Wile I did enjoy this I found it kinda annoying how rushed the family scenes are. Like you’re telling me a bullied child calls one of his guardians ‘dad’, on like there second day in the house? I just find it annoying when found family is apart of the story, but writers can’t make it longer? More fleshed out? That’s my only pet peeve. Other than that I LOVE the idea (spoilers) that all for one just was just banging woman with interesting quirks to see if his quirk somehow passed on 😂. This just adds a whole new layer onto the story, which kinda shown me how much control AFO has over the WHOLE of Japan. I’m only at 2:49:39 rn and probably have spent WAAAYYY to much time on this but, Oh well 🤷
@@Evekatpodfics I would also like to thank you though. I really enjoyed the concept and writing of this story! I can’t wait to go on A03 and continue to read your work :D
@@Danger_Beans I’m just stunned anyone liked it enough to read it let alone podfic it. But I am keeping an eye on the comments for ideas for the second version.
50% of Izuku's suffering is his fault. He made the decision to keep his quirk a secret, which resulted in him being bullied, abused, discriminated & abandoned by his mother. I'm not saying it's justified, but he is the fulcrum point. We, the readers, understand why he kept quiet about his quirk, but his mother doesn't & she suffered for it. Also, pretending to be quirkless does not help "Real Quirkless" people if anything it's an insult.
I'm not defending him but think about this His quirk let him change quirks the hero commission who we know has no morals should jump at that or villains if my quirk let me change quirks I would keep it secret to
@@zakdom19 thank you for the critique! It is exactly what was intended. An uncomfortable reflection of Izuku’s problem. He wants to use the quirk, but also doesn’t. He wants to see if he could have done it quirkless because he thinks it would help (even if he isn’t actually quirkless). I was trying for a little of cannon Izuku who is a nervous mess and confused Izuku who wants so many things he’s kind of unsure. I’ll make sure to focus it more in the sequel.
@Evekatpodfics no problem. I really like the story & have no problem with how the story is written, but it is just me judging in story Izuku's decision-making
Maybe this is too early to say (51:16) but, despite me liking the "power kept secret because people" stories (you ever herd the phrase the "this is why we can't have nice things"?), I have to wonder, if he can even modify his own quirk, why does he not get rid of the hand twitch thing, I mean If I didn't know better you would think MC is a druggie going through withdraw?
Over all I liked the idea but it quickly began to sound like just another everything is different but nothing changes story. Personally those get old fast.
@@Evekatpodfics NP. In all honesty, this is something that happens in fanfics allot. Sometimes it makes sense in what changed effected a bunch of people the same way, so they all grew together, but when the in about one thing or person, it will have a butterfly effect on them and those around them.
@@jeffdavis8590 I hope when I’m ready to write the new version someone will want to pod fic it too! It boggles my mind that anyone wants to read it never mind podfic it. But it does give me the warm fuzzies.
@@Evekatpodfics podfic? Sorry, I don't know that term. Never mind, google explained it. I would agree. In this day and age you need to know how what your writing will sound like out read out loud.
Wile I did enjoy this I found it kinda annoying how rushed the family scenes are. Like you’re telling me a bullied child calls one of his guardians ‘dad’, on like there second day in the house? I just find it annoying when found family is apart of the story, but writers can’t make it longer? More fleshed out? That’s my only pet peeve. Other than that I LOVE the idea (spoilers) that all for one just was just banging woman with interesting quirks to see if his quirk somehow passed on 😂. This just adds a whole new layer onto the story, which kinda shown me how much control AFO has over the WHOLE of Japan. I’m only at 2:49:39 rn and probably have spent WAAAYYY to much time on this but, Oh well 🤷
@@Danger_Beans thanks for the critique! I’m planning a second version that will be completely au!
@@Evekatpodfics I would also like to thank you though. I really enjoyed the concept and writing of this story! I can’t wait to go on A03 and continue to read your work :D
@@Danger_Beans I’m just stunned anyone liked it enough to read it let alone podfic it. But I am keeping an eye on the comments for ideas for the second version.
Part2 please 🙏 thank
Take a shot each time katsuki says deku in the first hour
Hahaha they did monoma dirty
I need a part two 😫😫😫
we need part 2 now
Is this going to have a part 2?
Because it is a good story.
50% of Izuku's suffering is his fault. He made the decision to keep his quirk a secret, which resulted in him being bullied, abused, discriminated & abandoned by his mother. I'm not saying it's justified, but he is the fulcrum point. We, the readers, understand why he kept quiet about his quirk, but his mother doesn't & she suffered for it. Also, pretending to be quirkless does not help "Real Quirkless" people if anything it's an insult.
I'm not defending him but think about this
His quirk let him change quirks the hero commission who we know has no morals should jump at that or villains if my quirk let me change quirks I would keep it secret to
@fireboy2maybe I understand his reasoning for keeping his quirk secret, but he didn't even tell his mom. Which means he trusted no one.
@@zakdom19 I wouldn't either
@@zakdom19 thank you for the critique! It is exactly what was intended. An uncomfortable reflection of Izuku’s problem. He wants to use the quirk, but also doesn’t. He wants to see if he could have done it quirkless because he thinks it would help (even if he isn’t actually quirkless). I was trying for a little of cannon Izuku who is a nervous mess and confused Izuku who wants so many things he’s kind of unsure. I’ll make sure to focus it more in the sequel.
@Evekatpodfics no problem. I really like the story & have no problem with how the story is written, but it is just me judging in story Izuku's decision-making
Part two please
Maybe this is too early to say (51:16) but, despite me liking the "power kept secret because people" stories (you ever herd the phrase the "this is why we can't have nice things"?), I have to wonder, if he can even modify his own quirk, why does he not get rid of the hand twitch thing, I mean If I didn't know better you would think MC is a druggie going through withdraw?
Please make a part 2
Episode 2 Please 😊😊😊❤❤❤
2:40:16
Please bring back the old voice
Over all I liked the idea but it quickly began to sound like just another everything is different but nothing changes story. Personally those get old fast.
I feel you
I’m the author! Thanks for the critique! I’m planning a second version that’s a complete au. But it won’t be coming out for a while.
@@Evekatpodfics NP. In all honesty, this is something that happens in fanfics allot. Sometimes it makes sense in what changed effected a bunch of people the same way, so they all grew together, but when the in about one thing or person, it will have a butterfly effect on them and those around them.
@@jeffdavis8590 I hope when I’m ready to write the new version someone will want to pod fic it too! It boggles my mind that anyone wants to read it never mind podfic it. But it does give me the warm fuzzies.
@@Evekatpodfics podfic? Sorry, I don't know that term. Never mind, google explained it. I would agree. In this day and age you need to know how what your writing will sound like out read out loud.
deku can just erase drawbacks
This fic for some reason just feels kinda off in some way
@@xatu6594 I’m the author. May I ask how so?
@@Evekatpodfics idk man it just gives me an uncanny feeling
@@xatu6594 ? Ok? Any suggestions?
@@Evekatpodfics as of now I think I would like to see any other fanfics you have made before giving any other reviews
@@xatu6594 have at it! I’m always open to legitimate criticism.
Add background music please, I bet I’m not the only person who zoned out after to long 🫠
Trigger warning: aizawa is gay in this story, he married present mic instead of Ms. Joke😢