I'm putting disclaimer here since I forgot to put it in video... This video contains sensitive topics, triggering topics even so anyone who is watching please watch it on ur own risk... If you’d like a bonus part, make sure to comment below!
We definitely need a bonus part cuz -Y/n should call her adopted parent mom -What about y/n biological parents also jk's -Their progressive relationship -Also overall bond between teayung,Mia,jk,y/n -what happend to those criminals?? - Truma healing ✨️
Idk if you'll be reading this but I found your channel like 2-3 days ago and girl- you write so beautifully and it's so fun to read. Idk if it'll motivate you or something but your writing skills are really really really good and this might be one of your best written stories. Like I love the plot it's so unique. I'm curious about what happened to their parents and yn's parents since they all were celebrating and suddenly she disappeared. It would be really nice if you maybe make a bonus but just wanted to tell you that never feel insecure about how you write because I think it is really hard to find something good to read nowadays. I still have a lot more videos to watch from your channel but I'll surely try to watch them. ❤ Have a great day and take care. -from your new follower 🫶
@@DeSireFanfiction I hope it motivated you or something I was really being genuine 😂❤️🫶 Don't overwork yourself 🎀 And just take a little break if you're tired ❤️
Gurl, am not someone who becomes emotional but reading this really made me feel so many emotions. Thank you accepting my request and writing this ff I love it so much. I love how u expressed both of the characters going through the same thing! I love how uou showed that even a guy can hate being touched and used. How even men guard their dignity! It's just our society and standards which shows that male don't care about their dignity when they do too. Thank you writing this u made my day 🤧🤧💜💜. Can't wait for the bonus part
How did they scape from that place tho? Did the police find anything regarding those people who kidnapped them? What happend to Y/n's little brother? How did she end up in the orphanage? What happend to her parents?
What about Jk's family? Like I have so many questions, please make a bonus and let us know what happened, and please let yn and jk live a little better life, get them therapy or something that can help them heal even if it's a little bit...
Omo it was so good the way you portraits the story lines it seem like i was watching a movie and not reading a fan fiction....❤....it does need a bonus part 🌹🌹
44 min long yayyyyy!!!!omg the date 13th june ...39:35 loved these lines.....we need a part 3 now...i literally was bout to shout out loudly no wayyyyy when i saw "the end" pleaseeee we need another part...again i loved how u write the details of each scene so skillfully...i am wondering now is it that the lady who has adopted yn at 17 yrs old is also her real mom n how was jk too kidnapped 🤔 n his backstory too as in how did he escape plus also yn how did she too get out of that hell?? if u really r gonna make another part i hope u include these too please 🥺and i am glad the comments had u motivated
For now I'm working on the last part of rivals.. So I'll probably upload today or tomorrow on my second channel.. And about ur theory... Let's say about the lady adopted Yn if you read the conversation between Jungkook and Yn when she was talking about her. U will find ur answers...
I just got to read both Parts and they're perfection indeed ❤❤😊😊 this Beautiful masterpiece indeed needs a bonus part, how they escape? Those animals got jail?
It was my first time reading a fiction containing something like child trafficking ... only one thought , its worse then hell...but hey what i mean to say is you showed it perfectly , my goosebumps and tears prove it! And yea...congratz for breaking ur word record , also how & what do you plan to have in the bonus...like how they overcome it or making efforts to meet their real families....or something different?...surprise us u know if u plan to have one! Also did any movie / book or something else gave you this idea?..do share the name if and only if u are ok with it.. sleep tight! good luck
That was ...... Amazing!!! Like full of emotions It really gave me goosebumps Like how can you even write this fine Last few minutes were too much to take in You portrayed each and everything so beautifully Really love it❤❤❤ And ofcourse it would feel incomplete without bonus 😅
Thisss is tooooo good💞🙌.... I cannot find words... I mean i don't usually comment of ffs but your story litteraly made me to do it.... It has so many emotions..... Like thats what we need in life... Who just understands us and do not want us to change.... Its heaven ❤❤..... I really really want you to right books in the future.... I am telling you👀..... Like seriously ✨💖..... I really appreciate your work..... If you were in front of me, i would have hugged you😅✨...... Rn i am floded with mixed emotions..... At last just keep going and plz think about my suggestion on writing a book (fictional one). I would definitely read you 💖❤✨
Story time Me on author's door...*KNOCK KNOCK* Author: yes?? What u want?? Me: umm excuse me (inside me: not really)..I just happen to watch the episode of BEHIND THE TEARS..??( FIDGETING) Author: So, how can I help??😄 Me: (awkward smile)...it's uhhh not like that( inside me: IT'S EXACTLY LIKE THAT!!)... could u please uhh give the bonus part u know comments are near to 100... Author: REALLY!!?? me: yes really...so will u??😅 Author: yup as promised😊.. Me: ( yapping in a flow) u know it took me 4-5 business days to b this free to saw it peacefully and it was so hectic that I got assignments, presentation, quizzes, synopsis, research and what not on less then 1 sq/ft of my head and nobody listens to me so if could u.. Author: yeah of course only if u let me...I mean when u'll go and I'll close the door on which u r humbly leaning 😅😅.. Me: ohh yeah take ur time (inside me: not really)...and give a good ending...BYE BYE 👋 👋.. Author: ByEeee!!
