Who are u to evaluate his answers?? Stop criticising and finding errors in their answers like this. Look at his background and the achievements of his life. He has been a bright student throughout his academic career, so, he could easily improve himself in a few days. You can't criticize him like this to satisfy ur own ego. Really embarassing
@@priyanshu.sharma.0002 Dude, you need to look at his academic background and career first. Bro is gifted, he could improve himself in a short span of time, iitians have sharp minds. He need not improve his grammar, but I am sure, he must have played with facts and data in his final examination.
I gave 4 mains and passed 3 times. Being a seasoned player, I can say that this is the only video on the internet which teaches how to write a real answer. It is about learning how to interpret a question, how to think structure, what to write in the answer and what not to write. It is highly recommended that we study one topper copy each day but nobody teaches how to study their copy. In my 8 years of experience, I never studied my own answers, because I never got the time to look back, I just kept on adding, adding and adding. I paid thousands of money to almost all the coaching institutes. I think I hardly left, any of the famous one. I never found value in their answer review because they majorly focus on the content part. They never helped me the timing part, spacing part, decoration part, how to add my own flavour part. But this kind of technique is a way for me to view the answer as a reader and give me alternate perspective on what exactly do I need to improve in my answer. So many of you have commented some things, have you actually ever written an answer by yourself? Every person who has sincerely prepared for this exam, would know that such kind of videos are extremely helpful in knowing where we are going wrong. My apologies for being long, but Sir please please continue this series.
Hello brother or sister I'm so much impressed by what you've said and ur achievements that u have mentioned.....I would like to seek some help from u since I very poor in writing answer
You went ahead & made us aware of how important it is to know how to write the answer, as per you experience & you support this UA-camr which makes us think before giving any negative statement, thanks for your comments sir.
don't be a blind supporter of everything or everyone just bcz of temporary adrenaline rush or motivation Try to know the reason and the logic behind it
Don't write retarded shit like this if you are going to blindly appreciate someone just because they got Rank 1. If you actually these answers you would know that they are fucking bullshit. Undeserving.
Exactly my thoughts upon seeing this. If someone is getting Rank 1 even if it is a coaching mock test then it is truly sad and reflects poorly upon the quality of guidance that aspirants are being provided at these places.
So you would rather have someone who can give you 10 shit answers than someone who would be able to produce even 1 answer of substance? Sounds a little Stalinist to me with all the Quantity over Quality rhetoric.
To be honest he just played with the mock but trust me he foooled you all. His actual performance will be 10x different from this. So don't have high hopes that UPSC is easy 😂
But what's the point of fooling us when you have the chance to impress us? Who doesn't want to be recognised these days? Isn't this the reason he wanted rank 1?
This is really really constructive. Haven't seen someone correct a paper. You are teaching what coaching institutes do not teach. I'm awaiting for more of your toppers paper correction.
People commenting here... tune kitni baar diya h, guys I hope tm log bhi prepare kr rhe ho UPSC k liye, do these answer satisfy you? Moreover, I think the goal here is to see what points Aditya missed while reading or simply understanding the question. His answer sure does not fully grasp the essence of what was asked in the question. Even his mock Interviews are not that great, if you analyze it as a student not as a fan. Ye baat alag h ki exam hall me kitna focus bach pata hoga. And I believe competitive exams has luck factor >> effort. Also people checking the copies are human. The simple question you need to ask is... kya aap ko Aditya k answer thik lge... kya aap same format follow kroge khud exam dete time. If yes, Please do so. Apne ko learning better krni h taki khud top kr ske... its great that he got AIR 1 but Aditya ko sar pe bitha k kya milna h. And I think even he would agree.
These answers, even in mock tests, are not perfect but they are satisfactory. I would say they are average. I started studying in the last 8 months and I am able to write such answers, which are definitely not going to help me score among toppers. I know this is not it, I know I have to improve and write much more detailed answers. Yes, detail is what the above answer sheet is lacking. In any case, without taking sides, I would say that the UA-camr should have mentioned that it is a mock sheet (obviously), then he would not have been getting comments like "apne labhi diya h". He must have given it because he has full knowledge of answer writing, which most students are not able to grasp in a year.
