Hello sir😊, I have just started writing songs and I'm a beginner. My age is 14 😅 I have written a song, I need your opinion sir. Here's the song: Title:- I Love you Verse 1 : In a world full of faces, I found you smile, A love so pure , It could go on for miles, From the very moment, our eyes first met, I knew that you were someone I'd never forget... Chorus : I want to be somebody to you Someone who makes your heart skip a beat or 2 My heart is bouncing Is it the same with you I wanna say it loud today, That I LOVE U.. Verse 2 : Every little thing about you makes me see, The way our souls connect so effortlessly, You bring out the best in me , it's true And I can't help but fall Deeper For You.. Chorus : I want to be somebody to you Someone who makes your heart skip a beat or 2 My heart is bouncing Is it the same with you I wanna say it loud today, That I LOVE U.. Verse 3: When we're together, time stands still Unconditional love, what a beautiful thrill I want to be there through your every high n low With you there by my side babe, There no where else to go.. Verse 1: In a world full of faces, I found you smile, A love so pure , It could go on for miles, From the very moment, our eyes first met, I knew that you were someone I'd never forget... I'd never forget I wanna never forget....... U
Hello dear... I'm a teen singer... As a small singer I loved the lyrics and I would sing this for sure... Do you mind if we collab only if you liked my voice or way of singing you will write lyrics and I will sing.??
It's indeed a gud song.. But in my opinion as a songwriter too.. You should make your chorus more catchy and maybe of 2 to 3 lines.... But overall it's gud .❤❤
**Song Title: "Dil Ki Dastaan"** **Verse 1:** तेरी मुस्कान की बातें, वो यादें ये हैं सुहानी, दिल था हमारा एक संग, पर क्यों हुई ये खानी। **Chorus:** बेवफ़ाई की रातों में, रोता हूँ खुद से यहाँ, दिल की दास्तान है, इश्क़ की ये त्रास्तां। **Verse 2:** तेरी बातों का था यकीन, मोहब्बत की बातें, पर वो हकीकत क्या थी, कुछ ये न समझा तूने। **Chorus:** बेवफ़ाई की रातों में, रोता हूँ खुद से यहाँ, दिल की दास्तान है, इश्क़ की ये त्रास्तां। **Bridge:** तूने छोड़ा है ये जहाँ, मेरी राहों में काँपता, बेवफ़ाई की आग में, मेरा दिल है सुलगता। **Chorus:** बेवफ़ाई की रातों में, रोता हूँ खुद से यहाँ, दिल की दास्तान है, इश्क़ की ये त्रास्तां। **Outro:** इश्क़ में बेवफ़ाई की कहानी, धुप में बनी एक कहानी, दिल की दर्द भरी राहों में, ये गीत सुना जाएगा।
This was a really informative video, I’m a singer, on my way to releasing originals and so I really think all the steps are extremelyyy important! Thank you💕
Sir apki video 1st time dekhrah hu and jo aap krte ho same mai krta hu 😮😮😮😮 bkz i like this technique mujhe ese krnà sahi lagta hai just bs isliye krta tha but I didn't knew that ye sach mein hota hai esa sab😮❤❤❤
start with a simple chord progression like : C maj, E min, G maj, D maj. Also use fingerpicking or different strumming patterns. You can also use Capo on guitar to make the chords sound different
Thank you so so much Bhaiya 😍😘 I am write my song and I am confused to write a verse am writing a 2,3 verse not feel perfect but I am feel good and happy thank you soooooooooo much one's again Bhaiya 🙏😘😘
@@sharikrizwan8714 I m thinking of making a film cuz one shot is better bcs people nowadays are very buzy to watch all video at once they came on my channel randomly so i make sure they complete it in one video besically it's a film with a lot of adventures but beside that i wanna make my own song and create my own dance choreo + dance mv 😅 but it's really hard there are many competition but i will never give up 🙂
BRo Ek gana hai Dill todo Na Mera startup hai semybollywood jonner ka song hai lekin ab 2 nd song ke liye kya karu vahi samjh nahi aa raha hai confused ho gaya hu sad likhu happy 🤔
Sir I am kamrul from Chittagong Bangladesh...in this video you mentioned song structure...but I don't know about that...if you give me a suggestion forhow can I know about song structure...it will very helpful to me.... please let me know where from I can know about song structure..., please..
Raat hae andherae ,kohi baat nahi samajta merae Hu aakela es dafa ,dosti to kaal tak tha aaj mud kae na dekhae Bat aagai aaj paisae ki, woh xod ke chala gaya aakaelae Mae tu ek khelauna hu jo bhe aakae khelae ...........: (Complete it...........)!!
