Heya sir, last academic year, I watched your videos along with working insanely hard ahah, and I ended up getting 128/130, damn poetry ahah :) but I have the scripts, that i asked for in order to help others like Sanjay helped me :) Thank you so much Mr Salles, you really are the best English Teacher on UA-cam :)
I learn alot on your channel and want to say as always , much aopreacation and thanks for all that I learn ... Thank you for caring about how minds grow with good information while learning , vocabulary words too Thank you 😊 !
I wrote a similar essay with ur key ideas in the form of social, age and gender inequality but I only received 18/30. My teachers said there was too many ideas?
Perhaps they meant you hadn’t backed them up? Ask your teacher to rewrite a paragraph to show you. Get them to dictate into an email or app. Should take 3 minutes. Ask nicely
For the Themes Question do i need to say how "inequality" is in the start how it is throughout the playand how it's presented in the end? Or do i just make multiple points on themes which i can back up and explain through quotes/references.
Hi sir, you know for the second last paragraph. This referral to the 'hard headed business man" could allude to the words of Sir Stanley Baldwin who exposed the upper class business owners for making profit out of war. Would this be linked to how unfair society is as it mentions how upper class men primarily focus on earning more profit and could this idea be linked to this concept of free will where we have a choice whether to act moral or immoral?
Hello, i was considering buying your books since I really really want to get grade 9s in English even though I'm like a grade 6 (being generous and inaccurate with myself) I would like to know how to use your books efficiently, for example how to use the essay examples... So that i can utilise the books to help me reach those grade 9 levels even though this is very ambitious..
Hi! I got 100% in my eng lit and honestly, I feel like what helps the most is using a highly ambitious and sophisticated introduction and conclusion. So I suggest you search grade 9 essays (or use the grade 9 essays in Mr Salles' revision guides) and memorise and try to incorporate as many sophisticated words and phrases, but make sure they make sense. Do get your teachers to read your essays in order to tell you if you are utilising them well. I find that whenever I write long conclusions I tend to do much better. In your conclusion, state what you havnt already stated but make sure it's something an examiner is impressed with when reading (don't waffle!) When looking at grade 9 essays, look carefully at the language techniques the student has analysed, e.g. I did Macbeth and a quote I often analysed was "my dearest partner of greatness", but only after I read a grade 9 essay did I realise "dearest" counts as emotive superlative, and this sure sounds fancy! So use techniques that aren't often heard of like metaphors and similes. Stand out! Learn some alevel language techniques and try to locate and incorporate them. Hope you found that useful. If you have any questions do ask.
Get a past paper question. Make brief notes on 8 ideas in the guide which would answer that question. Then use the notes to write it up under exam conditions.
Mr Salles could you please make some videos English Literature A- level: Measure for measure, the great gatsby, A streetcar name desire, The handmaids tale. I would really appreciate
What a genuine legend you are. I do not know where I'd be in English Literature if it weren't for you.
Heya sir, last academic year, I watched your videos along with working insanely hard ahah, and I ended up getting 128/130, damn poetry ahah :) but I have the scripts, that i asked for in order to help others like Sanjay helped me :) Thank you so much Mr Salles, you really are the best English Teacher on UA-cam :)
I also asked for my exam papers back but I still havnt received them. When did you receive yours?
Can u send them to me please I’m in year 11 and would really appreciate it 😅
@@someone-mv6ed I received mine in October, I don't know what happened to yours
Hi! 🎉Congrats on ur last year and results! i also want to work as hard🥳Can you send the scripts to me too ?
Congrattts, can you share the scripts with Mr Salles so we can benefit from them please!@@soyeahitsfinn7048
Thank you, Mr Salles. I have my English literature mock exam on Tuesday so this is incredibly helpful.
I learn alot on your channel and want to say as always , much aopreacation and thanks for all that I learn ...
Thank you for caring about how minds grow with good information while learning , vocabulary words too
Thank you 😊 !
Mr salles, could you possibly make a video on Dr Lanyon's purpose in Jekyll and Hyde please?
