Not bad, but as another person said the key isn't the same as the original, though if I had to guess you changed it for the convenience of the player, it's definitely a nicer key to look at. My main issue is with voicing, too often do you put the bari playing high, when it doesn't sound very nice
Not bad, but as another person said the key isn't the same as the original, though if I had to guess you changed it for the convenience of the player, it's definitely a nicer key to look at. My main issue is with voicing, too often do you put the bari playing high, when it doesn't sound very nice
the key is off
the first note on the bari should be a concert Eb but its starting on Concert F on the score