Thankyou so much......really I'm just 13 years old and my dream is very big and is not ever done in india May it would wired but I want to be a singer and a dancer....... Just like a band to performance on stage ☺️ like i don't know i u have ever listen k pop songs 😕 so like my inspiration is a Korean boy band *BTS* So I'm just thinking to do that thing guys i don't know if I'll be succeed in this career but I'll try my best *Sir plz can u tell be if being a singer is a good career decisions plz tell*
Bro THINK BEFORE THAT BTS BTS BTS SHIT Being a k pop idol will ruin your life and also make your life harder , because training for years won't make you successful You will end up like K , Chaeryeong , and other people who didn't got selected
Rakhda me khudpe yakin bholenath, Paachhe khade mere yaar mere sath bholenath, kaale dhan ki kamai kadi karni na chahi, bs mhenat se jindgi chalai bholenath Pls btao ye lyrics kaise lage aapki ?? Kya me ise aaghe likhu ya isse achha or kuchh sochu Pls give me reply 🙏🙏
Hello sir😊,
I have just started writing songs and I'm a beginner. My age is 14 😅
I have written a song, I need your opinion sir.
Here's the song:
Title:- I Love you
Verse 1 :
In a world full of faces, I found you smile,
A love so pure , It could go on for miles,
From the very moment, our eyes first met,
I knew that you were someone
I'd never forget...
Chorus :
I want to be somebody to you
Someone who makes your heart skip a beat or 2
My heart is bouncing
Is it the same with you
I wanna say it loud today,
That I LOVE U..
Verse 2 :
Every little thing about you makes me see,
The way our souls connect so effortlessly,
You bring out the best in me , it's true
And I can't help but fall
Deeper For You..
Chorus :
I want to be somebody to you
Someone who makes your heart skip a beat or 2
My heart is bouncing
Is it the same with you
I wanna say it loud today,
That I LOVE U..
Verse 3:
When we're together, time stands still
Unconditional love, what a beautiful thrill
I want to be there through your every high n low
With you there by my side babe,
There no where else to go..
Verse 1:
In a world full of faces, I found you smile,
A love so pure , It could go on for miles,
From the very moment, our eyes first met,
I knew that you were someone
I'd never forget...
I'd never forget
I wanna never forget....... U
Hello dear... I'm a teen singer... As a small singer I loved the lyrics and I would sing this for sure... Do you mind if we collab only if you liked my voice or way of singing you will write lyrics and I will sing.??
It's indeed a gud song..
But in my opinion as a songwriter too..
You should make your chorus more catchy and maybe of 2 to 3 lines....
But overall it's gud .❤❤
This is so pure imaginary work...theme is catchy ...if it fits in a proper melody than 🎉
Am 13 I sing raps in school and am famous and I have 2 years experience your song is good
Ai lyrics lol 🤣
I appreciate your honesty.
Aapke face pr honesty saaf dikhti h
Kabhi personally aapse mila nhi pr mera anuman h ye ki u r a good human being❤❤❤❤
You told very deeply...salute to you brother...😊
Shukraan! 🙏
Bilkul sir pehla point hi ekdum❤ music ka koi rule nhi hota, kaano ko sukun milna chiye esa song produce kr saken bs ❤
Bilkul. 🌼
thankyou brother. aapke wajah se bahaut kuch seekhne ko mila!!! love from nepal
You are welcome
**Song Title: "Dil Ki Dastaan"**
**Verse 1:**
तेरी मुस्कान की बातें, वो यादें ये हैं सुहानी,
दिल था हमारा एक संग, पर क्यों हुई ये खानी।
**Chorus:**
बेवफ़ाई की रातों में, रोता हूँ खुद से यहाँ,
दिल की दास्तान है, इश्क़ की ये त्रास्तां।
**Verse 2:**
तेरी बातों का था यकीन, मोहब्बत की बातें,
पर वो हकीकत क्या थी, कुछ ये न समझा तूने।
**Chorus:**
बेवफ़ाई की रातों में, रोता हूँ खुद से यहाँ,
दिल की दास्तान है, इश्क़ की ये त्रास्तां।
**Bridge:**
तूने छोड़ा है ये जहाँ, मेरी राहों में काँपता,
बेवफ़ाई की आग में, मेरा दिल है सुलगता।
**Chorus:**
बेवफ़ाई की रातों में, रोता हूँ खुद से यहाँ,
दिल की दास्तान है, इश्क़ की ये त्रास्तां।
**Outro:**
इश्क़ में बेवफ़ाई की कहानी, धुप में बनी एक कहानी,
दिल की दर्द भरी राहों में, ये गीत सुना जाएगा।
Bhai ye song nhi sayri h kyuki Esme cross line nahi h
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@@ninjax5397 kya bol rhe ho bhai
@@S.ksingh-2024 it's AI generated
@@S.ksingh-2024 what do u mean by cross line
*Tony kakkar needs to watch this video*
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Sahi kaha bro 😂😂
Ok bhai .. Tony ko share kar diya hu ye video
😂😂😂😂😂😂
😂😂😂😂
Bhai aapki madat se 1st Feb 2022 tak 2 gaane likhliye hai air Maine gaana 1st of Jan ko likhna shuru kiya
Once i write my song..... Will surely tell you....