I'm putting disclaimer here since I forgot to put it in video...
This video contains sensitive topics, triggering topics even so anyone who is watching please watch it on ur own risk...
If you’d like a bonus part, make sure to comment below!
@@DeSireFanfiction of course
We definitely need a bonus part cuz
-Y/n should call her adopted parent mom
-What about y/n biological parents also jk's
-Their progressive relationship
-Also overall bond between teayung,Mia,jk,y/n
-what happend to those criminals??
- Truma healing ✨️
Congrats 1ce again for this masterpiece.....but it needs a bonus as your readers are very desperate for your efforts and another piece of story....❤
It do need a bonus part cuz you know many things have to be unfold and we're curious ☺♥️
Definitely need a bonus part pretty please 🥺🥺🥺
it definitely deserves a bonus..they need thier justice and a happy ending
Totally agree with you ♥️♥️
Def needs a bonus. Beautifully written but horrifyingly so real
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Guys give this part 70+ comments too cuz it deserve it the hard work the amount of time consume in it worth it...✨♥️✨
Can we get a bonus part author nim 👉🏻👈🏻
No way
No way
No way.......
This is too much to take 🤧🤧🤧
its feel like a tragic movie...you are a amazing author..love you
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you stories deserve millions of views...just wow
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This is hauntingly beautiful . Tragic yet heartfelt.
Please make a bonus episode. I want to see them happy together.
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This story needs a bonus. I want to see their love story
My heart skipped a beat i swear omo omo im so excited im commenting before reading ima come backkkkk ik its going to be blastttttttt........❤❤❤❤❤❤
Idk if you'll be reading this but I found your channel like 2-3 days ago and girl- you write so beautifully and it's so fun to read. Idk if it'll motivate you or something but your writing skills are really really really good and this might be one of your best written stories. Like I love the plot it's so unique.
I'm curious about what happened to their parents and yn's parents since they all were celebrating and suddenly she disappeared. It would be really nice if you maybe make a bonus but just wanted to tell you that never feel insecure about how you write because I think it is really hard to find something good to read nowadays.
I still have a lot more videos to watch from your channel but I'll surely try to watch them.
❤ Have a great day and take care. -from your new follower 🫶
Welcome to the family✨
Thank you for leaving a comment this means alot to me🥹🫶
And yes I'll definitely work on the bonus part❤️
@@DeSireFanfiction I hope it motivated you or something I was really being genuine 😂❤️🫶
Don't overwork yourself 🎀
And just take a little break if you're tired ❤️
Its perfect ❤you pour all emotions in every scene 😢its horrible but beautifully written ❤️ bonus needed❤thank you author nim
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This definitely deserves a bonus
We definitely need a bonus part cause there are some truths that not revealed yet ..im so curious..
this stories is so good and comforting!!💜💜
Simply….. WOW!
this definetly needs a bonus where they get a happy ending.
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@@DeSireFanfiction woahh thanks for reply😄
Gurl, am not someone who becomes emotional but reading this really made me feel so many emotions. Thank you accepting my request and writing this ff I love it so much. I love how u expressed both of the characters going through the same thing! I love how uou showed that even a guy can hate being touched and used. How even men guard their dignity! It's just our society and standards which shows that male don't care about their dignity when they do too. Thank you writing this u made my day 🤧🤧💜💜. Can't wait for the bonus part
So glad u enjoyed it bestie 🫶
@@DeSireFanfiction ofcourse since it was truly a masterpiece, cant wait to read the ff you posted yesterday am excited to read it too
Bonus part of this is a must now.
We definitely need bonus part
How did they scape from that place tho? Did the police find anything regarding those people who kidnapped them? What happend to Y/n's little brother? How did she end up in the orphanage? What happend to her parents?
What about Jk's family? Like I have so many questions, please make a bonus and let us know what happened, and please let yn and jk live a little better life, get them therapy or something that can help them heal even if it's a little bit...
@@fatimatoudiallo3254 and Exactly that's why we need a bonus part and for that Again we've to complete a Goal.....☺✨♥️✨
Beautifully written ❤️
But we do need a bonus to know what about y/n's parents, her brother and how come they were able to come out of that place 😊
Please unnie make a bonus please.they deserve to be happy in their life .😢
It's just perfect. I don't have words to say how beautiful this story is. Plz make a bonus❤
Omo it was so good the way you portraits the story lines it seem like i was watching a movie and not reading a fan fiction....❤....it does need a bonus part 🌹🌹
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It was so heart warming heart touching
It was really damn good ... we do we need a next part of it...
44 min long yayyyyy!!!!omg the date 13th june ...39:35 loved these lines.....we need a part 3 now...i literally was bout to shout out loudly no wayyyyy when i saw "the end" pleaseeee we need another part...again i loved how u write the details of each scene so skillfully...i am wondering now is it that the lady who has adopted yn at 17 yrs old is also her real mom n how was jk too kidnapped 🤔 n his backstory too as in how did he escape plus also yn how did she too get out of that hell?? if u really r gonna make another part i hope u include these too please 🥺and i am glad the comments had u motivated
For now I'm working on the last part of rivals.. So I'll probably upload today or tomorrow on my second channel..
