i’m a little late but i waited to watch this and enjoy this… first of all i have to say you’re literally my favorite author and every time you make a new story makes me feel beyond excited and happy! i have been a subscriber since you made First Impression, and following you has been one of the best decisions i have ever made. I’m in love with First Impression (i have watched it over 10 times no kidding!) now i got obsessed with Bewitched and now this One Shot! this One Shot is one of the best ones i have read not only because is with Jimin (which i guess you can tell he’s my bias lmao) but also your writing is amazing 🤍 i will be rewatching this over and over again for sure. thank you so much for making this. the storyline for this left me speechless i never saw jimin’s real identity coming! i got absolutely shocked and surprised and i thought that’s so hot of him! it definitely suits him so well… being the most caring, kind and sweet man that he is in the outside but having this intimidating persona that he only lets out when needed… amazing. i truly have no words 🤍 not to mention the way their relationship developed and how slowly but very adorable they fell in love was absolutely cute to see 🥺 i hate when authors make the main characters fall in love in a blink of an eye, it makes the story unrealistic and really fake. i enjoyed every bit of this ff !! i hope you do more one shots in the future 🤍 (and more jimin ffs too hehe ☺️) thank you so much for your hard work
I absolutely adore this comment! Thank you for putting down your thoughts like this. I truly appreciate it and it encourages me to try out even more things! Love ya💜🥺🥺
@@chimchimexcuseme i’m so happy you were able to read my comment 🥺🤍 thank you !! and definitely feel free to try everything you want to… i’m sure it will be amazing just like all your past works. seeing you grow as a writer has been amazing. thank you for sharing such amazing stories with us and sparing some of your time even through you have been through hard times… we truly appreciate it.
i honestly prefer long episodes and one shots....because it must be more detailed than typical 10 minutes or 20 minutes videos..i must say you put ur heart in writing ....and thank u so much for ur hardwork ....keep writing ur hearts content..💜💜💜💜👊👊👊👊
This is very well done. Your pictorials were absolutely perfect. It was nice to see so many video clips used in this. They definitely added to your story. This is one of those pieces which can be watched several times and each time there will be something new to be discovered.
This was so good! I love the attention you give to detail with the great edits of Jimin which a few of them nearly ended me and naming every song. The storyline was PERFECT!
OMG this is sooooo good! You are such a great writer, can't wait to read more of your work. The music went so well with the story and the story was so unique and fresh! Thank you!
Oh My God!!! Such a perfectly wonderful Jimin fiction! Why don't you have more likes?? The storyline, music selection, the clips in between, the editing.... Everything is so beautifully done! And at the end, "The more whipped I became," with that clip! Anticipating to see more of your works!
Soo.. It's up! A cute 1 hr fluff that I attempted. I had so much fun in making this tho! Quite refreshing after writing bewitched n enthralled for so long! Btw some questions for you! 1. give me an ending of bewitched ya'll! If u were the author how would you end it? (Help me out so that i can make the last ep faster😭) 2. what about the ending of enthralled? 3. Would you want a mini taehyung series? Or a Yoongi one? 4. Any more fic ideas? Drop it down below 5. I wonder how those 10 min videos have 30k readers! I really wanna know what ya'll enjoy about it. Maybe I'll learn to make some in between. But most of them are 18 plus n i dont make em😭 suggest me some actual good ones so i can see n learn? 6. Why do ya'll enjoy my stories specifically? Should i continue writing?
