A HFY Story : Jess | 2250 ~Deathworld, War, Terran and Humans

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  • @mattbrown5511
    @mattbrown5511 Рік тому +92

    At least, humanity has a warning about the Galactic Council and their evil mechanizations. Jess is a true hero.

    • @lzot
      @lzot Рік тому

      'machinations' not 'mechanisations'. Sry. Language nazi :p

    • @melkiorwiseman5234
      @melkiorwiseman5234 Рік тому +3

      I think you mean "machinations" which is spelled similarly but with a very different meaning. 😄 (Crafty schemes; plots; intrigues) What you said means something like "using a machine to perform a function" or "converting a task to using machines instead of people." 😀

    • @bigswordlittleman3770
      @bigswordlittleman3770 Рік тому

      ​@@melkiorwiseman5234 you are the, "uhm actually" guy.
      He already knows what it means idiot.

    • @WingManFang1
      @WingManFang1 Рік тому +1

      Assuming it’s accurate…then again she has a cargo hold full of eye witnesses.

    • @bigswordlittleman3770
      @bigswordlittleman3770 Рік тому +1

      @@WingManFang1 she also has the spy implants.

  • @MidnightSmoke
    @MidnightSmoke Рік тому +107

    I really like the Jess stories. Here is a like and comment for the story, for entertaining me, to help your channel grow, and get you the recognition you deserve.

    • @Judas672
      @Judas672 Рік тому +3

      Are there more of her stories out there?

    • @yomogami4561
      @yomogami4561 Рік тому

      there's more?

    • @bunnybootsink9258
      @bunnybootsink9258 Рік тому +6

      There are more with this protagonist but it's very few stories in total for this setting. The author deleted their account but the stories are still up. /r/HFY/wiki/authors/Kasern/

  • @merlinathrawes746
    @merlinathrawes746 Рік тому +51

    Well even if Jess didn't survive, the ship got back to Earth and was reversed engineered. And MANY more agents would be sent out to discover the truth while a self-defense armada was being built. Somehow, I think the brown excrement is about to hit the rotary, air pushing device.

    • @chriscahill1005
      @chriscahill1005 Рік тому +4

      hope they wore their brown pants

    • @chrstfer2452
      @chrstfer2452 4 місяці тому +1

      I bet that she wound up surviving. Coughing up blood and being weak doesnt stop someone--a human--from figuring out a way to survive. She probably fixed the life support in the bridge after firing a shot into all the unconscious officers, giving her the oxygen she needed. After that its a matter of bandaging with pressure and hoping at least one lung doesnt fill with blood (coughing up blood implies a lung puncture). Not ideal, but if the emancipated former slaves can get to the bridge to perform stabilization measures she'll be fine....
      Optimism of course

    • @Wastelandman7000
      @Wastelandman7000 25 днів тому +1

      @@chrstfer2452 Plus, the aliens in the hold are not going to wait forever.

  • @DicePunk
    @DicePunk Рік тому +9

    Holy crap the galactic economics and money game was such an inspired story element.
    Imagine a space organisation going around giving out FTL, then saying, "that'll be the equivalent of 200 years servitude thanks. We also take slaves."

  • @scotthinger6397
    @scotthinger6397 Рік тому +37

    There had better be an ending to this story and I mean SOON! WITH ENERGY!!

  • @GyorBox
    @GyorBox Рік тому +10

    LMAO I love these stories where Humans are only behind technologically, but advanced or have the advantage every other way..
    Lol "Noodle Aliens"

  • @FloatTheBuizel
    @FloatTheBuizel Рік тому +6

    This is the story after the one called 'never trust a human'! Holy cow!

  • @GenStallion
    @GenStallion Рік тому +20

    To those hopping for more. I am sorry this author has deleted their account, or they were deleted. May her actions serve as an example should we meet the wrong kind of aliens.

