Nice rendition, but your lyrics are incorrect. Even I have trouble with line 2 of Verse 3 and the second portion of the Bridge. [Verse 1] If your love's a curse, I can't be helped. Go on, do your worst, I'm under your spell. [Verse 2] Hold me 'til it hurts. I close my eyes. Wrap me in your wings And say you're mine. [Chorus] I won't ever let you slip away From my hands, from my hands. It's like I'm in a dream when I'm awake Callin' your name, callin' your name. And I'll keep reachin', holdin' on, 'cause I won't ever let you slip away From my hands from my hands. [Verse 3] Like a smoking gun I bang for you; Baby, we can run; Got nothing to lose. [Chorus] I won't ever let you slip away From my hands, from my hands. It's like I'm in a dream when I'm awake Callin' your name, callin' your name. And I'll keep reachin', holdin' on, 'cause I won't ever let you slip away From my hands from my hands. [Bridge] You're my sun in the night, You keep me alive, The reason my heart pounds, I will never die. You're shocked by the price, You take me so high, You know I'll not hold back, Miles away inside. [Chorus] I won't ever let you slip away From my hands, from my hands. It's just like I'm in a dream when I'm awake Callin' your name, callin' your name. And I'll keep reachin', holdin' on, 'cause I won't ever let you slip away From my hands from my hands. [Reprise] I won't ever let you slip away From my hands, from my hands. I won't ever let you slip away From my hands, from my hands. I'll keep reachin', holdin' on, 'cause I won't ever let you slip away From my hands from my hands.
ppheanix Thank you for correction! But my text version was different If your love's a cage I can't be helped Go on do your worst I'm under your spell Hold me till it hurts I close my eyes Rub me in your ways And say you're mine I will never let you slip away From my hands, from my hands It's like I'm in a dream, when I'm awake Calling your name, calling your name And I'll keep reaching, holding on Cause I will never let you slip away From my hands, from my hands oh oh oh Like a smoking gun I burn for you Baby we can run Got nothing to lose I will never let you slip away From my hands, from my hands It's like I'm in a dream, when I'm awake Calling your name, calling your name And I'll keep reaching, holding on Cause I will never let you slip away From my hands, from my hands You're my sun in the night You'll keep me alive The reason my heart pounds I will never die You shine bright up high You take me so high Now I'm off the ground Miles away, I've sighed I will never let you slip away From my hands, from my hands It's like I'm in a dream, when I'm awake Calling your name, calling your name And I'll keep reaching, holding on Cause I will never let you slip away From my hands, from my hands I will never let you slip away From my hands, from my hands I will never let you slip away From my hands, from my hands And I'll keep reaching, holding on Cause I will never let you slip away From my hands, from my hands
Understood, but I got the lyrics direct from the vocalist track... except the difficulty I have with a couple of lines, one of which I think you got (see below). Thnx for that. Also, my on line research brought up several different lyrics versions to yours, where I found many non-logical expressions and only a couple in yours; e.g. "Rub me in your ways" sounds less logical than "Wrap me in your wings" also given that the lines... "You take me so high Now I'm off the ground Miles away" come along later. "Like a smoking gun I burn for you" ? The vocalist sounds like she could also be saying "bang for you", since guns don't burn. lastly, "You shine bright up high You take me so high Now I'm off the ground Miles away" could be what I'm missing. Thnx and all the best. btw, have you received any contact from producers ? If not, you should contact them, unless you're not looking for a singing career.
Very nice!! You sound awesome :)
Nice rendition, but your lyrics are incorrect.
Even I have trouble with line 2 of Verse 3 and the second portion of the Bridge.
[Verse 1]
If your love's a curse,
I can't be helped.
Go on, do your worst,
I'm under your spell.
[Verse 2]
Hold me 'til it hurts.
I close my eyes.
Wrap me in your wings
And say you're mine.
[Chorus]
I won't ever let you slip away
From my hands, from my hands.
It's like I'm in a dream when I'm awake
Callin' your name, callin' your name.
And I'll keep reachin', holdin' on,
'cause I won't ever let you slip away
From my hands from my hands.
[Verse 3]
Like a smoking gun
I bang for you;
Baby, we can run;
Got nothing to lose.
[Chorus]
I won't ever let you slip away
From my hands, from my hands.
It's like I'm in a dream when I'm awake
Callin' your name, callin' your name.
And I'll keep reachin', holdin' on,
'cause I won't ever let you slip away
From my hands from my hands.
[Bridge]
You're my sun in the night,
You keep me alive,
The reason my heart pounds,
I will never die.
You're shocked by the price,
You take me so high,
You know I'll not hold back,
Miles away inside.
[Chorus]
I won't ever let you slip away
From my hands, from my hands.
It's just like I'm in a dream when I'm awake
Callin' your name, callin' your name.
And I'll keep reachin', holdin' on,
'cause I won't ever let you slip away
From my hands from my hands.
[Reprise]
I won't ever let you slip away
From my hands, from my hands.
I won't ever let you slip away
From my hands, from my hands.
I'll keep reachin', holdin' on,
'cause I won't ever let you slip away
From my hands from my hands.
ppheanix Thank you for correction! But my text version was different
If your love's a cage
I can't be helped
Go on do your worst
I'm under your spell
Hold me till it hurts
I close my eyes
Rub me in your ways
And say you're mine
I will never let you slip away
From my hands, from my hands
It's like I'm in a dream, when I'm awake
Calling your name, calling your name
And I'll keep reaching, holding on
Cause I will never let you slip away
From my hands, from my hands oh oh oh
Like a smoking gun
I burn for you
Baby we can run
Got nothing to lose
I will never let you slip away
From my hands, from my hands
It's like I'm in a dream, when I'm awake
Calling your name, calling your name
And I'll keep reaching, holding on
Cause I will never let you slip away
From my hands, from my hands
You're my sun in the night
You'll keep me alive
The reason my heart pounds
I will never die
You shine bright up high
You take me so high
Now I'm off the ground
Miles away, I've sighed
I will never let you slip away
From my hands, from my hands
It's like I'm in a dream, when I'm awake
Calling your name, calling your name
And I'll keep reaching, holding on
Cause I will never let you slip away
From my hands, from my hands
I will never let you slip away
From my hands, from my hands
I will never let you slip away
From my hands, from my hands
And I'll keep reaching, holding on
Cause I will never let you slip away
From my hands, from my hands
Understood, but I got the lyrics direct from the vocalist track... except the difficulty I have with a couple of lines, one of which I think you got (see below). Thnx for that.
Also, my on line research brought up several different lyrics versions to yours, where I found many non-logical expressions and only a couple in yours; e.g.
"Rub me in your ways"
sounds less logical than
"Wrap me in your wings"
also given that the lines...
"You take me so high
Now I'm off the ground
Miles away"
come along later.
"Like a smoking gun I burn for you" ?
The vocalist sounds like she could also be saying "bang for you", since guns don't burn.
lastly,
"You shine bright up high
You take me so high
Now I'm off the ground
Miles away"
could be what I'm missing. Thnx and all the best.
btw, have you received any contact from producers ?
If not, you should contact them, unless you're not looking for a singing career.
ppheanix you are right... I don't contact with producer, but thanks for your comments, the are very helpful for me:)