AFTERMATH | A SCP Film

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  • Опубліковано 28 вер 2024
  • Studio Announcement: After 6 months of hard work, everyone at Night Owl Productions is excited to finally release our film, AFTERMATH. 13 people have collectively worked on this film in some capacity and are honored to show this film to the rest of the world. We also want to thank our 20+ GoFundMe supporters that made this project possible, without you guys we would not have met the quality standard we wanted to meet. We hope you enjoy this SCP short film made by a bunch of high school students for a massive passion project.
    Film Description: When everything goes wrong who are you willing to trust? How far are you willing to go to survive?
    An Indie film directed by Sergio Andres Altamiranda Cantillo, written by Bradley Barnett, and edited by David Fraser...

КОМЕНТАРІ • 292

  • @nightowlproductions9444
    @nightowlproductions9444  3 роки тому +161

    Everyone at the AFTERMATH team is happy to see the overwhelmingly positive response from our viewers. We would like to thank everyone for taking their time out of their day to watch this movie.

    • @jhonsilveralpha
      @jhonsilveralpha 2 роки тому +3

      The film is too good to have only 2.4k views

    • @Necrowolf81
      @Necrowolf81 2 роки тому +5

      You really need to remove that high pitched noise at the start of Day 4. Some people like me have high sensitivity to higher pitches and that was literally painful.
      The Sound quality was very good. The lighting in most scenes was good as well.
      The acting is decent except in parts where strong emotion is being conveyed. When Dani called them and when they first see the monster (the oh my god what is that part he just sounded dead not scared,etc) ,for example, I didn't believe their emotions. Saxon, especially, was just bad. His wannabe tough guy act was laughable. If your movie is 99% people walking around and talking the acting needs to be better. I found myself skipping ahead often just to see if anything interesting was going to happen.
      Also, pretty sure SCP Spec Ops aren't going to be wearing jeans (the guy that shot Dani) and you're going to tell me they were going camping/hiking and the only things they had for light were their phones? I don't even go camping or hiking and I have better equipment in my car. The only water they had was Smartwater? ROTFL
      The fight scene was hilarious. My friends and I wrestling on the trampoline when I was young looked more believable. Eric is supposed to be an agent and that's what his fighting looks like? LOL.
      so some XK class scenario occurs and the SCP is just going to be out looking for some lame ass telekinetic? I know he's supposedly a reality bender but they already have several of those that actually know what they're capable of doing. They didn't seem at all concerned that there was a monster prowling around. I hope that monster wasn't supposed to be 939 because that's not how they work.

    • @infiniteplayers3658
      @infiniteplayers3658 2 роки тому +1

      💯/💯

    • @654Crossman
      @654Crossman 2 роки тому +3

      @@julianaltamiranda2394 how about you quit being an emotional crybaby? I agree with him, 100%. We aren't saying this was a complete waste or nothing to be proud of. He simply pointed out issues that could've been avoided. I also wrote a comment, talking about a few things, that bugged the hell out of me. Criticism is a good thing. It's how people grow. Being a whiney, little weenie is how you end up making the same errors. So don't be so sensitive. Any good artist listens to the people, who try to improve their quality.

    • @Kyan1838
      @Kyan1838 2 роки тому +1

      This is so underrated

  • @jaymantisgaming
    @jaymantisgaming 2 роки тому +207

    ''get that outa my face dude, im driving!''

  • @davidgreen7835
    @davidgreen7835 2 роки тому +38

    At the end of Day 1 during the campfire scene, I could swear I heard someone having a coughing fit and trying to silence it 🤣

  • @mobbinxballin79
    @mobbinxballin79 2 роки тому +118

    Y'all did a pretty decent job filming this, the acting is a bit more like, a D list 60's porno in want of a better comparison, however I can see the dedication and effort made to film this and I commend you for that you have a future in screen writing and a few of you can easily become an actor in a directed A+ rated movie. Y'all should stick as a team and continue to try your luck with an actual block buster director and see if y'all can make something similar to this. Keep the dream alive lads

    • @mobbinxballin79
      @mobbinxballin79 2 роки тому +4

      Oh and food for thought, if anything such as a nuke or similar explosion of that magnitude wouldve had an electromagnetic disabling property to it and would've knocked out power to everything such as cars flash lights ect unless you were able to avoid it by going deep enough underground

    • @conker13245
      @conker13245 2 роки тому +14

      cmooon its not porn acting bad 50s scifi b movie bad at times but not porn bad

    • @Letsscalpp3d0s
      @Letsscalpp3d0s Рік тому +5

      Still better acting than the last phase of the MCU and that woke white savior message though lol.

