Hey!! Greetings again everyone. I want to apologize for the wait. Getting things and projects taken care of. Jist want to say thank you all for the love and support this community has shown me. Thank you for welcoming me here and I can't wait to make more stories for you. I hope you all enjoy the story, also thank you Love Lost Cronicals, digging the new intro. And as always thank you for letting me show my work on your platform
@@chrismoore9997 it is actually based on Milton Hershey which did and dose exactly as this orphanage is doing. I recommend you look it up. You are not wrong mind you, but there are in fact some places like this
@@WilliamH-et4 lol, iam brother dont worry. Still thank you for your concern and support. I just like writing stories for yall is all. Ill take what ya said in account tho. Mabey having a week or three is ok to chill. Jist know I'm here because of you guys. Thank you ✌😎
@@WilliamH-et4 Ture, but I figure this part of the story perspective can aid in the depth of not just the main character but future ones as well. But I can see you concern. Thank you for your words and support
What a great story. I love that the husband took action as soon as she walked out the door. He didn't sit around a wait for her to come back. He did what was necessary to protect his kids. Megan, as a grown woman, knew what she was doing was wrong. She has a mind of her own. She can't blame anyone but herself. I love it when a story has strong women who kick butt.
Hey LLC, you probably pick the best stories to put on here. The only complaint I have, and hell I’m not really complaining, is I need a few more short 35min-1hr stories. I usually take about 30-45 minutes to get to work and I love listening to those stories on the way in and back home. Other than that, you’re doing a hell of a job keeping us entertained!!! I hate reading so these audio stories are perfect for me!!!
Hi. What with all the hubbub and goings on with these multiple part stories, i sort of overlooked this one. Really glad I found my way back to it. Also glad to hear there will be a sequel/continuation. Keep 'em comin' LLC and Maliciouslogic3740 👍🏻👍🏻...⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
OMG, Travis, just when l thought that series was over here, you come with another, you know l love this series please 🙏 hurry with the next episode ❤❤😂
A bit too convoluted, got a bit lost in the middle with the focus on Bear. The father tells the kids they are getting divorced to only later tell them they might be getting a divorce like he never already said this to them. Some events just happen far too quickly too. The new romance could have been built up better rather than delivered in bullet points. Even the action felt very sudden. I think the majority of focus was on Bear to be honest, it felt the most thought out.
Sorry to hear you didn't enjoy the story, but your words are always welcome and I appreciate your honesty. Know that whatever issues you have with this story, will be corrected in future stories connected to this series. God bless and thank you ✌🤓
@1 hour 5 minutes he didn’t change the locks and she was there in the first 10 minutes he had already changed the locks and had a restraining order I like your writing and the call backs but damn plot holes
Kinda feels like a series of short stories held together by Baxter's, and the inconsistencies need work - Baxter changed the locks (and got a TRO) as soon as Megan left but she just walks in later with no explanation and Baxter thinks he won't change the door locks. Overall, though, still really good and entertaining.
You already had him change the door locks the first night she went out and now you are saying that you are not going to change the locks. You can't even keep your story straight.
Omg I'm so excited for another tale from this author idk why but there's nothing more enjoyable than his stuff I'm really honestly saying (the BBQ scene o.mg seriously so good) honest truth and this guy's in this tale really shows how the kids really are a priority unlike that selfish self-centered toxicity he walked away from and thx to LLC for considering to keep sharing theses tales😊
This ridiculous who would let a man or woman around the there kids again. Also, this BS of i forgive you crap. I believe in God but I wouldn't forgive and no that wouldn't have power over me if I didn't forgive. That's propaganda to try a different way
Good story until the BS about the former combat pilot of all sorts of military aircraft turned bartender. The description of her was oddly specific and unnecessary. Let the listener decide her features.
There's an error in the story. The only combat aircraft the army is allowed to fly are rotary wing aircraft. (helicopters). They have a little over 230 fixed wing vehicles which are comprised of reconnaissance, transport and cargo aircraft.
This should have been Longer my friend. I feel like you tried to shoe horn in to much of the Hershey story it is obviously based off of in to much of a rapid fire succession. That much world building needs a little more TLC rather than a wham bam thank ya Ma'am Hour n a half story. This could and should have been a 2 part 2 hrs per part story. Still mostly Solid tail and despite my complaint of it being too short I enjoyed it! Hey if yer audience is complaining you didn't write enough but it was still good.... That is a win!
