcome. What would you like to see in the future.? What were your favorite moments? Would you like to collaborate? Just let me know.