Soooo many solutions for this town. Job lights, generators, spot lights, weapon lights, light bars on vehicles, ect. You could even have muster locations for a large crisis in the form of circular areas rimmed with powerful lights facing outward.
Just headlights on the vans?? Light bars exist; they can be added on to make a bigger light perimeter. Why aren't the houses upgraded with heavier doors, frames, strong shutters?? Flood lights that can be powdered by solar panels that feed into capacitors? Stronger/shatter proof glass windows to make it harder to break in. It just sounds like soooo much could have been done but they exclusively rely on the task force.
This will easily remain one of my favorites, b/c I love lanterns. They offer a degree of mystery all their own. And the illustration was compelling enough to keep staring at it - as if keeping a vigil while listening.
Also with all the sides sound effects including the phone being hung up by the father and that is really good detail story adding those small little extra pieces really ads for a person in the story. I have to say congratulations I'm officially going to subscribe
Ten minutes left and I can't help but wonder why they haven't planned better. Panic rooms, emergency lighting, community-wide weapons training, strobe lighting, etc. Instead, they only let a small part of the community know what is going on. Imagine this town inhabited only by military veterans, instead of civilians. Instead of these options, they choose to live like this... They don't deserve to live.
I know it's a horror story and all, but I couldn't stop thinking how easy it was to avoid this mess: 1. Automate the lanterns. Even if they run off some magic, you can still devise a mechanism that would open and reignite the lantern when a light sensor detects that it's out. The mechanism can run off solar panels. The lanterns would still need to be looked over regularly, but at least if the go out, they would very likely be reignited again almost immediately. 2. Why are there even civilians there in the first place? They're not "protecting" anyone by being slaughtered in the night. Relocate the residents, let the military take over the town and set up proper perimeter defense.
The author even discusses an obvious solution in the story: generators. Creature breaks in, flip on your generator and flood your house in light. There's only 3000 people in the town...just buy at least 1 generator per household
Is there a sequel? I'd love to hear more. Maybe get some back ground info on the lanterns. If they found a way to reproduce it maybe they could run all the street lights with that light forwarded protection. Maybe even weapons or something
This really needs to be adapted into a film. Great job bringing this frighteningly to life Viid. You are truly one of the very best. Thank you and Happy New Year! xx
#29-✅👍🏻 I'm just saying, if I Was in this town; I would DEFINITELY have a few generators and huge lights! BEFORE I HAD CHILDREN! I mean, protect your family; right!?
@@draximo9036pyrotechnics grade gunpowder and powdered aluminum. You can indeed get civilian legal flash bangs in most states that meet legal standings as pyrotechnics.
The town couldn’t invest into gas generators or something to power on streets light? You’d think this family would have more than just two flashlights.
It was definitely an intriguing story, and it had a good atmosphere. It felt lke the author got impatient at the end and didn't think out the ending very well though.
I always forget to wear my headphones when listening to these stories 🤦🏻♀️ but, I remembered to do so tonight, and HOT DAMN!! WHAT A TREAT!!! Definitely gonna wear my headphones from now on out…especially when listening to your narrations!!! 🎧🙌
ViiD……So so so so soooooooo good Your character narration is unquestionably beautifully masterful done I enjoy each story you do So excited cause I have little over a dozen left I haven’t heard, I’m save them for work and leisure time. Please continue the vampire tapes, love that story so far.
@@landryprichard6778 Once a story roots itself in the modern world by using flash grenades and trucks with spotlights, it IS about real world logistics. If the author wanted to avoid that, all he had to do was set it 100 years ago.
Reminds me of a neat movie called “The Village” Town’s people full of secrets and a packed with “ those we do not speak of. Do not go into the creatures area of the woods and the creatures will stay out of the village.“ The village is surrounded by lanterns and watchtowers. Volunteers preform the ceremony of meat every night to satisfy the creatures hunger for flesh.
I have 2 ideas: the first is that there is a flashlight that can give like 32000 lumens which would probably do some damage to the creatures for an escape. Second I remember them saying they come from beneath the earth from cracks or something so maybe try and go into one after the creatures leave to see and learn what they really are and where they come from. Great story!