This sounds like three or more stories jammed together with no thought for consistency between the stories. Why would a bunch of contract killers come after these people.
It really wasn't that hard to fallow the protagonist new wife had a dream letting her know the PI that was hired to ruin maxines sexfest was in danger Maxine had hired hit men to take them out cause they had provided all the evidence to ruin her company and lifestyle e exactly which part are you having so much trouble with the only plot hole I saw was him changing the locks then later on he refused to change the locks but thus cam be fixed if you assume he allowed her back into the home instead of making her move that day just assume he pretended to reconcile so he could gather the evidence he needed for the divorce he wanted
@@johntouw3153 I promise all will be explained in future chapters. Im making a series involving characters from the past, as well as new characters. Love writing for you guys. And thank you for your words
Yeah, I wanted to use the Quinton Tarantino approach. You have present time, but a quick explanation of what happened prior. I been using it lately but still need practice apparently. Sorry if I threw you off a bit, but thank you for your words and hope you enjoyed the story
Okay, I thought he had changed the locks after her first outting, and he gad kicked her out. Okay, for get the part where he haf ki k3d her out nice story now while imwait for part two am off to listen to the five oart story that has its end. Going to be a long night.
Yeah thats on me, I forgot that was in there when I should have got rid of it. My apologies, hope it didn't take away too much from the story. And thank you for your words and support
To break your heart, the five part military story is going to be continued!!!! It’s a great story but I was like “there has to be more” at the end!!! Lol
Hey!! Greetings again everyone. I want to apologize for the wait. Getting things and projects taken care of. Jist want to say thank you all for the love and support this community has shown me. Thank you for welcoming me here and I can't wait to make more stories for you. I hope you all enjoy the story, also thank you Love Lost Cronicals, digging the new intro. And as always thank you for letting me show my work on your platform
Trav, no worries man, take your time. Your content is awesome. Stay Sane brother 😊
Too much fantasy about how wonderful people are with all these orphanages that don't exist and people that help husbands that are being abused.
@@chrismoore9997 it is actually based on Milton Hershey which did and dose exactly as this orphanage is doing. I recommend you look it up. You are not wrong mind you, but there are in fact some places like this
@@WilliamH-et4 lol, iam brother dont worry. Still thank you for your concern and support. I just like writing stories for yall is all. Ill take what ya said in account tho. Mabey having a week or three is ok to chill. Jist know I'm here because of you guys. Thank you ✌😎
@@WilliamH-et4 Ture, but I figure this part of the story perspective can aid in the depth of not just the main character but future ones as well. But I can see you concern. Thank you for your words and support
“You walking abomination of a human abortion.” Damn that is savage
I must use that😂
I hate it when the man cry’s over a cheating wife!! They are not worth any tears
Facts, that is so annoying, just move on, can’t keep nobody that don’t want to be kept.
@ exactly! 😜
EPIC, can’t wait for the next book! Great job tying several uploads together. So fun
Here’s a good tip boys; you pay off ALL joint credit card debt and cancel them PRIOR to splitting joint assets, not after!
100%👍👍👍
What a great story. I love that the husband took action as soon as she walked out the door. He didn't sit around a wait for her to come back. He did what was necessary to protect his kids. Megan, as a grown woman, knew what she was doing was wrong. She has a mind of her own. She can't blame anyone but herself. I love it when a story has strong women who kick butt.
Megan comes into the house... but he had changed the locks. ????
Changed locks and got a restraining order. Then not going to change locks and she is back in the house????
Good point but He needed to get evidence somehow 🤷
Exactly!
What happened to the house Alarm???
Exactly @@Sidheavonney
How this woman let herself be turned out? Then loose everything
OMG, i wouldn't get near that woman without a Hazmat suit. Gross!
😂
"she was so kind, caring and neutering"
Hey LLC, you probably pick the best stories to put on here. The only complaint I have, and hell I’m not really complaining, is I need a few more short 35min-1hr stories. I usually take about 30-45 minutes to get to work and I love listening to those stories on the way in and back home. Other than that, you’re doing a hell of a job keeping us entertained!!! I hate reading so these audio stories are perfect for me!!!
