THIS WAS INCREDIBLE! I loved peter and nico's relationship in this! This is the first time i've actually heard of nico. After seeing this fanfiction, I want to see you expand more on their romantic relationship. And i really like how you set up and teased norman becoming green goblin! Let's hope the actual "your friendly neighborhood spiderman" goes down like this!
im relay intrested in younger marvel superheros and I stumbled across nico. i did a lot of digging into her powers and origin and she is actually nothing like this show presents her. she is witch or sorcerer type and is gay. I'm not joking search it up. i don't even think she has ever interacted with spiderman in the comics ever
@@jamesiitaylor7709 oh sorry i didnt know. but arent you gay if your with the same sex at that point in time. i mean it isn't mutually exclusive while the person could be straight they are also equally gay. so their half gay right
Honestly I really like the unique direction this story takes. As much as I adore Spider-Man and all his media, I'll admit that a lot of his stories feel quite samey, so the fresh take in this version is really interesting. That's part of why I'm so excited for the actual series to drop too.
so i know I'm a month late but i just wanted to say that this pitch was really cool and its nice to see someone else being optimistic about this show instead of wishing it was spider man 98 (saw your pitch for that too btw and it rocked) but if i had one critique it would be that a lot of the characters (except nico she's great) feel kinda run of the mill: otto starting off as a nice friend and decent guy only to get screwed over by norman and becoming a super villain to get revenge? norman trying to make a cure for a non descript comic book disease slowly killing a family member and that being what leads to him becoming green goblin? even peter feels a lot like his ultimate counter part (him already starting as a good kid that gets corrupted by his powers and needs to get back to being the good kid he was pre bite) and i know that a lot of people grew up with that version of spidey but I'm really tired of it being the default of every new spider man adaptation i think it would be kind of cool to see this show use more then just the aesthetic of ditko spider man but have him act like ditko spider man too where he's got a chip on his shoulder and is quicker to anger after ben dies none of these are bad ideas i just feel like I've seen them already in a ton of other spidey projects over all this prewrite is really solid and reminded me of how much potential this show has!
I hope this is more of a show and not just a 6-10 episode thing I want this to be like at least 25 episodes long but it probably won’t also I’m a bit worried with the show because if there’s other weird writing choices like how he got the spider bite but I hope it’s just they wanted to do something different with the story also I know that was just in this but I hope Peter makes his own suit at least the main one I’m fine with Norman making his other suits like the future foundation
Well the thing is that he does it's gotta have Peter grew up into an adult with first season being in freshman and the second season being in sophmore.
I thought the animation wouldn't be very good because it was made by the Japanese studio Polygon Pictures, which made the anime Inhuman/Ajin, but it's not that bad. I like that it reminds me of that old game Ultimate Spider Man and the modern cartoon Spiderverse (only the animation is a little worse).
I hope not and if they will apear I hope that Peter doesn't end up with either of them as endgame. I want this version or Peter to not be held back by things that are canon and to be it's own seperate thing and do things that we have never seen before.
@@SilvanaDaniela-fr2nq I see maybe he can just be friends with those women and indeed not be held back by having the slightest feelings towards them get in the way of originality yeah I got it
@@SilvanaDaniela-fr2nqI feel the same. It makes it more interesting if he ends up with someone different from his canon relationships for this universe instead of the typical MJ and Gwen.
