I outlined *THE PERFECT NOVEL* using all your favorite tropes 😍

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    Is there such a thing as “the perfect novel?" What if you could somehow take all the best ingredients that EVERY reader loves and combine them all to create the perfect recipe for The Ultimate Comfort Book? It might sound like an impossible mission… but I decided to challenge myself to try it. In this video, I'm going to collect all the most-loved story ingredients (voted on by YOU guys), put them all in the blender of my brainstorming process, and see if I can outline the PERFECT novel.
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КОМЕНТАРІ • 737

  • @AbbieEmmons
    @AbbieEmmons  Місяць тому +118

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    • @rivendells_shona
      @rivendells_shona Місяць тому +16

      I’d read it. 😉
      Also, I know I’m coming in late … but how ‘bout this: the prophecy revolves around the “mirror”, but it’s been misinterpreted. The dragon IS the mirror, as it sees through to the soul of the wisher and reflects their true self back to them. If the wisher can embrace their true reality, the dragon finds them worthy.

    • @raejax1
      @raejax1 Місяць тому +7

      Is it okay that I count myself as one of your supporters yet I've never actually read one of your books...? 'Cause I tell my writer friends about you, and got them watching your videos where you give tips and everything, but I kind of feel guilty that I haven't read one yet. (Also I'm kinda broke still from that one bookstore trip I took last last weekend...)

    • @ladychance3522
      @ladychance3522 Місяць тому +6

      Please write this, I want to read it now🙈😂

    • @nadiamegna8666
      @nadiamegna8666 Місяць тому

      I would read the ABSOLUTE HELL out of this like SERIOUSLY 👍✨

    • @Buffy8Fan
      @Buffy8Fan Місяць тому

      I wrote a comment two weeks ago saying, "Just tell me when its published so I can buy it," but I don't know if that's what your intentions for the final product are. I hope so.

  • @HannahBessette
    @HannahBessette 2 місяці тому +981

    Community: *chooses fantasy genre over romance in the polls*
    Abbie: …FANTASY RoMANCE

    • @Iso20227
      @Iso20227 2 місяці тому +90

      Hey, I’m okay with that.
      A little bit of romance can always spice up a book.

    • @ChillHappiness
      @ChillHappiness 2 місяці тому +53

      And she cooked a feast! Fantasy romance is SO GOOD! 💙

    • @mazegazer2753
      @mazegazer2753 2 місяці тому +8

      lol

    • @AbbieEmmons
      @AbbieEmmons  2 місяці тому +150

      🤣 I couldn't resist

    • @jasmine_rice
      @jasmine_rice 2 місяці тому +25

      BECAUSE it's the best kind of fantasy!

  • @quirkyauthor5378
    @quirkyauthor5378 2 місяці тому +423

    I actually love that she has the sweet girl aesthetic with a badass/mysterious personality. Its fun.

    • @usdutchkitty
      @usdutchkitty 2 місяці тому +9

      Yep, it is if you give the sweet girl aesthetic to, say, Black Widow. :D

    • @jpainter7147
      @jpainter7147 2 місяці тому +36

      I feel like the soft girl look would be a great disguise for an assassin.

    • @AbbieEmmons
      @AbbieEmmons  2 місяці тому +45

      I can honestly relate to this combination a lot 😂

    • @johntabler349
      @johntabler349 2 місяці тому +8

      The who did this question can be so layered in this scenario, who left physical scars on her body from her torture but deeper who used that pain to force you to become something you don't want to be (assassin)

    • @AmyWrightTheNerd
      @AmyWrightTheNerd Місяць тому +2

      Yeah she reminds me of Aerith in FF7

  • @anver6594
    @anver6594 2 місяці тому +493

    I am so fascinated by how fast you come up with an entire outline like that! It seems so simple when you do it. When I try making up a story, I always get stuck on tiny details immediately. Like, I create these problems or plot twists for my characters, but then I can't figure out how to solve them, so I just quit. I think it's really hard to find that balance between too vague and too precise.

    • @justClaya
      @justClaya 2 місяці тому +22

      I fall into this same conundrum haha

    • @worthfightingfor2299
      @worthfightingfor2299 2 місяці тому +14

      Literally same! It was so cool seeing how she worked that out!