  • @scaletownmodels
    @scaletownmodels 10 місяців тому +26

    I can't get past an apparent scp field agent who can't fight worth crap and a psycho bully who turns into rambo for no reason.

    • @LegionL-A
      @LegionL-A 9 місяців тому +7

      His friends Raymond is what turned him into Rambo. Did you not notice him hiding his eye "wound" and just shrugging off the knife wound like it was nothing at the end?

  • @halolover117
    @halolover117 2 роки тому +29

    16:43 dont make a girl a promise if you know you cant keep it
    -cortana from halo 2

    • @halolover117
      @halolover117 2 роки тому +2

      ok so i contuied watching the video
      dont look at this comment until you wished day 2
      and ye he didt heep his promise

  • @alexanderpace9141
    @alexanderpace9141 3 роки тому +26

    Amazing results after 6 months glad I came to watch 🔥

  • @deathbear56
    @deathbear56 3 роки тому +15

    in the span of 1 minute at 29:36, "Fuck" is said 8 times, 7 of those times are by saxon

    • @deathbear56
      @deathbear56 3 роки тому +2

      For reference, this was what was written in the script
      [Saxon: (Turns around, visibly furious) DON’T YOU FUCKING DARE RAYMOND! DON’T EVEN THINK FOR ONE SECOND THAT I DIDN’T CARE ABOUT DANI. YOU AND HER ARE THE ONLY FAMILY I HAVE LEFT AND NOW SHE’S DEAD. DEAD. 17 YEARS OLD AND DEAD, WE CAN'T EVEN GIVE HER A PROPER BURIAL. HOWEVER, UNLIKE YOU I CAN’T AFFORD TO SIT AROUND AND CRY BECAUSE I UNDERSTAND THERE’S NOTHING WE CAN DO NOW. ]

  • @keegionsiin
    @keegionsiin 2 роки тому +13

    20:37 bro pikced the dude up just to push him back down again.💀

    • @unknownfox3796
      @unknownfox3796 8 місяців тому +1

      "alright up now."
      "why u getting up bitch"

    • @deathbear56
      @deathbear56 Місяць тому +1

      Yea some of the scenes were more improvised then others lol

  • @mrfishbag7838
    @mrfishbag7838 3 роки тому +38

    Damn this left me off speechless due to how good it was, keep it up!

  • @SacredKaw
    @SacredKaw 2 роки тому +41

    I was hooked when the "Shot on FUJI FILM" title card came up. I see you spent all your money on film and processing and be damned production value and on screen talent.

  • @TheMightyCookieShow
    @TheMightyCookieShow 2 роки тому +39

    I might wait, and watch this with my wife, maybe film a reaction to it, which folks seem to like watching, and hopefully, that will put more eyes on your work. I’m in the same boat, in prepro right now for my own SCP live action film next spring. We gotta help each other out in my view.

    • @SabonbonYAA
      @SabonbonYAA 8 місяців тому

      just sounds like your offering to pay him in exposure

  • @ToMARRRO
    @ToMARRRO 3 роки тому +10

    Overlord
    is KIA is that a easter egg about Overlord the SCP film?

    • @davidfraser5652
      @davidfraser5652 3 роки тому +7

      Hi this is David Fraser, the lead editor and cinematographer for the film. Over the course of the production of the movie we took a lot of inspiration from other SCP films such as Doll House. The whole team felt it was only right to put in an Easter Egg to one of those films. So in short, yes, it a nice nod to Overlord in Doll House.

    • @unknownfox3796
      @unknownfox3796 8 місяців тому

      @@davidfraser5652 i also noticed ! it's super fun to have easter eggs like those, hope to see more work from you guys !!

  • @LilyLee25
    @LilyLee25 3 місяці тому +1

    This was amazing im so glad i came across this short film 😊 it’s so special to watch

  • @lucas_vermeire
    @lucas_vermeire 2 роки тому +21

    I have not hated a character more then the one with the eyepatch (Forgot his name) and it surprised me lol
    All of that aside this is an incredible masterpiece and I am speechless

    • @rosssutton3564
      @rosssutton3564 Рік тому +1

      Thought exactly the same lol.

    • @pissapocalypse
      @pissapocalypse 10 місяців тому +1

      Saxon. They said his name a million times lol

  • @StaziaDiMarca
    @StaziaDiMarca 2 роки тому +3

    Saxon is an extremely unlikable character... he reminds me of the chaotic good rogues my friends would RP in a DnD campaign.
    Antihero characters are always difficult to play correctly but he had no reason to treat his fiends like he did. Went from confused but capable college student to Wannabe Solid Snake in 5 minutes because he donned an eyepatch.

