"Dipper Goes To Taco Bell" (Gravity Falls Creepypasta) by Anon (Review/Theory/Final Thoughts)

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  • Опубліковано 23 сер 2024
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    What my UA-cam channel was created for, was originally to narrate Lost Episode Creepypastas and the like. Why would I do that? Well to be honest with all of you, I feel as though the "Lost Episode" genera of Creepypastas seems to be a subject that nobody else would really cover..so I decided to dedicate my channel to nearly forgotten subject. However, as the years went by, I've vehemently decided to start reviewing the stories that I narrate, in order to help future writers of all sorts learn from their mistakes, and strive to do better.
    Now, please understand one major thing...and hear me out on this good. I DO NOT criticize stories just for the sake of being a jerk to others. While I certainly can get rather annoyed, and a bit angry, at the constant usage of cliches and bad grammar in a storyline, I only do it for the sake of the author, and out of love for all my fellow Creepypasta writers.

    With that said though, I've decided against ranting as much as I have done in the past, and instead focus on breaking down the story paragraph by paragraph to point out the storyline, plot development, proper description,, the grammar, any and all cliches, and lastly the punctuation marks...ect.
    Music provided by Free Music Tunes
    Track: AVIIRA - Tyranny
    Link: • Video
    Link to the Various Music Artist and Works that I use in my videos:
    Myuu: / myuuji
    Kevin McLeod: • Kevin MacLeod ~ Sneaky...
    Lucas King: / lucaskingpiano
    (Please Note that most stories on this channel are written by Anonymous People on the internet, and will be labeled that way unless specified otherwise)
    Most of the Creepypastas that I do get on this website are from the Wayback machine. However, due to Creepypasta Wiki moving over to Fandom.com, those links are pretty much gone, but I have saved the archived links for anyone who's interested in checking these stories out.
    web.archive.or...
    Hope you all have a great day!
    #TheShadowReader #Creepypastas #LiteraryCriticism #Liturature #English #Grammer #LostEpisodes #TheBackyardigans

КОМЕНТАРІ • 107

  • @TheDarkAuthor666
    @TheDarkAuthor666 4 роки тому +30

    Shadow can I send the incident series for you to cover on your channel sometime in the future?

  • @RangerQwerty
    @RangerQwerty 4 роки тому +52

    For being possibly the worst fanfiction of all time, Grunkle Stan do be spittin' cold hard facts. He's the real winner in this story.

  • @1Soniccool
    @1Soniccool 4 роки тому +36

    Well, this turned into what Sweet Apple Massacre is but instead of MLP characters it’s Gravity Falls. I think Cipher will never touch this because it would rip the Disney Animation Universe in half so bad that Mickey can’t save it in time

  • @ericahart711
    @ericahart711 4 роки тому +26

    🤮🤬😠😫😭😓🔫
    What I expected: Dipper goes to the bathroom and does his business. Once he was done the crap gathered itself and formed into a crap monster and ate the whole town!
    Reality: well, I was going to eat breakfast but now I think I'm just going to barf and take a shower.

  • @LovelessPrince
    @LovelessPrince 4 роки тому +22

    Me: Sweet! A gravity falls creepypasta.
    •few minutes latter•
    Me: ....W..What!!

  • @journeycatsvlogs9937
    @journeycatsvlogs9937 4 роки тому +15

    I first read this story to see what all the fuss was about. I expected to feel disgusted, but I came out of it more or less indifferent, maybe a gag or two. The internet has mostly desensitized me.

