At 12:20, the story doesn't add up anymore. With all the alerts and data and now a breach, nobody in their right mind would allow a ship to stay put and abandon the bridge for something that is only part of strange events and multible failures. Any captain or just navigational officer of sound mind would at that time be making frantic attempts to get the ship the hell out of there to a safe distance and THEN try to figure out what the hell was going on. We are now 7 minutes further into the story. And they have still not tried to get away from whatever is going on, but clearly endangering them. Instead, they are just discussing the events and data streams despite the repeated warning to run. At 22 and a half minute, they again stress the need to make an immediate decision, and nobody will even try to make a decision or try to bring the ship to a safer distance. Despite it being jolted around and made to have multible failures and crews getting thrown through dimensional gabs and god knows what. Who the hell wrote this story? There is not even a hint of self preservation or logic or the instinct so thoroughly described in the beginning. This story is at this point just as unglued as the events it's trying to describe. So whoever weote it has not the slightest idea of the most basic safety considerations aboard a vessel, be it space or just in real life on the seas. This story has already turned into an unbelievable example of catastrophic history telling. This is one story that should never have been released in it's present form. I'm sorry. But even though I usually enjoy your stories, this is one that I will not even finish.
Ok I agree Females only is a little strange. But what I find is odd is the images that shows humans and an x-wing fighter. They said humans haven't been around for a 100,000 years I think and to have hunam officers dephcering a human message when they have been gone for hunderds of years dwe to space time tampering is...strange.
Females only is a little odd, however females do read Sci-fi I'm living proof. And the first Sci-Fi novel was written by a female, Frankestein you may have heard of it, was written by a female. And females DO HOLD rank in the military my Girlfriends Mother was a F**kin Marine.Yes she shot guns yes she used knifes. She is still alive she became a cop after her time in the millitary. If you like, I can shoot you a whole list of female Officers, in the military, My boss at my last Job was in the navy, we were unarmed security but she had the lience and creditials to carry a gun. Females in the millitary has been around for a few decades now what rock have you been living under. and that's right I said Officers I don't mean woman who drove jeeps or did secretrial work I mean hundreds of womam who shot guns, flew helicopter's (yes armed helicopters) and yes they had guys manning the guns to but woman would as well. If your in a survival situation and your guns fucks up because life just sucks sometimes, and a woman officer is the only person near another gun you really going to tell me you'll let yourself get shot cause you hate and or don't trust woman. And not tell her to shoot the bad guy??? Really??? Just cause you have never met a bad ass woman doesn't mean they don't exist. I've never seen mount rushmore but I'm pretty sure it exist. And the people who makeup rushmore I'm pretty sure they existed once as well considering they have a moutain range decided to them.
As an ex-military, the lack of immediate reversal of the ship to a safe distance is nothing but negligence.
AI story creators miss a lot of nuance.
I call this stuff "Sci-fi porn" as the main protagonist always gets their happy ending.
It's like a computer virus. The only safe thing to do is stay away from other communication sources
Nova Blackwood's character is a standout, embodying a blend of intelligence, courage, and otherworldly grace
How many times do you have to be told to RUN before you do it???
Woman
Finally a different one of these stories... I liked it
This was an awesome story, well done !
Oooh good one. Ta muchly.
I was only half listening to this while gaming, but what I got from it is that there is a lot of crying in space.
I listen to these while I fill out reports. This ones good.
I liked it.
What a new and original story ! umm actually no not really ’Event horizon’ anyone ? 🤔
If you haven't run after being told 3 times it's far to late for you.
There's a lot of Quantum words
THE EPITOME OF INCOMPETENCE AND NEGLIGENCE.
Don't mess with Cthulhu.
At 12:20, the story doesn't add up anymore. With all the alerts and data and now a breach, nobody in their right mind would allow a ship to stay put and abandon the bridge for something that is only part of strange events and multible failures. Any captain or just navigational officer of sound mind would at that time be making frantic attempts to get the ship the hell out of there to a safe distance and THEN try to figure out what the hell was going on.
We are now 7 minutes further into the story. And they have still not tried to get away from whatever is going on, but clearly endangering them. Instead, they are just discussing the events and data streams despite the repeated warning to run.
At 22 and a half minute, they again stress the need to make an immediate decision, and nobody will even try to make a decision or try to bring the ship to a safer distance. Despite it being jolted around and made to have multible failures and crews getting thrown through dimensional gabs and god knows what.
Who the hell wrote this story? There is not even a hint of self preservation or logic or the instinct so thoroughly described in the beginning. This story is at this point just as unglued as the events it's trying to describe. So whoever weote it has not the slightest idea of the most basic safety considerations aboard a vessel, be it space or just in real life on the seas. This story has already turned into an unbelievable example of catastrophic history telling. This is one story that should never have been released in it's present form.
I'm sorry. But even though I usually enjoy your stories, this is one that I will not even finish.
It's hard to look at the positive when the author is only promoted them.
All the stories on this channel are AI written/assisted
Just AI slop read by AI - just neg and move on
Ok I agree Females only is a little strange. But what I find is odd is the images that shows humans and an x-wing fighter. They said humans haven't been around for a 100,000 years I think and to have hunam officers dephcering a human message when they have been gone for hunderds of years dwe to space time tampering is...strange.
There is an almost 200 year old story from German speaking Swizerland:
Exactly same sujet:
"Die schwarze Spinne"😅
These stories have a thing with the name "Chen" dont they???
The mispronunciations take away from the story...and the random spoken "dot" several times was confusing.
AI can't even be bothered to come up with alien names.
Cthulu, anyone?
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Another Chen....
100k years is too stupid of a timespan. Nobody would remember or care after 500 years...
We still talk about events that took place 4,000 years ago
Art never matches. Aliens have human-like names 🤦♂️
No. Quantum this and quantum that. It's just a buzzword here. Beyond maguffin.
What's with that " non-binary" bullshyt?
in sci-fi terms it could apply. Humans, however are not "non-binary".
Binear mean 2, so non binear means not 2. "4 not 2 "
does the word 'social' also trigger you in any context 😅
Spoiled it by including only females in the main characters running an advanced spacecraft without males
Females only is a little odd, however females do read Sci-fi I'm living proof. And the first Sci-Fi novel was written by a female, Frankestein you may have heard of it, was written by a female. And females DO HOLD rank in the military my Girlfriends Mother was a F**kin Marine.Yes she shot guns yes she used knifes. She is still alive she became a cop after her time in the millitary. If you like, I can shoot you a whole list of female Officers, in the military, My boss at my last Job was in the navy, we were unarmed security but she had the lience and creditials to carry a gun. Females in the millitary has been around for a few decades now what rock have you been living under. and that's right I said Officers I don't mean woman who drove jeeps or did secretrial work I mean hundreds of womam who shot guns, flew helicopter's (yes armed helicopters) and yes they had guys manning the guns to but woman would as well. If your in a survival situation and your guns fucks up because life just sucks sometimes, and a woman officer is the only person near another gun you really going to tell me you'll let yourself get shot cause you hate and or don't trust woman. And not tell her to shoot the bad guy??? Really??? Just cause you have never met a bad ass woman doesn't mean they don't exist. I've never seen mount rushmore but I'm pretty sure it exist. And the people who makeup rushmore I'm pretty sure they existed once as well considering they have a moutain range decided to them.
Yep obvious leftist bullshit. Everything woke turns to shit
Don't you get it
If there would be males on the ship
They would have fixed the problem before it became a real danger
And probably got the planet back
What an odd thing to say