  • @mnspstudioLOST
    @mnspstudioLOST Рік тому +19

    The moment I realized this was a continuation of an earlier story I thoroughly enjoyed I was happy we were going to get the follow up. Well written and well read.

    • @kaliban4758
      @kaliban4758 Рік тому

      yeah, i just hope Jess survives

    • @m.h.6470
      @m.h.6470 Рік тому

      @@kaliban4758 unfortunately, it seems the original writer deleted their reddit account or got deleted, so there will most likely not be another follow up.

  • @plexisgaming
    @plexisgaming Рік тому +22

    Glad to hear your surgery went well. Keep up the good work.

  • @yomogami4561
    @yomogami4561 Рік тому +11

    that's a terrible place to end!!!!!!
    thanks for the story and narration

  • @masterpython
    @masterpython Рік тому +4

    These aliens respect surrender surprisingly well.

    • @Allantitan
      @Allantitan Рік тому +1

      Remember it’s not a warcrime the first time and against xenos 😂

  • @marvinjohnson2488
    @marvinjohnson2488 Рік тому +2

    You are an evil,evil man,ending like that. Cannot wait for the sequel.

  • @nathandc
    @nathandc Рік тому +5

    For the truth, for the algorithm, for the beard, and for the narrator!

  • @alicefreist318
    @alicefreist318 Місяць тому

    Thanks as always for a great story. Looking forward to the next!

  • @lrmackmcbride7498
    @lrmackmcbride7498 Рік тому +9

    Earth government is not going to be pleased for a variety of reasons.

    • @skoshman1
      @skoshman1 Рік тому +3

      Not the least being all the paperwork for the recently liberated refugees.

  • @williamcastro7483
    @williamcastro7483 Рік тому

    We need more of Jessie! ❤

  • @victortahlor4038
    @victortahlor4038 Рік тому

    Thank you for the reading

  • @Ryu_D
    @Ryu_D Рік тому

    Thank you for the video.

  • @TheRandyWanker
    @TheRandyWanker Рік тому +25

    This story needs continuation.

  • @anathardayaldar
    @anathardayaldar Рік тому +4

    Let me guess, the slaver's armor is no harder than styrofoam and their bodies are no stronger than a angry 12 year old.

  • @barelyasurvivor1257
    @barelyasurvivor1257 Рік тому +4

    his account is deleted so we are probably not getting any more stories from him
    Darn It!.

  • @doc701
    @doc701 Рік тому

    I enjoyed this story,please write another chapter.thanks

  • @mackenziedrake
    @mackenziedrake 8 місяців тому

    Onion ninjas... I'm sorry to see the author has deleted their account. This story is great, and exceptionally told. Thank you!

  • @lupaswolfshead9971
    @lupaswolfshead9971 Рік тому +14

    this sounds like a follow up to a previous story .

    • @joshroundtree8751
      @joshroundtree8751 Рік тому +5

      It does doesn't it. I think it's the story about how you should never trust a human.

    • @ameliarosealdridge6468
      @ameliarosealdridge6468 Рік тому

      ​@@joshroundtree8751that's exactly it!
      It goes "Why you should never trust a human", "Uplifted is a dirty word", "Luna Fall", "Jess" and there's one last one.
      Sadly the author straight up can't be found any more since they deleted their account, so you can only find their work via the HFY wiki in her name.

    • @bunnybootsink9258
      @bunnybootsink9258 Рік тому +2

      This a continuation of "Never Trust a Human" that was narrated about a month or two ago. Author deleted their Reddit account but the stories are still up. /r/HFY/wiki/authors/Kasern/

    • @lupaswolfshead9971
      @lupaswolfshead9971 Рік тому

      thanks i was trying to remember the story this continued from.@@bunnybootsink9258

    • @johns9652
      @johns9652 Рік тому

      Was that the one where a Xeno captain is describing how his Human crewmember saved the ship, but lied about escaping with them/joining them and was left behind in the middle of a fight? That was a good story, so was this.

