[Manga Dub] She claims to be my future wife, but I've never met her...!? [RomCom]

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  • @Abyss_Princess
    @Abyss_Princess Рік тому +163

    Normally in these stories the girl changes drastically over a long period of time, and gets unjustifiably mad at the guy for not remembering her. But this time it's completely his fault. It was shown they were like maybe 2 or 3 years younger, and she hasn't made any drastic changes at all
    Nevermind, turns out he was lying the whole time and never forgot her. Which makes him *more* of an a**hole

    • @harisnaufalia3430
      @harisnaufalia3430 Рік тому

      I dont think he's an a**hole...he choose to engange with those contractor daughter to save his dad so he pretend dont remember her

    • @ezoxide
      @ezoxide Рік тому +8

      I mean he can't his father's factory is in stake

    • @dotand0
      @dotand0 Рік тому +11

      @@ezoxide How does him pretending he doesnt know her help his fathers factory though? he could have explained his situation since day 1

    • @paxhumana2015
      @paxhumana2015 Рік тому +8

      ​@@dotand0, how about the events that concern Konako happened before Sayaka came back to Japan and that he was forced to be in this position or else his father would lose a company and dozens of people would also lose their jobs? Yeah, this is one of many reasons for why I hate arranged marriages.

    • @SaviourSword995
      @SaviourSword995 Рік тому +17

      Thing is he is the sacrifice. His father agreed the deal, not him. So he need to forget about her. Sad but circumstances are straight up shit. Calling him asshole is honestly insulting

  • @ahmarraheel1578
    @ahmarraheel1578 Рік тому +2

    12:44
    "you arrogant cow!!!"
    DAAAMN... the most hilarious and worst insult i have ever heard!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

  • @inductivegrunt94
    @inductivegrunt94 Рік тому +14

    It was really great seeing Tokisada and Sayaka get together after being apart for so long and were able to keep their promise after Sayaka saved his father's company and prevented from being forced to marry the spoiled Kanako. This was a really sweet and wholesome story with Tokisada and Sayaka being a sweet and adorable couple.

  • @flemingbudubiney2936
    @flemingbudubiney2936 Рік тому +19

    This is very very rare. The Mc that actually remembers the childhood friend cause usually the girl is the one that always remembers the guy from her childhood and the guy doesn’t and the girl gets mad that the guy doesn’t remember her when her appearance literally changed over the years. It’s great that Tokisada and Sayaka were finally reunited but I don’t understand why Tokisada pretended not to remember her. It’s no wonder Sayaka didn’t believe that he still liked her unless he proves it

    • @rrobz3948
      @rrobz3948 Рік тому

      Because he is a "selfish @sshole" as he himself says in the video.

    • @zanoa4028
      @zanoa4028 Рік тому +3

      My predicted answer based on tropes of rom mangas is that because he's getting married off to someone else, he wants to completely give up on her and forget any love he had for both their sakes so that he move on with his arranged marriage with some peace of heart and she can move on without him.

    • @flemingbudubiney2936
      @flemingbudubiney2936 Рік тому

      @@zanoa4028 True

    • @lancefillmore9980
      @lancefillmore9980 Рік тому

      ​@@zanoa4028that's it

    • @lancefillmore9980
      @lancefillmore9980 Рік тому

      It's sad though when that happens

  • @Tomoyuki_Tanaka
    @Tomoyuki_Tanaka Рік тому +15

    I dunno, man. I kind of prefer it if Tokisada actually worked to earn Sayaka's love rather than have all the solutions drop right into his lap and get saved when he's in trouble.