Thanks for understanding that it’s for the benefit of all to learn and grow, nothing else. 100 comments should come here talking about best practices from this answer copy that can be used in writing your next answer. You all can be toppers, comment your strategy to be so that everyone can improve that. Be a dreamer!
Thank you sir . I completely agree with you. When ever I see toppers copies I also can't link it with demand of the questions how the toppers write it . I think I am wrong. How they generate such out of box poins in answers. I may be wrong I need to study more etc... . Now I am getting my confidence. Make more such eye opening videos sir
An IAS is a generalist of all sorts. So, he/she should have knowledge of almost everything in general not in pro level. Secondly, an IAS can't be radical/ irrational or overly judgemental/ critical about any situation. Therefore, one who doesn't possess these qualities is not eligible to judge his answer writing too.
Bhai 🧐😂 wohito mai v. kabhi kabhi kudpe doubt hone lagte hain 😂😂😂😂 semester final mai jo subject ko adsase likh nahin pate wohi pe highest scored. Hojate hain 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
😂😅bhai pata hai mark kitne hain ? 1077 out of 2025. Usiko air 1 bolte hain samjhe. Upsc mai 50 % lana bhi upsc toppers ke liye muskil hai. Highest score ever secured in upsc was 1126 by Anudeep Sir 🎉❤
I wrote 2 mains but i always got less marks but unfortunately i have not even go throgh my answer now i got where i was stuck every time thanks to the man for analysing the answer key
"Nation resides not on land but in the minds" is actually given by Sri Gurazada Apparao in telugu known as Desam ante Matti kaadoi Desamante Manushuloi in his Desamanu preminchumanna Manchi annadi penchumanna Poem.
I don't know why some of you took it as ' youtuber vs IAS 1st Rank' and all sorts! But being a State PCS aspirant myself, I expect more elaborate and concise answer within the specified word limit. State PCS examiners would probably give like 3-4/10 at best for every answer here. I know UPSC is way above there, I'm not comparing State PCS and UPSC, but I'm only referring to this particular answer writing here which lacks formal/proper introductions, main bodies given in points are neither properly elaborated, and some answers are not consicse at all, deviating from the questions being asked. Whatever I think that this is just a mock test and he's not giving much effort at all.. Regardless, still, the answers doesn't meet the demand of the questions to my opinion.
Maybe he improved a lot during the exam. But the answers looked biased. The main point there real revolution was brought by Gandhiji. This will get him 0 marks in any upsc answer. You cannot take biased.
Bro everyone is commenting "he is a civil servant, and you are youtuber" and so and so. But I want to ask you whether are you a UPSC Evaluator or Paper setter? Who are you to evaluate and judge and decide what questions to be set in UPSC and AIR 1 Candidate?
FOR NOW YOU HAVE TO STUDY PROPERLY 9.10.11.&12 JUST FOR THE BESIC CONCEPTS WICH ARE INCLUDED IN SYLLABUS THEN AFTER GRADUATION YOU HAVE TP WORK HARD I HOPE YOU WILL GET SUCCESS
App log inko bol rhe ho ki " rank 1 holder se jalo nhi" ,bhaiyo ham logo ne khud kabhi koi answer nhi likha hai UPSC ka.atleast Jo answer judge kr rha hai usko jankaari toh hai answers likhne ki aur answers check krne ki
Aapka hisaab se Aap UPSC mein kya change kerna chya ga Me tho B.A se graduate hua logo ko es exam mein bathne se hee mana ker duga because selection tho B.Tech, B. Com, and BSC etc walo ka ho rya hai
Sanchi stupa built by Ashoka but it was initially a small stupa. Later pushyamitra sunga destroyed it and it was rebuilt and enlarged by Agnimitra of Sunga dynasty. Guptas also made certain changes on the toranas of Sanchi stupa
I think UPSC is not at all logical … but we need to know many things and put on paper that’s it.. no logical thinking is required..I think it’s suitable for mostly girls ..
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Who are u to evaluate his answers??
Stop criticising and finding errors in their answers like this.
Look at his background and the achievements of his life. He has been a bright student throughout his academic career, so, he could easily improve himself in a few days. You can't criticize him like this to satisfy ur own ego.
