@Adam Woodman I understand you want more stories in the alien invasion. It's definitely a cool story from what we herd so far. But with the character and his family dead. It would just feel forced in a part 2.
@@theonlineanimal6009 The main character isn't dead. The story is told from a first person point of view. It ends with the machine attacking the narrator, but never says he was hit. Since the narrator is alive to tell his story, seems like he survived somehow. Lets assume he is dead for a second, it would still be interesting to see from another point of view, a soldier for instance. I don't think that would feel forced at all.
@AJ McAteer lots of stories are told in 1st person even when the character dies. And given the context if the end. It's safe to conclude he is dead. And telling it from any other perspective just wouldn't make since. I understand you like the story and want more of it. But it's just not gonna happen. But if you like stories of characters dying and giving 2nd stories. How To Survive Hell was recently updated with another story
@@TheDarkCosmos1 Have you considered creating a horror creepypasta channel? I don’t think one exists specifically for horror. Also, will there be collabs with JuJu and Magnetar on this channel?
Once again a top job Kiwi Thomas! This story must have been unfolding at the same time as the event was experienced by astronaughts on the moon when the Earth disappeared.
Exceptional narration!!! I am a complete fan... but please just tweek the music & other sounds down a bit, they make it difficult to hear your voice... For me, your voice is all that is needed, but the rest could work if it was brought down in the mix.
Narrator here (better late than never!). Thanks so much. If you'd like to hear me read something a little different, I record classic horror and weird fiction on my channel.
Narrator here (better late than never!). Thanks so much. If you'd like to hear me read something a little different, I record classic horror and weird fiction on my channel.
I caught 5 years in 2009 So I was nervous right because I wanted to make sure that I would get out before the world ended on December 23rd 2012. So that was like a big fear for me being locked up during the Apocalypse
I loved the story really did just giving my readers critique if the moon exploded and what not that wouldn’t have anything to do with the sun still shining. Like right now if the moon was explode, the sun would still shine. It would just be extremely darker when the sun would go down i.e. being no moon to help illuminate the darkness, so I’m just curious why isn’t the sun shining if the moon is just gone like I said love the story really did that was the only thing I felt it was a little confusing and unanswered. 😊
I was into it until it turned out that the aliens were identical to those from War of the Worlds. The sound effects at one point were even from 2005 War of the Worlds. What a bummer. I'll never understand why someone copies an existing creation when it is so easy to just come up with one of your own. Even if it isn't great, at least it will be original.
@@davidgrice9270 You know the novel came after the magazine publications, right? Yikes...backfire!😬 I just thought that since you're attempting to school me, I'd help you fill the holes in your curriculum. By the way...I've read the book, listened to the broadcast, and watched 3 or 4 different versions of it on film(the 2005 version several times). Have you read the book, David? If so, how did you feel it compared to the movie(s)? And how did you feel any of them compared to this story? I don't know what reading the book proves...but you must have some reason for condescendingly asking me about it; and I'm curious to learn what it is.✌🤓
@@TheDarkCosmos1 Still? I like that.😆 Thanks for the content. And as long as the stories are original, you'll never hear another complaint from this guy.👉😎👈 I appreciate the response, as well as the work you do to get these stories out there.🙏
Nooo! Are you serious!? Really my dudes!? 😨🤦♀️ That was pretty awesome but like come on with that bs end. It should be illegal to end a story like that ffs! 😅
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Today is Thomas ,this is about to be chilling and immersive as if i was reading a book
Awesome, definitely needs a part 2.
You’re very underrated. Great narration and I love the added background sounds, really adds to the story. I’ll definitely be watching more of these
Stay tuned, Jay! Glad you're enjoying the stories!
Reminds me of War of the Worlds.
Good story!
I hope there’s a part 2!
Can't be a prt 2 when the character and his family is dead
@@theonlineanimal6009 not this character obviously, but the overall setting and world has plenty of potential for more.
@Adam Woodman I understand you want more stories in the alien invasion. It's definitely a cool story from what we herd so far. But with the character and his family dead. It would just feel forced in a part 2.
@@theonlineanimal6009 The main character isn't dead. The story is told from a first person point of view. It ends with the machine attacking the narrator, but never says he was hit. Since the narrator is alive to tell his story, seems like he survived somehow.
Lets assume he is dead for a second, it would still be interesting to see from another point of view, a soldier for instance. I don't think that would feel forced at all.
@AJ McAteer lots of stories are told in 1st person even when the character dies. And given the context if the end. It's safe to conclude he is dead. And telling it from any other perspective just wouldn't make since. I understand you like the story and want more of it. But it's just not gonna happen. But if you like stories of characters dying and giving 2nd stories. How To Survive Hell was recently updated with another story
Thanks for rocking it Thomas! Cosmic Forever! 😎
As a european i am verry intrigued to listen at a scfi story over here. ❤🙂
Thanks for tuning in form Europe, Johan!
