[REUPLOAD] [NOTHING FROM THIS VIDEO IS BY ME] Rewriting the Entire Star Wars Prequel Trilogy
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- Опубліковано 20 сер 2024
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For those of you who wonder why my reuploads of ApplePie's videos about FNaF are gone:
I deleted those reuploads, and apart from deleting those videos because their presence in my channel resulted in FNaF appearing in my recommendations more often, there's another far bigger reason.
Those videos didn't explain how not answering who bite victim is or why his story mattered to the rest of the series has led to FNaF lore discourse becoming worse.
Scott's lack of an answer has led to the community not knowing whether Golden Freddy, a character who was in the series since the first game, was possessed by the fifth missing child, the bite victim, or both, yet her videos just ignore that problem with the statement of bite victim's story having no effect on the lore and presenting Michael being the bite victim as if it's the only common argument for bite victim's story being important (Despite how that hypothetical doesn't make sense either).
From now on, i'm only gonna reupload a previously deleted video that talks about how FNaF has bad storytelling if it actually has put a lot of focus on that issue.
Damn that sucks
This is, in my opinion, the best remake of the prequels I've ever seen. it perfectly shows that the script of these films was not bad at all, it just needed proper processing. Nevertheless, I think that a few minor modifications could be useful. For example:
- the thread of the conflict between the Trade Federation and Naboo could be a cover for the real goal of taking over scientific secrets regarding cloning. It could be established that Naboo Scientists are working with the Kaminoans in the development of the Cloning process, and Palpatine and the Federation are interested in learning these secrets. - This would give us better motivation to set off on a rescue mission with a small team instead of waiting for the republic to act. It would also allow us to better announce the topic of clones that will be introduced later in the film.
- Separatists should also use a clone army. This would provide a better basis for calling this conflict the Clone Wars. I'm guessing that Lukas introduced an army of robots so that the main characters wouldn't look like mass murderers (possibly he didn't want a repeat of the dispute over the morality of Luke's destruction of the Death Star), but it can be solved in a simple way. Separatist clones are not sentient entities, but merely zombie-style empty shells controlled by those parasitic worms that we saw in the Star Wars the Clone Wars animation. They could have been specially cloned from some predatory animals.I was thinking about something like Terror Troopers from Star Wars The Force Unleashed II.
- I would remove the plot of Count Dooku as a Sith Lord. If Dooku was just a former Jedi forced to make a pact with the Devil, not willingly but out of necessity, aware that if he refused, Palpatine would replace him with his loyal servant and ruin the hopes of the separatists for a better future. This would help build a more ambiguous antagonist and introduce more gray morality. it would also have one more positive. without any extensive contact with the topic of the Sith, Anakin could definitely look more favorably on cooperation with Palpatine because, knowing the image of the Sith from the Jedi teachings, he would have less reason to question the nature and intentions of the Chancellor. In such a situation, it would be enough to establish that Palpatine has his agents on the Confederate council to guard Dooku and when he, Grievous and the rest of the most important Confederate leaders die on Mustafar, one of the council members who was not there will order the surrender of the separatists.
-I would divide the roles of the assassin sent against Padme and the DNA donor/trainer for the republic's army. It seems weak to me that Obi Wan comes to Kamino for a simple inspection of the army and, coincidentally, a person hired to assassinate an important senator of the Republic is working on its formation, and he is also present at the moment. I would suggest that Jango fett was a mercenary employed by Palpatine and I would entrust the investigation and subsequent tracking down to Maca Windu. In this way, he could be given a larger role in the story and the basis for the antagonism between Windu and Anakin could be built, which would later translate into their behavior in Episode 3. However, Obi wan, instead of Yoda, could appear at the head of the Clone Army.
- While I consider getting rid of the chosen one's theme to be a bonus - Lucas never delved into this topic and it caused quite a stir. So depriving Anakin of his past as a slave is already a disadvantage. This could be resolved by establishing that Anakin's father died saving his son from slavers and replacing the desert people with a criminal cartel that kidnapped Anakin's mother in order to force the Larses to pay off their debts. In this way, it would preserve the element of young Skywalker's difficult childhood and establish his resentment towards the half-witness of the crime, making his support for Palpatine's authoritarian solutions more understandable.
- the last change is that I would suggest that the person who would convince the Jedi council to accept Anakin for training would be Dooku. His sympathy for the young Padawan in his first months of training would have given Skywalker more conflict when Dooku was beheaded.
From such smaller modifications
*the introduction of the character of Owen Lars as a member of the crew of a Republic ship that was supposed to take the Jedi to Naboo could have been good. He could help our heroes escape from Naboo and later take part in a rescue mission. In Episode 3 he could be one of the pilots fighting on Corusant. This would allow Anakin to be removed from Tatooine, making hiding Luke there more meaningful. It would also allow for expanding the world presented (privately I would suggest Nal Huta or Dantooine)
* Anakin should have built R2D2 while C3PO should have been Bail Organa's droid from the beginning.
*This is more of a personal suggestion than a necessary change, but I like the idea of Anakin's mother being a healer/herbalist who may have knowledge of the Force in a different way than the Jedi. It would be interesting that local residents might perceive her as a witch because of her practices. In such a scenario, the circumstances in which Qoigon decides to accept Anakin as a shocker for training may have been based on the fear that his mother's insufficient knowledge of the Force combined with Anakin's great potential would create a dangerous combination. He might even see his mother's practices as potentially leading him to the dark side. I always liked the origins of the Skywalker family more than the chosen one.
