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London Business School application essay, reading out my college/university application essays
Hello everyone, in today's video I will be reading out my London Business School application essays that got me an offer and also a scholarship. This video is good for anyone who wants to know how to write a good college application essay or a good university personal statement. Also, this is a good guidance on how to write good job application essays and how to answer job application questions. These are the essays I wrote to get into the Masters in Management at London Business School.
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[@thetryitchick]

I totally agree that there is a fine line between exaggerating and lying. I would be too scared to lie when it comes to applications because I know that they check. Not just college applications but job applications as well 💯 Great video! 💗

[@cloudsjoo]

Thanks for sharing!!

[@YoursTruLEEy]

Agree. Never lie in your application and CV. I used to work in recruitment before, and we definity fact check important information critical for the job/post. 😀

[@cloudsjoo]

Well said!

[@ivywren6296]

you are so smart in using words to describe your contributions and achievements. It is also a skill that many are striving to learn. Thank you for your sharing. It's really useful

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[@timko3135]

I have already submitted my application yet I still enjoy watching

[@cloudsjoo]

Thank you for watching! hahaha

[@alexchege4242]

I can help you write your essays, dissertations, assignments, and exams. Please contact me on [e-mail]

[@LifeWithAStethoscope]

I agree about not sending out generic applications!! It’s a very important point that you highlighted because many of us tend to do this. Definitely a great essay! Good luck 😉

[@alexchege4242]

I can help you write your essays, dissertations, assignments, and exams. Please contact me on [e-mail]

[@CaitlynWest]

Wish this was out back when I was writing application essays!

[@alexchege4242]

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[@CarolineQuinn]

Omg wow this brought me back haha i miss college 😭 your hair is amazing by the way 😍

[@cloudsjoo]

Thank you so much!!

[@FollowYourLife]

So many great advices in only one video! Many young people should see it and apply these precious tips when applying for a business school

[@cloudsjoo]

I totally agree!

[@alexchege4242]

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[@mims_ye]

Exactly what I need right now, thanks Cloudz! 🥰

[@cloudsjoo]

Always Meemz

[@alexchege4242]

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[@claraftalia8942]

hi!! your videos are really helpful & informative i’m so happy to find your channel

[@ElizabethAnnHurt]

This was so interesting I’m sure it’ll help so many people!

[@cloudsjoo]

thank you so much!

[@rizwanulisl]

I'm late today. BTW.. you delivered it fantastic! Much needed. Thanks a ton!

[@cloudsjoo]

Thank you so much!!

[@rizwanulisl]

Thank 'you' a thousand times!

[@alexchege4242]

I can help you write your essays, dissertations, assignments, and exams. Please contact me on [e-mail]

[@reetichugh9443]

This was really helpful video and I was waiting for this video from so long and I am glad that finally its here ❤ and please make a video about how to crack LBS interview , some tips if you are willing to share from your experience that would be helpful....thank you🦋❤

[@cloudsjoo]

I'm so glad!

[@AndradaRusuOfficialYouTube]

Your example essay was great, so many people can take such good points from it 👏🏻

[@cloudsjoo]

Thank you so much!

[@chanezbakir7970]

Thank you so much I loved this video it was really helpful !

[@cloudsjoo]

Glad it was helpful!

[@alexchege4242]

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[@sayheykay4906]

This was very helpful. Thank you so much. 😊

[@nidhia1559]

What do you mean by client oriented institution?

[@nimranabila4414]

Where do we get the application essay questions??

[@fabiomurli2357]

Very useful video ,Thanks u so much!!

[@alexchege4242]

I can help you write your essays, dissertations, assignments, and exams. Please contact me on [e-mail]

[@pedroanton9371]

Thanks for the video. How many essays did you write in total and what was the purpose of each?

[@cloudsjoo]

There were 2 main questions and 4 smaller questions I believe

[@pratyakshmathur99]

When will you make a new video on application essays?

[@Abhishek-lx5fr]

Thanks for sharing

[@dharunsakhuja6985]

This is so amazing! Thank you so much.

[@cloudsjoo]

Glad you liked it!

[@shivanithesaucesstory4285]

which exam did you give ? gmat or gre ?

[@alexchege4242]

I can help you write your essays, dissertations, assignments, and exams. Please contact me on [e-mail]

[@pratyakshmathur99]

Will a summer school of HEC Paris or LSE help my application/CV look unique ?

[@cloudsjoo]

absolutely

[@punjabculture3883]

Best video

[@rounakmahakul8586]

Hi cloud,
Hope you are doing good during this tough times. Just needed to ask you a question, as do we need a consultancy firm to help in drafting SOPs or LORs for us. Can we draft alone and any sources for refining the SOPs which can help us withstand the college admission.
Regards
Rounak Mahakul

[@vik_theafrican]

nice vid

[@davidparnell3241]

First

[@cloudsjoo]

woohoo

[@raihanferdous3746]

Can I get your email?

[@alexchege4242]

I can help you write your essays, dissertations, assignments, and exams. Please contact me on [e-mail]

[@sydneychukwukelu]

Why's your mouth so small