  • @redactedduetosafetyreasons
    @redactedduetosafetyreasons 4 роки тому +19

    *Hears The Warning*
    My Childhood Was Ruined Before This Video. So No Big Deal

  • @Mangonade69420
    @Mangonade69420 3 роки тому +6

    Someone sat down and proceeded to type this out and publish it

  • @the_autism_express
    @the_autism_express 4 роки тому +28

    I have a question for god...
    *WWHHHHHYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!*

  • @TheDarkCats303
    @TheDarkCats303 4 роки тому +13

    I have suffered so much because of this disgusting story I want to go to area 51 now

  • @joeylopez2385
    @joeylopez2385 4 роки тому +14

    I'm scared to go to taco Bell now

  • @default4809
    @default4809 3 роки тому +6

    0:21 You sound like penguinz0 in this video or sound like you're trying to impersonate him. That's almost exactly what his voice sounds like except it's a little deeper and more manly.

  • @ultimatower1678
    @ultimatower1678 3 роки тому +8

    No matter how many painkillers i take i still cant numb the pain.

  • @nigelhitsthebong
    @nigelhitsthebong 4 роки тому +10

    How is this not age restricted

  • @redacculous
    @redacculous 4 роки тому +8

    This is the name of a Jallerbo YTP! And she's the master of YTPing!

  • @kittenpaws8896
    @kittenpaws8896 4 роки тому +8

    22:33 this was so funny as hell marbel couldn't even speak up XD 🤣🤣🤣

  • @malikarsyasakani
    @malikarsyasakani 4 роки тому +5

    I found out what the Mabel Dipper part is.
    I don’t want to tell what happened.

  • @elfenlied_girl1238
    @elfenlied_girl1238 3 роки тому +5

    The fan fiction disturbed me beyond words could describe....

  • @haileykitty6993
    @haileykitty6993 4 роки тому +7

    MASTAofTehcitrisFruits did this mess! 😡

  • @Queen_Sakura
    @Queen_Sakura 4 роки тому +5

    I was eating while listening...

  • @junipermoth
    @junipermoth 4 роки тому +9

    Why.. Shadow Reader, *why* did you subject yourself to this madness?! No!! No!!

  • @nigelhitsthebong
    @nigelhitsthebong 4 роки тому +5

    I think this is a fanfiction

  • @ItsMeJustyt
    @ItsMeJustyt 4 роки тому +5

    Whoa

  • @somefatfuckwiththeinfinity6475
    @somefatfuckwiththeinfinity6475 4 роки тому +4

    Sourcream and chocolate
    G I wonder what it is the chocolate and sour cream

  • @TheTjMillsShow
    @TheTjMillsShow 5 днів тому

    Imagine if it was revealed to be Bill that made this “Lost Episode”💀

  • @ploirs1414
    @ploirs1414 3 роки тому +3

    i am twamitized

  • @trainlover123trainsrock
    @trainlover123trainsrock 3 роки тому +4

    Wow I never expected a ytp would get a creepypasta!

  • @lisettegarcia7013
    @lisettegarcia7013 3 роки тому +4

    Shadowreader, I'm sorry this happened to you but I have this story printed and still have it too. I was even about to dare my old friend from high school to read the story.

  • @eisenfaust2888
    @eisenfaust2888 3 роки тому +5

    I wanna scream like KSI does when he plays a scary game

  • @malikarsyasakani
    @malikarsyasakani 4 роки тому +7

    Look, my favorite fetish is Breast Expansion (sometimes muscle growth). But this... Where do I began!?

  • @haileykitty6993
    @haileykitty6993 4 роки тому +7

    Why the hell would someone make this crap? Like, this is sweet apple massacre related.

  • @theshadowgeneral1759
    @theshadowgeneral1759 4 роки тому +3

    Oh god its all coming back to me...im gonna be sick

  • @magicalpasta5462
    @magicalpasta5462 Місяць тому

    I thought I was traumatized by my dad's death and abusive ex relationships, but this is terrifying 😨😭

  • @RealK0median
    @RealK0median 14 днів тому

    I feel like scratching all the skin off my face while listening to this

  • @RNGvideoinator
    @RNGvideoinator Місяць тому +1

    do you think that god stays in heaven because he too, fears what he has created?