Really embarassing
YOU ARE TEASING HIS ANSWERS ,HE IS TEASING YOUR RANK
Not exactly teasing his rank but teasing on how many subscribers he has 🤣🤣🤣
@@kynsaimylliemumlomg3602 🤣🤣
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UPSC rank 1 doing basic grammar mistakes yeah that makes sense.... At the end of the day it's the Indian government 😂
His answer is unique , that's why his rank is unique
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Tbh the answers are ridiculously weak and completely off topic all he did was highlight his boxes and examiner fall for it
This is how my relatives judge me 😂
Literally 😅😂
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Sahi bhai😂 tum Kitana bhi sahi ho lekin Ghar Wale Kami dhudh hi denge
Sahi kaha bhai jisene jindagi me kabhi top nahi ki vo review de rhe hai😅😅
True
This is mock answer paper. UPSC doesn't select on Mock paper.
He might have corrected himself during this mock test and performed well in his examination
but selected the guy who wrote this mock
@@dsaishivam396mocks are made to do experiment before exams
Do they even organise a mock for their applicants?
@@priyanshu.sharma.0002
Dude, you need to look at his academic background and career first.
Bro is gifted, he could improve himself in a short span of time, iitians have sharp minds.
He need not improve his grammar, but I am sure, he must have played with facts and data in his final examination.
That's why you are a youtuber and he is a civil servants 😂😂😂😂.
Please don't do stupid comments.
He is giving information to all
@@phalgunibhuyan3881 yes I can see very well.
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Emotional damage😂
I gave 4 mains and passed 3 times. Being a seasoned player, I can say that this is the only video on the internet which teaches how to write a real answer. It is about learning how to interpret a question, how to think structure, what to write in the answer and what not to write. It is highly recommended that we study one topper copy each day but nobody teaches how to study their copy. In my 8 years of experience, I never studied my own answers, because I never got the time to look back, I just kept on adding, adding and adding. I paid thousands of money to almost all the coaching institutes. I think I hardly left, any of the famous one. I never found value in their answer review because they majorly focus on the content part. They never helped me the timing part, spacing part, decoration part, how to add my own flavour part. But this kind of technique is a way for me to view the answer as a reader and give me alternate perspective on what exactly do I need to improve in my answer.
So many of you have commented some things, have you actually ever written an answer by yourself? Every person who has sincerely prepared for this exam, would know that such kind of videos are extremely helpful in knowing where we are going wrong. My apologies for being long, but Sir please please continue this series.
Hello brother or sister I'm so much impressed by what you've said and ur achievements that u have mentioned.....I would like to seek some help from u since I very poor in writing answer
I'll be so grateful to u if u could please help me with this
I appreciate your point of view exactly same my statement
Please sir continue the series...to know where we are going wrong
Thanks 👍
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You went ahead & made us aware of how important it is to know how to write the answer, as per you experience & you support this UA-camr which makes us think before giving any negative statement, thanks for your comments sir.
Don't be jealus. He secured Rank 1. It's not a joke.
First you need to focus your study.
Bro his answer is not accurate 🤣🤌 then how?? It's come rank 1
@@noahrim123that is mock test answersheet bro😂
Yes yes !!!! that's why Puja Khedkar is on the run😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 let next be him.😅😅😅😅😅😅
@@InsightSpectrum99Mock Test reflects the Original Mark's.
@@amkai2928 Not Always..!
May Be It Was His Initial Test.
This is main difference between ias and youtuber 😂😅
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don't be a blind supporter of everything or everyone just bcz of temporary adrenaline rush or motivation
Try to know the reason and the logic behind it
He must be his fanboy @@indigotv3950
Don't write retarded shit like this if you are going to blindly appreciate someone just because they got Rank 1. If you actually these answers you would know that they are fucking bullshit. Undeserving.
It is definitely how I used to write answers in tenth grade. I would definitely expect better answers from a UPSC rank 1
Bhai mock tests ki answer sheet hai wo upsc me jo paper diya uski nahi hai...
Exactly my thoughts upon seeing this. If someone is getting Rank 1 even if it is a coaching mock test then it is truly sad and reflects poorly upon the quality of guidance that aspirants are being provided at these places.