Those 10 min videos foucus on a particular situation like no background or past things just one scenario e.g When u do this Or when he does this P.s there a lil cliche sometimes but u can make it better jojo 💖✨ ⠀ ｡ﾟﾟ･｡･ﾟﾟ｡ ﾟ。 ｡ﾟ ﾟ･｡･ﾟ ︵ ︵ ( ╲ / / ╲ ╲/ / ╲ ╲ / ╭ ͡ ╲ ╲ ╭ ͡ ╲ ╲ ﾉ ╭ ͡ ╲ ╲ ╱ ╲ ╲ ╱ ╲ ╱ ︶
Yes unnie you need to continue writing🥺because we love ur writings alot💜 And thanks alot for making ffs in such a beautiful manner with lots and lots of effort !! I know my thanks arent going to replace ur hardwork but still, i just wanna say pls continue writing💜 And unniee i have rarely seen yoongi's ff compared to taehyung. So i would love to see if thats yoongi's ff. And about that 10 mins ff: they are just not given in too detailed but they just narrate the main story and end it. Once again THANKS ALOT UNIEE 🤗💜
Oh... my... God...! I'm soooo happy I was lucky enough to find this absolute MASTERPIECE. Gosh, I can't even describe how incredibly amazing this is. Author, your are such an unbelievably good writer. I absolutely loved this! The way the characters were developed and actually had a personality... Wow. Not many people have the talent to do that. I'm definitely subscribing!! ❤❤❤
This was the very first work of yours that i've watched and tbh i've never watched a oneshot with 1 hour duration till the end . Its only bcoz the oneshot will be exciting at first but then it eventually becomes boring to read but in your oneshot it literally gave me goosebumbs throughout the entire story . After finishing this oneshot i thought why havent i read any of yours works and i really appreciate your hardwork and your effort.
No joke you seriously put so much effort in your ffs, it's so admirable. Your "bewitched" will always be the og ff. 🙌🏽 I hope you are doing alright right now.
Your use of all these pictures and clips were mesmerizing. The portrayal of emotion by them with your words is perfection. Signing on to your fandom right now, i know I'm going to love it so much. You have a great talent to tell a story, I'm excited to see so much more, as this was only my first time with your work. Fantastic job✨💖💜💖✨ i was overjoyed seeing jiminssii playing around happily with take in the kitchen as he was clearly overjoyed. And for seeing how j hope was introduced i was even further propelled into love of your story telling.
The way im jumping around while watching the ff, i luv how you make the oneshots more realistic and also the the ffs are long, can tell you put a lot of thought and evert in the videos you make. You nice keep going🦋💜♡♡
I loved this oneshot sm, I mean...I love your work in generally. I always get excited everytime I see a notification from you. I really love your stories, keep going❤💜
I am at loss of words due to how perfectly and well it is written. You really put you heart in your work. You definitely need more and much more recognition. Stay blessed😘
This was so cute 🤧❤️ the images and clips were so apt and were perfectly suitable for the text 💗 you're so talented! Loved this ff alot ! ( I was blushing for 5 mins straight after watching this lol )
Your writing never fails to impress me, it's just so perfect hjgughgugj "perfect" wouldn't be enough to describe it really,,THE TALENT U HAVE 😩🛐🛐 you can bet that whatever you put out imma read, even if it's 10 h long tihihi
Had to watch this wonderful story again while waiting for new episodes of My Thunder Boss and Feared Underground Fighter Teaches You Self-Defense!!! 😁💜
Oh dear I was waiting like crazyy..excited for this one shot....THANK YOU so much for ur hardworkk.💜💜👍👍 take care of urself.... i love uu and i missed you..
I just saw the video and instantly clicked when it's from chimchim excuseme it's always the best ff...i really admire your works and i hope everything is becoming better for you! We all love your hard work and wish you the best. Thank you for this masterpiece 💜🥺
Literally every story of this channel has made me feel fascinated. It feels so realistic I feel every feeling & sometimes I get overwhelmed. Dear Author you have such a great power of describing. I really love your way of writing. You are just amazing in one word. To tell you how much I'm obsessed with your channel, I've subscribed your channel from all of my channels so that I don't miss a single notification. Please keep going. I always wait desperately for your upload! 🥺💜
Okay, wait, i just realized that i feeaking love ur ff, cause the moment the video startet with that background music i startet to smile like some describe they would smile if there crush msg them something. I 💛 urr story, edit, choice of music and gendre.