  • @mohammadrezapahlavi4578
    @mohammadrezapahlavi4578 3 роки тому +3

    this shit may have been a fucking degen fanfic but holy fuck it was hot

  • @hduniverse1631
    @hduniverse1631 4 роки тому +10

    In my opinion, this is one of the worst stories along with The Pokemon Story and Sweet Apple Massacre.

    • @the_autism_express
      @the_autism_express 4 роки тому +1

      Trust me, this makes sweet Apple massacre seem like a fairy tale...

    • @FaygoTheClown
      @FaygoTheClown 4 роки тому +3

      What is "the pokemon story"? Or is that the name?

    • @the_autism_express
      @the_autism_express 4 роки тому +1

      @@FaygoTheClown I don't know, but I'm sure I don't want to.

    • @digitmidget6973
      @digitmidget6973 4 роки тому +1

      @@FaygoTheClown YOU DON'T WANNA FUCKING KNOW. The only detail I'll give you is that story involves a gardevoir...

    • @malikarsyasakani
      @malikarsyasakani 4 роки тому +1

      ORE THE ULTIMATE THOT SLAYER 69 • 999 years ago please, I need to read it

  • @kittenpaws8896
    @kittenpaws8896 4 роки тому +8

    I died when you said the police are coming for you 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 this is why I like you shadow reader

  • @juanveral6167
    @juanveral6167 4 роки тому +3

    Fun fact this creepypasta is inspired by a you tube poop!

  • @bradenbakertv1903
    @bradenbakertv1903 3 роки тому +3

    Why would dipper do that???

  • @theshadowkitty8838
    @theshadowkitty8838 4 роки тому +4

    I'm scarred for life..........

  • @elisabethleverton195
    @elisabethleverton195 3 роки тому +2

    I thought you were going to throw your phone out the window

  • @JacksonsLegendary
    @JacksonsLegendary 4 роки тому +4

    Hey Shadow did you get my Story?

  • @extrememediamaster1432
    @extrememediamaster1432 4 роки тому +4

    Re-upload Sofia the first crown cancer

  • @edrickSTUF2523
    @edrickSTUF2523 4 роки тому +4

    Its once again been a while since i've seen your channel.
    And i'm not sure if i said this already but your voice sounds way different than i remember it being.
    You sound like you're trying to do a patrick impression throughout the whole video except when doing the characters.

  • @theshadowgeneral1759
    @theshadowgeneral1759 4 роки тому +5

    I remember this one...it was on troll pasta.....most disgusting story ever made...

    • @TheDarkCats303
      @TheDarkCats303 3 роки тому

      @@SpaceVoyager1701 I Can Only Image if there was Actually a Horror Movie that was Just Like Sweet Apple Massacre or Dipper Goes to Taco Bell.

  • @Batmanbin
    @Batmanbin Місяць тому

    Here’s how I would rewrite this, maybe instead of dipper getting diarrhoea maybe he could get possessed by the taco

  • @anangryjuicebox2799
    @anangryjuicebox2799 2 роки тому +3

    Oh you did read this?

  • @theisaiashow3411
    @theisaiashow3411 2 роки тому +2

    It’s really funny When she’s stuttering and you did that slurping sound it’s really funny

  • @SmugProductions
    @SmugProductions 2 місяці тому

    Just an average taco bell going experience
    Edit: Well, now I just feel disgusting

  • @mariasoliz1194
    @mariasoliz1194 4 роки тому +4

    I'm going to throw up

  • @juniorsofjumping
    @juniorsofjumping 3 роки тому +2

    "MY EYES"

  • @jamesoconnor2520
    @jamesoconnor2520 3 роки тому +2

    Why does he sound like Sans?

  • @ericpagan5515
    @ericpagan5515 4 роки тому +2

    Loud house luan cigarettes

  • @Sliceloll
    @Sliceloll 4 роки тому +4

    Hello

  • @gracieriley7518
    @gracieriley7518 Рік тому +1

    OH. OH MY F#$%KING GOD....

