A HFY Story : Jess | 2250 ~Deathworld, War, Terran and Humans

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  • @mattbrown5511
    @mattbrown5511 10 місяців тому +86

    At least, humanity has a warning about the Galactic Council and their evil mechanizations. Jess is a true hero.

    • @lzot
      @lzot 10 місяців тому

      'machinations' not 'mechanisations'. Sry. Language nazi :p

    • @melkiorwiseman5234
      @melkiorwiseman5234 10 місяців тому +3

      I think you mean "machinations" which is spelled similarly but with a very different meaning. 😄 (Crafty schemes; plots; intrigues) What you said means something like "using a machine to perform a function" or "converting a task to using machines instead of people." 😀

    • @bigswordlittleman3770
      @bigswordlittleman3770 10 місяців тому

      ​@@melkiorwiseman5234 you are the, "uhm actually" guy.
      He already knows what it means idiot.

    • @WingManFang1
      @WingManFang1 10 місяців тому +1

      Assuming it’s accurate…then again she has a cargo hold full of eye witnesses.

    • @bigswordlittleman3770
      @bigswordlittleman3770 10 місяців тому +1

      @@WingManFang1 she also has the spy implants.

  • @merlinathrawes746
    @merlinathrawes746 10 місяців тому +48

    Well even if Jess didn't survive, the ship got back to Earth and was reversed engineered. And MANY more agents would be sent out to discover the truth while a self-defense armada was being built. Somehow, I think the brown excrement is about to hit the rotary, air pushing device.

    • @chriscahill1005
      @chriscahill1005 9 місяців тому +3

      hope they wore their brown pants

    • @chrstfer2452
      @chrstfer2452 8 днів тому

      I bet that she wound up surviving. Coughing up blood and being weak doesnt stop someone--a human--from figuring out a way to survive. She probably fixed the life support in the bridge after firing a shot into all the unconscious officers, giving her the oxygen she needed. After that its a matter of bandaging with pressure and hoping at least one lung doesnt fill with blood (coughing up blood implies a lung puncture). Not ideal, but if the emancipated former slaves can get to the bridge to perform stabilization measures she'll be fine....
      Optimism of course

  • @MidnightSmoke
    @MidnightSmoke 10 місяців тому +105

    I really like the Jess stories. Here is a like and comment for the story, for entertaining me, to help your channel grow, and get you the recognition you deserve.

    • @Judas672
      @Judas672 10 місяців тому +3

      Are there more of her stories out there?

    • @yomogami4561
      @yomogami4561 10 місяців тому

      there's more?

    • @bunnybootsink9258
      @bunnybootsink9258 10 місяців тому +5

      There are more with this protagonist but it's very few stories in total for this setting. The author deleted their account but the stories are still up. /r/HFY/wiki/authors/Kasern/

  • @GenStallion
    @GenStallion 10 місяців тому +16

    To those hopping for more. I am sorry this author has deleted their account, or they were deleted. May her actions serve as an example should we meet the wrong kind of aliens.

  • @scotthinger6397
    @scotthinger6397 10 місяців тому +37

    There had better be an ending to this story and I mean SOON! WITH ENERGY!!

  • @TheRandyWanker
    @TheRandyWanker 10 місяців тому +25

    This story needs continuation.

  • @DicePunk
    @DicePunk 10 місяців тому +8

    Holy crap the galactic economics and money game was such an inspired story element.
    Imagine a space organisation going around giving out FTL, then saying, "that'll be the equivalent of 200 years servitude thanks. We also take slaves."

  • @FloatTheBuizel
    @FloatTheBuizel 10 місяців тому +5

    This is the story after the one called 'never trust a human'! Holy cow!

  • @mnspstudioful
    @mnspstudioful 10 місяців тому +17

    The moment I realized this was a continuation of an earlier story I thoroughly enjoyed I was happy we were going to get the follow up. Well written and well read.