This is my first time watching any oneshot of 1 hour but Im happy to find this FF and not regretting reading this 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜I'm your new subscriber now...💓💓✌️
You know what? You inspire me to write. You're literally my muse, I guess. Because when I first read bewitched, oh boy, I was so hooked up on that story and every intricate detail of it. It inspired me to write in ways I never thought possible but then it taught me that nothing's impossible as well. I just love how you write your stories. I've always loved writing but I was kinda not aware of the wonders I can do while writing. But you inspired me to write and express myself that way. God, I know this is so cheesy, but I mean every single word of it. Thank you so much for writing! Keep the hard work up! And I'll definitely invite you to my other UA-cam channel, where I'll post my fanfictions, to read my stories as well. I'm in the process of making them right now. But, literally, I'd love to have you read them and give me a feedback on them. And I hope this comment doesn't offend you in some way because I'm just speaking from the core of my heart right now. I really really love you and your writings! 💜💜💜
Wow that's crazy to hear! I'm so happy I could somehow inspire you even if it was a lil bit. I've been the same and glad to see it spread around. There's no way I'd be offended! Thank you for leaving such a lovely comment 💜💜💜 good luck for your Stories too! I'm sure you'll be great!
This felt like a whole movie. It was like Jimin was really present. I enjoyed it to the fullest. tbh I'm also that kinda very sensitive person. I really hated it. But if i get someone like him I'll prolly change my mind lol!
If I'm being honest... This is such A simple yet heartwarming story... Ahhh so CUTEEE I've never felt butterflies just reading before 😂 Ps. Yes I've read a lot of other good authors as well I hope you're doing well a/n Fighting 💜
This is just so good! Have you ever thought of making a second part??? Maybe those gangsters come back for her or maybe Jimin’s uncle wants him to do a special job for their gang. Just throwing some ideas out. 😁💜
Your channel is criminally underrated.. like whats going with with this crap youtube algorithm.... Aish...i blushed hard 😛 in every jimin clips in between. Must say you are an absolute wonderful writer and a great editor... And the scripts were on point with meanings ...love it💜 Keep going author💜😊🥰🫶🏼
Author-nim thank you for this Jimin oneshot . I was in a moodoff and your oneshot came like a sunshine in a rainy day thank you so much for this heart fluttering oneshot. Hwaitting
This is just wow! Hello Authornim! Glad to have you back with your another masterpiece... I Hope you are doing well and everything will be eventually be better after whatever you have been through. Please stay healthy and strong. "you nice! Keep going!!" ❤️
I must say I'm too late to watch this but still love this art so much...❤️❤️you made me become more crazy for your works!! Thank u so much for this masterpiece 💓 I'll always be loyal to you...
Oh my dear.....I honestly enjoyed this one so much! It was sk refreshing & cute! I am saying 101% sure that this ff made me soo happy & lighten up my mood! Soooo soooo lovelyyy!!¡!!🦋✨💜🦋 And about a bewitched ending i guess a happy yet some wild ending😏 i don't know!!!!!! GOSH I LOVE YOU SO FREAKING MUCH BABY💜😭🌌✨
i’m a little late but i waited to watch this and enjoy this… first of all i have to say you’re literally my favorite author and every time you make a new story makes me feel beyond excited and happy! i have been a subscriber since you made First Impression, and following you has been one of the best decisions i have ever made. I’m in love with First Impression (i have watched it over 10 times no kidding!) now i got obsessed with Bewitched and now this One Shot! this One Shot is one of the best ones i have read not only because is with Jimin (which i guess you can tell he’s my bias lmao) but also your writing is amazing 🤍 i will be rewatching this over and over again for sure. thank you so much for making this. the storyline for this left me speechless i never saw jimin’s real identity coming! i got absolutely shocked and surprised and i thought that’s so hot of him! it definitely suits him so well… being the most caring, kind and sweet man that he is in the outside but having this intimidating persona that he only lets out when needed… amazing. i truly have no words 🤍 not to mention the way their relationship developed and how slowly but very adorable they fell in love was absolutely cute to see 🥺 i hate when authors make the main characters fall in love in a blink of an eye, it makes the story unrealistic and really fake. i enjoyed every bit of this ff !! i hope you do more one shots in the future 🤍 (and more jimin ffs too hehe ☺️) thank you so much for your hard work
I absolutely adore this comment! Thank you for putting down your thoughts like this. I truly appreciate it and it encourages me to try out even more things! Love ya💜🥺🥺
@@chimchimexcuseme i’m so happy you were able to read my comment 🥺🤍 thank you !! and definitely feel free to try everything you want to… i’m sure it will be amazing just like all your past works. seeing you grow as a writer has been amazing. thank you for sharing such amazing stories with us and sparing some of your time even through you have been through hard times… we truly appreciate it.