  • @jbag1
    @jbag1 6 місяців тому +2

    Better than some movies they put on tv. Dude a reality warper? He could end the world but couldn’t save his friends. He should have known it was him at some point. Oh well thanks for show

    • @deathbear56
      @deathbear56 Місяць тому

      Not a reality warper, idk why people keep thinking that but it’s mainly that Raymond after the crash starts to feel something inside of him and that he seemed to heal a lot quicker then saxon and when the first fight sequence happened not even Raymond knew what came over him when he tried to stop the fight as next thing he knew he was waking up off the ground

    • @jbag1
      @jbag1 Місяць тому

      @@deathbear56 they said he has unimaginable power to destroy worlds and break reality. In the car he said he wanted world to end then it did. That’s how this whole thing has been set up. More important it’s just words, “reality warper” is my choice of words for his power. They actually say he has reality breaking power.

  • @brandt8035
    @brandt8035 2 роки тому +2

    for this type of quality production it deserves much more amazing work 👍

  • @inspirationart1813
    @inspirationart1813 2 роки тому +5

    12:29 kind of made me think maybe it was SCP-939

    • @icefire8997
      @icefire8997 8 місяців тому

      In my head I thought “Puppy”

  • @pouria1254
    @pouria1254 2 роки тому +6

    You guys are criminally underrated.

  • @garyvance4172
    @garyvance4172 2 роки тому +2

    I couldn't do it.Good luck with future projects.

  • @JoshuaW237
    @JoshuaW237 Місяць тому

    Dawg how yall only got 1k subs so underatted fr

  • @goldie_official1114
    @goldie_official1114 2 роки тому +2

    Me:SHIT THE VOICE SCARED ME
    very nice quality tho.

  • @PeterGrosskopf
    @PeterGrosskopf 2 роки тому +4

    Awesome!

  • @downmk-ly1tm
    @downmk-ly1tm 2 місяці тому

    Part that stood out to me was a standup man, rude an all, trying to keep his word. Didn't understand who he was protecting and damage he could cause, but tried to protect him and her as promised. Sorely lacking sometimes.

  • @solberplaysrblx3292
    @solberplaysrblx3292 3 роки тому +4

    UNDERRATED

  • @Tasmanischer_gularsch_kanister
    @Tasmanischer_gularsch_kanister 3 місяці тому

    The way they fight is crazy

  • @almostclaymatthews52
    @almostclaymatthews52 Рік тому

    NGL. This was really well done and planning on making it a reference to a short film I'm working on titled "SCP Lost In Nowhere"

    • @aaronrodden8121
      @aaronrodden8121 Рік тому +1

      Please don't if you think this was good! Seriously, this COULD have been good but it wasn't! The acting, plot and etc were all over the map and not believable at all!

  • @tonk8735
    @tonk8735 5 місяців тому

    Wow the makeup in this was phenomenal!

  • @MrOutlast
    @MrOutlast 3 місяці тому

    How does this not have more views

  • @kajetanmajewski1256
    @kajetanmajewski1256 5 місяців тому

    Here is what most likely happened:
    Raymond was already contained but he breached . When the breach happened rraymond must have wished to have peace again or some variation or that, erasing his own memories and probably going back to a time in his past, after that he accidently wishes to EXPIRIENCE the end of the world, his wish comes true and and the flash they see is most likely a nuclear warhead that every foundation site has, it was triggered probably becouse of a different breach, most likely 939 as we hear it later on. But also there is a possibility that it was the chaos ins. As raymond says multiple times that "there is chaos everywhere". So 1 how do we know he was contained before: the scp foundation is stronger than it seems and is prepared for some hilly billy reality bender, having ways to preserve information post reality changes, so it new he escaped, then after he made a site explode they must have found him in the area while investigsting. If they were not aware of him, they wouldnt employ an agent to track him, give him a nickname and so on.
    2 how do we know it was 939, most obv thing it can mimic voices and its first line is a refrence to containment breach, where 939 says the exact same thing. We also never see it and the screen conviniently always cuts before we see it, thats becouse of its amnestic gas. Lastly 939 would be one of the only mimicing anomalies that could die to a gunshot. Why bring up chaos? Firstly god said there is chaos so its prob there, and secondly the dead soldier, why would an scp agent fight a soldier? Wearing a green uniform which isnt that of other foundation forces? Thats of coure becouse he isnt. Now fair this could be also: the goc (they like to kill reality benders), the serpents hand(they like protecting sentient anomalies) and many more. Now for those confused about sax wouldnt tell raymond the full truth, i suspect his parents were scp agents, he didnt know that ofc, but he was more aware of the situation that he told in the film. He knew chris was a spy, he knew not to trust the soldiers and most importantly he knew about raymond, look at his reaction when he said he wants the world to end, he never tells him his true power even when chris tells him.
    And last part why did they kill everyone exept the god they were looking for, thats becouse 1 the scp foundation rarely kills and seeing that he doesnt manage his power well decided against killing him, containing him instead or 2 more sinister reason, they want to use him to make reality anchors. For those unaware those are realit stabilazers the foundation uses to well stabilaze reality in certain areas. And they are made of reality bender body parts.