Does anybody else think that this story would make a REALLY awesome first person shooter and action video game? The creatures take multiple shots to disable so they would present various challenges for players. Boss trobus could be armored and can shoot energy bolts, requiring the player to use cover and tactical moves to engage them. Upon being neutralized, trobus and boss trobus drop coin loads, which the player can use at the base to upgrade weapons, get more items like flash grenades, and treat wounds. Upon beating the first levels, a Portal can open, allowing the player to take the fight into the creatures' own dimension. Possibilities are endless.
Truly excellent narration and story!! Hoping there’s a continuation since there is much to explore and occur in this little town! Thank you both very much!!
Terrific and incredibly scary story! Terrifying and very well narrated! you need to ignore the obvious plot holes though: like if the creatures are repelled by light, why doesn't every building in town have high intensity lights on them? Why don't the people have Mag lights and hand held high intensity spot lights? Why don't street lights have high intensity lights run with dedicated generators? And why are aren't the buildings armed fortresses, with no windows, or barred windows and solid doors? Why don't the families have secure rooms, like bomb shelters? Why isn't everyone in the town armed to teeth with heavy weapons and everyone falls out to repel the attackers? Why don't they have hand grenades and other weapons----stuff like that can be obtained anywhere if you really want to get it. And why doesn't every home have generators? You can get on for a few hundred dollars. this is like a Medieval town under siege---everyone should be out fighting, not just the police soldiers. For that matter, why doesn't the town have an emergency evacuation center, armed and fortified, that people can retreat to? No one in this story seems to be really prepared to defend themselves or even to retreat to a safe, defensible place. It does not make sense if they know what is going on. The fact that the people know this danger exists, yet they live in regular flimsy houses, with no security protections, with no high intensity lights, no bomb shelters, no heavy weapons, no generators, and nothing but regular flashlights, is hard to explain. Yes, I understand that if they had any of this, the story would be a lot less exciting. But if you are going to plot a story like this in the modern age in the USA, you are going to have to explain things a lot better. The premise of the story is excellent and I really like it. But these people are not defending themselves like it is modern day America. Why don't the people have flash grenades, or even road flares? Hell, even molotov cocktails!! As much as I like the story, it bugs me that the people of the town know what is going on, but they were utterly unprepared for either defense or escape. It makes no sense. For that matter, their attitude does not make sense either: they stay to "defend" the breach where the creatures come from, but the people of the town do nothing to help each other, just leaving those attacked to their fate. Considering all they could easily have available to defend themselves with, it is just too large a plot hole. It might have been better if this story took place about a hundred years ago. In some isolated town in the South or West in the 1800's this scenario would make more sense. the people living then would not have been able to build fortresses, would not have the heavy powered weapons of today or high intensity lights. But basing it in the modern world, without any explanation as to why the people fail to use modern weapons and science, fails the story utterly.
i feel like they should invest in a ridiculous amount of light in the town also bank vault bunkers that lock from the inside also redundant power systems and phospherous rounds for the guns and antimaterial rifles also tesla coils to shock them would be a good idea
Man, your voice is so pleaseant! Listening these odd stories and the narrative by your voice makes us picture the actual scenes in our minds. But tell me something: is it you who dubbed Carlos' s voice in Resident Evil 3 Remake?
It's a nice story but with many plot holes. Like if I live in this town and know what's happening I will definitely work to build a panic room with an emergency generator for lights it's not so expensive and almost every family can afford it, not to mention that if you don't have the money you can get a loan and it will be worth it!
This is an okay story but theres a part of the plot that keeps on interfering with the story in my mind. If this is supposed to be a tribe of people meant to ward off these creatures in this town. They do a shitty job at it and deserve to be replaced with a military regiment. The town is basically there to save the world from these things and their homes have zero defense from them, old people live here, kids are allowed to be around the area. Honestly they should have moved the freaking town and just sent men here to patrol the place every night like they already were. Instead they build their barley protected homes right on top of group freaking zero. Its stuff like this tht makes me wanna pull my hair out when I wanna go deep into a story. its like WTF its soo freaking stupid! They dont even have the proper equipment to fight a known enemy LOL!
this town have the worst battle strategy in fiction. First notify the National Guard, 2nd prepare the flood lights (Use your trucks), Get all the towns people in a safe zone armed and able to defend themselves. Hold the line.
enjoyable but would be great if it was consistent or a little more realistic.why wouldn't evey house have spot lights, back up generators, sealed safe rooms, and lots of flashlights? Maybe the town should get a couple helicopters with spot lights?