No one can meet absolute expectations of question upse mains for that reason for 15 marks they only 7or 8 max
FOCUS ON REALITY
Actually he is correct 💯
The thing is he hasn't skipped any question, he has touched all questions and presentation style with diagram and all is very good
So you would rather have someone who can give you 10 shit answers than someone who would be able to produce even 1 answer of substance? Sounds a little Stalinist to me with all the Quantity over Quality rhetoric.
To be honest he just played with the mock but trust me he foooled you all. His actual performance will be 10x different from this. So don't have high hopes that UPSC is easy 😂
😂💯
But what's the point of fooling us when you have the chance to impress us? Who doesn't want to be recognised these days? Isn't this the reason he wanted rank 1?
He was only for answer writing speed practice😂
Aditya srivasthava ki relatives original I'd se aao😂
This is really really constructive. Haven't seen someone correct a paper. You are teaching what coaching institutes do not teach. I'm awaiting for more of your toppers paper correction.
People commenting here... tune kitni baar diya h, guys I hope tm log bhi prepare kr rhe ho UPSC k liye, do these answer satisfy you?
Moreover, I think the goal here is to see what points Aditya missed while reading or simply understanding the question.
His answer sure does not fully grasp the essence of what was asked in the question. Even his mock Interviews are not that great, if you analyze it as a student not as a fan. Ye baat alag h ki exam hall me kitna focus bach pata hoga. And I believe competitive exams has luck factor >> effort. Also people checking the copies are human.
The simple question you need to ask is... kya aap ko Aditya k answer thik lge... kya aap same format follow kroge khud exam dete time. If yes, Please do so. Apne ko learning better krni h taki khud top kr ske... its great that he got AIR 1 but Aditya ko sar pe bitha k kya milna h. And I think even he would agree.
These answers, even in mock tests, are not perfect but they are satisfactory. I would say they are average. I started studying in the last 8 months and I am able to write such answers, which are definitely not going to help me score among toppers. I know this is not it, I know I have to improve and write much more detailed answers.
Yes, detail is what the above answer sheet is lacking.
In any case, without taking sides, I would say that the UA-camr should have mentioned that it is a mock sheet (obviously), then he would not have been getting comments like "apne labhi diya h".
He must have given it because he has full knowledge of answer writing, which most students are not able to grasp in a year.
Thank you sir to advice and mistakes in answer writting skills continue your work ignore haters❤❤
Thanks for understanding that it’s for the benefit of all to learn and grow, nothing else. 100 comments should come here talking about best practices from this answer copy that can be used in writing your next answer. You all can be toppers, comment your strategy to be so that everyone can improve that. Be a dreamer!
Tumhare jaise copy check karega to koi bhi aspirant aspirant hi rah jayega wo koi service like nhi rahega,,,, upsc to dur ki baat hai 😂😂😂😂
baat to sahi kaha bhai
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Thank you sir . I completely agree with you. When ever I see toppers copies I also can't link it with demand of the questions how the toppers write it . I think I am wrong. How they generate such out of box poins in answers. I may be wrong I need to study more etc... . Now I am getting my confidence. Make more such eye opening videos sir
Bro destroyed in every sec😂😂
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@@LooserBOY2.0doka mila h kya tume? Dil tuta h lgta h
Sir please make more vdo like this
Interview me kabil hoga mentally ias officer ke lie ishilie rank 1 hua. Sirf notes ya handwriting acha hojane se number one nai hote?
Har koi judge krna start kr deta hai ..
ye test series ki copy hai and may be this copy of his initial test series when he attempted for 1 st time
Please sir continue the series...to know where we are going wrong
This is the way how to Teach and catch the mistake in answer writing
Thanks 👍
An IAS is a generalist of all sorts. So, he/she should have knowledge of almost everything in general not in pro level. Secondly, an IAS can't be radical/ irrational or overly judgemental/ critical about any situation. Therefore, one who doesn't possess these qualities is not eligible to judge his answer writing too.
