This sounds like 15 different "what if" stitch together, I keep hearing parts I know are from other stories it just so confusing though I got to say it works
Bruh this fanfic kinda started mostly original up until the cannibalistic Purana hero was introduced then this fanfic's writer started copying from other peoples fics, hell at times almost word for word mostly from this one fanfic about Izuku becoming Batman that takes down criminals and corrupt heroes because his mom was killed by a corrupt hero when he was like 6 or something
Honestly I would’ve liked this story a lot if it was a bit more original. There are so many passages and dialogues that I recognize from other people’s fics that it lacks cohesion. It’s one thing to be inspired by other people’s works but when you try to piece together aspects and interactions straight from those other works it’s very obvious. Especially when there are dialogues and statements that lacked pre-established context. Things like Izuku’s relationship with Melissa Shield and Eraserhead’s comment of “it’s fine so long as the kid continues to stay out of fights” after hearing a report of Izuku fighting criminals. To be clear I liked a lot of the other fanfics that were referenced in this one, and I want to like this fic as well, however I can’t. This feels like an amalgamation of other people’s fanfics pieced together rather than trying to be it’s own thing, and for that reason I just can’t enjoy it.
What if deku married team rwby and Velvet, Coco part 1. Deku have boost gear in rwby universe. Deku become a hero in rwby universe. Please do it 😃🙏!!!!!
What if deku married team rwby and Velvet Coco part 1. Deku have kratos god of war ragnarok power in rwby universe. Deku have six son from his wife. Please do it 😃🙏!!!!
Bakugou said "2 mess buns and yellows eyes with slit puplis" i paused and thought "toga?" 😭😂😂😂
1:12:51 “Why do I hear boss music?” 🤨
2:39:40 “Why do I hear boss music?” PT2
1:32:14 The team has assembled
2:14:45 You should not be relieved my friend, there is an army after you
We need part 2... this is a great story 😂love it ❤
This sounds like 15 different "what if" stitch together, I keep hearing parts I know are from other stories it just so confusing though I got to say it works
Please please please please please pleaaaaaaaasssssse make part 2.
I love this what if series 😇😇😇😇
does anyone realize he is just a japan batman
Well I was inspired by a story called 'the hero we need'.
It should be Bush man
Bruh this fanfic kinda started mostly original up until the cannibalistic Purana hero was introduced then this fanfic's writer started copying from other peoples fics, hell at times almost word for word mostly from this one fanfic about Izuku becoming Batman that takes down criminals and corrupt heroes because his mom was killed by a corrupt hero when he was like 6 or something
This is gold 😅😅😂😂
"I'm vengeance,"
Please add part 2 when I add more chapters.
ohk
Part 2 please 🙏🏼
15:25 thru 17:05 sound almost exactly to deku sensei I can't remember which chapter but it like the first 5 somewhere there
We need part 2
Honestly I would’ve liked this story a lot if it was a bit more original. There are so many passages and dialogues that I recognize from other people’s fics that it lacks cohesion.
It’s one thing to be inspired by other people’s works but when you try to piece together aspects and interactions straight from those other works it’s very obvious. Especially when there are dialogues and statements that lacked pre-established context. Things like Izuku’s relationship with Melissa Shield and Eraserhead’s comment of “it’s fine so long as the kid continues to stay out of fights” after hearing a report of Izuku fighting criminals.
To be clear I liked a lot of the other fanfics that were referenced in this one, and I want to like this fic as well, however I can’t. This feels like an amalgamation of other people’s fanfics pieced together rather than trying to be it’s own thing, and for that reason I just can’t enjoy it.
hooe the next part come out soon
Is there a part 2?
No
Add part two please! From chapter 20 to 43
EVEN THE WORDING IS THE SAME 47:30 goof ahh green guid nock off
Does nobody read the title?
Add part two! I got a bunch of chapters and two new arcs!
The hate on Endeavor is top tier
Fr 😂
55:00 is a direct quote from the green guide wtf
Who makes a better Red Hood Jason Todd or Himeko Toga???? Please Part 2!!!!!!
Start countdown of 40 minutes you will get it.
Definitely Toga! She is more hilarious
By 3 more days I should get at least 10 more chapters!
Oohk let me know after finishing
Damn that fast
I heard this is a movie 😂😂
Is this the family of the wayn this is a knock off of batman😂😂😂😂
This is Batman
Is that bad?
oh and can I get the copy of the endeavor easy
To be honest, i dont really mind the lines taken from the green guide fic, it's actually funny to me.
why do so many of these make toga, or the crafter girl (brain dumb)or both friends
They are all cursing on endevor
why dose this remind me of batman?
He's just batman
Is that bad?
@@DekuvigilanceX2009-xv9yw I don't think it is
What if deku married team rwby and Velvet, Coco part 1. Deku have boost gear in rwby universe. Deku become a hero in rwby universe. Please do it 😃🙏!!!!!
link?
they think you write them@@DnWhatIf
What if deku married team rwby and Velvet Coco part 1. Deku have kratos god of war ragnarok power in rwby universe. Deku have six son from his wife. Please do it 😃🙏!!!!
link?
Green guide rip off goof ahh