  • @rezboy4231
    @rezboy4231 Рік тому +6

    A good dose of serotonin during work

  • @eduardpeeterlemming
    @eduardpeeterlemming Рік тому +9

    I kinda understand why MC lied to Sayaka. He had to marry a garbage dump to keep his family business afloat and didnt want to hurt Sayaka's feelings because of that

  • @shiony3975
    @shiony3975 Рік тому +4

    At first i though MC have amnesia

  • @davidalfaro1429
    @davidalfaro1429 Рік тому +6

    Yeah ❤ thanks ayasaki-San for the amazing romance story your awesome fantastic work 🎉

  • @katarinaclaes96
    @katarinaclaes96 Рік тому +6

    Such a wonderful story today Ayasaki-San thanks.🤩👏💖

  • @josuegonzalez3803
    @josuegonzalez3803 Рік тому +6

    I am soooo lost in why the delay
    Confession
    Not the only one thinking that excuse wont fly by right🤔

    • @Eric_The_Cleric
      @Eric_The_Cleric 11 місяців тому

      Not at all. This whole story's setup and the reveals are so messed up it's ridiculous. Sayaka did not deserve to be treated that way. His excuse was poor. Honestly with her characterization I'm surprised they ended up together in the end with what he did to her.

  • @tirrywilliams
    @tirrywilliams Рік тому

    Excellent video today as always

  • @PabloHernandez-gl5ij
    @PabloHernandez-gl5ij Рік тому +27

    Yeah Sayaka is a way better wife for Tokisada then that arrogant spoiled girl Kanako 😠 and it's nice that Sayaka was able to save Tokisada and his father's company and it's sweet that he apologize to her and kept his promise and became a happy married couple.😊❤️

  • @benwagner5089
    @benwagner5089 Рік тому

    He knew from the beginning!? Why the heck did he act like he didn't know her then, in class or in private? I was thinking he'd had an accident and lost his memory or something, and that was why he didn't remember her. Him just feigning ignorance throughout the story just makes him the worst.

  • @Lamane_21
    @Lamane_21 Рік тому +2

    Tbh if i got reported for not calling her by her first name i wouldn't give a shit cause yk it is what is 3:54

  • @thelightbrigadef4172
    @thelightbrigadef4172 Рік тому +7

    Bruh... tokisada are such a powerlessAndBeing$Tupid. Idk what he is trying to accomplish for SakeOfHisFather by trying to break her emotions. 💀💀

    • @lancefillmore9980
      @lancefillmore9980 Рік тому

      He was trying to forget about her because he was being married off to someone else

    • @Sailor_Saturn1
      @Sailor_Saturn1 Рік тому +1

      @@lancefillmore9980 pretending to forget instead of being honest is NOT the way to go.

    • @lancefillmore9980
      @lancefillmore9980 Рік тому

      @Sailor_Saturn1 I know but it is still a used coping mechanism

    • @lancefillmore9980
      @lancefillmore9980 Рік тому

      And I think pretending to forget someone is better than acting cold to them, which is what I would probably do to an ex that or just avoid them

  • @paxhumana2015
    @paxhumana2015 Рік тому +8

    Here is the aftermath of the story.
    Konako had not only been chewed out by her father, Goto, but also her mother Hana, her older sister Midori, and her husband Kenji, for her behavior towards not only Tokisada, but his whole family, as well as Sayaka and her whole family as well.
    Eventually, Konako had revealed the depth of her deceptive and evil behavior and, as it turned out, she had caused an executive coup of her company in order to not only control her family's company, but to also hurt Sayaka, as Konako was actually the leader of a bunch of bullies that had tormented Sayaka as a child, and she also had influenced her bully clique, as well as the executives of the family business, to conduct a bunch of corporate sabotage to Tokisada's family's business, as well as other crimes, because she wanted to take anything and everything that was of value in the life of Sayaka.
    Not only was Konako's family outraged, but so were Tokisada's family and Sayaka's family, as well as Tokisada and Sayaka as well. However, Konako's family tried to fight the hostile takeover, and, well, a literal company war happened and Konako ended up losing her existence, as well as her grab for power. Eventually, Konako's company was in shambles and Sayaka and Tokisada stepped in and absorbed the company into their mega-conglomerate. However, Konako's family felt truly bad about the cops having to arrive, as well as a modern day battle happening in order to protect themselves, as well as not one, but three, companies, as well as families. Tokisada and Sayaka understood what Konako's family meant and they did their best to steer Konako from the path that she had chosen, but she was already too far gone, and, as it turned out, she was already deep into a lot of undiagnosed mental, developmental, and physical issues in her life, in particular, with her brain.