    • @deathbear56
      @deathbear56 Місяць тому

      yea definitely not the plot lol

  • @michaelweiss5320
    @michaelweiss5320 7 місяців тому

    How did he damage his shirt? Why is "Kid Nick Fury" covered in blood?
    The flashing shadows?
    Excellent work!
    I'm entirely confused.
    😆
    Well,
    I'm never getting back those 55 minutes.
    I totally appreciate the 80's synthesizer music during end credits.
    We getting another episode?
    Possibly explaining Boy Jean Grey?
    If Boy Blackwidow gets paid to die, are we gonna see him again?

  • @silentempr8003
    @silentempr8003 2 роки тому +3

    This was amazing man!

  • @Scaveger
    @Scaveger 4 місяці тому

    I am HERE

  • @weybye91
    @weybye91 10 місяців тому +2

    Have a few nitpicks.
    1 the car alarm.
    2. Where the hell did the magazine for the pistol go.
    3. Lack of treatment of the wounds.
    And 4 the lag of pain from the wounds, especially after the adrenalin had worn off

    • @LegionL-A
      @LegionL-A 9 місяців тому +1

      In case you did not notice, Saxon was getting superpowered by Raymond, hence not needing to treat wounds after the first car crash.

    • @weybye91
      @weybye91 9 місяців тому

      @@LegionL-A so that's why he was still limping? So not only doesn't it make sense, but continuity errors

    • @unknownfox3796
      @unknownfox3796 8 місяців тому +1

      @@weybye91 he was getting maintained, not HEALED, also it would have been shitty to have all the main characters cry about their wound or die in the first day, i rather have a lack of PainRP than them suddenly knowing how to do surgery or dying too fast

    • @weybye91
      @weybye91 8 місяців тому

      @@unknownfox3796 that still only somewhat answers 1 of 3 things

    • @unknownfox3796
      @unknownfox3796 8 місяців тому

      @@weybye91 i don’t see the problem, that was my goal, you didn’t seem to understand exactly why the main character were not dying after five minutes in the movie, so i was clearing that up

  • @rusticmechanism1738
    @rusticmechanism1738 2 роки тому

    Absolutely awesomesauce times 10000, look forward to seeing more from yall!

  • @kriszgamer0013
    @kriszgamer0013 5 місяців тому

    Did the Foundation find a massive 939 nest? Sounds like it.

  • @Bognarsh7210
    @Bognarsh7210 4 місяці тому

    THIS WAS LIKE, 1% SCP!! WTF DID I JUST WATCH?!?

  • @Arlington411
    @Arlington411 3 роки тому +4

    Excellent! Got through half and graphics, sound, acting, and editing is high quality. I am starting in video and can appreciate the effort and skilz it took to do this.

    • @Necrowolf81
      @Necrowolf81 2 роки тому +2

      if you think acting is high quality you need your ears checked. It's not abysmal and is ok when they aren't trying to be emotional. In the parts like where she called them or they first saw the monster I didn't believe the emotions they were trying to convey.

    • @pissapocalypse
      @pissapocalypse 10 місяців тому

      ​@@Necrowolf81It was made by high schoolers. It's not gonna be amazing Broadway levels of acting. I'm getting annoyed of all the comments saying the acting was garbage. It's not that bad.

  • @the_yeegineer
    @the_yeegineer Рік тому

    So is this the SCP-5000 thing then?

  • @zekearkadiaxz8970
    @zekearkadiaxz8970 10 місяців тому

    Where can I see the names of the casts???

  • @Jungle-Life-Forever
    @Jungle-Life-Forever Рік тому

    Lets hide from the scary unknown thing by lighting an easy to see bright ass fire and wait for said thing to find us --

  • @GSGreStudios
    @GSGreStudios 2 роки тому +1

    Super underrated!!

  • @dragonlordthemighty1968
    @dragonlordthemighty1968 10 місяців тому

    What was the scp in this short film?

  • @guilmartica-a813
    @guilmartica-a813 Рік тому +3

    Very good acting, especially for Saxon. The production is also great, the plot was just unclear.

