I am very mind blown on how fast you came up with your hooks lol 🤭 you also have a very beautiful voice. Thank you for this video! I will say one thing I struggle with is actually letting the beat breathe and trying to add too much stuff in at once, but this video has helped me ❤
shihhh u sound better then them singing them songs , AND YOU CAME UP WITH IT CAUSE MOST THEM GIRLS DONT EVEN KNOW HOW TO WRITE THEY OWN MUSIC AND KILL IT LIKE THIS , keep it up 💯🙏🏼
the final version at the end had me shaking in my boots !!!! you really understood the assignment i learn so much from all ur lyrics vids, thank u so much
I feel like I have to add you to my songwriting credits, because I have learned too much from you!!! I want you to write me a song!!!! Your amazing, for real ❤❤❤❤
i just found your channel while going thru writers block heavy. as a male artist i never really looked at female singers as examples bc i never rly thought i could sing like that. but writing like that is important. thank u for this video its helping me a lot rn
Girl u are cold as hell! I checked out your brandy video. You capture artist's style PERFECTLY! From one songwriter to another, u got the juice mama. I hella subscribed!
omg this is amazing, i love this!!! wowww. btw do u ever heard the new black r&b girlgroup “FLO”??? they are so good i think u shoud do a video “how to write a song like FLO” lol 🫶🏽 i will love!
You are absolutely amazing! Thank you so much for sharing your knowledge. This video was incredibly valuable. I am so excited to discover the rest of your channel ❤️🔥
I feel like Sza's song 'Good Days' is a literal poem. The lyrics are absoultely amazing. By far, one of my favorite songs period.
I am very mind blown on how fast you came up with your hooks lol 🤭 you also have a very beautiful voice. Thank you for this video! I will say one thing I struggle with is actually letting the beat breathe and trying to add too much stuff in at once, but this video has helped me ❤
TY for watching! 💖
shihhh u sound better then them singing them songs , AND YOU CAME UP WITH IT CAUSE MOST THEM GIRLS DONT EVEN KNOW HOW TO WRITE THEY OWN MUSIC AND KILL IT LIKE THIS , keep it up 💯🙏🏼
I LOVE THIS SONG GIRL ITS STUCK IN MY HEAD
Yasss 😈 lol
The runs in the background sound just like how she does ,, you ate this up ❤
Thank u!!! 💜
the final version at the end had me shaking in my boots !!!! you really understood the assignment i learn so much from all ur lyrics vids, thank u so much
Aww tysm!! So glad that you liked it!!! 💖
The Adlibs were soo SZAAAA
The writting sounds so SZA
Do Whitney houston!
I feel like I have to add you to my songwriting credits, because I have learned too much from you!!! I want you to write me a song!!!! Your amazing, for real ❤❤❤❤
Aww Tysm!!! 💖
Whoa....holup. Dis need to be in the radio
"sings in cursive" that's dope =D
that could be a whole song.
She sings in cursive, even when she cursin close the curtains shit gets so dark it's immersive... O.o
SHE DID IT AGAIN!!!! 🔥🔥🔥🔥
You ate this up with no crumbs 🍽️🍽️😋😋🔥🔥🔥 I subscribe and I will go stream. Much abundance and success to you!
thank you! Really appreciate the support 🫶🏽❤️
you are so talented omfg!!!! can you make a song like H.E.R or Jhene aiko?!! plzzzzz i just know you would eat that shit uppppp
Tysm!! 💖 Jhene & H.E.R are on my list. Sometimes i have a hard time finding good beats that match the artist but those are coming soon.
This was incredible to watch!! And to see final result just blew my mind. You have such a cool mind and you are extremely talented!!
Tysm 🫶🏾💖
I got chills...this was incredible, thanks for sharing this! ❤️❤️❤️
Glad you enjoyed it!
YOU DID AMAZING, I was singing along here and there 🤦🏾♂️🤦🏾♂️🤣🤣🦾🦾💯💯🎧✨✨😎
thank you!! ❤️
i just found your channel while going thru writers block heavy. as a male artist i never really looked at female singers as examples bc i never rly thought i could sing like that. but writing like that is important. thank u for this video its helping me a lot rn
So glad my video helped you! 💖
Girl this is so good
thank u!!
woooww you rlly did thattt!! its very much giving szaaaaa
oh my gosh not this song in my head LMAOO💕
Yasss!!!! 🤣🫶🏽
Aw it’s the way you knew you were eating this up too 😭🥹
😂 I be feeling it! 💖
this is so good! i really think its the best song to come out of these songwriting videoss!
Tysm!! 💖
Definetly!
You’re very talented 🙏🏾💕💕
Thank you!!!
Girl u are cold as hell! I checked out your brandy video. You capture artist's style PERFECTLY! From one songwriter to another, u got the juice mama. I hella subscribed!