  • @animeromancelovestory2868
    @animeromancelovestory2868 Рік тому +3

    This Is Really Good Manga Keeping Up Awesome Works I Really Love Your Manga And Your Videos Keep Up The Great Work 👍👍👍👍❤❤❤😄😄😄😄👏👏👏👏

  • @stevehuffman7453
    @stevehuffman7453 Рік тому

    soooo .... WHY didn't she remind him "we were childhood friends, were in (whatever grades together, lived next door (or however far apart) played together at such and such park, my dad got transferred over seas when we were 7 (8?) ... my parents got divorced, (or dad died in an accident) my mum remarried, my last name was __ back then" and anything else of their history together ... maybe even show him pictures of them together before she had to move.

  • @DVnerd1
    @DVnerd1 Рік тому

    I'm going to bleach my eyes

  • @davidchung3923
    @davidchung3923 Рік тому +3

    So I guess the flashback at the beginning was from the Female MC's perspective instead of the Male MC's. Normally when the videos start with a flashback like THAT, the Male MC would totally remember when the Female MC shows up. Or at least he wouldn't be as clueless as this MC was! Claiming to have never met her before too, geez 🤦‍♂

    • @flemingbudubiney2936
      @flemingbudubiney2936 Рік тому

      Yes in flashbacks MC would remember FMC but in the present he totally forgets and when FMC shows up a a transfer student she immediately recognizes the Mc

    • @lancefillmore9980
      @lancefillmore9980 Рік тому +1

      He remembered, he just pretended not to

  • @Agent19D
    @Agent19D Рік тому

    "Arrogant cow" eh? Seems like Sayaka was holding her words back pretty hard xD

  • @doublem3585
    @doublem3585 Рік тому

    Welcome back Ribzva, i missed you!
    About the story, i tought that tokisada didn't remember her because he had some accident and he lost his memory, but turned out that he was just pretending? This makes him a asshole, he played with her feelings and he hurt her, she deseved better. Maybe he did it because he knew about the arranged marriage, but he chose the worst option possible

  • @t1mmypsp
    @t1mmypsp Рік тому

    I love the colors on the characters. Tbh,I want to punch the mc in his goddamn face for doing her like that with lying about everything. The girl with the red eyes made me hate 3 seconds in. 14:47 "I would have whopped her ass!" Had me dying 😂😂

  • @davidalfaro1429
    @davidalfaro1429 Рік тому +5

    I am so sorry for tokisada having to marry someone who doesn’t return feelings of ❤️ instead calling them a servant nishimura is absolutely a terrible fiancé it’s good sayaka came in the end and saved tokisada now they can keep their promise of getting married yeah ❤️🎉😭

  • @AceRajannyo
    @AceRajannyo Рік тому +1

    Another beautiful romantic story that I Love ^⁠_⁠^

  • @isekaimaou3581
    @isekaimaou3581 Рік тому +5

    Another beautiful romance story that I Love ❤️🖤💞💙💜👌👌

  • @randomtrainerx.3424
    @randomtrainerx.3424 Рік тому +3

    I want to give Kanako the benefit of a doubt, but I don't believe she'll find that servant of a husband she's looking for. Also comparing her life to her married older sister isn't helping her either.

  • @teenboy661
    @teenboy661 Рік тому +5

    Wow kiss the floor?? No thanks I Rather live on the streets than merry that rude woman. Glad everything want well for the cute couple❤

  • @konjiki8203
    @konjiki8203 Рік тому +1

    The thumbnail looks like some stories from Sarubedo, but the video’s artstyle is completely different.

  • @okman9684
    @okman9684 Рік тому +1

    Have to say tge MC was a complete a**hole. He could have told her in the beginning and then they both could have did something to resolve his problem. But he tried to super ghost her

  • @alexb6234
    @alexb6234 Рік тому +1

    Why did that woman hate MC so much? I get she didn't want to marry him and that is entirely justified in an arranged marriage. But she should have reserved her hatred for her dad who made it happen not the MC.