  • @frankdank7439
    @frankdank7439 2 роки тому +1

    ting pong wi nao!

  • @verenabosselmann8774
    @verenabosselmann8774 9 місяців тому

    When they are at the camp fire it kind of looks like they are looking at the script on the floor

  • @drakeversteeg2782
    @drakeversteeg2782 27 днів тому

    so that was an interesting film so when danny and raymen are talking to the S.C.P Agent and he is eating CHEEZIT why is he throwing them off screen and how is raymond suppose to a S.C.P and what is his number also I found a funny thing when raymon says zachs name at 39:50 the closed caption replaces his name with sex

  • @Agent_Zach
    @Agent_Zach 7 місяців тому

    Is this based off the 5k scenario or something..??

  • @dominiksulik6156
    @dominiksulik6156 7 місяців тому

    Man its pretty decent

  • @Temporal_Assassin
    @Temporal_Assassin 10 місяців тому

    What, no airbags in your car? 😁

  • @WhoWhy69
    @WhoWhy69 3 місяці тому

    i am the one thousand sub

  • @LegionL-A
    @LegionL-A 9 місяців тому +1

    Apparently most people seem to lack the necessary IQ points to follow the plot. I myself missed a few things, being a little short in the head, this user sums up pretty well what is going on:
    "@tiredgamer6160
    2 months ago
    if anyone is confused about the plot: Raymond the white guy with the beard is a reality warper with god like power. in short what he really wants to happen WILL happen however he is unaware of his own powers. but the scp foundation is fully aware of what he is. when he said he was bored and wanted the world to end in order to experience something exciting IT HAPPEND. reality was changed to entertain him. his commando friend Saxon , the girl, various people were turned into monsters and lastly when something he wanted to happen like when he wanted his commando friend to not kill that scp agent as he was fighting him it happened. in the end the Raymond fate will be similar to the witch girl."
    This is why Saxon's friends ask him "how'd you learn to do that" when he beats up Saber in their first encounter and he mentions a bit later to Saber that "it wouldn't have hit [him] even if hell froze over". Please don't confuse your lack of intelligence for lack of a plot

  • @twoheadedboypt2
    @twoheadedboypt2 Рік тому

    Someone was in the military
    Box in the back of the car

  • @channingdeadnight
    @channingdeadnight Місяць тому

    i think that the asexual part is a good thing. it's another version of a natural sexual human identify that's almost never even mentioned let alone spoken about.

  • @hundun5604
    @hundun5604 Рік тому

    Sometimes I can't hear what the actors are saying (only happens 3-4 times though). Besides that, this film is, looking from the road signs, recorded in Japan but everyone seems to speak fluently American-English. They eat and drink American brands. There's no cartridge clip in that pistol. All that takes away a part of the immersion.
    Nonetheless, tyvm for this film. It's entertaining.

  • @ObadiahWanderer
    @ObadiahWanderer 2 роки тому

    the story made no sense. They were driving, something blew up, then Raymond turns out to be an alien or something. There's some creature following them and then Raymond gets captured. What was the plot again?

  • @MRZG-.-8
    @MRZG-.-8 2 місяці тому

    How the fuck i didn't watch this!

  • @digafox
    @digafox Рік тому

    When did World War 3 start and why didn't these two know about it!!

  • @notverysmartstudios6813
    @notverysmartstudios6813 3 роки тому +1

    Breadly moment!

  • @Cobalt731
    @Cobalt731 Рік тому

    Not bad

  • @bunnygirlerika9489
    @bunnygirlerika9489 2 роки тому +7

    I really enjoeyed this. Saxon was my favorite though, got a thing for the bad boys lol.

  • @kimriley2217
    @kimriley2217 2 роки тому

    This stuff is awsome

  • @Batsxwitches
    @Batsxwitches 6 місяців тому

    20:29 The crunching leaves and that kid not noticing has me deceasedddd 😂 love it tho

  • @PeterRoscoe
    @PeterRoscoe 2 місяці тому

    I was entertained the entire time. There are weaknesses in a number of areas, but not of effort. I especially liked the that the monsters were not shown, merely the character's reaction to them. Very Lovecraftian. Pay attention to details of motivation and continuity. The underlying idea could be a little more obvious for us dummies. (Thanks @tiredgamer6160 for filling in the gaps)

  • @JunkoIsCool
    @JunkoIsCool Рік тому +1

    bro sackson or wtv his name is, is one of those characters i hate in any movie lol

  • @quirkychap
    @quirkychap 10 місяців тому

    Idk whats up, but this has 490k likes w/ 73k views? How?