Thank you!
thank u bhaiya so much......meine itni sari videos dekhli par idk why mujhe ye video se hin kuch knowledge mili......tq so much
This was a really informative video, I’m a singer, on my way to releasing originals and so I really think all the steps are extremelyyy important! Thank you💕
Yes
Are you a Bolly wood singer
How did you start singing I'm really interested in signing
Sir apki video 1st time dekhrah hu and jo aap krte ho same mai krta hu 😮😮😮😮 bkz i like this technique mujhe ese krnà sahi lagta hai just bs isliye krta tha but I didn't knew that ye sach mein hota hai esa sab😮❤❤❤
Thank you bhaiya....apki vajh se bhot kuch sikhne ko milla.....
Thank you once again bhaiya🌸
Please make video on how can I chose chords for any composition
Use your ears brother. The biggest tool in music "Ears".
start with a simple chord progression like : C maj, E min, G maj, D maj. Also use fingerpicking or different strumming patterns. You can also use Capo on guitar to make the chords sound different
शुक्रिया brother
bro love your videos ....please make a video on composition
Thankyou sir for your guidance ❤️❤️
This was awesome! Bohot helpful tha, sach mein! I made notes and feel excited to try and create something. Thank you so much. 💛
Thank you bhai ❤️
Welcome dada ❤️
Thanks sir i am starting my lyrics writting journey
Tum mil jaoo bs yeh jahan chor denge
Tumrey paas rehkar apne aap ko jeena sikha denge❤
Thanku sirji🙏🙏🙏😊🙂
Bhai sukriya aap ke bje se muj me himat aai 😊
Thank you brother 😊
Vibes like tooo amazing
Thank you for suggestions
What is arrangement???
What is composition???
What is sound design???
I make musics
Wao..
Thanks sir for this super ideas & technique ...
Awesome Tutorial! Thank you brother.
Really helpful video sir
Sir ap konse app main karte hai aur laptop ya mobile main karte hai ya mare liya bohut helpfull ha please reply kariyaga
Bhaiyya... Ek one to hundred complete song composition karke bata dijiye if possible.
I love this video 📸🥺
Thankyou so much ❤️
Very informative bhai ❤️💯😊🙇♂️
I am layarical, script and novel poetry book writer. My first book Dil bechara samajh Naa paya available on Flipkart and Amazon
Thank you so so much Bhaiya 😍😘 I am write my song and I am confused to write a verse am writing a 2,3 verse not feel perfect but I am feel good and happy thank you soooooooooo much one's again Bhaiya 🙏😘😘
You can contact me to put melodies in your songs
I am 16 . I am making an animated series and I want to add a song in it. Can anyone help me with this?
@@sharikrizwan8714same 😅
@@Ryuuxtrixie Are you too making an animated film Or series?
@@sharikrizwan8714 I m thinking of making a film cuz one shot is better bcs people nowadays are very buzy to watch all video at once they came on my channel randomly so i make sure they complete it in one video besically it's a film with a lot of adventures but beside that i wanna make my own song and create my own dance choreo + dance mv 😅 but it's really hard there are many competition but i will never give up 🙂
I have one problem is that composing a song is compulsory by any instrument. Can I give tone a lyrics without instrument.
Same problem with me
Bhoat bhoat shukriyea dhannyeabad sair it helps me
I liked your point of that simple words
Great video bhaiya 😍
Thank you so so so so so so much😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
Please make video on song structure.
How you remember chords with lyrics ... you record it???
Insightful ❤
Thankyou 🌸
Helpful video! But i still believe one needs some experience/story/inspiration/emotion to write a very good song.
Bro apke khudke likhe hue song kon konsa hai?
BRo Ek gana hai Dill todo Na Mera startup hai semybollywood jonner ka song hai lekin ab 2 nd song ke liye kya karu vahi samjh nahi aa raha hai confused ho gaya hu sad likhu happy 🤔
Thank you so much
Sir I am kamrul from Chittagong Bangladesh...in this video you mentioned song structure...but I don't know about that...if you give me a suggestion forhow can I know about song structure...it will very helpful to me.... please let me know where from I can know about song structure..., please..
Bhai kuchh pata chala?