Happy I found your UA-cam channel I have to admit you do have a knack for doing a pretty good voice although you need to work better on one thing to make your narrating even better sometimes between certain moments you switch your voice between deeper and it sounds like you're struggling to hold that exact same voice practice in the mirror and continue to do that it'll smooth out your voice as you transition between a deeper voices
Cool story I guess, but it annoys me how woefully unprepared everyone seemed to be, despite this apparently being something the town has been dealing with for a 100 years. Also, the “Trobas” hardly seem like apocalyptic threats, if bullets can stun them and light sources drive them away.
What a great story, to encompass the early years from the beginning to life as we know it today. The perils of man and the evils of all man’s sins, For yourselves know how ye ought to follow us: for we behaved not ourselves disorderly among you; neither did we eat any man's bread for nought; but WROUGHT with labour and travail night and day, that we might not be chargeable to any of you. You think life is hard, think of those who protect,,, (Insert maniacal laugh here)😮😳🤣😂
Why not run the whole town like the Spartans did, encourage athletic pursuits in the whole population; raise and prepare every man, woman and child for martial pursuits (combat, strategy, leadership, etc.). What I'm thinking is that founders or the monsters themselves told the population they were protecting the world but it feels more like they were lambs raise for slaughter
Soooo many solutions for this town. Job lights, generators, spot lights, weapon lights, light bars on vehicles, ect. You could even have muster locations for a large crisis in the form of circular areas rimmed with powerful lights facing outward.
Just headlights on the vans?? Light bars exist; they can be added on to make a bigger light perimeter. Why aren't the houses upgraded with heavier doors, frames, strong shutters?? Flood lights that can be powdered by solar panels that feed into capacitors? Stronger/shatter proof glass windows to make it harder to break in. It just sounds like soooo much could have been done but they exclusively rely on the task force.
They didn't have those street lights that simulate sunlight and generators? Hell they need some of those giant street lights.
Just what I thought..??
A truly hidden gem for scary stories!
This will easily remain one of my favorites, b/c I love lanterns. They offer a degree of mystery all their own. And the illustration was compelling enough to keep staring at it - as if keeping a vigil while listening.
Also with all the sides sound effects including the phone being hung up by the father and that is really good detail story adding those small little extra pieces really ads for a person in the story. I have to say congratulations I'm officially going to subscribe
Ten minutes left and I can't help but wonder why they haven't planned better. Panic rooms, emergency lighting, community-wide weapons training, strobe lighting, etc.
Instead, they only let a small part of the community know what is going on.
Imagine this town inhabited only by military veterans, instead of civilians.
Instead of these options, they choose to live like this... They don't deserve to live.
Stupidity is Rampant..!!
I wouldn't say they deserved to die, but yeah, the town's defense system doesn't make much sense
I know it's a horror story and all, but I couldn't stop thinking how easy it was to avoid this mess:
1. Automate the lanterns. Even if they run off some magic, you can still devise a mechanism that would open and reignite the lantern when a light sensor detects that it's out. The mechanism can run off solar panels. The lanterns would still need to be looked over regularly, but at least if the go out, they would very likely be reignited again almost immediately.
2. Why are there even civilians there in the first place? They're not "protecting" anyone by being slaughtered in the night. Relocate the residents, let the military take over the town and set up proper perimeter defense.
Right!
.. Everyone Has a Big, Bright, Flashlight 🔦.. How Hard is That..!!
Hi Fellow Listener, I Agree With Your 2cd Listing Re: The Military Handling It..!! 🔦🚔🚓🚁
Then we wouldn't have a story 😝
The author even discusses an obvious solution in the story: generators. Creature breaks in, flip on your generator and flood your house in light. There's only 3000 people in the town...just buy at least 1 generator per household
Is there a sequel? I'd love to hear more. Maybe get some back ground info on the lanterns. If they found a way to reproduce it maybe they could run all the street lights with that light forwarded protection. Maybe even weapons or something
This really needs to be adapted into a film. Great job bringing this frighteningly to life Viid. You are truly one of the very best. Thank you and Happy New Year! xx
And to the writer of this very scary, uniquely hopeful story...keep writing. You are the real thing, don't ever forget that.