Bhai log ab hme dekha nahi ja rha hai rank-1 ka copy me likha sara galat hai to wo air -1 aya kaise 😂😂😂😂😂
Bhai 🧐😂 wohito mai v. kabhi kabhi kudpe doubt hone lagte hain 😂😂😂😂 semester final mai jo subject ko adsase likh nahin pate wohi pe highest scored. Hojate hain 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
Ye mock test he bro..real answersheet nhi he
😂😅bhai pata hai mark kitne hain ? 1077 out of 2025. Usiko air 1 bolte hain samjhe. Upsc mai 50 % lana bhi upsc toppers ke liye muskil hai. Highest score ever secured in upsc was 1126 by Anudeep Sir 🎉❤
@@BIKASHa7b mock test hai par vo pehle se hi ips the to tum samajh hi sakte ho ki , writing skill pehle se hi achha hoga
Usne likha Bhagat Singh was born in 1898 but real ans 1907 hai
Good analysis ❤ 10:48
Muhe yeh aisa lagta he ki ueh uski real answer copy nahi he yeh mock test ki answer key ho sakti he who agree me 😅
Bro which rank are you.
Ye mock papers ke answer copies hai.
Difference between a UA-camr and an IAS ❤😂
I wrote 2 mains but i always got less marks but unfortunately i have not even go throgh my answer now i got where i was stuck every time thanks to the man for analysing the answer key
Thankyou sir ❤ I really appreciate this
His answer is unique that's why he got unique rank 😅😂
Keep continue this series ,it will help to serious aspirants , not for other who dont know about anything and till commented .
"Nation resides not on land but in the minds" is actually given by Sri Gurazada Apparao in telugu known as Desam ante Matti kaadoi Desamante Manushuloi in his Desamanu preminchumanna Manchi annadi penchumanna Poem.
review ❌ roast ✅
3:58 as far as I know sanchi stupa was built during Mauryan Empire , not Gupta
Yeah bro..i think Ashoka started it ..
Guys this video is a perfect example of how to write differences between an IAS and a youtuber 😂
6:53 bro is real right wing trying his best to impress bjp 😂😂
Chapri youtuber .... Report Kiya Maine... Saare report Karo chapri ko
According to him A Topper should be awarded minus maks and he should be given full marks.
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Apna rank pata dijiye janab ya prelims h clear nahi jar paya? Dekh rah hai to reply zaroor katna thankyou
I have a doubt. Why any coaching institutes don't show checked copies of the topper? And why don't they show how toppers improved?
How he become rank 1. If his answer is bad
Answer is enough ❤
Agree not even single answer was perfect....🥺🥺🥺😭😭😔😔😔
What colours is your rank ?
Keep up the good work, it will help many aspirants in avoiding these kind of mistakes 👍
I don't know why some of you took it as ' youtuber vs IAS 1st Rank' and all sorts! But being a State PCS aspirant myself, I expect more elaborate and concise answer within the specified word limit. State PCS examiners would probably give like 3-4/10 at best for every answer here. I know UPSC is way above there, I'm not comparing State PCS and UPSC, but I'm only referring to this particular answer writing here which lacks formal/proper introductions, main bodies given in points are neither properly elaborated, and some answers are not consicse at all, deviating from the questions being asked. Whatever I think that this is just a mock test and he's not giving much effort at all.. Regardless, still, the answers doesn't meet the demand of the questions to my opinion.
What type of handwriting you want sr like a school student
Maybe he improved a lot during the exam. But the answers looked biased. The main point there real revolution was brought by Gandhiji. This will get him 0 marks in any upsc answer. You cannot take biased.
Review ❌ roast ✅
Please continue this series 💝💝💝💝
Develop skills of acceptance
Bro everyone is commenting "he is a civil servant, and you are youtuber" and so and so. But I want to ask you whether are you a UPSC Evaluator or Paper setter? Who are you to evaluate and judge and decide what questions to be set in UPSC and AIR 1 Candidate?
Your paper is also compared and corrected in the same way ........
Then we can nominate you as # rank1
Thank🙏☀️ you for your analysis
UA-camrs tum kitne rank layethe jaaraa batao ...
After seeing this....i think I need appear UPSE... that's how i write in exam apna man marji 😅😂
I want to became IAS in future and now I study in class 9. How can i become an IAS?