  • @hellopeter5919
    @hellopeter5919 2 роки тому +1

    Y’all just gotta go to little old yellow stone and just press scp 2000’s button

  • @dandruff2865
    @dandruff2865 Рік тому +1

    Interesting... I have some thoughts on the script but others have pointed those out already, my big complaint is the plot. You really should've tacked on somekind of report onto the end, something that explains from the Foundation's point of view, of what we just watched... because I have to say that I have no idea :p

  • @bvssyluvr1159
    @bvssyluvr1159 2 роки тому +2

    God Dang i hate that guy with the huuuuuuge adams Apple. Completely ruined the movie.

  • @imsorrythatimright6082
    @imsorrythatimright6082 2 роки тому +1

    How long were they unconscious the passenger had a beard the next scene please explain that BS 😆

  • @s0lidl3m0nadedotorg4
    @s0lidl3m0nadedotorg4 2 роки тому

    brilliant

  • @professor_lembach
    @professor_lembach Рік тому +1

    You can't call it an SCP movie without revealing the organization or an SCP object. It's just a generic apocalypse short, otherwise.

  • @greggreg5189
    @greggreg5189 2 роки тому +11

    I appreciate the effort, but this is an objectively bad film. I know from my many crappy projects in film school. It's difficult to get things right, but there were many errors that showed the execution wasn't 100% on par. Starting from glaring continuity errors to over-acting, and overly straightforward dialogue. The plot itself makes no sense in relation to its setting, as Saxon claims "it's a mess out there", but we never get that impression. If cars don't work, why do radios do? There is irrelevant exposition - such as Saxon's mom - that is never brought up again. Even the comment about his knives doesn't work because it's not foreshadowed. Also, is "overlord" supposed to be a reference? Lastly, Saxon is a Gary Stu - not a good look. I could bring up more critiques but at the end of the day I don't think it'll do any good.
    1/10: There was an attempt.

    • @aldwinkeithmanugo1410
      @aldwinkeithmanugo1410 2 роки тому +6

      I'm glad I am not the only one, the biggest problem with the film was the script. I feel like this film has a professional camera man but a newbie script writer. I also find that they don't utilize multiple camera angles which should be done in a fight scene instead of just panning the camera. Overall, they just need to improve on plot and how story goes.
      I also dislike that the SCP MTF soldier in one scene are wearing "JEANS" like WTF! Is that a standard MTF uniform now?And he's alone! A soldier dealing with anomalous stuff shouldn't be alone.

    • @greggreg5189
      @greggreg5189 2 роки тому +1

      @@The21stRanger One of the producers replied to someone in the comments to explain that "Overlord" refers to Evan Royalty's short film series.

    • @greggreg5189
      @greggreg5189 2 роки тому +1

      @@The21stRanger I don't think this excuse is relevant here. The crew had a kickstarter for $10,000, so they had time to plan for things. I didn't expect an airtight production, but a watchable project. There are several storytelling/mechanical errors that the directors/producers didn't take into account. I don't know the extent of the actors' skills as the script wasn't very good. I'd pin Saxon's Gary Sue-ness on the script more than on his acting.
      I'm sorry, but I'm of the opinion that, if I can criticize Hollywood movies, I can also criticize amateur films. Inb4, I know the struggle(s) they're going through as I've walked the rope.

    • @cannoliman4256
      @cannoliman4256 2 роки тому +1

      @@greggreg5189 So as a bit of a preface to this comment, I was on the crew for the production of this film (if you really want, I could possibly get one of the producers to verify this). You make some great points, and we really do appreciate your feedback. This was our first full-scale film project, and so we expected there to be much room for improvement.

    • @greggreg5189
      @greggreg5189 2 роки тому +2

      @@cannoliman4256 Thanks for your comment. I hope I didn't come off as salty, as it wasn't my intention. A part of me wants to make a full-scale video review, but my anxiety won't allow it. At the end of the day, I appreciate the effort, but I think the issue is less about me disliking the film, and more on some objective flaws that hinder the film's quality.
      Hopefully this serves as a learning experience for you and the rest of the team and you'll all grow and improve with your next project. (even if it's nearly been a year)

  • @ausylol
    @ausylol Рік тому

    cool

  • @davidchoe5385
    @davidchoe5385 3 роки тому

    poggers

  • @obenobi
    @obenobi 9 місяців тому

    It's a good movie except for the acting. But next time pay attention to the sound editing (in many places ambient sounds eleminate dialogs) and write a proper ending.

