Specifically, the instrument at 0:08 in the original song builds up to the regular tune starting at 0:20. In your song, this is barely audible and the tune starts without it. In the main section, you removed (or merged) the cymbal sounds that were doing a basic beat which i think takes away from the melody. From your song, I get that you thought the original song was too 'busy' and tried to distill it. Other than your choice of instruments, which is up to taste, I think you were right, but went too far.
Love Tyrian, Love Tyrian OST, Love Your Remixes!!!!!!!!
Thank you for this, great touch!
MEMORIES!
Beautiful!
Cool
I like the song, but there's the "drumb and bass" missing that kindda leave it a bit what's the word, minimalistic?
m8 this is worse than the original sorry
Specifically, the instrument at 0:08 in the original song builds up to the regular tune starting at 0:20. In your song, this is barely audible and the tune starts without it.
In the main section, you removed (or merged) the cymbal sounds that were doing a basic beat which i think takes away from the melody.
From your song, I get that you thought the original song was too 'busy' and tried to distill it. Other than your choice of instruments, which is up to taste, I think you were right, but went too far.