It's actuly not bad for an intro. The length is ideal, but the noise at the start doesn't seem to have much point, and is a touch loud. (and leaves an awkward silence, as if it wasn't long enough...) One last thing: to see if you can get the text at the end centered, instead of being up near the top. /critque Not to bad Hat Man! I'd like to finaly see some videos out of you!
It's actuly not bad for an intro. The length is ideal, but the noise at the start doesn't seem to have much point, and is a touch loud. (and leaves an awkward silence, as if it wasn't long enough...) One last thing: to see if you can get the text at the end centered, instead of being up near the top. /critque
Not to bad Hat Man! I'd like to finaly see some videos out of you!