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  • Опубліковано 21 жов 2024

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  • @billyalarie929
    @billyalarie929 3 роки тому +28

    "i'm sorry. i'm just doing my best."
    the thing is, though, i love this fucking video so much it makes my soul soar. i love the candidness of it, the shittiness of the video/audio quality. YOU CAN ACTUALLY HEAR IT, it's just..... not crystal clear.
    and that's more than okay. it's the most charming thing in the world and it makes me want to jump out of my wheelchair and start running victory laps.

    • @billyalarie929
      @billyalarie929 3 роки тому +2

      "so.... how are you guys?"
      better than i've been in a very long time, thanks to you and this video.

  • @rachelwritesbooks
    @rachelwritesbooks 3 роки тому +11

    Loved this vlog so much ugh and also your jacket game is always on POINT 🙏🏽🙏🏽

    • @ShaelinWrites
      @ShaelinWrites  3 роки тому +5

      I only bought this jacket because it looked like Sybil's jacket oops !!!

    • @rachelwritesbooks
      @rachelwritesbooks 3 роки тому +2

      @@ShaelinWrites valid

  • @newtocamelot
    @newtocamelot 3 роки тому +10

    Shaelin, about a month ago I submitted a short story to an editor for feedback. Yesterday I heard back from him. It turns out he is cofounder and editor of a literary magazine. He liked my story so much he said he would love to see it submitted to his magazine. It may not seem like much but it’s a big deal to me as I’m just starting out! And I owe much of it to you and all I’ve learned from your channel!! ❤️

  • @leech1355
    @leech1355 3 роки тому +16

    Your recent news RE making a longlist has inspired me to write my first short story and I’ve been rewatching all your short story content with new eyes and ears. This vlog came at a great time!

    • @ShaelinWrites
      @ShaelinWrites  3 роки тому +5

      ohhh that's so exciting, good luck!!

  • @prairiebutch
    @prairiebutch 3 роки тому +22

    i have the exact same “not editing after workshopping a story” problem oof so true bestie

  • @rev6215
    @rev6215 3 роки тому +13

    I love these writing Vlogs so much

  • @charlesc.r.9324
    @charlesc.r.9324 3 роки тому +11

    disaterous shaelin is 🌠 i c o n i c 🌠

    • @ShaelinWrites
      @ShaelinWrites  3 роки тому +10

      oh i promise you disastrous shaelin is the only shaelin, always present even if not immediately visible

  • @siuzannavyshneva6312
    @siuzannavyshneva6312 3 роки тому +2

    My goodness! Shaelin and the dog barking is so hilarious!! I was pressing rewind three times))) it was some greatly atmospheric vlog))))

  • @yvonnerogers6429
    @yvonnerogers6429 3 роки тому +2

    No worries about the audio/video quality. Filming is hard. You’re not alone in hating overhead lights. I do, too. This was exceptionally helpful. Thank you. 🙏 😎

  • @BrandonCase
    @BrandonCase 3 роки тому +2

    Exceedingly envious of your high-level feedback.
    Good content, thank you.

  • @ardentlabours833
    @ardentlabours833 3 роки тому +4

    Okay but you know it’s gonna be a good Shaelin vlog when she gives it a Chaotic content warning

  • @izeugirdor
    @izeugirdor 3 роки тому +1

    From your Feburary 3rd spot, I'm stealing your 'pockets of untapped potential' statement. :) Love that.

  • @sebastianromero7085
    @sebastianromero7085 3 роки тому +2

    This vid is perfect, half editing vid half asmr

  • @jamiecolwell8489
    @jamiecolwell8489 3 роки тому +2

    I love these videos, Shaelin!!

  • @nabilamiah3814
    @nabilamiah3814 3 роки тому +1

    I've sort of hit a rut with writing, so thanks for making my day a little better.

  • @gristlevonraben
    @gristlevonraben 3 роки тому +2

    a very wonderful video, entertaining as well. I hope you get published soon!

