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  • "They are killers first and tricksters second. You never know about the trick until you’re dead."
    Thanks to all the viewers who voted in last months’s audience-selected topic poll!
    Written toward the winning topic: “Bioships & Space Whales”
    For a thorough breakdown of the topic as only Isaac Arthur can do, check out (Space Whales): • Space Whales & Bioships
    With a definite thanks to Issac for the subtopic ("The Phosphorous Problem"):
    • The Fermi Paradox: The...
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    About this project: I am writing a weekly sci-fi story to the theme of Isaac Arthur’s SFIA videos. It’s a crazy challenging timeframe to create a good short story in, and to do so publicly is even more daunting. I’m just hoping some good stories come out of this, I have fun writing them, and most importantly, the audience enjoys!
    Thanks for stopping by!
    (Neither this channel nor this video are affiliated with or endorsed by Isaac Arthur or SFIA, the author’s just a big fan)

КОМЕНТАРІ • 90

  • @MontieMongoose
    @MontieMongoose Рік тому +18

    I negotiate commercial contracts for a living. I never thought someone could make contract negotiations into an interesting scifi story, yet here we are. Cheers!

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +3

      Thanks, Montie! Doubtless there are fewer space whales and thermal mines in your day-to-day 😂

  • @darreljames4836
    @darreljames4836 11 місяців тому +5

    Delightful short story. Elegant in construction and so enjoyable. A credit to the author.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  11 місяців тому +1

      Thanks, Darrel! Glad you enjoyed it 😃

  • @mymusicmymoney
    @mymusicmymoney Рік тому +5

    “Well played.” Mr. Rowe.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому

      Cheers, Barron! Only game I really want to play every day.

  • @TheHairlessGibbon
    @TheHairlessGibbon 8 місяців тому +1

    Absolutely brilliant. Thank you. What a storey to be introduced to your work. Joseph Conrad said " a work that aspires, however humbly, to the condition of art should carry it's justification in every line"
    I do believe you work to a sandline like this.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  8 місяців тому

      Thanks, Gibbon! Glad you enjoyed it 😃
      What a great, quote! I hadn't heard that one, and I've studied Conrad a little. I used to teach college-level writers, and at the start of the semester, to my fiction students, I would play a video of Isabella Selder playing Bach, ask them how long they thought she practiced, and let them know that, as one of Robert DeNiro's characters once said, "That is the discipline."

  • @0void0eyes0
    @0void0eyes0 6 місяців тому +2

    Fantastic story! One to stand with the greats.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  6 місяців тому

      Thanks, Goofball 😂 Glad you enjoyed it 🙏

  • @Patolomy
    @Patolomy Рік тому +5

    Absolutely loved this story. I spend the majority of my free time playing strategy games and this one hit home for me.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +1

      Cheers, Patrick! Mind that left flank against Etteran opponents :)

  • @stevesyncox9893
    @stevesyncox9893 Рік тому +3

    One of the best. Worthwhile endeavour to continue.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому

      Thanks, Steve! 😃

  • @robindebreuil
    @robindebreuil Рік тому +9

    Perfectly paced, amazing writing as always.

  • @ErikDavisHeim
    @ErikDavisHeim Рік тому +3

    Really enjoyed this one! It's cool seeing the timelines of some of the immortal characters in your stories intertwine with the mortal ones. The contrast between their timescales and what motivates them is really in really interesting.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +1

      Thanks, Erik. Glad you liked it! It's funny how stories bring us to places we might not otherwise go. That contrast really fascinated me too when writing "Dark Swarm," and it is definitely something that needs to be probed a bit more. One of the many things I love about fiction is the way it can ask questions you didn't even know you had. We'll see how it develops!

  • @thomasslover2244
    @thomasslover2244 Рік тому +3

    Keep getting better!

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому

      Thanks, Thomas! That is the goal every week.

  • @jasonweis7890
    @jasonweis7890 Рік тому +2

    Wonderful. Just wonderful. ❤

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому

      Cheers, Jason! Glad you liked it.

  • @charleskutrufis9612
    @charleskutrufis9612 Рік тому +1

    original is an understatement, thank you for a very entertaining story.

  • @karlgru3n654
    @karlgru3n654 9 місяців тому +1

    Another WOW from me.
    Great story, well told.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  9 місяців тому +1

      Cheers, Karl! 😃🙏

    • @susanc4622
      @susanc4622 8 місяців тому

      I thought the Dresens recur or it it just a similar name, perhaps.

  • @SubyBristow
    @SubyBristow Рік тому +3

    Phew!!! I thought Thursday would never get hear. Gray

    • @jobethk588
      @jobethk588 Рік тому +1

      I agree. Listening to Foundation is the only way I made it!