Jimin is 50% pervy
Y/N is also 50% pervy
Their future kiddos God of pervert 😂😂😂😂
This whole storyline is amazing. I LOVE long ffs like this, because you really put emotion into it.
i honestly prefer long episodes and one shots....because it must be more detailed than typical 10 minutes or 20 minutes videos..i must say you put ur heart in writing ....and thank u so much for ur hardwork ....keep writing ur hearts content..💜💜💜💜👊👊👊👊
Can you recommend some please.....
This is very well done.
Your pictorials were absolutely perfect. It was nice to see so many video clips used in this. They definitely added to your story.
This is one of those pieces which can be watched several times and each time there will be something new to be discovered.
This was so good! I love the attention you give to detail with the great edits of Jimin which a few of them nearly ended me and naming every song. The storyline was PERFECT!
THIS IS MY FAVOURITE ONESHOT OF ALL THE ONESHOTS I HAVE EVER SEEN. IT WAS MORE LIKE A MOVIE! you nailed it.
one of the best one shot I ever read, loved everything about the story, I love how you made your videos!!
OMG this is sooooo good! You are such a great writer, can't wait to read more of your work. The music went so well with the story and the story was so unique and fresh! Thank you!
I'm here again after almost 3 years. I read this story of yours a lot, again and again, everytime it feels fresh. I can't get enough of your works..
can we call this oneshot as the king of masterpiece?! Bcus it's pretty mind-blowing!!! JINJJA DAEBAK!!! GOOD JOB AUTHOR-NIM. YOU'RE THE BEST👍
This ff is so underrated i love it how you are so passionate about writing it in detail love it so much
I felt like I just watched a really good movie... This was better than amazing 😍 such a well written one-shot ❤️
Oh My God!!! Such a perfectly wonderful Jimin fiction! Why don't you have more likes?? The storyline, music selection, the clips in between, the editing.... Everything is so beautifully done! And at the end, "The more whipped I became," with that clip! Anticipating to see more of your works!
Thank you ❤️🥰🥰🥰🥰❤️
youre backkk! this was amazing i loved every second, im so happy you enjoyed making it💜
Soo.. It's up! A cute 1 hr fluff that I attempted. I had so much fun in making this tho! Quite refreshing after writing bewitched n enthralled for so long! Btw some questions for you!
1. give me an ending of bewitched ya'll! If u were the author how would you end it?
(Help me out so that i can make the last ep faster😭)
2. what about the ending of enthralled?
3. Would you want a mini taehyung series? Or a Yoongi one?
4. Any more fic ideas? Drop it down below
5. I wonder how those 10 min videos have 30k readers! I really wanna know what ya'll enjoy about it. Maybe I'll learn to make some in between. But most of them are 18 plus n i dont make em😭 suggest me some actual good ones so i can see n learn?
6. Why do ya'll enjoy my stories specifically? Should i continue writing?
Can u add like cool rose scenes in enthralled plss like her fighting woth someone and jk admiring her ❤️
Those 10 min videos foucus on a particular situation like no background or past things just one scenario e.g
When u do this
Or when he does this
P.s there a lil cliche sometimes but u can make it better jojo 💖✨
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Yes unnie you need to continue writing🥺because we love ur writings alot💜
And thanks alot for making ffs in such a beautiful manner with lots and lots of effort !! I know my thanks arent going to replace ur hardwork but still, i just wanna say pls continue writing💜
And unniee i have rarely seen yoongi's ff compared to taehyung. So i would love to see if thats yoongi's ff.
And about that 10 mins ff: they are just not given in too detailed but they just narrate the main story and end it.