  • @justine6647
    @justine6647 3 роки тому +1

    the only chaos i can bare with!!!! thank u for thiss vidd, shaeee

  • @imaginativebibliophile549
    @imaginativebibliophile549 3 роки тому

    Shaelin, I loved hearing about how you edit short stories at least in the recent times and a vlog of the week in your writing life. I have quite a few short stories that need to edit and some have not even been finished. My short story, Marigolds floating is a scattered and lyrical, but it is meant to be so I just have some minor edits to make to refine the prose. I wrote my short story, The Tree of Exposure around this time last year and I only began submitting it to literary magazines this month. A poem I have recently been writing is Walks Along Bluebells. I love you

  • @zaok970
    @zaok970 3 роки тому +2

    Thank you for your amazing tips!

  • @Joe-zk7ps
    @Joe-zk7ps 3 роки тому

    Shaelin thank you so much for all of your videos here and on Reedsy!

  • @third_6117
    @third_6117 3 роки тому +2

    Kurtis' edits are gold

    • @ShaelinWrites
      @ShaelinWrites  3 роки тому +2

      they really are!!

    • @third_6117
      @third_6117 3 роки тому

      @@ShaelinWrites i wish i have a workshop buddy that uses memes on edits. i understand things more in meme format lol

  • @ittakesaworld
    @ittakesaworld 3 роки тому

    Your videos have been very helpful thank you, but I’ve never commented, till now. I find lighting the night as unnatural as darkening the day. Haha. Thanks a ream!

  • @kulsoomahsan4440
    @kulsoomahsan4440 3 роки тому +1

    Your hair is very nice. I'm hard of hearing and I could hear everything well enough. And the video aesthetics are fine. Don't worry. :) If aesthetics were that distracting from the content of your videos then aesthetics would be the least of your worries 😂.

  • @Dayglodaydreams
    @Dayglodaydreams 3 роки тому

    Your haircut is great.

  • @dixie7927
    @dixie7927 3 роки тому +1

    still the charming voice, she is so beautiful!!

  • @nickofnightcarey335
    @nickofnightcarey335 3 роки тому +1

    I don’t usually watch the vlogs (sorry) but the name of this one sucked me in. I’m writing a bunch of short stories atm and it was really interesting to hear how you tackle them. The visuals/sound were so old school UA-cam - kind of loved it hahaha. There’s something more intimate about bad quality vids. Thanks for sharing.

  • @shamusobi2748
    @shamusobi2748 3 роки тому +3

    that wall looks anything but blue lol

    • @ShaelinWrites
      @ShaelinWrites  3 роки тому +4

      bad camera haha, they're light blue in person

  • @Grain-h7u
    @Grain-h7u Місяць тому

    13:34 - I think you're the only person I know who I share this fun fact with!

  • @jamiecolwell8489
    @jamiecolwell8489 3 роки тому +1

    Do you have any videos on how to start an AuthorTube channel? I've been wanting to make one, but don't know where to start exactly.

  • @joshuaisaac99
    @joshuaisaac99 3 роки тому

    All of this information is very helpful.

  • @shamusobi2748
    @shamusobi2748 3 роки тому

    Do you use Winndow's Nightlight settings? It's been a lifesaver for my eyes and avoiding brightness headaches and eye strain. I use a warm pink-oragne-y glow almost as if the page was by fireside in the darkness.

  • @SysterYster
    @SysterYster 3 роки тому +1

    Oooh, I hate when I must add a scene. XD Like, I had to add a thing, but my story was already too long and I'm working on cutting it down. So, I set a goal of max 700 words. I ended up on 900+. But I actually managed to cut it down to like 725 or something like that, so I was super proud of myself. :) Now I just need to cut the entire story down with another... 6000 to 10 000 words at least. I've cut about 45k so far. lol. I hate being an over writer by now. XD

  • @annieshahzad8970
    @annieshahzad8970 3 роки тому

    Have you ever written an article or a blog post. I really need help on that.

  • @katameszaros8087
    @katameszaros8087 3 роки тому

    You may have already answered it, but I have a question in regards to your video on diction. Does word choice/diction have to be consistent? For instance if one wanted to focus on the "vibe" it would be drasticly different in some chapters. I hope this is not a stupid question.