    • @kaliban4758
      @kaliban4758 9 місяців тому

      yeah, i just hope Jess survives

    • @m.h.6470
      @m.h.6470 9 місяців тому

      @@kaliban4758 unfortunately, it seems the original writer deleted their reddit account or got deleted, so there will most likely not be another follow up.

  • @GyorBox
    @GyorBox 10 місяців тому +9

    LMAO I love these stories where Humans are only behind technologically, but advanced or have the advantage every other way..
    Lol "Noodle Aliens"

  • @yomogami4561
    @yomogami4561 10 місяців тому +11

    that's a terrible place to end!!!!!!
    thanks for the story and narration

  • @plexisgaming
    @plexisgaming 10 місяців тому +22

    Glad to hear your surgery went well. Keep up the good work.

  • @masterpython
    @masterpython 10 місяців тому +4

    These aliens respect surrender surprisingly well.

    • @Allantitan
      @Allantitan 10 місяців тому +1

      Remember it’s not a warcrime the first time and against xenos 😂

  • @lrmackmcbride7498
    @lrmackmcbride7498 10 місяців тому +9

    Earth government is not going to be pleased for a variety of reasons.

    • @skoshman1
      @skoshman1 10 місяців тому +3

      Not the least being all the paperwork for the recently liberated refugees.

  • @marvinjohnson2488
    @marvinjohnson2488 10 місяців тому +2

    You are an evil,evil man,ending like that. Cannot wait for the sequel.

    • @CHRF-55457
      @CHRF-55457 10 місяців тому

      There will be no sequel.

  • @nathandc
    @nathandc 10 місяців тому +5

    For the truth, for the algorithm, for the beard, and for the narrator!

  • @barelyasurvivor1257
    @barelyasurvivor1257 10 місяців тому +4

    his account is deleted so we are probably not getting any more stories from him
    Darn It!.

  • @lupaswolfshead9971
    @lupaswolfshead9971 10 місяців тому +14

    this sounds like a follow up to a previous story .

    • @joshroundtree8751
      @joshroundtree8751 10 місяців тому +5

      It does doesn't it. I think it's the story about how you should never trust a human.

    • @ameliarosealdridge6468
      @ameliarosealdridge6468 10 місяців тому

      ​@@joshroundtree8751that's exactly it!
      It goes "Why you should never trust a human", "Uplifted is a dirty word", "Luna Fall", "Jess" and there's one last one.
      Sadly the author straight up can't be found any more since they deleted their account, so you can only find their work via the HFY wiki in her name.

    • @bunnybootsink9258
      @bunnybootsink9258 10 місяців тому +2

      This a continuation of "Never Trust a Human" that was narrated about a month or two ago. Author deleted their Reddit account but the stories are still up. /r/HFY/wiki/authors/Kasern/

    • @lupaswolfshead9971
      @lupaswolfshead9971 10 місяців тому

      thanks i was trying to remember the story this continued from.@@bunnybootsink9258

    • @johns9652
      @johns9652 10 місяців тому

      Was that the one where a Xeno captain is describing how his Human crewmember saved the ship, but lied about escaping with them/joining them and was left behind in the middle of a fight? That was a good story, so was this.

  • @anathardayaldar
    @anathardayaldar 10 місяців тому +4

    Let me guess, the slaver's armor is no harder than styrofoam and their bodies are no stronger than a angry 12 year old.

  • @Allantitan
    @Allantitan 10 місяців тому +4

    “Spotting children amongst her”
    Xeno slaver: “why do I hear doom music?”
    Xeno slaver 2: “why do I feel the presence of an apex predator nearby?”

  • @mackenziedrake
    @mackenziedrake 4 місяці тому

    Onion ninjas... I'm sorry to see the author has deleted their account. This story is great, and exceptionally told. Thank you!