Thats a good ending. A realistic ending. Love the editing too
😊🙏
@@TheDarkCosmos1 I look forward to exploring the catalog and finding more stories
@@TheDarkCosmos1 are u thinking of a part 2?
Thanks 👍🏼
This is great!
That was fantastic!!
Thank you for watching!
I loved this !🐨👍
Pretty good. Maybe start shooting this in the fall ask tom cruise if hes interested. Or noah wily. 😅
That was really good! I was disappointed when it ended cause I wanted more of the story 😄👍
Glad you enjoyed it!
The narrator, Thomas Barker, has the perfect voice for horror pastas. 😁
We agree!
@@TheDarkCosmos1 Have you considered creating a horror creepypasta channel? I don’t think one exists specifically for horror.
Also, will there be collabs with JuJu and Magnetar on this channel?
@@toebeans3985 Yes, we already have a collab story with both!
Magnetar - "The Last Days of Earth"
Scary Juju - "Dark Whispers"
This was cool!!! Fed my addiction to the max!! I need more!
So glad you liked it!
Thank you, you made my birthday night better
Happy Birthday! 🥳
Happy birthday! 🎂🎈🎉
Once again a top job Kiwi Thomas! This story must have been unfolding at the same time as the event was experienced by astronaughts on the moon when the Earth disappeared.
Exceptional narration!!! I am a complete fan... but please just tweek the music & other sounds down a bit, they make it difficult to hear your voice... For me, your voice is all that is needed, but the rest could work if it was brought down in the mix.
Thanks for the feedback and compliment!
voice of the narrator is cool
Narrator here (better late than never!). Thanks so much. If you'd like to hear me read something a little different, I record classic horror and weird fiction on my channel.
Narrator sounds like Mark Steel !
Narrator here (better late than never!). Thanks so much. If you'd like to hear me read something a little different, I record classic horror and weird fiction on my channel.
Hopefully we get a second part 🙏
It's the end of the world as we know it...
Kudos to the narrator and author
Thanks Aaron!
Wow that was good..
GLad you enjoyed!
Hmm, you seem interesting. I am subscribing.
Welcome aboard!
I caught 5 years in 2009 So I was nervous right because I wanted to make sure that I would get out before the world ended on December 23rd 2012. So that was like a big fear for me being locked up during the Apocalypse
I was paroled in January of 2012
How did you feel when the world didn't end like many expected?
Why would you allow yourself to become worked up over something that humans have consistently failed to predict despite innumerable attempts to do so?
@@edvfya9922 a little disappointed honestly.
@@ominous-omnipresent-they bc I was young and easily influenced, ironically that's also why I was in prison to begin with lol
I loved the story really did just giving my readers critique if the moon exploded and what not that wouldn’t have anything to do with the sun still shining. Like right now if the moon was explode, the sun would still shine. It would just be extremely darker when the sun would go down i.e. being no moon to help illuminate the darkness, so I’m just curious why isn’t the sun shining if the moon is just gone like I said love the story really did that was the only thing I felt it was a little confusing and unanswered. 😊
Something blocked the moon by covering the earth, therefor the sun is blocked out as well
Or it says in the story, something blocked off the whole planet
Sounds like an attack on earth from somekind of aliens planing to terraform our world.
I was into it until it turned out that the aliens were identical to those from War of the Worlds. The sound effects at one point were even from 2005 War of the Worlds. What a bummer. I'll never understand why someone copies an existing creation when it is so easy to just come up with one of your own. Even if it isn't great, at least it will be original.
Thanks for tuning in, still! Perhaps you'll find more enjoyment in our other stories :)
Do you think Stephen Spielberg came up with War of the worlds?
You know it's based on a novel from 1898 right?
@@davidgrice9270 You know the novel came after the magazine publications, right? Yikes...backfire!😬 I just thought that since you're attempting to school me, I'd help you fill the holes in your curriculum. By the way...I've read the book, listened to the broadcast, and watched 3 or 4 different versions of it on film(the 2005 version several times). Have you read the book, David? If so, how did you feel it compared to the movie(s)? And how did you feel any of them compared to this story? I don't know what reading the book proves...but you must have some reason for condescendingly asking me about it; and I'm curious to learn what it is.✌🤓
@@TheDarkCosmos1 Still? I like that.😆 Thanks for the content. And as long as the stories are original, you'll never hear another complaint from this guy.👉😎👈
I appreciate the response, as well as the work you do to get these stories out there.🙏
Nooo! Are you serious!? Really my dudes!? 😨🤦♀️
That was pretty awesome but like come on with that bs end.
It should be illegal to end a story like that ffs! 😅
HAHAHA I love your passionate 'ffs' !! And you're on a binge sesh - woohoo!
It was great until suddenly it became War of the Worlds. It was still decent enough tho.
Thanks for tuning in!