Thanks so much love!!
you absolutely killed thisssss wow
Very talented!!! THANK YOU FOR SHARING!!!
Thank you!! 🩷
The background vocals 🔥🔥
I love how u explaining these concepts
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ON POINT
u baaack! i have to tell u girl your ep is amazing. you ATE those melodies and lyrics!!! i’m excited to see what u dropping next fr 🫶🏽
Thank youuu!!!! I’ll be working on some new music next month!! 💖
When you gonna put this on streaming cause you devoured thissss 😭💞💞
💖 I’m gonna add to the song & post it here & SoundCloud in a couple of weeks.
@@irisilani YAYYYYYYYY
Thank youuuuu 🤩🤩✨
It's amazing, I love your content, thx for this video 🫶🏾✨✨
you’re welcome! 💗
wow you’re so talented i’m speechless i love everything about this
Thank u!!!
You never misss always impressed after the videos
Thank you!! 💖
you are amazing i am literally writing with you
Ty!! 💖✨
damn…. U got it instantly
You’re incredible sis I learned alot from this 🔥
Thank you! ✨Glad it was helpful! 💖
This is vibey tho❤❤😊
🎵 This beat has got me feeling like 🔥! Can't wait to turn up the volume and let my voice ride this wave 🌊🎶. Pure magic! 🌟
Sza NEEDS to see this and put it on LANA 😭🤍
that would be a dream 🥹😍
your channel is beautiful im surprised it's not blown up yet you're doing amazing. thank you for posting this sending love!!
Awww thank you so much love!! 💖
omg this is amazing, i love this!!! wowww. btw do u ever heard the new black r&b girlgroup “FLO”??? they are so good i think u shoud do a video “how to write a song like FLO” lol 🫶🏽 i will love!
I love Flo! I’ve been researching the writer of Cardboard Box. They are definitely on my list.
@@irisilani yesss! the girls wrote this one with @mnek and @savannahjada!!! they are so good!
You are so amazing
Aww thank you!! 💖💖
Sounds good your writing process is very creative
thank you! ✨💖
This is fire
Thank you! 💖
You did that! 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
Thank you!!!
im late to the party but this real nice
thank u!! You’re not late at all I’m just getting started 💕✨
AMAZINGG ❤❤
obsessed with this😍
Thank u!! 💕
New subscriber🎉. Love your writing process.
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOOOOOOOOOOVE IT
I looove this, will you upload it anywhere soon ? on soundcloud maybe ?
I’m going to make some changes to it and post it on here & SC as an official demo soon 💖
can you put this on streamin platforms ??, i love it sm omg 😭 (im actually begging you to put it on streamin platforms)
I’m actually gonna add to the song and post here & SoundCloud soon
@@irisilani ugh thank you SO much
This sounds like summer walker a bit ❤
what summer songs sound like this? i need to hearrrr
@@darthestaaar her voice sounds like summer!!
THIS IS SO SICK!
Ngl you hard, I think sea would sing this
Thank you!!! 💖
Could you do Mariah the scientist?
This is so cool omg
I'm mesmerized with your pen, u such a great artist! luv the song!! girl I'm fool for u!!!
Thank you!! 💖
You are absolutely amazing! Thank you so much for sharing your knowledge. This video was incredibly valuable. I am so excited to discover the rest of your channel ❤️🔥
Thank you!! 💓I appreciate the love!!
LOVEEEEEE THIS!
Thank you!! 💖
You blacked on this! Brava!!! 🎉
Thanks love!! 💖
Great video! I learned a lot and I think im your 1000th subscriber lol
You were!!!! 💖 thank you!!
@@irisilani Lol ayee, monetization otw!! Glad I cuold help!!
@@ohwordfrench 💕💕
you should join a songwriting camp, i just joined one for nyc, and i think you would be a great contribution to the room!
definitely gonna join one now that I’m gonna be in LA 💕✨
Hey @ohhancil I’m a songwriter myself and I live in nyc which one are talking about??
I’m in awee!!!! This was amazing 🙌🏾
Tysm!! 💖🫶🏽
go off!
Omg 😮
This was next levellll 💅🏽✨
Thank you!! 💖☺️
🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Thank you!! 😊
This was fire 🔥
thank you!! 💕
Love this!
Thank you Jaela!! 💖
👏👏👏
I wrote a song to this beat too
This sounds just like her songs
Thank you!!!
can i buy this song from you?? lmao i being so for real its just too perfect.
thank you love!! not currently selling tho 💖
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where do u record your music?
Various studios in cali or i do it myself. I recorded the song on my latest video myself
Can you do Mariah the Scientist?
Are you looking for any singers to sing your songs
If you talk to the right people, you'll find great placements in the industry tho songwritters earn shite.
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