This was most inspiring saga how much could humanity achieve if we all accepted our struggles to overcome as opportunities for growth. More of Daves Attitude would go a long way.
Great story. I do have a suggestion though... Slow the speech down a bit, it goes a bit too fast. Also, in the audio editing, slightly increase the pauses between sentences. This will seriously help the story and won't make it sound like one sentence blending into the next ones.
Yeah - you keep making this same comment on multiple channels which makes it pretty evident that your a 'paid actor'. Kindly fO and leave the real comments to real people.
Star wars is from a galaxy far far away and Disney is run by an alien conglomerate constantly struggling to understand how humans react. Why wouldn't they know about them?
The 7-eyed 3-mouthed official handing out armor suddenly had 'three miles' hanging open in shock. How do you get published? Proofread. Proofread. Proofread.
What's that sonny? Speak up. Yesh, yesh, that's right, I'm a deaf welder. What of it? I'm not sure what a death welder is, but probably don't want to meet one. I guess they are into ... heavy metals.
How MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO SAY IT PROOF READ YOUR CONTENT - THESE STORIES COULD BE REALLY GOOD IF U DECIDE TO CARE amd at least mix up the shit ai voice with some real human accents..... PLEASE THE POTENTIAL IS THERE TO MAKE THESE REALLY GOOD. just constructive criticism
This was most inspiring saga how much could humanity achieve if we all accepted our struggles to overcome as opportunities for growth. More of Daves Attitude would go a long way.
Great story.
I do have a suggestion though... Slow the speech down a bit, it goes a bit too fast. Also, in the audio editing, slightly increase the pauses between sentences. This will seriously help the story and won't make it sound like one sentence blending into the next ones.
What Dave did was stun them and show them how to look outside of their box by trying new approaches to their lives.😂
Yeah - you keep making this same comment on multiple channels which makes it pretty evident that your a 'paid actor'. Kindly fO and leave the real comments to real people.
So they don't know humans but are familiar wth Star Wars and afraid of being sued by Disney. Checks out.
Star wars is from a galaxy far far away and Disney is run by an alien conglomerate constantly struggling to understand how humans react. Why wouldn't they know about them?
@@FanfictionEnjoyernice!😂
i love how the text says, "lover pits" instead of "lava pits"
Bravo, humor level 10! Can we have more adventures with Dave?
I think that I've heard of Dave blowing Alien Professors' minds on other channels.
Thank you for a good story. UKUK
The "Death Welder", epic main boss name! :D
@@banatibor83 Death Welder, YEAH. LET THE SPARKS FLY IN AN ATMOSPHERE OF OXYGEN ABD METHANE !
Lol. The Green alien from Toy story was in the audience. Time stamp 18.25
The 7-eyed 3-mouthed official handing out armor suddenly had 'three miles' hanging open in shock.
How do you get published? Proofread. Proofread. Proofread.
What's that sonny? Speak up. Yesh, yesh, that's right, I'm a deaf welder. What of it? I'm not sure what a death welder is, but probably don't want to meet one. I guess they are into ... heavy metals.
When you are a welder everything you work with is heavy, too hot in the summer, and too cold in the winter.
And welders get sunburns during the winter.
NO. MORE. STRENGTH THROUGH DIVERSITY MORALS, DAMMIT! UNSUB.
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AI speach still lousy !
How MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO SAY IT PROOF READ YOUR CONTENT - THESE STORIES COULD BE REALLY GOOD IF U DECIDE TO CARE amd at least mix up the shit ai voice with some real human accents..... PLEASE THE POTENTIAL IS THERE TO MAKE THESE REALLY GOOD. just constructive criticism
Dude, they don't care. They just program the AI to pump this stuff out and and post it. They just want clicks without effort.