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +1

      Trust me, it gets here fast on my end 😃
      Thanks, Gray!

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +1

      @@jobethk588 Love Foundation!

  • @martinwyke
    @martinwyke Рік тому +1

    I worked out Vendringer was meta-gaming, I thought it was alienation of everyone again the Trask but turned out he his meta-strategy had meta-strategy.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +2

      Cheers, Martin! He was a tricky character who surprised me as the story went along too.

  • @sanecanadian2351
    @sanecanadian2351 Рік тому +1

    Great story. I really enjoyed the feel of chess and the art of war wrapped into it. As well as the utilitarian space whales.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +1

      Thanks, SC! Glad you liked it. Initially, I was thinking about having the supposedly insentient whales start to become conscious, and then dilemma about forcing them to work in an asteroid field where they constantly get injured. And I think that could be a fine story, but it kinda felt very Star Trek TNG. Sometimes the themes are the main plot element, sometimes the main plot element, by necessity, places them in the background a little. Once Vennegor showed up, he really took control of the story. Great suggestion!

    • @sanecanadian2351
      @sanecanadian2351 Рік тому

      @@RoweLit I think it worked great and was a another unique story. If you had gone with your other idea it would have been good just not great. A tribute is one thing, cliché is a whole other thing. I for one am grateful that you're not a star trek writer lol. Maybe the bio ships in the story are referred to as space whales for more the human psyche than the ships themselves. Some comfort for their creators, stuck out in the middle of no where living for centuries. A future idea for them could always be an engineered virus. Perhaps a group could have mistaken the ships to be in fact sentient. Creating a virus to control them and it not having the intended effects. Maybe it does nothing, kills them or creates the very sentient that they entered to control. Ether way I would love to see the ships pop up again from time to time. Maybe as a retrofitted cargo hauler or a passenger transport. They are in your universe now. I also wanted to say I was surprised how well you can integrate ideas into your universe like this. It feels natural, that is more difficult than most people think. Have a great weekend and thanks again for sharing your wonderful work.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +1

      ​@@sanecanadian2351 I may do a talk on the Mechanics channel about integrating ideas. Really it boils down to asking the questions who would be affected by this and how, and then finding the most interesting story of how those situations play out. Here, it was the question why would you need a bioship/what would they be good for, and the short answer was self-healing in a harsh environment, then it developed from there.
      I'd like to think we'll revisit a lot of these themes/characters/places when the time is right.
      Cheers, SC! Enjoy yours as well.

    • @sanecanadian2351
      @sanecanadian2351 Рік тому +1

      @@RoweLit Sounds good. I'm using your other channel for homeschooling lol. Family and friends are coming over so busy busy.

  • @AfSimms
    @AfSimms 11 місяців тому

    That was fvkin AWESOME. I luuuuved that story

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  11 місяців тому

      Thanks, Af! Glad to hear it! 😃

  • @revanamarie7210
    @revanamarie7210 5 місяців тому

    Always enjoy your stories

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  5 місяців тому

      Thanks, Revana! So glad to hear it 😃🙏

  • @escapefelicity2913
    @escapefelicity2913 Рік тому +1

    great picture!

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +1

      Thanks, Felicity!

  • @francisgoin3112
    @francisgoin3112 Рік тому +1

    At about 120 words a minute for a speaking pace, I am floored by how much you write in a week. Do you read and record in a single sitting? Also, what made you decide to take up this mantle of delivering free audio literature?

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +1

      Hi, Francis! I write my stories usually over four or five days, and I would even consider reading/recording part of the editing process, as I often make a few subtle changes as I record., The goal is usually to record in a single sitting, but I started having vocal struggles a few months back, and am working my way back to getting the raw audio done in one sitting again with the help of some vocal coaching. There were a lot of reasons I started publishing my work here--building an audience, reaching people, sharing my passion for sci-fi and fiction more generally. It was something that felt right to try and still feels right to keep going! Grateful you're listening, Francis!

    • @mrtodddelaroderie
      @mrtodddelaroderie Рік тому

      PE Rowe is one of the greats.

  • @VickiNikolaidis
    @VickiNikolaidis Рік тому +1

    Grreat visual!
    👋👋👋👋👋

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +1

      Thanks, Vicki. I definitely liked this one as well!

  • @susanc4622
    @susanc4622 8 місяців тому

    You write such clever stories!

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  8 місяців тому

      Thank you, Susan 🙏You write such nice comments 😃

  • @Balrog4242
    @Balrog4242 Рік тому +2

    Wow amazing story! Beware a patient enemy...

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +1

      Thanks, Balrog! I'll be careful...