    • @Sailor_Saturn1
      @Sailor_Saturn1 Рік тому

      She is the arrogant princess type. To her the MMC was nothing more than fly shit worthy of being talked down to.

  • @lvwen6
    @lvwen6 Рік тому +1

    The fate of Konako : When everyone in her family found out what she did to Sayaka and Tokisada, by saying a lot of bully words. Everyone in her family chewed her out not just her uncle Marvin, but her siblings Tachibana and Midori, While her mother and father chewed her out too. However her family were outraged to find out that Konako used to be part of a group of bullies who bullied Sayaka during her childhood and it turns out the reason why Konako turned Evil. Not only did she want to control her family’s company and hurt Sayaka but it turns out that she is responsible for many crimes, it was subsequently revealed that she attempted to murder and Rob Sayaka just to ruin her life and take everything from her, when her family found out about her crimes she was brutally chewed out by everyone in her family. While her father evicted her from her home by saying “ I don’t consider you my daughter anymore, get out of our sight!!!!! Afterwards Konako was left homeless after finally being disowned by her parents but unbelievably she went to Sayaka and Tokisada’s apartment and tried killing Sayaka again but Tokisada knocked the knife out of her hands, her behavior got worse and she started throwing evil words at Tokisada and Sayaka but however this angered Tokisada and he said “ GET OUT OF MY HOUSE OR I’LL CALL THE COPS. Afterwards Konako ran away after hearing the word Cops, afterwards Konako tried finding a job but she could not get a job while the company that her family works for didn’t hire her because they disowned her a few days before. Konako was homeless and when she tried to ask some boys out every guy rejected her because every male guy knew of her bad behavior. Because of this Konako was taken away by Gresley guards and Nigel Gresley was beyond furious at Konako for her actions and she had to work as a probationary cleaner for all the steam engines on the Gresley railway. However Konako continued spouting her toxic words onto the engines which made them very crossed and finally Konako was given a death sentence to hell by Tremont & Gulf 30
    The end

  • @blvkoz3538
    @blvkoz3538 Рік тому

    Conglomerate was said 2 times in a row but never said right a single time💀

  • @JasonMax-i5k
    @JasonMax-i5k 9 місяців тому

    Ahhhhhh! This girl just won my heart😍😍😍😍

  • @paxhumana2015
    @paxhumana2015 Рік тому +2

    I have some plot twists that would make the reaction of Tokisada not seem like such a jerk. Plot Twist #1, apparently, Sayaka's parents have been working with DARPA in a parallel dimension and they figured out not only how to teleport, but also travel through time, different wavelengths, space, and parallel dimensions, and she was the first successful person to go through a parallel dimension and she apparently met the Tokisada of this dimension. Plot Twist #2, unbeknownst to Sayaka, both of her parents also went through the dimensions and the both of them may, or may not, be d
    e
    a
    d. Plot Twist #3, apparently, the parents of the Sayaka of this world ended up deleting themselves because of the Sayaka of this world ending up being a miscarriage. Plot Twist #4, Sayaka became depressed and desperate and tries to find the only constant in her life, which is Tokisada, but the problem is that the Tokisada of this world, as well as dimension, genuinely never knew her because she was never conceived. Plot Twist #5, Sayaka thought that she was in her own world, but, despite it looking so similar to her own world, as well as her own dimension, she is actually in a different world, as well as different dimension due to a miscalculation by her parents, and she is essentially marooned in a world that is not her own, as well as a dimension that is not her own, and, to top it all off, only her parents, and the DARPA people, knew how the technology that was behind the experiments work. Plot Twist #6, in the dimension, as well as world, that Sayaka originated from, the Tokisada that was there got deleted in a car accident, thus, even if Sayaka somehow managed to figure out how to get back to her actual home, then she could not fulfill her promise anyway, so the only way to fulfill it as best as she can is to simply be with the Tokisada of this world.