Lewis.......I am jealous okey. Your version of Norman is so good and yeah in my pitch for my series I made him more tragic and yeah in my pitch Norman's wife is dying too and Norman founds out Peter is spiderman idk when beacouse in my pitch peter is spiderman for a while but he is more of an "urban ledgend" and he goes to Peter to offer him money for him working for him and Peter isn't learned the uncle Ben leson becouse he dies in the end of the first episode so peter doesn't see any problem with Norman and yeah I forgot to mention Peter is best friend with Harry so Peter sees Norman often and becouse Norman always praises Peter like nobody does becouse he is always bullied at school for being a nerd Peter likes him and becouse of Norman's mentoring to Peter he becomes rude and watches only for him self but I started to talk about hole pitch of my series so back to Norman. He would be great to peter but when sandman attacks oscorp (doesn't matter why) Norman recognizes Marko as henchman of Kingpin (his big rival in my series) but this time with powers so he thinks Kingpin wants to destroy his company and his power so he tells Peter to go inturapt a weapon transfer or someting and steal some chemicalls to help him make a cure for his wife but that doesn't matter if you want a full pitch I will write it to you😅 and Norman at this point thinks that everybody is against him and becouse of his mental state he would use some weird formula that would made him calm down but a big dose could make him go insane but that formula over time would also made him stronger and Kingpin would help him become more insane when he would call police on him becouse he has illegal and stollen things and when police officer Stan Carter comes to his appartmant Osborn for the first time pannics and slams a vase in Carter's head wich would make him in koma. To show that this Norman isn't afraid to lie he would lie to his own son and everyone that his wife is dying and that he doesn't know where is Stan Carter and when he founds out that the man who is trying to find a cure to his wife's illnes Michael Morbius is acctualy lied to him. He knew that he couldn't find a cure but Norman was paying him for helping so he was trying to find a cure to his own blood illnes and that was Norman's breaking point so he threw Morbius at chemicals he is using and then he goes to a machine full of his "calm down" formula becouse he is full of stress and Michael Morbius while is transforming into a vampire sabotages the machine and it explodes but Norman couldn't explain the situation to his son like that so he sets up a car accident but in the car he puts Stan Carter's body but with the help of Chamellion he would create a mask of him self to put on Stan and that would explain why he isn't at home he would be in the hospital and the same day that accident with "calm down" formula happend his wife died. This arc for Norman would happen in two season becouse I think is imposeble to do it in one season and yeah this took a lot to write so please men answer do you like it. I really like my one too but you had to do him in a setting they gave us
lewis back with another banger vid. i mildy dislike this version of spidey already simply because of the lack of actual spiderman characters race swpaed norman goofy side character weird plot lines bizarre character designs and a horrible origin story. spider from another universe in a show titled NEIGHBOURHOOD spiderman. but spidey is just the greatest character in fiction so ill let it slide. lewis make more MTV spiderman pleaseeeeeeeeee MTV spiderman is so good
@@SilvanaDaniela-fr2nq lewis makes better stories than the actual thing so its probably gonna be worse than it seems. there is no hyoe for this like we all want it to fail so we can see spiderman 98
@@datonenoob7165 norman always looks cool as an African person myself I have no idea why norman is black. who thought this was a good idea like bruh whyyy.
Personally I'm excited for the changes! Norman being black doesn't really matter, him being white isn't important to his character, so he could be black for instance, it's not really a big deal to me. In terms of the other side characters, at first I hated it because they weren't Spider-Man's usual roster, but on further thought I'm excited for it because it's something different. We've seen MJ, Gwen all before, this is something new and exciting. Thanks for the support as well! And MTV Spider-Man may be coming with season 3 soon, Season 2 needs a slight bit more attention first to warrent it.
I'm so confused. Why is Norman in this, if oscorp never existed and Peter didn't know of his name is 'No Way Home'? Also, where are ned and all the other characters, if he only got his powers 6 months prior to Civil War? srry if im wrong
Too safe? Mothefucker, half the usual cast wasn't even in this! Not even the Spider being from OsCorp or whatever lab was used in this pitch (Though that one wasn't his idea he just went with it).
THIS WAS INCREDIBLE! I loved peter and nico's relationship in this! This is the first time i've actually heard of nico. After seeing this fanfiction, I want to see you expand more on their romantic relationship. And i really like how you set up and teased norman becoming green goblin! Let's hope the actual "your friendly neighborhood spiderman" goes down like this!
im relay intrested in younger marvel superheros and I stumbled across nico. i did a lot of digging into her powers and origin and she is actually nothing like this show presents her. she is witch or sorcerer type and is gay. I'm not joking search it up. i don't even think she has ever interacted with spiderman in the comics ever
@@davidakin3840bruh she's not gay she's bi
@@SilvanaDaniela-fr2nq same thing tho
@davidakin3840 No gay means interested in people of the same sex only bisexual means interested in both male and female.
@@jamesiitaylor7709 oh sorry i didnt know. but arent you gay if your with the same sex at that point in time. i mean it isn't mutually exclusive while the person could be straight they are also equally gay. so their half gay right
If the real Show is anything like this,i will love it. Anyway, good video!
Thanks!
Honestly I really like the unique direction this story takes. As much as I adore Spider-Man and all his media, I'll admit that a lot of his stories feel quite samey, so the fresh take in this version is really interesting. That's part of why I'm so excited for the actual series to drop too.
Same here! It's gonna be interesting!
Personal spin like how spiders spin webs.
This is amazing! I would imagine most if not all of the story beats actually happen in this series.
