Can't believe I'm only now finding this gem of a channel. Your videos have proven incredibly helpful to me. Thank you for producing these for free, John.
Geese can be dangerous, lol. Really excellent points. Yeah, I hate that "Well you know, Bob..." dialogue that's meant (but doesn't convince us) to conceal an info-dump. Less is more in dialogue.
Can't believe I'm only now finding this gem of a channel. Your videos have proven incredibly helpful to me. Thank you for producing these for free, John.
Glad you like them! Many more videos in the works.
Geese can be dangerous, lol. Really excellent points. Yeah, I hate that "Well you know, Bob..." dialogue that's meant (but doesn't convince us) to conceal an info-dump. Less is more in dialogue.
I loved the bit "dialogue isn't very good at expressing character thoughts". So how do we show the reality behind the held-back speech?
where can I find the video about retorts/comebacks?