    • @lancefillmore9980
      @lancefillmore9980 Рік тому

      Yesh that's sad

    • @lancefillmore9980
      @lancefillmore9980 Рік тому

      It does make him seem like less of a jerk. But it's too extreme and complicated, not to mention unbelievable

  • @paxhumana2015
    @paxhumana2015 Рік тому +2

    14:44, World Star!

  • @CaptainDarkFighter
    @CaptainDarkFighter 7 місяців тому +1

    I hate these UA-camrs for one reason and that is they never make a part 2 to these adorable videos :(

  • @Wooden_chair-n7g
    @Wooden_chair-n7g Рік тому +1

    Hello everyone and Miss ayasaki san 👋👋👋

  • @frankaxe6700
    @frankaxe6700 Рік тому

    Is that a dragonball REFERENCE?! 7:43

  • @bruceknirs9987
    @bruceknirs9987 Рік тому

    Regardless of company employees I would not be used as a paw for no one

  • @wut940
    @wut940 Рік тому +1

    13:40 Did you guys leave an outtake in the video? 🤨📸

  • @subjectory
    @subjectory Рік тому +5

    7:43 dragon ball reference

    • @PabloHernandez-gl5ij
      @PabloHernandez-gl5ij Рік тому +1

      Oh thank God I thought it was the only one that caught that.😂

  • @frankaxe6700
    @frankaxe6700 Рік тому +1

    I thought he made up a story about The fiancée But It was real I was shocked as heck WHAT WAS THE PLAN?! MY HOMIE?!

    • @NAH_IDWIN-
      @NAH_IDWIN- Рік тому +1

      Me too bruh he literally pranked tf outta me 😭

  • @lancefillmore9980
    @lancefillmore9980 Рік тому

    Good night everyone

  • @TommyPhan-xm2re
    @TommyPhan-xm2re Рік тому +5

    I Like This Manga and Romance

  • @XZY-W
    @XZY-W Рік тому

    youtube keeps banning me from commenting lol

  • @JohnharleyRoldan
    @JohnharleyRoldan Рік тому +1

    Nice❤

  • @paxhumana2015
    @paxhumana2015 Рік тому +1

    16:45, and the two of them immediately went to her mansion, and then f
    u
    c
    k
    e
    d like minks.

  • @moilevaltis758
    @moilevaltis758 Рік тому

    Can we have 1 story with high art quality fr,thx

  • @Sanzumori78
    @Sanzumori78 Рік тому

    This is fucking wholesome!

  • @ronneemazukin
    @ronneemazukin Рік тому

    Wow did they do the deed after she saved him.

  • @zeane3884
    @zeane3884 Рік тому +1

    If the girl who like you and wants to make your satisfaction perfect,Say it to her (It's wasn't that).
    -Master Oogway

  • @Createyourworldextra
    @Createyourworldextra Рік тому

    Different, l like it

  • @angrygamer6584
    @angrygamer6584 Рік тому

    What’s up with the small ass diamond as small as a grain of salt 17:05!?

  • @KhalidKhan-dg1yu
    @KhalidKhan-dg1yu 10 місяців тому

    How the f*** will somehow someone will forget their f****** promise with a such a cute girl😅😅

  • @fitryyusub107
    @fitryyusub107 Рік тому +1

    🌟🌟 0:33

  • @hermanphilips4617
    @hermanphilips4617 Рік тому

    7:34 - Lines given to the wrong voice actors. This line the female VA is saying would make more sense from the male. The next line (about point of view) still would make more sense from the male character. Then the next one is from the male VA, and the line is spoken to Tokisada (male character).
    Up to this point in the story, she is the one pursuing him... then suddenly she is all, 'wait, why are you calling us engaged? It's silly.' And he, while eating, responds with, 'oh, do you want to each my lunch and me?'
    Logically, it makes more sense if he is remarking about them being engaged as a silly thing, and her asking if after he finishes lunch he would like to eat her up. Are the VAs not allowed to point out an issue... like a character calling someone else by their own name?
    For example, I wouldn't turn around and say, 'Herman, we didn't notice our little mistake. We will strive in the future to double check the story to ensure we don't send line to the wrong VAs. And we will ask our VAs to voice up when the lines we send them to record end up breaking logic... like using their own name to talk with someone else, or declaring their love and then telling off the person they love for loving them with no reason.'