  • @Brett_Gamingg
    @Brett_Gamingg 3 роки тому +1

    I’m probably gonna quit after a couple minutes in cuz I’m watching this kinda

  • @nicoaustin5342
    @nicoaustin5342 Рік тому +2

    Why does this sound like moest critical in this video

  • @deathpanda1904
    @deathpanda1904 Місяць тому +1

    My reaction:................*speechless* 😶😐🤮🤢

  • @rusva3755
    @rusva3755 4 роки тому +2

    Hi! Its been a while hasn't it? I'll admit, not a lot of stories make me sick, but this one kinda made me sick. This is slightly worse than Sweet Apple Massacre.

  • @Prestonkarnold
    @Prestonkarnold Місяць тому +1

    My Number 2 LEAST Favorite Creepypasta
    And number 1 is Obviously Sweet apple massacre

  • @elisabethleverton195
    @elisabethleverton195 3 роки тому +4

    This is too cringe

  • @IzzyC.09
    @IzzyC.09 3 роки тому +2

    you kinda sound like moist critical-

  • @kittenpaws8896
    @kittenpaws8896 4 роки тому +6

    I'm to late.... :(

  • @-Nibbles-
    @-Nibbles- 3 роки тому +3

    Tbh, I thought this was a funnypasta until it just kept getting worse and worse. I could barely handle hearing what you were willing to read, your censors only making it slightly better. This was horrible 🤮

  • @Brett_Gamingg
    @Brett_Gamingg 3 роки тому +1

    Now I’m done

  • @crown1312
    @crown1312 4 роки тому +2

    Me after hearing this story 😧🤮

  • @TheVoidofemptiness
    @TheVoidofemptiness 4 роки тому +2

    Oh god not this

  • @priyasall
    @priyasall 4 роки тому +2

    What the hell was this piece of crap today

  • @wolfgangamadeusmozart1293
    @wolfgangamadeusmozart1293 4 роки тому +5

    Funny stort

  • @matthewbumford728
    @matthewbumford728 4 роки тому +2

    So sick and wrong! Not even Luca Brasi would make something this unspeakably awful.

  • @sakaihardy7550
    @sakaihardy7550 3 роки тому +3

    The story is very weird and gross

  • @shifting-stars
    @shifting-stars 4 роки тому +3

    I read the entire story once and I actually hated it- It was terrible

  • @sonicbros3313
    @sonicbros3313 4 роки тому +2

    WTF

  • @chanceboystique6462
    @chanceboystique6462 3 роки тому

    Can you reupload the total dramarama lost episode

  • @raymondrivera9561
    @raymondrivera9561 3 роки тому +3

    This is disgusting this has to be one of the worst stories on your channel

  • @tinymeatball4297
    @tinymeatball4297 3 роки тому +1

    i-
    whoever made this is a sin themselves-

  • @robby7499
    @robby7499 3 роки тому +2

    Funny s*it, mostly your reactions to it.

  • @crush1an
    @crush1an 4 роки тому +5

    First

  • @cW20070
    @cW20070 3 роки тому

    Shadow I’m sorry I send that in this video

  • @evanrichardson4744
    @evanrichardson4744 3 роки тому +1

    Why didn’t I click off why couldn’t I just listen to that warning 🤮

  • @user-hu7im2si8y
    @user-hu7im2si8y 3 роки тому

    Спасибо за субтитры

  • @sydneyallen1195
    @sydneyallen1195 4 дні тому

    Ummm why was this made this is horrible but only a little bit thought and you don't need to do this one you know right i know why you want to but you seem too struggled a lot of it as well so not do it again
    shadow you know what to do about your last post can you please tack care of it even the other ones as well and other people's that needed a answer from you as well

  • @GerardProduction
    @GerardProduction 2 роки тому +2

    🤮

  • @cW20070
    @cW20070 3 роки тому

    Plz delete it