  • @victortahlor4038
    @victortahlor4038 10 місяців тому

    Thank you for the reading

  • @williamcastro7483
    @williamcastro7483 9 місяців тому

    We need more of Jessie! ❤

  • @nathlech919
    @nathlech919 10 місяців тому +6

    Surrendering yourself as a disguise to attack a combatant is (technically) a war crime :p

    • @skoshman1
      @skoshman1 10 місяців тому +5

      But since humanity isn't in a formal state of war with the slavers, Jess is in the clear. She's only guilty of technical piracy on the high seas (even though it is space) and I don't think any human prosecutor would be inclined to charge her. Now if the slavers home government decides to prosecute and demands her extradition, I am sure the human government will send her to them - with a fresh commission, a large fleet, and an army group of Terran marines that had been told that if they get this over with quickly, they'd be back in time of the Marine Corps ball. Plus Greg from accounting.

    • @lord1todd
      @lord1todd 10 місяців тому +4

      Somehow I doubt the aliens are co-signers of Geneva Conventions.

    • @skoshman1
      @skoshman1 10 місяців тому

      @@lord1todd But the Nations of Earth will be for the most part. Which means that the nations of Earth can introduce the Xenos to the concept of the Geneva Checklist. No worries though. Even if they were co-signers of the Geneva Conventions I doubt the aliens would care all that much and your point still stands.

    • @Gilhelmi
      @Gilhelmi 10 місяців тому +1

      Geneva only applies during war, and can be waived if major crimes are committed...........
      They are slavers, they have lost all hope of a peaceful resolution.

    • @CHRF-55457
      @CHRF-55457 10 місяців тому

      She's not even a soldier too...@@skoshman1

  • @kurtismiller9544
    @kurtismiller9544 10 місяців тому +4

    For the Skald and his family

  • @Ryu_D
    @Ryu_D 10 місяців тому

    Thank you for the video.

  • @insanecrazyman7637
    @insanecrazyman7637 10 місяців тому +6

    ... I need to know if she made it, someone tell me that woman survived!!!

  • @RealArcalian
    @RealArcalian 10 місяців тому +2

    Greetings, Mentlegent!
    For the Rhyhtm that is Algo
    Was going great until the end, what a letdown

  • @stevenweaver3386
    @stevenweaver3386 10 місяців тому +6

    Is this a sequel or part 2 to a story ",Never Trust A Human?"

    • @sjmcc13
      @sjmcc13 10 місяців тому +1

      I think so, it is listed as same universe on the redit page.

    • @nadjasunflower1387
      @nadjasunflower1387 10 місяців тому +1

      sounds like it is. it picks up right after Jess disobeyed her captain and joined the pirate / slaver ship so they could get away.

  • @jeanannd
    @jeanannd 10 місяців тому +8

    YES, free the slaves!!!!

  • @SilverMKI
    @SilverMKI 10 місяців тому

    Woo! Jess!

  • @doc701
    @doc701 7 місяців тому

    I enjoyed this story,please write another chapter.thanks

  • @WingManFang1
    @WingManFang1 10 місяців тому

    Moar! 😢We need moar….well like a follow up or Sequel at some point… Hopefully the Author makes more on this story.

    • @m.h.6470
      @m.h.6470 9 місяців тому

      the author's reddit account got deleted... so it's unlikely, that there will be a follow up.

  • @fyrebatskymarshall1778
    @fyrebatskymarshall1778 10 місяців тому

    this seems like a sequel to "all humans lie"

  • @Friedrich-Wilhelm-1980
    @Friedrich-Wilhelm-1980 9 місяців тому

    that engineer is a got dam hero!

  • @sam2x13
    @sam2x13 10 місяців тому +5

    That was a butthead thing to do, ending the story the way it did. And here I got all invested and was loving the character. Please tell me that there are more stories with jess in it.

    • @m.h.6470
      @m.h.6470 9 місяців тому

      Doubt it, as the author's reddit account was deleted... so they either don't want to continue or they can't (at least officially).

    • @Ryvaken
      @Ryvaken 8 місяців тому

      Best part of the story. The I'm-not-a-soldier-I-should-be-dead turned cocky and got spanked for it.

  • @Shadow.Dragon
    @Shadow.Dragon 10 місяців тому

    Great story; Excellent narration!