You should try our other channel - lost relation chronicles.
@@LostLoveChronicles already subscribed!!! lol
@@markhosey2290 you are the best.
Love that you mentioned The Neverending Story! One of my all-time favorite movies; still want Falkor to be my bestie!❤
The fantastic , the amazing , the living legend ... Maliciouslogic3740 ... because 3739 isn't near enough ... LoL !!!
Divorced man quickly finds a wife and more on things that rarely happen in real life
Wow! Can’t wait for the sequel. Thanks so much Travis
LLC thank you these stories are so much better than the multi part stories
❤ i love the characters of one stories being interwoven into other stories, either by actually being there or name dropping.
Said at 1:05:00 would not change door locks...already done in first part of story. Great story.
It would be nice to have a link to the other stories that tie into this one so we can go back and refresh ourselves
Good story thank you very much🙏 always the joy to listen to Travis’s stories
Hi. What with all the hubbub and goings on with these multiple part stories, i sort of overlooked this one. Really glad I found my way back to it. Also glad to hear there will be a sequel/continuation. Keep 'em comin' LLC and Maliciouslogic3740 👍🏻👍🏻...⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Dude this story jumps all over the fucking place.
This story is all over the place
I thought he was gonna say “can you box these bullets” 😂😂
Ah I like that 😁
L.L.C.
Great story kept me interested the hole story. Again hell of a story!🤔🤨👍🍺😎
OMG, Travis, just when l thought that series was over here, you come with another, you know l love this series please 🙏 hurry with the next episode ❤❤😂
Don't worry, there is more to come. Get ready to see some new characters and ghost from the past. Keep them Easter egg eyes open while ya at it 😉
More fodder for the Maliciousverse
Damn man Bear definitely need more airtime, dude is just pure legendary!
Don't worry, this ain't the last time you gonna hear from him 😉
great story
I would never forgive...
When do we get the sequel? This was awesome, great story.
Beautifull written. I'll be waiting for the next part (s)
Once again thanks Travis for another outstanding story
Great story! Keep them coming Travis!
A bit too convoluted, got a bit lost in the middle with the focus on Bear. The father tells the kids they are getting divorced to only later tell them they might be getting a divorce like he never already said this to them. Some events just happen far too quickly too. The new romance could have been built up better rather than delivered in bullet points. Even the action felt very sudden. I think the majority of focus was on Bear to be honest, it felt the most thought out.
Continuity can be a bitch!
I usually enjoy the stories from this writer. But was there no editing for the story. We went from a good story to crap.
Sorry to hear you didn't enjoy the story, but your words are always welcome and I appreciate your honesty. Know that whatever issues you have with this story, will be corrected in future stories connected to this series. God bless and thank you ✌🤓
"Neuturing" or "nurturing?" (1:21:20 ish)
Why are they being attacked by a bunch of armed killers at the end of the story. Nothing up to this point has given any potential excuse for that.
@1 hour 5 minutes he didn’t change the locks and she was there in the first 10 minutes he had already changed the locks and had a restraining order I like your writing and the call backs but damn plot holes
Left the door open?
Made my day! I know this will be epic!! Thanks Travis!!! You rock brother 👍👍👍
Oh dear God please hurry with part 2.
How many times is " without missing a beat " phrase used. Did the writer just learn it?
Nah, just thought it was catchy 😅. Thank you for your words
Amazing
Kinda feels like a series of short stories held together by Baxter's, and the inconsistencies need work - Baxter changed the locks (and got a TRO) as soon as Megan left but she just walks in later with no explanation and Baxter thinks he won't change the door locks. Overall, though, still really good and entertaining.
good story!
I like how your making you’re own universe with callbacks to older stories
army pilots
don’t fly a-10’s
Sorry bout that, I'll remember that
Is there a version of this story that doesn’t have the backstories of every single character in it?
Can you link the other connecting stories for the benefit of those of us that don't know. This way, we can get the whole story!
Ey pls let us know when the 2 part is out
OOOkay when is going to be release a sequel? Btw great story, just a little bit too much with juvenile section of Bear.