And about ur theory... Let's say about the lady adopted Yn if you read the conversation between Jungkook and Yn when she was talking about her. U will find ur answers...
@@DeSireFanfiction omg thank u so much 💜💜💜😭😭😭...okay i reread it n got it 😂😂😅😅
Bonuss please....This was way too good❣❣
IT
Was
Amazing
So much moving
I was in tears while reading it
👏 ROUND OF APPALOUSE FOR YOU HATS OFF
✨♥️✨🌹🌹🥀👑
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please a bonus part with a happy ending with their marriage and baby
Author nim should start working on next part really soon he he i am sure its also gonna get 70 + comments really soon
Will check it out later 😢 but so glad to see the next part uploaded😢
I just got to read both Parts and they're perfection indeed ❤❤😊😊 this Beautiful masterpiece indeed needs a bonus part, how they escape? Those animals got jail?
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💟I take a bow ! This is a heavy and Amazingly good written story ! It was heartbreaking😭
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I was in tears literallyyyy how painful it was
i'm in desperate need of a PART 2
Please make a bonus part...
Please I love this 🤧🤧🤧 bonus part please can’t get enough
Thank you a lot for this masterpiece, i really love your writing skills❤
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Please a bonus for us author nim....😊😊
It was my first time reading a fiction containing something like child trafficking ... only one thought , its worse then hell...but hey what i mean to say is you showed it perfectly , my goosebumps and tears prove it!
And yea...congratz for breaking ur word record , also how & what do you plan to have in the bonus...like how they overcome it or making efforts to meet their real families....or something different?...surprise us u know if u plan to have one!
Also did any movie / book or something else gave you this idea?..do share the name if and only if u are ok with it..
sleep tight!
good luck
Glad that you like it🥹🫶
And my bestie gave me idea that I should write something on this topic.
I'll wait for the bonus part then I'll read them both... I hope they get a happy ending 🩷🩶🩵🫶
That was ...... Amazing!!!
Like full of emotions
It really gave me goosebumps
Like how can you even write this fine
Last few minutes were too much to take in
You portrayed each and everything so beautifully
Really love it❤❤❤
And ofcourse it would feel incomplete without bonus 😅
🥹🫶
It was so good 😢😢 plz upload next part soon 😢❤❤❤
Thisss is tooooo good💞🙌.... I cannot find words... I mean i don't usually comment of ffs but your story litteraly made me to do it.... It has so many emotions..... Like thats what we need in life... Who just understands us and do not want us to change.... Its heaven ❤❤..... I really really want you to right books in the future.... I am telling you👀..... Like seriously ✨💖..... I really appreciate your work..... If you were in front of me, i would have hugged you😅✨...... Rn i am floded with mixed emotions..... At last just keep going and plz think about my suggestion on writing a book (fictional one). I would definitely read you 💖❤✨
Thank you that means alot to me 🥹🫶
Wow this is amajin
Aaaaaaaaaaaaa unnie its really broke me now I am crying please its need bonus pls upload it love you 🥺🥺💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
Please please please please please please upload next parts of forbidden love 😭😭
Story time
Me on author's door...*KNOCK KNOCK*
Author: yes?? What u want??
Me: umm excuse me (inside me: not really)..I just happen to watch the episode of BEHIND THE TEARS..??( FIDGETING)
Author: So, how can I help??😄
Me: (awkward smile)...it's uhhh not like that( inside me: IT'S EXACTLY LIKE THAT!!)... could u please uhh give the bonus part u know comments are near to 100...
Author: REALLY!!??
me: yes really...so will u??😅
Author: yup as promised😊..
Me: ( yapping in a flow) u know it took me 4-5 business days to b this free to saw it peacefully and it was so hectic that I got assignments, presentation, quizzes, synopsis, research and what not on less then 1 sq/ft of my head and nobody listens to me so if could u..
Author: yeah of course only if u let me...I mean when u'll go and I'll close the door on which u r humbly leaning 😅😅..
Me: ohh yeah take ur time (inside me: not really)...and give a good ending...BYE BYE 👋 👋..
Author: ByEeee!!
U are cute 😭❤️
I'm definitely making a bonus part ❤️
No way I'm crying 😭
We want bonus 🎉
We need the bonus
It was so good literally the wait was worth it amazing ✨♥️✨
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Please my joojoobiii.... Make a bonus please❤❤❤
Excited for next part❤❤❤
Ahhhhhhh
Bonous needed plsss
Bonus needed ❤
Amazing
Bonus part pleeeaaseee
Need a bonus!!!
This was so good, so different🙃😍Love itttt❤🩹need a bonus parrtttt asap🥲
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Bonus please ❤
I'm touched❤❤
Love it
bonus plz
Thank you ❤
I haven't read but I just want to comment since I can do whatever my fave author asked
That's sweet of you🥹❤️
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Kia bonus ho ga es ka
Bonus plsssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
bonus
finally
1st?
We need the bonus
Love it