I’m here in Texas enjoying this story while working outside and it’s 19 degrees outside
#29-✅👍🏻
I'm just saying, if I Was in this town; I would DEFINITELY have a few generators and huge lights!
BEFORE I HAD CHILDREN!
I mean, protect your family; right!?
they probably wouldn't like dragon breath rounds either.
@@draximo9036pyrotechnics grade gunpowder and powdered aluminum.
You can indeed get civilian legal flash bangs in most states that meet legal standings as pyrotechnics.
Out of all the narrators, I like your voice the best.
Your voice helps me fall asleep and keeps me awake because I want to know. Ty!
The town couldn’t invest into gas generators or something to power on streets light? You’d think this family would have more than just two flashlights.
No Shit - I Thought the Same.!!
This was an excellent and exciting story tonight. I really enjoyed it and a fine narration too. Great ending. Thank you. Have a wonderful day 💖 🤗❤️🥰🌟
It was definitely an intriguing story, and it had a good atmosphere. It felt lke the author got impatient at the end and didn't think out the ending very well though.
I always forget to wear my headphones when listening to these stories 🤦🏻♀️ but, I remembered to do so tonight, and HOT DAMN!! WHAT A TREAT!!!
Definitely gonna wear my headphones from now on out…especially when listening to your narrations!!! 🎧🙌
Yes always perfect timing for my bed time!! My favorite voice to go to sleep to.
This story is intense! This feels like it could be one of the ebrugh reports. Wild
ViiD……So so so so soooooooo good
Your character narration is unquestionably beautifully masterful done
I enjoy each story you do
So excited cause I have little over a dozen left I haven’t heard, I’m save them for work and leisure time.
Please continue the vampire tapes, love that story so far.
I loved this story. It was great and your narration was perfect. Thanks Viid
Merry Christmas 🎄🤶
I come back to this story alot...one of my favorite's!
Subs growing! Your efforts are producing results! Great to see !
They need a light house(s) around the town to help with the torches go out. Good story this morning!!
Make it five
Oh there’s only 10 minutes left, I don’t want it to end lol. Really liking this story.
A true hilarious voice acting. “I went to college but sounded like an old man Sherlock Holmes.”
Bro he voices Females too. What's your point
Gotta call the SCP foundation out there to contain those things.
So all it takes to immobilise them is bright lights and heavy weapons, yet the town hasn't bothered to enlist the military?
Or for that matter, why wouldn't every house and business not have a panic room?
@C G
That's the 1st Thing I Thought - Where's the Spotlights..??
It isnt about real world logistics. It is about Lovecraftian cosmic horror.
@@landryprichard6778 Once a story roots itself in the modern world by using flash grenades and trucks with spotlights, it IS about real world logistics. If the author wanted to avoid that, all he had to do was set it 100 years ago.
@@Martial-Mat Makes sense. I stand corrected.
Thanks V ! Happy Christmas to you and your family.
Reminds me of a neat movie called
“The Village”
Town’s people full of secrets and a packed with “ those we do not speak of. Do not go into the creatures area of the woods and the creatures will stay out of the village.“ The village is surrounded by lanterns and watchtowers. Volunteers preform the ceremony of meat every night to satisfy the creatures hunger for flesh.
That was an awesome story! I have listened to a few of your stories and love them. Great job! Glad I found your channel 👍🏼
My God this story scared the crap out of me! Fabulous narration and wonderful author. 🐺🖤⭐✨🌙
This is spectacular. Thank you.
The voice and sound work on this one is excellent.
I have 2 ideas: the first is that there is a flashlight that can give like 32000 lumens which would probably do some damage to the creatures for an escape. Second I remember them saying they come from beneath the earth from cracks or something so maybe try and go into one after the creatures leave to see and learn what they really are and where they come from. Great story!
Why doesn't EVERBODY have GENERSTORS and SPOTLIGHTS ??? I know, I know then there'd be no story !