    • @ShaelinWrites
      @ShaelinWrites  3 роки тому +2

      In a longer piece, it's likely you'll have more variance in diction, but it's kind of up to you how consistent you want it to be! If you want it to be more consistent over an entire novel that's cool, but if your vision to is to create a very distinct vibe in each chapter you might switch it up. Really, it depends on your vision!

    • @katameszaros8087
      @katameszaros8087 3 роки тому

      @@ShaelinWrites thanks:)

  • @johns2861
    @johns2861 3 роки тому

    Shaelin's hair is traveling backwards in time. The further back you look in the video archive the longer her hair grows.

  • @nomaybeyes5681
    @nomaybeyes5681 3 роки тому +2

    How long does it take you to write a short story, on average?

    • @ShaelinWrites
      @ShaelinWrites  3 роки тому +3

      Usually 2-5 writing sessions spread over 1-3 weeks for the first draft, then a couple days to a week for revisions after workshop!

  • @huzaifakhattak1527
    @huzaifakhattak1527 3 роки тому +1

    2:25 🥀💓

  • @alexelizondo7207
    @alexelizondo7207 3 роки тому +1

    Shaelin I love u

  • @engyhossam3117
    @engyhossam3117 3 роки тому

    how many characters should a novelette have ?!

  • @rajashekharnarayan4717
    @rajashekharnarayan4717 3 роки тому +1

    Hi Shaelin

  • @oLe_oLeo_ola
    @oLe_oLeo_ola 3 роки тому

    My mind: no, don't do it, don't do it, noo, NOOO, NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
    Also my mind: How I Short Edit a Story 🤡😂♥️

  • @spacedoutorca4550
    @spacedoutorca4550 3 роки тому

    Am I the only one who read the thumbnail as “How I short edit a story”?

  • @augusthawley5504
    @augusthawley5504 3 роки тому +5

    this video has fairly decent production value, i think you've just watched too many Rachel vlogs

    • @ShaelinWrites
      @ShaelinWrites  3 роки тому +4

      Rachel's vlogs could literally win a cinematography oscar

    • @augusthawley5504
      @augusthawley5504 3 роки тому +1

      @@ShaelinWrites it's only a matter of time

  • @shaylasingh2979
    @shaylasingh2979 3 роки тому +1

    where can we read some of your short stories?

    • @ShaelinWrites
      @ShaelinWrites  3 роки тому +1

      All my published stories (except one which is from a very old, out of print issue) are linked in the descriptions of my videos! I also have a linktree in my Twitter and instagram bios with links to all my stories

    • @shaylasingh2979
      @shaylasingh2979 3 роки тому

      @@ShaelinWrites thank you so much for this! i am looking forward to reading your writing!

    • @shaylasingh2979
      @shaylasingh2979 3 роки тому

      @@ShaelinWrites update: i read 'cherry and jane in the garden of eden' and i think pearl is such an interesting character. also that whole description about the garden was literally so beautiful!

  • @kxrimgh
    @kxrimgh 3 роки тому +1

    i'm sorry, i can't spot the tyqo. (get it?)

  • @rev6215
    @rev6215 3 роки тому +3

    Hi

    • @sumayyahkhan8897
      @sumayyahkhan8897 3 роки тому +2

      😤😡😠🤬 URGHHH. I was at an exam the time she uploaded!!!

    • @sumayyahkhan8897
      @sumayyahkhan8897 3 роки тому +2

      AND YOUR FIRST. AGAIN!!!

    • @ShaelinWrites
      @ShaelinWrites  3 роки тому +7

      the most exciting part of posting a video each week is seeing what will unfold in the iconic revTrelos vs. Sumayyah Khan rivalry

    • @rev6215
      @rev6215 3 роки тому +1

      @@ShaelinWrites I win everytime. Obviously

    • @sumayyahkhan8897
      @sumayyahkhan8897 3 роки тому +1

      @@ShaelinWrites HAHAHHAH
      But change it to, Sumayyah khan vs revtrelos. You know, the right way😂

  • @emmazhang2418
    @emmazhang2418 3 роки тому +1

    either the camera was having a seizure, my ipad is having a seizure, or im having a seizure

  • @Dayglodaydreams
    @Dayglodaydreams 3 роки тому

    I'm sorry Shaelin. You seem like a lovely person. This video is hard to watch.