  • @RealArcalian
    @RealArcalian Рік тому +2

    Greetings, Mentlegent!
    For the Rhyhtm that is Algo
    Was going great until the end, what a letdown

  • @Schwaapilz
    @Schwaapilz 2 місяці тому

    Very Roberta Draper got dropped into an alternate reality and ends up doing a Die Hard kinda vibes from this one

  • @Shadow.Dragon
    @Shadow.Dragon Рік тому

    Great story; Excellent narration!

  • @stevenweaver3386
    @stevenweaver3386 Рік тому +6

    Is this a sequel or part 2 to a story ",Never Trust A Human?"

    • @sjmcc13
      @sjmcc13 Рік тому +2

      I think so, it is listed as same universe on the redit page.

    • @nadjasunflower1387
      @nadjasunflower1387 Рік тому +2

      sounds like it is. it picks up right after Jess disobeyed her captain and joined the pirate / slaver ship so they could get away.

  • @Allantitan
    @Allantitan Рік тому +4

    “Spotting children amongst her”
    Xeno slaver: “why do I hear doom music?”
    Xeno slaver 2: “why do I feel the presence of an apex predator nearby?”

  • @WingManFang1
    @WingManFang1 Рік тому

    Moar! 😢We need moar….well like a follow up or Sequel at some point… Hopefully the Author makes more on this story.

    • @m.h.6470
      @m.h.6470 Рік тому

      the author's reddit account got deleted... so it's unlikely, that there will be a follow up.

  • @insanecrazyman7637
    @insanecrazyman7637 Рік тому +6

    ... I need to know if she made it, someone tell me that woman survived!!!

  • @kurtismiller9544
    @kurtismiller9544 Рік тому +4

    For the Skald and his family

  • @direwolf8703
    @direwolf8703 6 місяців тому

    Do you do audio books cause I would love to hear you read some of my favorite books

  • @sam2x13
    @sam2x13 Рік тому +5

    That was a butthead thing to do, ending the story the way it did. And here I got all invested and was loving the character. Please tell me that there are more stories with jess in it.

    • @m.h.6470
      @m.h.6470 Рік тому

      Doubt it, as the author's reddit account was deleted... so they either don't want to continue or they can't (at least officially).

    • @Ryvaken
      @Ryvaken Рік тому

      Best part of the story. The I'm-not-a-soldier-I-should-be-dead turned cocky and got spanked for it.

  • @fyrebat404
    @fyrebat404 Рік тому

    this seems like a sequel to "all humans lie"

  • @nathlech919
    @nathlech919 Рік тому +6

    Surrendering yourself as a disguise to attack a combatant is (technically) a war crime :p

    • @skoshman1
      @skoshman1 Рік тому +5

      But since humanity isn't in a formal state of war with the slavers, Jess is in the clear. She's only guilty of technical piracy on the high seas (even though it is space) and I don't think any human prosecutor would be inclined to charge her. Now if the slavers home government decides to prosecute and demands her extradition, I am sure the human government will send her to them - with a fresh commission, a large fleet, and an army group of Terran marines that had been told that if they get this over with quickly, they'd be back in time of the Marine Corps ball. Plus Greg from accounting.

    • @lord1todd
      @lord1todd Рік тому +4

      Somehow I doubt the aliens are co-signers of Geneva Conventions.

    • @skoshman1
      @skoshman1 Рік тому

      @@lord1todd But the Nations of Earth will be for the most part. Which means that the nations of Earth can introduce the Xenos to the concept of the Geneva Checklist. No worries though. Even if they were co-signers of the Geneva Conventions I doubt the aliens would care all that much and your point still stands.

    • @Gilhelmi
      @Gilhelmi Рік тому +1

      Geneva only applies during war, and can be waived if major crimes are committed...........
      They are slavers, they have lost all hope of a peaceful resolution.

    • @CHRF-55457
      @CHRF-55457 Рік тому

      She's not even a soldier too...@@skoshman1

  • @SilverMKI
    @SilverMKI Рік тому

    Woo! Jess!

