Rose Etude No. 1 - Attempt #2

This is the second attempt at playing the Rose Etude #1.
For the next attempt, I should...
1- Check rhythms at m28, 31, 32 and 39
I tried to solve these problems from last try :
1- Tongue every phrase
2- Do more nuance
2- Play a D# instead of a D natural at m23
3- Be more clear in my note at m31
Composer: Rose, Cyrille
Piece Style: Romantic