  • @SaorAlba1970
    @SaorAlba1970 Рік тому

    who does the voice of Sayaka ??

  • @12MYCRYL17
    @12MYCRYL17 Рік тому

    13:45
    not the double double technique!
    part 2:
    Kanako's company got bankrupt. and begged for Sayaka to be saved.
    Sayaka wanted to have revenge on what she did to Tokisada
    So, she became their "Slave"
    ...oh yes. ffmthreesomeuwoooghseggs

  • @eziekielluisp.fuentes8731
    @eziekielluisp.fuentes8731 Рік тому

    what a plot twist

  • @SilverLawrenceGamingg
    @SilverLawrenceGamingg Рік тому +1

    Main girl and evil girl was cute 💛 the guy dont deserve them

  • @eddy9216
    @eddy9216 Рік тому

    17:00

  • @mahendrap1960
    @mahendrap1960 Рік тому

    14:54 she's turning into Yandere

  • @นายณัฐธีร์กีรตินันทพัฒน์

    Good morning🎉🌆🌇🌄🌅🌤🌞☀️😊❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

    • @PabloHernandez-gl5ij
      @PabloHernandez-gl5ij Рік тому

      Good evening and good morning my friend,👋 I hope you slept well and I hope you have a great day too.😊👍

  • @FlashyLeaf
    @FlashyLeaf Рік тому

    Where's Lyle?

  • @OfficialLeBear
    @OfficialLeBear Рік тому

    Why do the mc have terrible memories

  • @aaronfraire9073
    @aaronfraire9073 Рік тому

    Dude, is Kanako an American woman or something?

  • @rimurutempest3860
    @rimurutempest3860 Рік тому +3

    💙💙💙

  • @razelluxvarviell5907
    @razelluxvarviell5907 Рік тому

    Don't know about the others, but I think Kanako is perfect for masochist man

  • @giandesepeda7642
    @giandesepeda7642 Рік тому

    Oi isn't making him into a servant a bit too much like bloody hell what is wrong with her i'm confused is she even sane you know what i'm don i'm going away bye bye mates

  • @theripeside2340
    @theripeside2340 Рік тому

    The engagement with kanako is kinda weird. Does kanako like the mc or not?? Comments please

    • @blayze9136
      @blayze9136 Рік тому

      Clearly demonstrated from her toxic behavior

  • @manlover21
    @manlover21 Рік тому

    Honestly speaking, as respectfully as i am, not to mention, not trying to judge here, my honest opinion, bro DOES not deserve her. But who am i to judge here, if u love someone go for it.

  • @Khamaree
    @Khamaree Рік тому +1

    Hi Everyone

  • @devendrap4244
    @devendrap4244 Рік тому

    I don't get it. Why should you hurt the female mc like that? Friends or fiance or whatever, don't you think that they atleast have the right to know the reason for you being like that? Why try to act cool or whatever when you can't even do anything? By sharing things you can atleast let others know of your situation and who knows they may provide an idea you never had to get out of the situation. It's totally wrong to hurt your loved ones like that.