I can write song as freelancing if interested... From Kolkata
Bruh scale or key kaise nikale khud ka composition song kaaa or scale kaa relative chords ke upar tutorial sahiye
Learn music theory. Will help you with music in general. You can simply start by learning an instrument or taking vocal classes
Thank you so much sir
My inspiration is bts and toney kakker need to see this video
Why BTS need you watch this video? Their songs are amazing
@@marklesgamer4543 BTS is her inspiration
Songs ka anylisis kaise kar sakte hai ispe video banaiye pls 🙏🏻
Thank you so much sir❤️🙏🙏
Welcome 😊
what if one doesn't know how to produce and just wants to write lyrics?
Sir you told very deeply
Melody plugin play single cord play 'TITLE' FOCUS ON TOPICS 😮
your communication style is wow.
Bhai ye background tune kis gane ki hai
Sir very nice
Sir video bahut useful tha🥰💖
& Mera ek doubt clear kar deejiye plz... What is the difference between composer and producer ?
Composer just composes the tune, melody etc . While producer looks after the whole project - from start to finish
@@DreamArtRecords ok got it.... thanks a lot sir🙏💖
Song likha hai but redim kese banaye
Thanks buddy
Sar ek hi pattern se gana likhate hain ya alag alag rhyming word
Raat hae andherae ,kohi baat nahi samajta merae
Hu aakela es dafa ,dosti to kaal tak tha aaj mud kae na dekhae
Bat aagai aaj paisae ki, woh xod ke chala gaya aakaelae
Mae tu ek khelauna hu jo bhe aakae khelae
...........:
(Complete it...........)!!
Song write,composed and lyrics same hai ki nahi plz answer
Thanks bhaiya it's to help Full ❤❤❤❤❤
lyrics ki dhun writer ko bnani hoti h kya ya fir singing k hisab se bnti h plz tell bro.
If i am writing rap,melody songs ...what should i do first make beat and write or do vice versa?
Can we write a song on other old song lyrics is it ok ?
Thankyou so much......really I'm just 13 years old and my dream is very big and is not ever done in india
May it would wired but I want to be a singer and a dancer....... Just like a band to performance on stage ☺️ like i don't know i u have ever listen k pop songs 😕 so like my inspiration is a Korean boy band *BTS*
So I'm just thinking to do that thing guys i don't know if I'll be succeed in this career but I'll try my best
*Sir plz can u tell be if being a singer is a good career decisions plz tell*
Bro THINK BEFORE THAT BTS BTS BTS SHIT
Being a k pop idol will ruin your life and also make your life harder , because training for years won't make you successful You will end up like K , Chaeryeong , and other people who didn't got selected
@@jitensmail2309 bro..... plz read the comment properly i want to say that in india singer and dancer not k pop plz read nicely
Thankyou
@@jitensmail2309 and tf i have not asked you to give comment on BTS ok so shut your mouth and think 100 times if you anything to BTS
Hey same here ..my dream is also same ✊🙂
@@audio8255 hope my and your dream should be fulfilled by we both grow and a opportunity do es in our life☺️
Helpful !!!
Bahut badhiya ji
Can you realese this music only i like it so much 😢
I want to learn with you sir
Bhai ya cot plugging hota kya he me to biggner hu
hello maine kuch lyrics likha hai
ZINDAGI PYAAR HEE HAI YARR
BS TERI HI KAAMI HAI YARR
THORI KHATTI THORI MITTHI
BS TERI HE KAAMI HAI YARR
Golden words
Bhai composition pe likhana chahata hu lekin Mushkil bahot Ho rahi hai please reply and Guid me bRo ☺🙏
*yeahhh finallyyy*
Thank you 😢❤
Background music name ??
Thank u sir I
As a edm music producer how many things should learn??? 🤔🤔🤔
Sir u r from Assam I m from assam
I have song but no music instrument
this is really helpful
Thankyou much
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Wow Thank you
Wmk 🙏🙇♂️
Please upload that video for how to create like k pop song please
Superb
🙏❤️
ye songwriting music production se zyada hard kaise hai 🤡
Aap kitne hit gane likha hai bhai ...
Can you make a video on song structure
Very informative
Rakhda me khudpe yakin bholenath,
Paachhe khade mere yaar mere sath bholenath,
kaale dhan ki kamai kadi karni na chahi, bs mhenat se jindgi chalai bholenath
Pls btao ye lyrics kaise lage aapki ??
Kya me ise aaghe likhu ya isse achha or kuchh sochu
Pls give me reply 🙏🙏
Accha sound kar raha hai...Rap Song ke form me badhiya lagega...🔥🔥✨
Song mere paass new songs h or bnte rshte h but koi sath nhi h music composer