FAANA, I absolutely loved the rhythm, though it did feel a little too dominant in places where it could have been toned down a little to give the vocals a chance. Very technical on the guitars etc.. The problem for me was that I just couldn't feel the vocals in the verses being part of the rhythm behind them. There was nothing wrong with the vocals themself ... it's just like they were laying over the wrong tune, like someone with size 5 feet wearing size 13 boots. The chorus was much better, in that it had a relation with the underlying music. Sorry bud, but that's my subjective take on it.
Lovely thanks 😊
OoooOoh! Nice!
Everything flows together so well, and there are some delightful vocals flowing with the chord progressions.
I think I have a video of us playing this song live or in rehearsal .
Oh, I'd love to see that. Could you share it please?
FAANA, I absolutely loved the rhythm, though it did feel a little too dominant in places where it could have been toned down a little to give the vocals a chance. Very technical on the guitars etc.. The problem for me was that I just couldn't feel the vocals in the verses being part of the rhythm behind them. There was nothing wrong with the vocals themself ... it's just like they were laying over the wrong tune, like someone with size 5 feet wearing size 13 boots. The chorus was much better, in that it had a relation with the underlying music. Sorry bud, but that's my subjective take on it.
Thank you for your constructive feedback. Always much appreciated! 🙏