Does anybody else think that this story would make a REALLY awesome first person shooter and action video game? The creatures take multiple shots to disable so they would present various challenges for players. Boss trobus could be armored and can shoot energy bolts, requiring the player to use cover and tactical moves to engage them. Upon being neutralized, trobus and boss trobus drop coin loads, which the player can use at the base to upgrade weapons, get more items like flash grenades, and treat wounds. Upon beating the first levels, a Portal can open, allowing the player to take the fight into the creatures' own dimension. Possibilities are endless.
Really great story!! And the laughing monsters? Man, that's some truly terrifying sh!t!
Thank you Vidiith. Excellent narration as always.
Top notch horror. Well written and superbly read and realised. Keep up the great work!
Did you say silent gunshots rang out? Silent gunshots...
Man I love hearing silent gun shots
The laughter reminds of those crate tossing ghosts in DKC2
This has to be my favorite of yours so far. The laughter was great
Good read my man. I've never heard you before today. New sub right here.
I wish this becomes a series :3
imagine taking out a star wars light saber toy that shines very bright
This is better than Netflix 💯
Truly excellent narration and story!! Hoping there’s a continuation since there is much to explore and occur in this little town! Thank you both very much!!
Terrific and incredibly scary story! Terrifying and very well narrated!
you need to ignore the obvious plot holes though: like if the creatures are repelled by light, why doesn't every building in town have high intensity lights on them? Why don't the people have Mag lights and hand held high intensity spot lights? Why don't street lights have high intensity lights run with dedicated generators? And why are aren't the buildings armed fortresses, with no windows, or barred windows and solid doors? Why don't the families have secure rooms, like bomb shelters? Why isn't everyone in the town armed to teeth with heavy weapons and everyone falls out to repel the attackers? Why don't they have hand grenades and other weapons----stuff like that can be obtained anywhere if you really want to get it. And why doesn't every home have generators? You can get on for a few hundred dollars. this is like a Medieval town under siege---everyone should be out fighting, not just the police soldiers. For that matter, why doesn't the town have an emergency evacuation center, armed and fortified, that people can retreat to? No one in this story seems to be really prepared to defend themselves or even to retreat to a safe, defensible place. It does not make sense if they know what is going on.
The fact that the people know this danger exists, yet they live in regular flimsy houses, with no security protections, with no high intensity lights, no bomb shelters, no heavy weapons, no generators, and nothing but regular flashlights, is hard to explain. Yes, I understand that if they had any of this, the story would be a lot less exciting. But if you are going to plot a story like this in the modern age in the USA, you are going to have to explain things a lot better. The premise of the story is excellent and I really like it. But these people are not defending themselves like it is modern day America.
Why don't the people have flash grenades, or even road flares? Hell, even molotov cocktails!! As much as I like the story, it bugs me that the people of the town know what is going on, but they were utterly unprepared for either defense or escape. It makes no sense. For that matter, their attitude does not make sense either: they stay to "defend" the breach where the creatures come from, but the people of the town do nothing to help each other, just leaving those attacked to their fate. Considering all they could easily have available to defend themselves with, it is just too large a plot hole.
It might have been better if this story took place about a hundred years ago. In some isolated town in the South or West in the 1800's this scenario would make more sense. the people living then would not have been able to build fortresses, would not have the heavy powered weapons of today or high intensity lights. But basing it in the modern world, without any explanation as to why the people fail to use modern weapons and science, fails the story utterly.
Happy Christmas and New Year to the Bestest Viid
This was a great story! Thank you and keep them coming!
You just keep getting better and better! Thanks for these scary stories!
Perfect for my early mornings
This is a good concept for an HBO series
i feel like they should invest in a ridiculous amount of light in the town also bank vault bunkers that lock from the inside also redundant power systems and phospherous rounds for the guns and antimaterial rifles also tesla coils to shock them would be a good idea
Awesome story! If I were the townsfolk I would definitely invest in some flamethrowers lol
Rain to snow, light to dark , .. umm....yeah🤘
Man, your voice is so pleaseant! Listening these odd stories and the narrative by your voice makes us picture the actual scenes in our minds. But tell me something: is it you who dubbed Carlos' s voice in Resident Evil 3 Remake?
More please. Were they there 1st? Are they aliens? I must have more. Hello Viidith 🥰😍🥰
It's a nice story but with many plot holes. Like if I live in this town and know what's happening I will definitely work to build a panic room with an emergency generator for lights it's not so expensive and almost every family can afford it, not to mention that if you don't have the money you can get a loan and it will be worth it!
