[VOCALOID Original] Last Dance feat. Big Al
Вставка
- Опубліковано 31 гру 2009
- Hooray! It's a new year with new VOCALOID faces to see and voices to hear! I wrote this song for Big Al's release, but things got complicated and I wasn't able to release it then, so I am now. ^^
MP3: www.mediafire.com/file/hmzrhxl... Dance.mp3
Off-vocal MP3: www.mediafire.com/file/hzjynuy... Dance (karaoke).mp3
Song and Lyrics by Kodakami (that's me).
__Lyrics (My New Year's Resolution is to figure out subtitles. ^^;)__
Verse 1
Numbers show on your phone,
that once again I'm late, and you have to sigh.
You think you'll wait a little bit longer, then I'll show
but you know it's just a lie.
Last week we had a long talk.
You had almost said goodbye.
So now I'm gone again, and you've wasted all your time on me.
You're thinking you deserve a better guy.
Chorus
And you wonder where I've been,
Now I'm here for the last dance.
If you'll still take my hand in your own
you could give me another chance.
I've been such a fool to you.
There's no need for excuses, 'cause I'm
ready to be the man that you wanted
if you'll love me one more time.
Verse 2
Beauty doesn't take long
to quickly slip away, leaving nothing more.
And you will find that lovely girls are so hard to love
when they have a rotten core.
You are all that I could want;
there's none who can compare,
and I know that you care.
And so I'm asking you for this dance.
May it be the first of our new romance.
Repeat Chorus
![[Big Al] - E.T.](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/GCKtDOetUEI/mqdefault.jpg)
![[VOCALOID Original] Halloween Requiem [PV]](/img/n.gif)
Absolutely love this song, top 3 vocaloid for me. The pacing of the lyrics and the music itself is such a good fit. Thank you for doing this!
This is amazing!
Nice to hear an original from an English speaking fan for once ^_^
I personally like the tone used for it. My only critique, it seems like there should be more extension on things like "Last dance" like stretch it out a bit.
Oh, Yes, sorry I reed the desciption late XP, I can Say you something?, Really Reall Really Good Job!!!!!! I love the song :D
Ahh, Koda, I've revisited this song ever since I just now realized Koda-P was you(strange I'm that slow, huh?) and I remember that this was the first song I ever heard from you^w^ So, in a way, it's like a blast to the past!
I'll definitely consider that for the newer version.
i like how they put the product box on here,what a way to advertiste fora product.
Well, I don't suppose you saw my album full of Big Al Originals by now. "The BIG ALbum"? It's free to download on Bandcamp; please enjoy.
I shall! Thank you for telling me!
@harusameiro
Wow. High praise. I'm glad to hear you thought so much about it. ^^ Be on the look out for my next release by Halloween.
This is epic. It should not have taken me this long to find it, I've been looking at Vocaloid Originals for Big Al for weeks. Thank you for making this beautiful music.
Even if his voice is a little low in this song, I still prefer it to a version that is too high. Also, I can't say how happy I am about the pronunciation in this song. This is the first time I've been able to understand almost 100% of the lyrics by an Engloid the first time through without looking at them.
Thanks ^^ I'll see if I can't whip that up sometime soon. Thanks for the constructive crit.
I love this song you created!!! I wish I could create songs, but when I try, they suck terribly...
Heehee, a song about Big-Al being late.
@halla4763
So what you're trying to say is, it's good enough to be an advertisement for the product itself! Thank you so much halla; you know just what to say.
Sweet. ^^ Let me know when you're done and I'll be happy to link and promote it!
He's at the bottom of where he sounds intelligible. When I made this, I didn't think people would be using him in his normal ranges, so I tried to get him as low as he can go. He sounds fine when he's up an octave.
Aw man, I still love this song! Like, it is just as amazing as that Emotional song you let Yohio sing. If only there could be a remake of this song to truly show your progression
Yes, I'm good friends with Kentai-P; I work with him all the time as part of a new 6-person collab group. Keep an eye out for us; I'll comment on my channel when our first song is finally uploaded (the entire song is done, but we're waiting on the song picture).
Thanks ^^
Its kinda late but happy 10th anniversary
Quite a nice song you did here. Saving up to add Big Al to my vocaloid line-up eventually. Lots of ideas for how to put his voice to use.
I was getting a similar suggestion form others. I think I'm going to do this again with Big Al's voice an octave up.
@Aunpaidintern
You're quite right. However, I believe you have missed the fact that this song is quite old for VOCALOID music. Back when this was uploaded, no one in the Western VOCALOID community had any solid idea about how to use the "-P" honorific. Thank you for pointing it out though, I seem to have missed this one when I corrected all of them.
If I were a female, and Big Al was gonna be my date for a last dance, I wouldn't be mad. I'd be sad and crying, because he's the kinda person that puts that effect on ya
I'd love to hear this song updated. Since your tuning has evolved more.
Catchy. =D
Go check out the great deadball-P. He's been recognized repeatedly by the Japanese community as a great composer and he's a Westerner. ^^
However, I appreciate the kind sentiments and the time you took to enjoy the video. ^^
Thanks! ^^ Yeah, that's a violin at the beginning and end. If you guys have any specifics about what doesn't fit int he voice, I can try and fix it.
this vidoe is awesome!!! i love big al but wish there were more vids for him!!!!
@TheScodia
Well, I'm glad you enjoy it. Thanks for taking the time to comment! ^^
@ExplodingPiano
Why thank you.
We really did need a low voice that wasn't crappy. Problem with this song is he's just too low for his own good. Two notes up and it would be fine, but yeah...
And thanks. ^^
This song gives me hope :) I'm 21 and never had a girlfriend but I think I finally met someone worth it who's not rotten at there core. Also I used to be really shy but now I'd say I've grown a lot in confidence and that this may go well with this person so thanks for making amazing music inspiring me to actually try instead of being invisible. You miss all shots you don't take as they say . You make wonderful music that is beautiful beyond compare so keep it up!! Hope you see this
If you find someone who is genuinely interested in who you are, doesn't ask you to do things that go against your values, and doesn't require you to become someone you're not, then you've found someone worth offering yourself to.
@AmunRa1
Lol. That'd be the best choice. I've been hearing people say that it's a race car, though.
@Kodakami2
His item is a pocket watch for that reason, as well.
@MrCrazyh81
Fine by me. The vocal quality is really crappy compared to my new standards.
@Litameena4chan
Thanks a bunch! ^^
For some reason, UA-cam isn't letting me leave comments. I had two responses that said I was wrong and deadball-P is not actually a Western composer like many people tell me.
Honesty is a virtue. What do you say to a second version in which he sings it an octave up?
I know! This is an original written by me for Big Al, hence the tag [VOCALOID Original].
@AmunRa1
xD Yay! Someone gets it. ^^
Voice is a bit off but still great
How so?
Really!? Can I see? ^^
@AZAMARS666
It's not. Different song, same name.
is this the same as gakupo and luka last dance???
Someone know if it is a cover or is a original song of Big Al?
i wounder why the call him big al >:3
sorry 1st dislike