Thanks!
so i know I'm a month late but i just wanted to say that this pitch was really cool and its nice to see someone else being optimistic about this show instead of wishing it was spider man 98 (saw your pitch for that too btw and it rocked)
but if i had one critique it would be that a lot of the characters (except nico she's great) feel kinda run of the mill: otto starting off as a nice friend and decent guy only to get screwed over by norman and becoming a super villain to get revenge? norman trying to make a cure for a non descript comic book disease slowly killing a family member and that being what leads to him becoming green goblin?
even peter feels a lot like his ultimate counter part (him already starting as a good kid that gets corrupted by his powers and needs to get back to being the good kid he was pre bite) and i know that a lot of people grew up with that version of spidey but I'm really tired of it being the default of every new spider man adaptation i think it would be kind of cool to see this show use more then just the aesthetic of ditko spider man but have him act like ditko spider man too where he's got a chip on his shoulder and is quicker to anger after ben dies
none of these are bad ideas i just feel like I've seen them already in a ton of other spidey projects
over all this prewrite is really solid and reminded me of how much potential this show has!
I hope this is more of a show and not just a 6-10 episode thing I want this to be like at least 25 episodes long but it probably won’t also I’m a bit worried with the show because if there’s other weird writing choices like how he got the spider bite but I hope it’s just they wanted to do something different with the story also I know that was just in this but I hope Peter makes his own suit at least the main one I’m fine with Norman making his other suits like the future foundation
Well the thing is that he does it's gotta have Peter grew up into an adult with first season being in freshman and the second season being in sophmore.
I also enjoy that u make Spider-Man a flawed character like he is supposed to rather than the akward saint that we see in more recent depictions.
Awesome Video About Prewriting Your Friendly Neighborhood Spider-Man ❤️💙
Thank you 🤗
@@LewisFanFictionYou’re Welcome 😎
I’m so happy u included uncle Ben
I want to see you write your personal version of Tom Holland's Spider-Man origin
This is absolutely amazing keep up the great work can’t wait to see more 🔥!
Thank you! Will do!
This is awesome but i feel like the episodes are really short
I thought the animation wouldn't be very good because it was made by the Japanese studio Polygon Pictures, which made the anime Inhuman/Ajin, but it's not that bad. I like that it reminds me of that old game Ultimate Spider Man and the modern cartoon Spiderverse (only the animation is a little worse).
This is perfect 👏
Thank you!
Lewis, how do you write these Spider-Man stories because they are really good, Lewis please respond because I wanna write a Spider-Man show
Thanks! Oooo go for it! I’m sure it would be awesome
@LewisFanFiction I meant can u teach me how to write my stories
@@slumpxjames4life123 best way to learn is to read the comics!
That was great!
Thanks!
Speaking of that Kraven it reminds me of your work on Brothers and speaking of are still doing a sequel to that?
great job man
Thanks!
@@LewisFanFiction your welcome 🤗
This is awesome but can you please prewrite spider-man beyond the spider verse no one has done it yet
Great pitch
Thanks!
btw to let you know the guy you were saying was lonnie is actually harry osborn
I wondered if Gwen Stacy and Mary jane Watson will appear in Friendly Neighborhood Spider Man season 2 eventually tell me?
I hope not and if they will apear I hope that Peter doesn't end up with either of them as endgame. I want this version or Peter to not be held back by things that are canon and to be it's own seperate thing and do things that we have never seen before.
@@SilvanaDaniela-fr2nq I see maybe he can just be friends with those women and indeed not be held back by having the slightest feelings towards them get in the way of originality yeah I got it
@@SilvanaDaniela-fr2nqI feel the same. It makes it more interesting if he ends up with someone different from his canon relationships for this universe instead of the typical MJ and Gwen.
The blonde hair girl with the pink hood, white top and black jacket in the D23 image that shows all of the characters appearing could be Gwen Stacy.
@@thomasbennett0 Yes
I have to say i love everything about this but the one thing i kind of don't like is the nico i wish she has magic power but that my nitpick.
Can you rewrite Iron Man 2 and 3
anyone else kinda pissed that this show won't take place in the mcu?
Kinda but also I like the idea of it being able to do whatever it wants
They Just Changed It
Is nico minoru a new character?
