I'm sorry but this is so disjointed! The leader of the assassin squad was setting a trap by retreating and then all of a sudden the human captain was winning? All of the leaders people were incapacitated, leader falls unconscious/dead, and then ur back to the leaders thoughts during the fight? Proof read please!
Can't understand the amount of double-ups or the amazing volume of repetition repetition repetition repetition of phrases throughout. Even at the end when the assassins had all been killed, the whole story ending had to be retold a few times over with yet more repetition. I'm totally done with this channel because of this and many other similar failures. You are really crap amateurs for doing this.
If you have to stop and think you have already lost.
disjointed again assassins attack then they are arriving on earth. get a new AI and a new formular for the story line.
I must assume that you're telling the story from different ways of seeing it, or there's just no sense on this one ?!
I'm sorry but this is so disjointed! The leader of the assassin squad was setting a trap by retreating and then all of a sudden the human captain was winning? All of the leaders people were incapacitated, leader falls unconscious/dead, and then ur back to the leaders thoughts during the fight? Proof read please!
How many "final thought"s can one dying assassin have? How many times can an AI rephrase a"final thought'. Disappointing story. Very disappointing.
Can't understand the amount of double-ups or the amazing volume of repetition repetition repetition repetition of phrases throughout. Even at the end when the assassins had all been killed, the whole story ending had to be retold a few times over with yet more repetition. I'm totally done with this channel because of this and many other similar failures. You are really crap amateurs for doing this.