Once again THANKS ALOT UNIEE
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OF COURSE 👏NEVER 👏STOP👏WRITING👏
@@bTs-vm1xn thank you! Your comment is enough! 💜 Any channel suggestions for those 10 min videos?
Oh... my... God...!
I'm soooo happy I was lucky enough to find this absolute MASTERPIECE.
Gosh, I can't even describe how incredibly amazing this is.
Author, your are such an unbelievably good writer. I absolutely loved this!
The way the characters were developed and actually had a personality... Wow. Not many people have the talent to do that.
I'm definitely subscribing!! ❤❤❤
Yay! Do share this with your army friends too💜💜🥺
@@chimchimexcuseme I sure will! 💜
This was the very first work of yours that i've watched and tbh i've never watched a oneshot with 1 hour duration till the end . Its only bcoz the oneshot will be exciting at first but then it eventually becomes boring to read but in your oneshot it literally gave me goosebumbs throughout the entire story . After finishing this oneshot i thought why havent i read any of yours works and i really appreciate your hardwork and your effort.
✨You definitely need more recognization !! ✨ ❤️❤️
l got so excited whenever I see chimchimexcuseme notification on my phone 😂
No joke you seriously put so much effort in your ffs, it's so admirable. Your "bewitched" will always be the og ff. 🙌🏽
I hope you are doing alright right now.
I’m glad this popped up on my page again. It’s one of your best stories and I love it!!! 😁💜
Your use of all these pictures and clips were mesmerizing. The portrayal of emotion by them with your words is perfection. Signing on to your fandom right now, i know I'm going to love it so much. You have a great talent to tell a story, I'm excited to see so much more, as this was only my first time with your work. Fantastic job✨💖💜💖✨ i was overjoyed seeing jiminssii playing around happily with take in the kitchen as he was clearly overjoyed. And for seeing how j hope was introduced i was even further propelled into love of your story telling.
I'm so glad you loved it! Please share it with your army friends too 💜💜❤️
This was just freaking awesome
I love it
You just write it with your heart I can feel it
Nice work
Keep going
The way im jumping around while watching the ff, i luv how you make the oneshots more realistic and also the the ffs are long, can tell you put a lot of thought and evert in the videos you make. You nice keep going🦋💜♡♡
I loved this oneshot sm, I mean...I love your work in generally. I always get excited everytime I see a notification from you. I really love your stories, keep going❤💜
It’s a bless when you post something
Literally one of the best writers out there
I really enjoyed it!!! and appreciate your work. I'm SOOOOO happy!!
Love you author 😘
You are so good.and the Bm you choose they are so soothing❤️❤️
I love this so much and I also love that all of Bts is nice😭💜 also the ending is so good 🥰
That was awesome! I can't stop smiling, so cute storyline and I wanna see more 😍
Such a beauuuuutiful story..great work loved it so much..its like watching a movie😭💜
So sweet💜 Love it! And J-Hope for the end... 🥰
This is amazing one shot... I ever seen💖💖💖 lovely story lines ....I really loved it...💜💖💜💖💜💖
I'm thinking about how jimin find out y/n is in his car? 🤔. Maybe when she fainted she made noice 🤔.
So amazing😍
Don't have words to describe how amazing it is😘
Just loved it yrr💜💜💜
This was the FF that introduced me to your channel 😃😄
In 1:17 this is the place where Jimin first bite on Y/N's neck in bewitched... Ahhh nostalgic
I am at loss of words due to how perfectly and well it is written. You really put you heart in your work. You definitely need more and much more recognition. Stay blessed😘
Aahh u r my fav author. U r the reason why i got motivated to write my own fanfictions too. 😭💜
WHY DIDNT THEY MAKE THIS AS A MOVIE ITS JUST SO GOOD OH MY GOD I COULDNT STOP SCREAMING OR GIGGLE SO MUCH
Thank youuuu! Do me a favor and do share it to your army friends! Would love more readers and comments 💜💜💜💜
@@chimchimexcuseme oh dont worry i already have there even learning how to make a oneshot one day they got some help from you and they are a big fan
This is sooooo lit! I loved it❤❤❤
The intro tho, its reminds me of the Bewitched series😭gonna rewatch that again.