Would I be able to add to this essay and change it up a bit, to say that for the Inspector, the Schrodinger's Cat Theory is involved and then explain?
does that mean you dont really have to zoom into words and techniques used
Literally just had this exact question today ! I’m here to see if I failed or not
does it matter which exam board?
im ALWAYS stuck at the top of level 5 band, literally always get 24 or 25 marks
Bro thats amazing well done hopefully the same for me!
What did u end up getting?
@@midzzay 9 in both lit and lang
@@redvelvetdewdrops wow! 😯 well done👏
@@midzzay thank you x
I wrote a similar essay with ur key ideas in the form of social, age and gender inequality but I only received 18/30. My teachers said there was too many ideas?
Perhaps they meant you hadn’t backed them up? Ask your teacher to rewrite a paragraph to show you. Get them to dictate into an email or app. Should take 3 minutes. Ask nicely
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish ok thank you!
I did the same thing as u and I got 25/30 but overall grade was a 7
How does talking about the inspector being a mouthpiece and the use of anadiplosis, link to inequality?
hi sir, are you planning to make any literature a level videos soon?
For the Themes Question do i need to say how "inequality" is in the start how it is throughout the playand how it's presented in the end? Or do i just make multiple points on themes which i can back up and explain through quotes/references.
Every point you make needs to relate back to the question, in this case inequality. See how it is done in the essay
If only I saw this before my mock today :((((
Mr Salles, please can you make a video on 6 easy grade 9 ideas for Macbeth and An Inspector Calls just like you did for Christmas Carol?
Hi sir, you know for the second last paragraph. This referral to the 'hard headed business man" could allude to the words of Sir Stanley Baldwin who exposed the upper class business owners for making profit out of war. Would this be linked to how unfair society is as it mentions how upper class men primarily focus on earning more profit and could this idea be linked to this concept of free will where we have a choice whether to act moral or immoral?
Yes!
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish Thank you
Hello, i was considering buying your books since I really really want to get grade 9s in English even though I'm like a grade 6 (being generous and inaccurate with myself) I would like to know how to use your books efficiently, for example how to use the essay examples... So that i can utilise the books to help me reach those grade 9 levels even though this is very ambitious..
Hi! I got 100% in my eng lit and honestly, I feel like what helps the most is using a highly ambitious and sophisticated introduction and conclusion. So I suggest you search grade 9 essays (or use the grade 9 essays in Mr Salles' revision guides) and memorise and try to incorporate as many sophisticated words and phrases, but make sure they make sense. Do get your teachers to read your essays in order to tell you if you are utilising them well. I find that whenever I write long conclusions I tend to do much better. In your conclusion, state what you havnt already stated but make sure it's something an examiner is impressed with when reading (don't waffle!) When looking at grade 9 essays, look carefully at the language techniques the student has analysed, e.g. I did Macbeth and a quote I often analysed was "my dearest partner of greatness", but only after I read a grade 9 essay did I realise "dearest" counts as emotive superlative, and this sure sounds fancy! So use techniques that aren't often heard of like metaphors and similes. Stand out! Learn some alevel language techniques and try to locate and incorporate them. Hope you found that useful. If you have any questions do ask.
Get a past paper question. Make brief notes on 8 ideas in the guide which would answer that question. Then use the notes to write it up under exam conditions.
@@someone-mv6ed will do so, thanks.
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish i just ordered the guide to literature over an hour ago, i will try this thank you!
@@someone-mv6ed did you search grade 9 essays, or did you learn from examples in Mr salles revision guide. And 100% wow that's really impressive.
Mr Salles could you please make some videos English Literature A- level: Measure for measure, the great gatsby, A streetcar name desire, The handmaids tale. I would really appreciate
Cheers sir, this is helpful !
I'm always stuck at the bottom of band 6 with 26-28
mr salles you need to grow the beard back again
Sir, how many paragraphs do we write typically for a 30 marker?
like probably 5 main ones and introduction and conclusion
Hi Sir, can you make a Romeo and Juliet essay example?
my names simran lol