You asked for suggestions on FB, so here is one. Not a criticism mind you, but an observation. I realize the opening is dialog, and that is important to set the story. But you are an artist as well as a writer. To make it more UA-cam friendly, perhaps a couple more pictures of the characters in different poses; talking on a balcony, whatever, anything. Placing the image switch at a key point might highlight, "pay attention, people."
It's interesting Danny. It's definitely a place for it on UA-cam. If you ever decide you want to do Cryptids; I've got about six or seven ready to go. Lol I'm not competing with anyone. I just write. Lol
Thank you for that excellent feed back. I will definitely strive to do more with that kind of thing. Issue 2 is going to have more image switches like that, especially since that issue has the characters "doin' a mall" and not in the fun way! I'm a True Believer in Stan Lee's John Buscema's How to Draw Comics the Marvel Way! Again, thanks for the feedback and it will be implemented. I don't know how difficult it is to change an existing video, but it will be used in future videos!
@@davidholley1570 Thanks David. It's been a while since I've seen you. Glad to see you've got some more stuff coming out with Luke. For now, I'm staying away from cryptid stuff out of respect for Luke.
I agree with thecolonel. A few more pictures would be good. The narration is fine, bit I would put slightly more text on the screen as well so it is easier to read should someone prefer to do that instead of listen. I'm not talking whole chapters, but a sentence or two. Not bad for a first video. The rest will take time.
@@DragonSellSword Thanks. I appreciate the feed back. I was considering adding the text as we went, but that seemed like it might confuse the listener. Perhaps place the "closed caption" with the actual text?
You asked for suggestions on FB, so here is one. Not a criticism mind you, but an observation. I realize the opening is dialog, and that is important to set the story. But you are an artist as well as a writer. To make it more UA-cam friendly, perhaps a couple more pictures of the characters in different poses; talking on a balcony, whatever, anything. Placing the image switch at a key point might highlight, "pay attention, people."
It's interesting Danny. It's definitely a place for it on UA-cam.
If you ever decide you want to do Cryptids; I've got about six or seven ready to go. Lol
I'm not competing with anyone. I just write. Lol
Thank you for that excellent feed back. I will definitely strive to do more with that kind of thing. Issue 2 is going to have more image switches like that, especially since that issue has the characters "doin' a mall" and not in the fun way! I'm a True Believer in Stan Lee's John Buscema's How to Draw Comics the Marvel Way! Again, thanks for the feedback and it will be implemented. I don't know how difficult it is to change an existing video, but it will be used in future videos!
@@davidholley1570 Thanks David. It's been a while since I've seen you. Glad to see you've got some more stuff coming out with Luke. For now, I'm staying away from cryptid stuff out of respect for Luke.
I agree with thecolonel. A few more pictures would be good. The narration is fine, bit I would put slightly more text on the screen as well so it is easier to read should someone prefer to do that instead of listen. I'm not talking whole chapters, but a sentence or two. Not bad for a first video. The rest will take time.
@@DragonSellSword Thanks. I appreciate the feed back. I was considering adding the text as we went, but that seemed like it might confuse the listener. Perhaps place the "closed caption" with the actual text?