Btw, love this😍
Let me just cry that was too beautiful😭
I am speechless ! How can you be so good at this?? And remember i luff you and i hope you're okay be happy ❤️
This was so cute 🤧❤️ the images and clips were so apt and were perfectly suitable for the text 💗 you're so talented! Loved this ff alot ! ( I was blushing for 5 mins straight after watching this lol )
Your writing never fails to impress me, it's just so perfect hjgughgugj "perfect" wouldn't be enough to describe it really,,THE TALENT U HAVE 😩🛐🛐 you can bet that whatever you put out imma read, even if it's 10 h long tihihi
Best edit u put in here......it's an short bt amazing ff
Your portray of jimin character in your every ff is so good not like flirty or pervert...
I'm happy to hear that 💖
I am reading this story for the fifth time and I enjoyed it every time equally. U are the best author nim.😘👍💐
Usually I get bored while reading long kind of ff's but this.....oh I don't have words this is simply a MASTERPIECE 🔥❤️. Author you nice keep going 🤩
Wow....felt like blockbuster movie ❤️
Really amazing.
Like a short movie 💜💜💜
OMG this was so gooooood, I missed your work so muuuuuch !!!! 💜💜💜
I can't believe I reached the end of this. That's a record for me.
It is so cute!!!
Fluff was so adorable ❣️
This made my day ❤ Your work really makes me so happy , keep writing like this. I wish you all the best
I loved his story please contiue with it a little longer or a lot longer I absolutely love it I want more 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
Had to watch this wonderful story again while waiting for new episodes of My Thunder Boss and Feared Underground Fighter Teaches You Self-Defense!!! 😁💜
1.17 am idk wtf I'm doing here in the middle of the night 🙂💀
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Oh dear I was waiting like crazyy..excited for this one shot....THANK YOU so much for ur hardworkk.💜💜👍👍 take care of urself.... i love uu and i missed you..
24:22 that was haawttt 💥💥
I just saw the video and instantly clicked when it's from chimchim excuseme it's always the best ff...i really admire your works and i hope everything is becoming better for you! We all love your hard work and wish you the best. Thank you for this masterpiece 💜🥺
Master piece..can't find any other words sorry💜
Reading your masterpiece again is the way i soend my free time 👍👍👍💪💪fughting
I really love it!!!tbh all your works are amazing!! You nice,keep going >-
Literally every story of this channel has made me feel fascinated. It feels so realistic I feel every feeling & sometimes I get overwhelmed. Dear Author you have such a great power of describing. I really love your way of writing. You are just amazing in one word. To tell you how much I'm obsessed with your channel, I've subscribed your channel from all of my channels so that I don't miss a single notification. Please keep going. I always wait desperately for your upload! 🥺💜
Thank you so much! It really encourages me to keep going when I don't feel like doing it anymore❤️💜
@@chimchimexcuseme don't stop you nice keep going. Love you💞
Even though it's long I didn't feel it boring not even for a sec unnie , such a gripping story 🔥🔥❤️❤️fighting unnieee !!!
Oh dear thanks a lot for this I was missing ya 🥳🥳
Okay, wait, i just realized that i feeaking love ur ff, cause the moment the video startet with that background music i startet to smile like some describe they would smile if there crush msg them something. I 💛 urr story, edit, choice of music and gendre.
One of the best i've read so far
Thank you! What did you like the most about it? ❤️
Amazinggggghh storyyyyy. Soso beautiful😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
This is my first time watching any oneshot of 1 hour but Im happy to find this FF and not regretting reading this 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜I'm your new subscriber now...💓💓✌️
Welcome!
This is AMAZIIINNNGGG 💃🏻💃🏻💃🏻💜💜💜💜
You know what? You inspire me to write. You're literally my muse, I guess. Because when I first read bewitched, oh boy, I was so hooked up on that story and every intricate detail of it. It inspired me to write in ways I never thought possible but then it taught me that nothing's impossible as well.