Ok, that was a long ride. Gabriel Gatica, you don't have to follow my suggestions. I know this video is by Cardinal West. I just wanted to present my point of view on some threads and create a potential discussion point.
And I would have Owen and Beru be Anakin’s brother and sister in law.
Can you imagine if the Inquisitorious was originally founded by the Jedi to look for the Dark Lord of the Sith? The Empire then continues the institution as an arm of their covert "Dark Jedi," aka inquisitors
I'm not convinced about Anakin being a moisture farmer, i feel like having him being a scavenger would be more in line with his skills in engineering
My first only criticism is still having Anakin be the one to build C3P0. My impressions of him as a character was that C3P0 had always been a standard protocol droid for the elite. It would possibly be better to have him originally belonging to Bale Organa, and later Leia. That way, his adventures start later, possibly with Leia, giving his pessimism to adventure more weight from episode 4 and on. It would also better close the plothole of why he doesn't recognize the Lars farm or Tatooine at all (unless youd plan on having his memory wiped).
Honestly “the chosen one” is so pointless you could literally remove it with “Anakin is strong with the force” and nothing changes.
Took that from the gold man
@@Deity_devil lol yeah pretty much, it’s a good point nevertheless
Well him being the chosen one adds pressure to Anakin and it gives him in his eyes entitelment like being on the council or gaining the powers to save Padme. While him being the chosen one is also the reason Qui Gon takes him in or why Palpatine has a interest in him. Its not pointless
@@ontasbulent5709 The way the "Chosen One" concept is handled makes it pointless, because you can just as easily say that Palpatine wanted Anakin because "he is strong with the Force". The idea of Anakin being destined to destroy the Sith isn't even relevant until the ROTS, but you can easily still have that movie function with that aspect of the prophecy. All that's special about him is that he has the highest midichlorian count, which can easily still be enough for Qui-Gon to take him, but even then, the relevance of midichlorians is being increasingly rendered meaningless when compared to characters from Legends or the way Disney is handling the Force in recent shows such as Ahsoka.
If you want Anakin to truly embody the idea of the "Chosen One", then at least make him unique, and different from everyone else, eg in terms of power progression to make him a true anomaly among the ranks of the Jedi. I mean, he literally was made BY the Force, but nothing about his powers ever truly represent that, and I can certainly think of at least 1 way to try to remedy that. At the end of the day, he's just some guy who could be a bit above the average Jedi. Nothing Chosen One-y about that.
I like the stakes that it adds.
OMG thank you I used to watch this vid all the time
Kathleen came and copywright claimed the og video?
Considering Cardinal West mentioned that his old videos got copyright striked, maybe.
This was going well until the battle between Yoda and Palpatine. No reason to take his Force Lightning power away and have him lose because of weakness. I'd prefer him to only get beat through some type of cheating or underhanded means. Anyway, good job overall.
In my rewrite i mixed the kashyyyk moments with the utapau plot so it would be much simpler but utapau would have a cameo during order 66
So is general grievous on kashyyk?
@@RobertDownySenior only in my rewrite
@@gabrielhbosse6030 so would Obi-Wan go with Yoda then
@RandomResearch57 yes along with mace, kit, saesee, luminara, eath koth, quilan vos, anakin would have the same role like in the original movie and duel would take place in a republic dreadnought called the PRIDE OF THE CORE.
@@gabrielhbosse6030 that sounds epic wait so who will fight palpatine
Here 21:00
Didn’t the original one get takedown?
Yes
WOW! Amazing video. I'm going to go rewatch it rn 10/10
Thank you god tier man
Alright…….even i gotta admit……this was good
Good shit dude
watched this video through out the whole day. very great
Incredible. Thank you.
Greedy bankers would NEVER try to overthrow democracy....
Also, crazy call with the whole "brexit was good" take
Palpy didn't say "Do it!!!"
5:19 this scene is a crime, the reason being there is a really good fight scene in there marred by maybe two section. its easily one of the best fight scenes for its visuals but it has a major flaw in the intro and a missing knife in the end which ruin it. everything else in between is amazingly shot, spaced edited and cut together. im a snob for fight scenes though, grew up on jacky chan so most 0f the other star wars fights scenes dont hold up in terms of grabbing my eyeballs haha. the prequel scenes are often boring.
oh no is every cut away gonna be sequel hate? oh well another mauler wannabe...im out.
The second movie he barly changed anything
33:32 I left off here
How long is the time gap between this version of Episode 1 and Episode 2
Probably a few years
I think three to five years. think it would be best for Anakin to start his adventure at the age of 15/16.
@@PiotrekDuncan7885I say three years.
@@PiotrekDuncan7885Anakin is 15 in Episode 1, 18 in Episode 2, and 23 in Episode 3. Obi-Wan Kenobi is 25 to 33 years old in Episode 1 to 3. Padme is the same age as Anakin.
@@Perke2King I think Padme is a year younger like she was in Episode 1 of George
So you are telling me Anakin lived at the Lars homestead his entire life, and when he was Vader he never once returned? Plot hole.
Why would he. He is constantly running from the past
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Honestly I feel like he barely changed revenge of the sith
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There are only 3 SW movies. ❤
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It's a pretty good rewrite, but I think the trade federation conflict is still so boring that it needs to be fleshed out better. It needs to be a better part of the overall story.
Here is one good way to fix it:
There are scientists on Naboo who have perfected a cloning formula and the trade federation wants to steal it for themselves and that’s what sets the conflict in motion and it’s further expanded upon in the sequel with the kaminoans
I still wished it fitted with the eu