SEQUEL‼️
SEQUEL‼️
SEQUEL‼️
SEQUEL‼️
SEQUEL‼️
Already on it. Get ready to see new faces and those from the past 😎
You already had him change the door locks the first night she went out and now you are saying that you are not going to change the locks. You can't even keep your story straight.
I loved it. Cant wit for the sequel. What a talent you are.
Damn autocorrect wait lol
Omg I'm so excited for another tale from this author idk why but there's nothing more enjoyable than his stuff I'm really honestly saying (the BBQ scene o.mg seriously so good) honest truth and this guy's in this tale really shows how the kids really are a priority unlike that selfish self-centered toxicity he walked away from and thx to LLC for considering to keep sharing theses tales😊
Don’t let me wait too long for the sequel I board easily and loose concentration just as quick
This ridiculous who would let a man or woman around the there kids again. Also, this BS of i forgive you crap. I believe in God but I wouldn't forgive and no that wouldn't have power over me if I didn't forgive. That's propaganda to try a different way
Do Andy and his wife have their own story?
Yes they do, in fact they are in a previous story. That will be explained in the following installations
Sometimes i really like to hear reasoning for cheating spouse and belittle him how to day got marriage of it and finally gay cheater......
This story bounces all over the place. Didn’t like this one at all
So... he gave Megan a key after he changed the locks? Yall need to get your stories straight.
Got a bit confused with this one. Not one of Travis best but still very entertaining.
Yes I hate a story where you have to keep notes to follow it.
Good story until the BS about the former combat pilot of all sorts of military aircraft turned bartender. The description of her was oddly specific and unnecessary. Let the listener decide her features.
There's an error in the story. The only combat aircraft the army is allowed to fly are rotary wing aircraft. (helicopters). They have a little over 230 fixed wing vehicles which are comprised of reconnaissance, transport and cargo aircraft.
👍😊
🤗!!!
Hey 👋 😊 glad ya made it
@@maliciouslogic3740 thx for giving us your work to listen to!!!
This should have been Longer my friend. I feel like you tried to shoe horn in to much of the Hershey story it is obviously based off of in to much of a rapid fire succession. That much world building needs a little more TLC rather than a wham bam thank ya Ma'am Hour n a half story. This could and should have been a 2 part 2 hrs per part story. Still mostly Solid tail and despite my complaint of it being too short I enjoyed it! Hey if yer audience is complaining you didn't write enough but it was still good.... That is a win!
What happen to magen
This sounds like three or more stories jammed together with no thought for consistency between the stories. Why would a bunch of contract killers come after these people.
Well the character Maxine was convicted of hiring based on the survivor who rat her out. I hope that helps.
It really wasn't that hard to fallow the protagonist new wife had a dream letting her know the PI that was hired to ruin maxines sexfest was in danger Maxine had hired hit men to take them out cause they had provided all the evidence to ruin her company and lifestyle e exactly which part are you having so much trouble with the only plot hole I saw was him changing the locks then later on he refused to change the locks but thus cam be fixed if you assume he allowed her back into the home instead of making her move that day just assume he pretended to reconcile so he could gather the evidence he needed for the divorce he wanted
@@maliciouslogic3740 And is part of a bigger organisation?
@@johntouw3153 🤫
@@johntouw3153 I promise all will be explained in future chapters. Im making a series involving characters from the past, as well as new characters. Love writing for you guys. And thank you for your words
Good story. Just need to figure out a way to let us know the sequence of the stories.
Yeah, I wanted to use the Quinton Tarantino approach. You have present time, but a quick explanation of what happened prior. I been using it lately but still need practice apparently. Sorry if I threw you off a bit, but thank you for your words and hope you enjoyed the story
@@maliciouslogic3740 Still a good story
She. Is doing it for her self
I'm kinda lost, is this story about Bear? Or the husband?
Yes 🤣
❤👋😊
✌😎
Okay, I thought he had changed the locks after her first outting, and he gad kicked her out. Okay, for get the part where he haf ki k3d her out nice story now while imwait for part two am off to listen to the five oart story that has its end. Going to be a long night.
Yeah thats on me, I forgot that was in there when I should have got rid of it. My apologies, hope it didn't take away too much from the story. And thank you for your words and support
To break your heart, the five part military story is going to be continued!!!! It’s a great story but I was like “there has to be more” at the end!!! Lol