These stories tend to be alike. Dialogue is easy to anticipate. The same old lines that I can't imagine people actually using. One makes a statement. The other one repeats the same thing.. There is nothing interesting about the stories because they are predictable. I don't see these stories or the writing being sustainable.
An oldie, but not necessarily that good, due to horrendous errors and continuity issues. This would actually be a GOOD story if someone would bother to proof-read it. Want an example? At the very end, the husband broke it off with Charmaine and found "happiness "with a man who possessed real intelligence and loyalty". Huh? Is this an error, or did he really switch teams? Not that there is anything wrong with it, but it does beg the question poor editing, or plot twist?
These stories tend to be alike.
Dialogue is easy to anticipate.
The same old lines that I can't imagine people actually using.
One makes a statement.
The other one repeats the same thing..
There is nothing interesting about the stories because they are predictable.
I don't see these stories or the writing being sustainable.
Maybe for a date he can take you apartment shopping.
At the end is this another switch by artificial stupidity or is something little different being suggested?
Fix your pronouns. Is the husband bi?
He finally found his man! 😂
An oldie, but not necessarily that good, due to horrendous errors and continuity issues. This would actually be a GOOD story if someone would bother to proof-read it. Want an example? At the very end, the husband broke it off with Charmaine and found "happiness "with a man who possessed real intelligence and loyalty". Huh? Is this an error, or did he really switch teams? Not that there is anything wrong with it, but it does beg the question poor editing, or plot twist?
how many times do i have to hear this story ,,this channel is crap