Lewis.......I am jealous okey. Your version of Norman is so good and yeah in my pitch for my series I made him more tragic and yeah in my pitch Norman's wife is dying too and Norman founds out Peter is spiderman idk when beacouse in my pitch peter is spiderman for a while but he is more of an "urban ledgend" and he goes to Peter to offer him money for him working for him and Peter isn't learned the uncle Ben leson becouse he dies in the end of the first episode so peter doesn't see any problem with Norman and yeah I forgot to mention Peter is best friend with Harry so Peter sees Norman often and becouse Norman always praises Peter like nobody does becouse he is always bullied at school for being a nerd Peter likes him and becouse of Norman's mentoring to Peter he becomes rude and watches only for him self but I started to talk about hole pitch of my series so back to Norman. He would be great to peter but when sandman attacks oscorp (doesn't matter why) Norman recognizes Marko as henchman of Kingpin (his big rival in my series) but this time with powers so he thinks Kingpin wants to destroy his company and his power so he tells Peter to go inturapt a weapon transfer or someting and steal some chemicalls to help him make a cure for his wife but that doesn't matter if you want a full pitch I will write it to you😅 and Norman at this point thinks that everybody is against him and becouse of his mental state he would use some weird formula that would made him calm down but a big dose could make him go insane but that formula over time would also made him stronger and Kingpin would help him become more insane when he would call police on him becouse he has illegal and stollen things and when police officer Stan Carter comes to his appartmant Osborn for the first time pannics and slams a vase in Carter's head wich would make him in koma. To show that this Norman isn't afraid to lie he would lie to his own son and everyone that his wife is dying and that he doesn't know where is Stan Carter and when he founds out that the man who is trying to find a cure to his wife's illnes Michael Morbius is acctualy lied to him. He knew that he couldn't find a cure but Norman was paying him for helping so he was trying to find a cure to his own blood illnes and that was Norman's breaking point so he threw Morbius at chemicals he is using and then he goes to a machine full of his "calm down" formula becouse he is full of stress and Michael Morbius while is transforming into a vampire sabotages the machine and it explodes but Norman couldn't explain the situation to his son like that so he sets up a car accident but in the car he puts Stan Carter's body but with the help of Chamellion he would create a mask of him self to put on Stan and that would explain why he isn't at home he would be in the hospital and the same day that accident with "calm down" formula happend his wife died. This arc for Norman would happen in two season becouse I think is imposeble to do it in one season and yeah this took a lot to write so please men answer do you like it. I really like my one too but you had to do him in a setting they gave us
Almost every version of Peter Parker are broke 💀
lewis back with another banger vid. i mildy dislike this version of spidey already simply because of the lack of actual spiderman characters race swpaed norman goofy side character weird plot lines bizarre character designs and a horrible origin story. spider from another universe in a show titled NEIGHBOURHOOD spiderman. but spidey is just the greatest character in fiction so ill let it slide. lewis make more MTV spiderman pleaseeeeeeeeee MTV spiderman is so good
The show hasnt even released yet so how can you not like it 😂😂😂😂
@@SilvanaDaniela-fr2nq lewis makes better stories than the actual thing so its probably gonna be worse than it seems. there is no hyoe for this like we all want it to fail so we can see spiderman 98
I don’t mind race swapped Norman, cuz he looks cool, but yeah, the origin and cast of characters suck.
@@datonenoob7165 norman always looks cool as an African person myself I have no idea why norman is black. who thought this was a good idea like bruh whyyy.
Personally I'm excited for the changes! Norman being black doesn't really matter, him being white isn't important to his character, so he could be black for instance, it's not really a big deal to me. In terms of the other side characters, at first I hated it because they weren't Spider-Man's usual roster, but on further thought I'm excited for it because it's something different. We've seen MJ, Gwen all before, this is something new and exciting.
Thanks for the support as well! And MTV Spider-Man may be coming with season 3 soon, Season 2 needs a slight bit more attention first to warrent it.
I'm so confused. Why is Norman in this, if oscorp never existed and Peter didn't know of his name is 'No Way Home'? Also, where are ned and all the other characters, if he only got his powers 6 months prior to Civil War? srry if im wrong
Separate universe
@@CartierTyy why are they making this show then? whats the point
This is meant to be a “what if” style show which takes place in a timeline that diverged from the mcu sacred timeline.
@@LewisFanFiction oh, i thought it was gonna be a full on animated prequel to civil war/homecoming. my apologies
mf got two elbows
Who
Too predictable, too safe. I have seen this pitch a thousand times. And Spider Man is way too strong in the pitch.
How would you deviate?
Didn’t even come back 😔 negativity for the sake of negativity
Too safe? Mothefucker, half the usual cast wasn't even in this!
Not even the Spider being from OsCorp or whatever lab was used in this pitch (Though that one wasn't his idea he just went with it).