For the essay question, can I say that technology has helped humans to connect with each other across places all around the world? Technology can also help to deliver messages to humans which can help the message travel around faster? And its human's instinct and desire to control things such as technology but sometimes technology can make things unpredictable.
Hi Ada! It’s good to see how you’re balancing Hughes’s thoughts of both the pros and cons of technology. I think you could strengthen your essay by focusing more on nature as well! How despite what we build/create, we cannot ‘beat’ nature and the cycle of life…death is inevitable -> you could quote the final line of the poem as supporting evidence. You should also think about your personal response as a ‘modern day’ reader - do you think technology has more advantages or disadvantages? Why? What is the poet’s message? 🌸 Mrs. Norman P.S I hope you’re enjoying your holiday!
Hello William! Very excited to see you here. I’m sure you’ve been very busy with revision of all of Hughes’s poems! What do you think about this poem? What message is the poet conveying? 👍 Mrs. Norman 🌸
Hi Karen! I’m working on the analysis for Anniversary and will upload it as soon as it’s ready 🌸🌸 Be sure to subscribe so you are notified when I add new content 👍
I was searching for an analysis of telegraph wires by you yesterday, what a coincidence!
Haha! You must have read my mind! I hope it helps. I’ll be uploading more next Friday 🌸
Is it not the 'heather' shrub?
What an analysis? Your students must be so lucky! Xxx
Thank you for your kind comment! I hope these videos help you! 👍
Yes indeed, they are! Xxx
For the essay question, can I say that technology has helped humans to connect with each other across places all around the world? Technology can also help to deliver messages to humans which can help the message travel around faster? And its human's instinct and desire to control things such as technology but sometimes technology can make things unpredictable.
Some interesting insights here Ada….hmm technology does make things unpredictable😮 surely this commented wasn't expected 🤣
@@brooklynbrooks1316 sure it does its like the phone call can bring u unexpected news or smth like that
@@brooklynbrooks1316 well your comment was also not expected..... good luck :)))
Hi Ada! It’s good to see how you’re balancing Hughes’s thoughts of both the pros and cons of technology. I think you could strengthen your essay by focusing more on nature as well! How despite what we build/create, we cannot ‘beat’ nature and the cycle of life…death is inevitable -> you could quote the final line of the poem as supporting evidence. You should also think about your personal response as a ‘modern day’ reader - do you think technology has more advantages or disadvantages? Why? What is the poet’s message? 🌸 Mrs. Norman P.S I hope you’re enjoying your holiday!
Hello William! Very excited to see you here. I’m sure you’ve been very busy with revision of all of Hughes’s poems! What do you think about this poem? What message is the poet conveying? 👍 Mrs. Norman 🌸
Hi Kayleigh do you have anything for Anniversary? It is the only poem from the spec that isn't here. Thank you so much for this!
Hi Karen! I’m working on the analysis for Anniversary and will upload it as soon as it’s ready 🌸🌸 Be sure to subscribe so you are notified when I add new content 👍
I like to pretend i understand these
Keep practicing!🌷😂