Wow... where's the SCP Foundation when you need it? XD
I love these stories narrated by Batman.
Batman has quite a fine taste for scary stories
That is one hellasious story. Great narrator as well too.
Hard to believe the people living here dont have back-up generators and flashlights.
This was awesome 🎉
Great job !!
Definitely scary 😳
Thank you 🙏🏼
Excellent story and a perfect voice to fall asleep to. 😉
Thank you V.
This is an okay story but theres a part of the plot that keeps on interfering with the story in my mind. If this is supposed to be a tribe of people meant to ward off these creatures in this town. They do a shitty job at it and deserve to be replaced with a military regiment. The town is basically there to save the world from these things and their homes have zero defense from them, old people live here, kids are allowed to be around the area. Honestly they should have moved the freaking town and just sent men here to patrol the place every night like they already were. Instead they build their barley protected homes right on top of group freaking zero. Its stuff like this tht makes me wanna pull my hair out when I wanna go deep into a story. its like WTF its soo freaking stupid! They dont even have the proper equipment to fight a known enemy LOL!
what is a bit baffling is where are the tanks, planes/drones, MG or sniper equipped towers with spot lights
Viidith delivers !
Great story!!! I am a horror lover and this one actually made me nervous. Loved it!
Another VA STORY LETS GOOO
Just a suggestion, set up powerful lights attached to your home, from ground to roof
this town have the worst battle strategy in fiction. First notify the National Guard, 2nd prepare the flood lights (Use your trucks), Get all the towns people in a safe zone armed and able to defend themselves. Hold the line.
Derry and Innsmouth are looking pretty good compared to this place.
I wonder if drones would be useful.
Kudos to the narrator and author!
V your crushing it lately love the voice
This was a nice story. Good selection and performance
This is awesome. I loved the story!
Dad sounds like batman
Dude this was so damn good
That's freaking amazing, keep it up✊️
enjoyable but would be great if it was consistent or a little more realistic.why wouldn't evey house have spot lights, back up generators, sealed safe rooms, and lots of flashlights? Maybe the town should get a couple helicopters with spot lights?
Could fit nicely in the "Low Level Government Employee" setting
Awesome work! Just subed a few days ago, I'm hooked.
Christmas time is Halloween with Viidith22!
Ty powers off and it@ 17 degrees
Better than my sons in Illinois it's 8 below and thats in the day
Mine Too.. Since 4:00..!!
Starting to Get Cöld..!!
From Ontario, Canada 🇨🇦
So they sound like Demonic Trolls
I love this story ❤
this is so beautiful🎄🎄🎁🎁❄❄❄
That was freaky asf
Yippie i just found your channel and subbed to it
bruh my heart is pounding lol
Trolbos? I can't find any references on the several spellings. What are trolbos?
Happy I found your UA-cam channel I have to admit you do have a knack for doing a pretty good voice although you need to work better on one thing to make your narrating even better sometimes between certain moments you switch your voice between deeper and it sounds like you're struggling to hold that exact same voice practice in the mirror and continue to do that it'll smooth out your voice as you transition between a deeper voices
I think he is very clear in switching characters. Especially the gals. Which can’t be easy. Love you V!!
Another fire story !
Keep 'em coming viidith
Cool story I guess, but it annoys me how woefully unprepared everyone seemed to be, despite this apparently being something the town has been dealing with for a 100 years. Also, the “Trobas” hardly seem like apocalyptic threats, if bullets can stun them and light sources drive them away.
What a great story, to encompass the early years from the beginning to life as we know it today.
The perils of man and the evils of all man’s sins, For yourselves know how ye ought to follow us: for we behaved not ourselves disorderly among you; neither did we eat any man's bread for nought; but WROUGHT with labour and travail night and day, that we might not be chargeable to any of you.
You think life is hard, think of those who protect,,,
(Insert maniacal laugh here)😮😳🤣😂
Why not run the whole town like the Spartans did, encourage athletic pursuits in the whole population; raise and prepare every man, woman and child for martial pursuits (combat, strategy, leadership, etc.).
What I'm thinking is that founders or the monsters themselves told the population they were protecting the world but it feels more like they were lambs raise for slaughter
Hell yeah!