  • @bryanengland2466
    @bryanengland2466 10 місяців тому

    She's a hero and a war criminal at the same time he he

  • @najroe
    @najroe 10 місяців тому +1

    for the AlGoRiIThM and the narrator

  • @barelyasurvivor1257
    @barelyasurvivor1257 10 місяців тому +5

    Always, Always, Always, set up door controls to lock when shot or destroyed, because setting them to open if destroyed is just stupid!

    • @Gilhelmi
      @Gilhelmi 10 місяців тому +2

      I agree.
      IRL, there are very few door panels or door locks that would open if you destroy it.
      Honestly, it is something of lazy writing.

    • @z3r0t0l3r4ns
      @z3r0t0l3r4ns 10 місяців тому +3

      Until you get trapped somewhere because some idiot spills coffee on the panel.

    • @russellgilson3536
      @russellgilson3536 4 місяці тому +1

      Actually its a fire measure. Doors automatically open so people arent trapped and firemen can get in.

  • @korthnanfortuna9675
    @korthnanfortuna9675 10 місяців тому

    Jess is an Aussie. Perfect. XP

  • @raymats0710
    @raymats0710 9 місяців тому

    Shoots the panel.. what trickery is this.. lmao

  • @SOLIAM
    @SOLIAM 10 місяців тому +1

    War crimes for the win?! Lol.

  • @robertthompson5527
    @robertthompson5527 10 місяців тому +1

    Always wondered what became of Jess

  • @dholmes3307
    @dholmes3307 10 місяців тому

    For the algebra rythm

  • @kellyknowsdayway6517
    @kellyknowsdayway6517 10 місяців тому

    My friend in high-school had the same name. That's funny.

  • @olayinkaolokowo1113
    @olayinkaolokowo1113 10 місяців тому +1

    I wish it continued

  • @direwolf8703
    @direwolf8703 Місяць тому

    Do you do audio books cause I would love to hear you read some of my favorite books

  • @ThreeDogKing
    @ThreeDogKing 10 місяців тому +1

    Temper temper

  • @caoryn
    @caoryn 10 місяців тому

    This is a followup to "Humans Lie", isn't it.

  • @youngloki1
    @youngloki1 10 місяців тому

    Holy plot armor lmao

  • @JoseLay
    @JoseLay 10 місяців тому +1

    I need moaaaar...!!!!

  • @genericuser984
    @genericuser984 10 місяців тому

    neat

  • @noahkleugh9323
    @noahkleugh9323 10 місяців тому +1

    Sad

  • @140kittykat
    @140kittykat 10 місяців тому

    My knee jerk reaction to the story ending was UH, RUDE!

  • @jonnycoathanger8399
    @jonnycoathanger8399 9 місяців тому

    More

  • @merlinwizard1000
    @merlinwizard1000 10 місяців тому +1

    5th, 11 November 2023

  • @markuhler2664
    @markuhler2664 10 місяців тому

    Outstanding story. Too bad the author has gone to ground.

  • @christophergoodroe6244
    @christophergoodroe6244 10 місяців тому

    the author deleted their account rip

  • @fishinfranks1065
    @fishinfranks1065 6 місяців тому

    Coent

  • @TheJeikou
    @TheJeikou 10 місяців тому

    Comment

  • @daebi37
    @daebi37 10 місяців тому +1

    Too Mary Sue.

  • @CaptainKiLL83
    @CaptainKiLL83 10 місяців тому

    Wait...is Jess australian?

  • @greyman1k
    @greyman1k 10 місяців тому

    Great, great story....but the ending sucks. I prefer my heroes to live; oh, well.

  • @bobboardman1156
    @bobboardman1156 9 місяців тому

    Good.... except for Jesus f...... C...... bit.

  • @klappstock943
    @klappstock943 10 місяців тому +1

    For the Algorithm the story and the voice 🎉

  • @gustawmajewski9911
    @gustawmajewski9911 2 місяці тому

    .