  • @RaphielFerchuk
    @RaphielFerchuk Рік тому

    good evening

  • @JAGChris123
    @JAGChris123 Рік тому +2

    Bro doesn't know how to read comma's you talk to fast😂

    • @robsmith4114
      @robsmith4114 Рік тому +1

      Yeah the editor doesn't leave any pauses between either one's lines for air. Makes me feel out of breath just listening. 🤨

  • @andygarcia6408
    @andygarcia6408 Рік тому +2

    😮

  • @Eric_The_Cleric
    @Eric_The_Cleric 11 місяців тому

    The events and explanations for this story are way too all over the place, and the way Tokisada goes about explaining things just makes him look like a total asshat. We don't get an explanation until the very end that he actually loved Sayaka and was actually engaged to someone else because... reasons. It was presented at first as if it were a lie, and the audience never got an explanation that it was the truth until the end. That couldn't have been explained when he started lying? Or even maybe right after the scene introducing his and Sayaka's past and their relationship? If there was a quick blurb saying something like "since Sayaka left, there's been some complications. My father's factory started to go bankrupt. To save it, my father and the CEO of (insert company) arranged a marriage between me and the CEO's daughter. But this arrangement hasn't gone smoothly. First off, management in our new parent company is poor and treats its employees poorly. They came in and immediately changed things for the worse. But, so far no one has been fired, luckily. Then, there's the issue of the CEO's daughter herself. She is a spoiled brat. [Go into a flashback of the first meeting with her and her father.] I never forgot Sayaka. In fact, I think about her daily. I remember her warm smile and think about my new fiancee's cold glare. I wish I could have Sayaka back, and I wish I could fulfill our promise to each other. I wish this nightmare would be over. But, there's nothing I can do. I can't just break off this engagement and put the lives of all of my father's factories' employees at risk. I had decided to become the sacrificial lamb, to give up my happiness for the sake of theirs." Then we get introduced to Sayaka coming back, and it's a huge shock for Tokisada. It's called dramatic irony: the audience knows something the character(s) don't. It's an easy way to build tension in a story without doing much. But then we didn't need dramatic irony, did we? He could have grappled with telling her the truth for a bit, and *that* could have been the central tension. Do we (Tokisada) tell her, or do we keep it a secret? What are the consequences if she finds out? Will she be heartbroken? Will this destroy our relationship? Tokisada finally gets to see her again, but under these circumstances, there isn't anything he can do to make her happy. But maybe she'd understand and forgive him...?
    Making him "forget" all about Sayaka when the very beginning of the story gave us insight into their relationship (which is a good thing I wish more of these stories would do) totally shattered my suspension of disbelief. In other words, how can I believe that he forgot she existed when it was only a couple of years, she hadn't changed a lot, and I even remember my childhood friends from when I was like 5. That's two decades of rememberance, and he can't remember her after, what? 4? BS. So then why didn't we have him grapple with telling the truth and ultimately doing so as the climax of the story? Then, Sayaka could have revealed something Tokisada didn't know when he first met her: she's the daughter of a huge corporation and she could work a better business deal out with her family to "arrange" a marriage both of them actually want. The falling action and resolution could then have been the same as the climax of this version of the story, but with them basically telling the other family and fiancee off and them getting together. Then, Tokisada as our hero is simply a flawed, conflicted hero that can still be liked.
    This version of him simply sucks. Honestly, if I were Sayaka, I would have given him an earful at the very least if Tokisada pulled a stunt like that on me. Which would fit Sayaka's character as we can see she's very strong-willed and determined while this Tokisada is a cowardly, petulant little child. I wouldn't be surprised if she takes enough offence to the situation that she puts him in the friendzone as punishment and gives him a concrete "When you can fix your attitude we may date," type thing. I mean, I personally don't like the idea of the friendzone, but bro needs to mature a bit before he should be put into a relationship. Still, the story's premise was good, and the resolution was cute. I just wish how we got there was better.
    Tl;dr: This version of Tokisada sucks as an individual. What he did to Sayaka was so needlessly cruel, and we got no insight into his reality until the very end, making half of the story make him look like a total jackass. All of this could have been avoided by tweaking when each reveal happened. This story is a good example of a cute and good premise but flawed execution.

  • @sandasturner9529
    @sandasturner9529 Рік тому +1

    Early???

  • @guerun
    @guerun Рік тому +1

    98 89

  • @lancefillmore9980
    @lancefillmore9980 Рік тому +1

    2nd

  • @Ethalphicus
    @Ethalphicus Рік тому +1

    1