FOR NOW YOU HAVE TO STUDY PROPERLY 9.10.11.&12 JUST FOR THE BESIC CONCEPTS WICH ARE INCLUDED IN SYLLABUS THEN AFTER GRADUATION YOU HAVE TP WORK HARD I HOPE YOU WILL GET SUCCESS
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Sir please air 2 animesh Pradhan and air 6 shristi dabas mam pe ye series continue kriye. I find their answers to be better than air 1
I like your way of evaluating answers❤
Lamo what are saying??
Very constructive review!
Thats why he is ias officer rank 1 and you are struggling youtuber😢
This ia really helpful
Series ko continue rakhna bro part 2 ka wait rahega agli baar air 2 ke answers ka critical evaluation karan
Q.Critically examine the answer Paper of first Rank holder. [15] 😂😂😂
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Sir app ka preliminary exam kab clear kiaa tha
Mujhe toh ye ni samjh aa raha check krne wale ne kese saha is hand writing ko
He said that Hardwork vs knowledge and tricks
Bhai kya bat hai nice ❤app kab de rhe ho attempt 😂
Ye Hai Nakli Exam Ka Nakli Checker😂😂
This dude is like teacher..who used to give below 5 out of 10. No matter how nice answer is😂.
Bro is making his own happiness
App log inko bol rhe ho ki " rank 1 holder se jalo nhi" ,bhaiyo ham logo ne khud kabhi koi answer nhi likha hai UPSC ka.atleast Jo answer judge kr rha hai usko jankaari toh hai answers likhne ki aur answers check krne ki
Aapka hisaab se Aap UPSC mein kya change kerna chya ga
Me tho B.A se graduate hua logo ko es exam mein bathne se hee mana ker duga because selection tho B.Tech, B. Com, and BSC etc walo ka ho rya hai
bro you are this much intelligent than sure you are next topper of india all exams but you dont gets in pre also 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
The best part is a youtuber is judging an answerscript of a IAS TOPPER 😂
Bro missed out the part that one can't know everything
It is very difficult to find checked copy of COACHING INSTITUTE because UPSC DON'T FOLLOW INSTITUTE SYNOPSIS
Then how he got rank one ?? One of question of you ..
Bhai apka rank kitna ayatha, thoda bataiye...1 se 500 ke andar ayatha..?
Sanchi stupa was built by ASHOKA, Mauryan rular ( not Gupta)
Sanchi stupa built by Ashoka but it was initially a small stupa. Later pushyamitra sunga destroyed it and it was rebuilt and enlarged by Agnimitra of Sunga dynasty. Guptas also made certain changes on the toranas of Sanchi stupa
Completely agreed brother
Yeh mujhe Asli copy kyun nhi lagg rhi hai😂😂😅😅
Tune Kitna bar mains Dia hain jo aditya Shrivastava k criticize kar raha hain?....Abe par Jake....
Shi hai bhai aise kisi ko judge nhi kar sakte ye log aayog ne kuch soch kar hi air 1 di hai Aditya ko ❤❤
You indirectly teasing to him ❤😅
Yes we need more analysis ❤
bro tum hi agla ranker banega i'm 100% sure bhai tumhe rank ko defeat karne ki skill hai
I think UPSC is not at all logical … but we need to know many things and put on paper that’s it.. no logical thinking is required..I think it’s suitable for mostly girls ..
Your rank in 2022?? 😂 Atleast he got rank in UPSC😊
Sir sir big fan from which cadre are u from
Aapko toh direct cabinet secretary bana dena chahiye
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Teasing an aspirant having too much knowledge & experience😂
What a review bro😂😂😂😂😂
When this video saw Aditya Srivastava he told "a gari nikal 😂😂"
Samajh raha hun bhai jalan ho raha hai bahut Jor ki😂😂😂
Tq sir
Your dream will always be a dream
Yess bhai sahii kaha kisi ke success se iska gand jal raha haii bhai rank 1 ka paper check kar raha hai or bol raha haii ki waste haii sala
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Upsc mai isko bithao guys🥹
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@@avikabunty padle saale...godl ko support karne se ghar nhi chalega 💛
Then mains cutoff will be 100 out of 1750😅😅😅
I am impressed bro 🤜🤜..