  • @Cobalt731
    @Cobalt731 Рік тому

    Лютый фильм

  • @oompavillefan001
    @oompavillefan001 9 місяців тому

    and erm alot of plot holes so plz fix

    • @oompavillefan001
      @oompavillefan001 9 місяців тому

      for ur next film and by no way or shape is this a bad film its amazing im just kinda a critique im sorry

  • @chelseapeters7187
    @chelseapeters7187 17 днів тому

    How tf is this an SCP film

  • @markayton2064
    @markayton2064 2 роки тому

    Made up as they went along.

  • @2258kid
    @2258kid 2 роки тому +5

    This “SCP short” should be locked away forever. It hurt... my balls (¬_¬) My eye balls.

  • @stidzy0
    @stidzy0 Рік тому

    (19:51) bro that gun is clearly empty how did he fire it? i'll suspend my disbelief and say there was one in the chamber.

  • @mobbinxballin79
    @mobbinxballin79 2 роки тому

    You guys could've done a little better with the physical fighting, y'all fucked and reacted a little quicker than you should've but overall I think this is decent

  • @datboip88
    @datboip88 2 роки тому +4

    Eyepatch dude. Horrible acting

    • @scp173...
      @scp173... 2 роки тому +1

      Snaps neck MAHAHAHAHA

    • @h0p3_wa0
      @h0p3_wa0 Рік тому

      ​@@scp173... LOL

  • @kimchristiansen2370
    @kimchristiansen2370 2 роки тому

    That film made absolutely no sense at all... very annoying.

  • @mattnewton7434
    @mattnewton7434 6 місяців тому

    Really bad acting

  • @pumpk1nl0rd81
    @pumpk1nl0rd81 2 роки тому

    Acting actually sucks

  • @craigkendell5706
    @craigkendell5706 9 місяців тому

    My favorite part is when it ended this was terribly put together

  • @IFRITAANGEL
    @IFRITAANGEL Рік тому +1

    아니 언제 한국에서 찍은거야?!ㅋㅋㅋ

  • @tiredgamer6160
    @tiredgamer6160 Рік тому +99

    if anyone is confused about the plot: Raymond the white guy with the beard is a reality warper with god like power. in short what he really wants to happen WILL happen however he is unaware of his own powers. but the scp foundation is fully aware of what he is. when he said he was bored and wanted the world to end in order to experience something exciting IT HAPPEND. reality was changed to entertain him. his commando friend Zach , the girl, various people were turned into monsters and lastly when something he wanted to happen like when he wanted his commando friend to not kill that scp agent as he was fighting him it happened. in the end the Raymond fate will be similar to the witch girl.

  • @stpancraschapel2136
    @stpancraschapel2136 2 роки тому +58

    I’m a little over 17 minutes in and have come to loath the characters. I’m going to soldier on, in the hope that they all meet gruesome ends.

    • @sdukes6325
      @sdukes6325 Рік тому +2

      😅😅😅

    • @ConceptJunkie
      @ConceptJunkie Рік тому +15

      I was at about 18 minutes in when I saw this comment, and yes, the acting is horrible. And yes, I'm bored. I'm looking at comments.

    • @aaronrodden8121
      @aaronrodden8121 Рік тому +11

      It's amazing how many people are commenting "awesome" "good job" or "y'all are underrated" and that scares me if society really means that! These people COULD be better actors but if something is horrible, JUST SAY IT and give constructive criticism ya know!! A for effort but E for delivery!

    • @tristynmay2831
      @tristynmay2831 Рік тому +3

      This was bad lol

    • @reepusvanguard
      @reepusvanguard 8 місяців тому +6

      Wow, you people are extremely nitpicky. The actors may not be perfect, but when they do well, damn do they do well. Why do you loathe the characters, though? They are in a apocalyptic situation, doing pretty much everything they should be doing up to this point, showing vulnerability to each other and swearing to protect each other even in this horrifying situation, yet you find this to be a negative character trait? I truly do not want to know what kind of person you think you find Heroic.

  • @NAWWMANNN
    @NAWWMANNN 2 роки тому +59

    This was actually pretty good and pretty cool to watch.
    The acting is kind of shit, but for a bunch of people who are obviously doing this as a passion project and having fun, it's really not much a big deal.
    You can tell a ridiculous amount of work went into this.
    I genuinely enjoy SCP style shit where you're never given any kind of solid, coherent answers about wtf is going on..
    Some shit happens, there are SCPs roaming around who have obviously breached containment, and the only ones who have any idea what's going on are working within the Foundation itself and are going to die before telling what they know to some random civilian survivors.
    That's actually pretty fucking realistic to how an experience like this would actually feel.
    No answers, no explanation, just try to survive until you can't anymore.
    Brilliant.
    Good job, people who made this.

