Things to consider to improve: 1. Use the intro chords as a bridge later 2. Reserve synth for climax later, can use guitar for these melodies earlier instead 3. Simplify earlier choruses- no synth, use guitar for melodies; the synth parts would have greater impact later in song 4. Perhaps no reason for bridge given the interlude in the song, but it seems to be missing the opportunity to introduce a "story told through guitar" is guitar over any of these chords
Things to consider to improve:
1. Use the intro chords as a bridge later
2. Reserve synth for climax later, can use guitar for these melodies earlier instead
3. Simplify earlier choruses- no synth, use guitar for melodies; the synth parts would have greater impact later in song
4. Perhaps no reason for bridge given the interlude in the song, but it seems to be missing the opportunity to introduce a "story told through guitar" is guitar over any of these chords
:)