  • @jeanannd
    @jeanannd Рік тому +8

    YES, free the slaves!!!!

  • @robertthompson5527
    @robertthompson5527 Рік тому +1

    Always wondered what became of Jess

  • @najroe
    @najroe Рік тому +1

    for the AlGoRiIThM and the narrator

  • @Friedrich-Wilhelm-1980
    @Friedrich-Wilhelm-1980 Рік тому

    that engineer is a got dam hero!

  • @korthnanfortuna9675
    @korthnanfortuna9675 Рік тому

    Jess is an Aussie. Perfect. XP

  • @raymats0710
    @raymats0710 Рік тому

    Shoots the panel.. what trickery is this.. lmao

  • @bryanengland2466
    @bryanengland2466 Рік тому

    She's a hero and a war criminal at the same time he he

  • @olayinkaolokowo1113
    @olayinkaolokowo1113 Рік тому +1

    I wish it continued

  • @kellyknowsdayway6517
    @kellyknowsdayway6517 Рік тому

    My friend in high-school had the same name. That's funny.

  • @barelyasurvivor1257
    @barelyasurvivor1257 Рік тому +5

    Always, Always, Always, set up door controls to lock when shot or destroyed, because setting them to open if destroyed is just stupid!

    • @Gilhelmi
      @Gilhelmi Рік тому +2

      I agree.
      IRL, there are very few door panels or door locks that would open if you destroy it.
      Honestly, it is something of lazy writing.

    • @z3r0t0l3r4ns
      @z3r0t0l3r4ns Рік тому +3

      Until you get trapped somewhere because some idiot spills coffee on the panel.

    • @russellgilson3536
      @russellgilson3536 9 місяців тому +1

      Actually its a fire measure. Doors automatically open so people arent trapped and firemen can get in.

  • @SOLIAM
    @SOLIAM Рік тому +1

    War crimes for the win?! Lol.

  • @dholmes3307
    @dholmes3307 Рік тому

    For the algebra rythm

  • @caoryn
    @caoryn Рік тому

    This is a followup to "Humans Lie", isn't it.

  • @JoseLay
    @JoseLay Рік тому +1

    I need moaaaar...!!!!

  • @ThreeDogKing
    @ThreeDogKing Рік тому +1

    Temper temper

  • @youngloki1
    @youngloki1 Рік тому

    Holy plot armor lmao

  • @genericuser984
    @genericuser984 Рік тому

    neat

  • @noahkleugh9323
    @noahkleugh9323 Рік тому +1

    Sad

  • @140kittykat
    @140kittykat Рік тому

    My knee jerk reaction to the story ending was UH, RUDE!

  • @christophergoodroe6244
    @christophergoodroe6244 Рік тому

    the author deleted their account rip

  • @merlinwizard1000
    @merlinwizard1000 Рік тому +1

    5th, 11 November 2023

  • @jonnycoathanger8399
    @jonnycoathanger8399 Рік тому

    More

  • @CaptainKiLL83
    @CaptainKiLL83 Рік тому

    Wait...is Jess australian?

  • @markuhler2664
    @markuhler2664 Рік тому

    Outstanding story. Too bad the author has gone to ground.

  • @fishinfranks1065
    @fishinfranks1065 10 місяців тому

    Coent

  • @TheJeikou
    @TheJeikou Рік тому

    Comment

  • @bobboardman1156
    @bobboardman1156 Рік тому

    Good.... except for Jesus f...... C...... bit.

  • @greyman1k
    @greyman1k Рік тому

    Great, great story....but the ending sucks. I prefer my heroes to live; oh, well.

  • @daebi37
    @daebi37 Рік тому +1

    Too Mary Sue.

  • @klappstock943
    @klappstock943 Рік тому +1

    For the Algorithm the story and the voice 🎉

  • @gustawmajewski9911
    @gustawmajewski9911 6 місяців тому

    .