  • @ElicBehexan
    @ElicBehexan Рік тому +2

    One of the best story yet!

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +1

      Glad you liked it!

  • @marianneb.7112
    @marianneb.7112 Рік тому

    Excellent! Thank you.

  • @chrishince8947
    @chrishince8947 Рік тому +2

    Great story! Topic idea, space pets!

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +3

      Thanks, Chris! That's a great one that hasn't come up yet. I can see that in a poll soon for sure 👍

  • @erikgarbrecht8001
    @erikgarbrecht8001 Рік тому +1

    Embargo - after listening 6 or 7 times - is hands down my favorite. Any chance of running into the 4 main characters again?

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +1

      Wow, thanks, Erik! Glad you enjoyed this one 😃 There's always a chance, but I'm not sure when/how soon. A lot of stories have been coming around again lately, so maybe sooner than we know 🤔

  • @barrydysert2974
    @barrydysert2974 5 місяців тому

    Absolutely brilliant !:-)

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  5 місяців тому +1

      Cheers, Barry! Something about those audience-selected topics gets me inspired 😃

  • @scottthomas3792
    @scottthomas3792 Рік тому

    Your tales would make a base for great role playing games....

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому

      Thanks, Scott. That's not my wheelhouse for sure, but if someone with that inclination were inspired in some way, I'd love to see where it could go 🤔 I'm sure it won't be long before somebody asks me how to play Sabaca 😄 I think the rules are similar to that game in Star Wars where the pieces bodyslam each other, only with sticks 🤣

  • @mariokajin
    @mariokajin 11 місяців тому

    Good one, really good one.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  11 місяців тому

      Thanks, Mario 🙏

  • @edpiv2233
    @edpiv2233 Рік тому +2

    What a wonderful writer you are. I am getting through every one of your pieces.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +1

      Thanks Ed! So glad you're enjoying. Many more to come!

  • @bewarethegreyghost
    @bewarethegreyghost Рік тому +1

    Wonderful

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому

      Cheers, greyghost!

  • @mrtodddelaroderie
    @mrtodddelaroderie Рік тому

    My dear friend thank you for another great story. Is Vinegar based around the WW2 General Vinegar Joe Stilwell? He was a salty clever dog. If not can you shed any in sight in to any influences in this character? The T
    Poor Trasp kind of remind me of the cold war soviets. Did you ever tell who started the war by introducing the deadly nanites in the wagon wheel or cog story? I thought it was the good okd wizard of Athos. But I am probably wrong on that issue. Thanks again!

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +1

      Cheers, Todd! Glad you liked it. There's no specific inspiration for Vennegor. There are a lot of clever, clever generals through the ages, and I would say that though I've studied both World Wars a fair amount, I'm definitely more well read in the Roman and Greek traditions in warfare (or at least I was long ago). So there's definitely inspiration, but it's more of a spirit of many than a single one.
      The deeper forces behind the war weren't revealed in "Age of Deception," just a glimpse of the origin. Carolina's working on it feverishly with the help of some clever friends, but it's a question that may take a while to unearth...

    • @mrtodddelaroderie
      @mrtodddelaroderie Рік тому

      @@RoweLit well sometimes the fog of war leads to better stories than a disgruntled nanite tech sabotaging a co worker work resulting in a war thru a black swan or is it black flag event. But then again the tragic war from an imbelic playing a prank fits will with just how stupid war actually is in real life.
      Always eager to see your next work my friend.

  • @ad3larde
    @ad3larde Рік тому

    Yeah that one was really good.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому

      Cheers, S Dv. Glad you enjoyed it!

  • @kjharky
    @kjharky 4 місяці тому

    Excellent

  • @jobethk588
    @jobethk588 Рік тому +1

    Cobalt are w-les!

  • @markjames-k7w
    @markjames-k7w 7 місяців тому

    Dang embargo 😮

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  7 місяців тому

      Cheers, Mark!

  • @ericcricket4877
    @ericcricket4877 Рік тому

    Keep writing.

  • @markjames-k7w
    @markjames-k7w 6 місяців тому

    Mark CEN CA here I am 😮

  • @kitkakitteh
    @kitkakitteh 11 місяців тому

    So aholes win. Didn’t care for this one.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  11 місяців тому

      Sometimes they do, yes, 😃

  • @ericruiz658
    @ericruiz658 Рік тому

    Please get back to the whiskey chaos

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому

      Coming right up, Eric! 😃 I try to do one a month. I've got one I'm editing now for upload tomorrow morning (Ep. 8), an origin story for Sosh (shooting for this Thursday) and one next month for the "Cyborg Armies" theme.