I just love how you write your stories. I've always loved writing but I was kinda not aware of the wonders I can do while writing. But you inspired me to write and express myself that way. God, I know this is so cheesy, but I mean every single word of it.
Thank you so much for writing! Keep the hard work up!
And I'll definitely invite you to my other UA-cam channel, where I'll post my fanfictions, to read my stories as well. I'm in the process of making them right now. But, literally, I'd love to have you read them and give me a feedback on them. And I hope this comment doesn't offend you in some way because I'm just speaking from the core of my heart right now. I really really love you and your writings! 💜💜💜
Wow that's crazy to hear! I'm so happy I could somehow inspire you even if it was a lil bit. I've been the same and glad to see it spread around. There's no way I'd be offended! Thank you for leaving such a lovely comment 💜💜💜 good luck for your Stories too! I'm sure you'll be great!
@@chimchimexcuseme thx!!!! 💜
This is so heart warming ff reading this again I able to smile I was sad from yesterday
Can't thank you enough dear. And remember, you are appreciated😊
i love you this was the best!!!!
This felt like a whole movie. It was like Jimin was really present. I enjoyed it to the fullest. tbh I'm also that kinda very sensitive person. I really hated it. But if i get someone like him I'll prolly change my mind lol!
THAT WAS SO GOODDD 🥺🥺🥺🥺😭😭😭😭😭💖
If I'm being honest...
This is such A simple yet heartwarming story...
Ahhh so CUTEEE
I've never felt butterflies just reading before 😂
Ps. Yes I've read a lot of other good authors as well
I hope you're doing well a/n
Fighting 💜
This is just so good! Have you ever thought of making a second part??? Maybe those gangsters come back for her or maybe Jimin’s uncle wants him to do a special job for their gang. Just throwing some ideas out. 😁💜
Aaah this was so cuteee 🥰🥰
U 👏 R 👏NOT 👏BAD👏 AT ENDINGS👏
Masterpiece ❤️🔮🙌🏻
Your channel is criminally underrated.. like whats going with with this crap youtube algorithm....
Aish...i blushed hard 😛 in every jimin clips in between.
Must say you are an absolute wonderful writer and a great editor... And the scripts were on point with meanings ...love it💜
Keep going author💜😊🥰🫶🏼
Thank you! I'm frustrated by UA-cam as well 😭
Ok done reading this the 2nd time! Short and sweet story 🥰💜
Since you watched this, it's a Jimin's character from the save me universe!
🤯🤯🤯
I thought, stuck in 🛗 elevator with gangster one...jimin yk he has that serpent tattoo too right?
This was perfect!! 😁🙌❤️
Amazing story💜
You make the best video. Thank you for your hard work
now this is what a ONE SHOT means
Worth it.....it was worth my 1hour
Your FF is my Anti depressions pill 💊😊❤
Author-nim thank you for this Jimin oneshot . I was in a moodoff and your oneshot came like a sunshine in a rainy day thank you so much for this heart fluttering oneshot. Hwaitting
Aw that's so cute! I'm glad I made your day better!
@@chimchimexcuseme Thank you so much , it really means a lot. Lots of love and support for u Author-nim.
U r my favourite author...uk tht? 😭🎀💖💖💖
i love this ff soooooooooooooooooo much i waas crying the ending made me soo happy
This is just wow!
Hello Authornim! Glad to have you back with your another masterpiece... I Hope you are doing well and everything will be eventually be better after whatever you have been through. Please stay healthy and strong.
"you nice! Keep going!!" ❤️
Wonderful ff OMG i love it so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I must say I'm too late to watch this but still love this art so much...❤️❤️you made me become more crazy for your works!! Thank u so much for this masterpiece 💓 I'll always be loyal to you...
Oh my dear.....I honestly enjoyed this one so much! It was sk refreshing & cute! I am saying 101% sure that this ff made me soo happy & lighten up my mood! Soooo soooo lovelyyy!!¡!!🦋✨💜🦋 And about a bewitched ending i guess a happy yet some wild ending😏 i don't know!!!!!! GOSH I LOVE YOU SO FREAKING MUCH BABY💜😭🌌✨