    • @deathbear56
      @deathbear56 Місяць тому +1

      Ay much appreciated man. This was a senior year project turned passion project and took us half the year

  • @weeaboobaguette3943
    @weeaboobaguette3943 Рік тому +17

    Kinda hoped for a spin on SCP-5000, but capture of a type green was nice too.
    Was the explosion and the predatory SCP related to/caused by the type green tho, or a coincidence ?
    And why did the SCP agent kill a soldier ?
    Still, less plotholes than the average hollywood movie.

    • @unknownfox3796
      @unknownfox3796 8 місяців тому +6

      Raymond is a reality warper, the best explaination other than "telekinesist" is this, it justifies why a breach happens out of nowhere and why he ALSO has powers- and why the foundation was already on his tail saying taht he could *end the world*, could be an insane coincidence but i think not, if he was just a telekinesist why is he so dangerous ?
      the other soldier was probably from an ennemy group of interest, but no clear explainations on that, i might have missed something

    • @reepusvanguard
      @reepusvanguard 8 місяців тому +4

      Agreed, its very good for a low budget film

    • @RobertTheTexan2
      @RobertTheTexan2 Місяць тому

      @@unknownfox3796agreed. I think the balaclava on the dude in multicam may have proven your point.

    • @deathbear56
      @deathbear56 Місяць тому

      We kinda went for a mix of creating our own and using the one that copies voices

  • @ohhhhhhhh179
    @ohhhhhhhh179 2 роки тому +12

    So you're telling me a shrimp fried this rice?

  • @654Crossman
    @654Crossman 2 роки тому +9

    Not bad, but some stuff bugged the shit out of me. How did some kid take down a fully geared soldier? Why was that soldier alone? How could Saxon shoot a soldier, who just engaged a perceived threat, just feet from him? Why again, was this other soldier alone? Sorry for sounding like an ass, but the character that is Saxon, was the worst part of this film. Not the actor, himself. The writing. Again, sorry for being harsh. Other than some of the stuff that made me say "bullshit," out loud, it was a great film.

    • @greggreg5189
      @greggreg5189 2 роки тому +2

      To call it "a great film", is to be disingenuous. It isn't good; sometimes being honest is the best way to help someone improve, imo. You don't have to agree with me, but I think it is possible to criticize entertainment [objectively], and not just [subjectively]. This film had more issues than just Saxon. As a defence of the film, the "kid" was a member of OVERLORD, which in itself is a reference to Evan Royalty's movie. There were several cinematographic flaws, on top of writing mistakes. Two such examples are 1. When Saxon loots the trooper's body, we see a random light flash for no reason, and we later see lens flares when he regroups with his friends. 2. The plot doesn't give the characters time to grieve when Dany dies; the start of Day 4 shows that they buried her. It's not normal for someone to die then IMMEDIATELY have her friends bury her body....especially when they have no shovels. Another script issue arrises when the protagonist is revealed to have telekinesis. The primary reason it fails is that his powers are never foreshadowed.
      I try to watch films/shows casually, but I just get caught up by mistakes.

    • @funnyboy2000ful
      @funnyboy2000ful 2 роки тому +1

      How do you shoot a gun with out a magazine in it is what bothers me

    • @deathbear56
      @deathbear56 Місяць тому

      FYI this was a high school film lol, we tried our best

  • @cuzimblaze8647
    @cuzimblaze8647 3 роки тому +48

    Y’all did a good job with this

  • @Irfan88-x1j
    @Irfan88-x1j Місяць тому +2

    1st_deadpool carry only year anyone halo 2025

  • @KyrstOak
    @KyrstOak 2 роки тому +13

    As good as this is, it's difficult to hear some of the lines. It would be nice to have some subtitles.

    • @2Fat2Furi0us
      @2Fat2Furi0us 2 роки тому +1

      Wdym you can't hear? Are you blind!?

    • @cow6054
      @cow6054 2 роки тому

      @@2Fat2Furi0us funny joke man

    • @2Fat2Furi0us
      @2Fat2Furi0us 2 роки тому +1

      @@cow6054 U know it, babe.

    • @cow6054
      @cow6054 2 роки тому

      @@2Fat2Furi0us .

    • @2Fat2Furi0us
      @2Fat2Furi0us 2 роки тому +1

      @@cow6054 Much like a woman, must have the last word.

  • @dodododo1074
    @dodododo1074 11 місяців тому +3

    I will agree with one of the other commenters. For the budget you had guys I think it was great, acting nit bad, however plot is totally unclear. In your head may be but for other people in a way we can interpritate in our heads but will never be sure if thats exactly what your idea was