    • @HelenaCross
      @HelenaCross 2 місяці тому +6

      Same! I wondered…was all this on the spot or were there breaks throughout the day, then recorded and edited in. I imagine there was time taken to brainstorm something decent to work with.

    • @AbbieEmmons
      @AbbieEmmons  2 місяці тому +110

      Thank you! I'm glad this brainstorm process inspired you! ☺️ I agree, getting stuck on the little details can be discouraging and stop the flow state of creativity. I find it's best to file those things under "I'll figure it out later" 😏

    • @amethystb12345
      @amethystb12345 2 місяці тому +7

      I have sort of the same issue but it's a bit different. I have started the same story like 5 different times in 5 different ways, get to a certain point each time & realize I hate everything then start over. I can't seem to make up my mind or get stuck on an idea but can't figure out how to put it into the current story. I've had people tell me don't overthink just write...easier said than done.

  • @Noitartst
    @Noitartst 2 місяці тому +222

    Why be so conflicted over whether the idea of a "soft," girly girl could work? Sure, it can-ever heard of the term "pretty poison"? Have her lure her prey to their deaths by way of food and drink, then poison them, probably via some deadly form of flower extract to complete the "pretty" motif. Overt kindness covering covert cold-bloodedness is truly chilling, and potent, so writing such a character is MORE than intriguing to me.
    Having her being a poisoner would fit her as also a spy and assassin, and if so, who is she doing this for? What are her loyalties and how was she trained? How much remorse does she feel? The tension and mistrust betwixt her and whoever her love interest is start to write themselves.
    A strong female character need not know martial arts nor have great physical strength to have power, folks; why beat them up when you know how to manipulate them? A poisoner and manipulator whilst appearing classically feminine would be a GREAT complement.
    What if she's killed someone he seeks to avenge, and they're falling for each other? Or she realizes she has to kill either him, or someone he holds dear? What if she has to comfort him after she's murdered his mother, say, and now he's cursing out poisoners in particular as incorrigible cowards whilst swearing vengeance on whoever did this? There's no easy resolution, is there?

    • @HannahBessette
      @HannahBessette 2 місяці тому +10

      Immediately struck me as a cool idea

    • @Noitartst
      @Noitartst 2 місяці тому +6

      Abbie's idea, or my flesh-out thereto?
      Having her being a poisoner would fit her as also a spy and assassin, and if so, who is she doing this for? What are her loyalties and how was she trained? How much remorse does she feel? The tension and mistrust betwixt her and whoever her love interest is start to write themselves.
      A strong female character need not know martial arts nor have great physical strength to have power, folks; why beat them up when you know how to manipulate them? A poisoner and manipulator whilst appearing classically feminine would be a GREAT complement.
      What if she's killed someone he seeks to avenge, and they're falling for each other? Or she realizes she has to kill either him, or someone he holds dear? What if she has to comfort him after she's murdered his mother, say, and now he's cursing out poisoners in particular as incorrigible cowards whilst swearing vengeance on whoever did this? There's no easy resolution, is there?
      @@HannahBessette

    • @SwedishTourist
      @SwedishTourist 24 дні тому +1

      I think this is one of the reasons Abbie got so excited about the plot. She realised quite soon that this is the perfect disguise. Of course hah! :) (just my guess)

  • @OFfIcIaL_DJ1
    @OFfIcIaL_DJ1 2 місяці тому +468

    NO MY BOOK HAS ALL OF THOSE- except "she's an assassin"...for now ;)

    • @ilovebeinagirl
      @ilovebeinagirl 2 місяці тому +46

      Mine too, except my MC THINKS she's an assassin! 😂

    • @Iso20227
      @Iso20227 2 місяці тому +29

      I have a book in writing with enemies to lovers, and the girl is an assassin who was betrayed by an evil king.
      I almost feel ripped off, but I’m still excited to see where this goes.

    • @kc-jm3cd
      @kc-jm3cd 2 місяці тому +7

      I didn’t do the assassin thing or the prince thing, but almost everything else is there, but it spans over multiple books

    • @OFfIcIaL_DJ1
      @OFfIcIaL_DJ1 2 місяці тому +7

      NEVERMIND! ITS "*he's* an assassin" same thing right?
      my book is damn huge, im so scared

    • @Iso20227
      @Iso20227 2 місяці тому +3

      @@OFfIcIaL_DJ1 now I’m intrigued.
      How huge is your book?

  • @stjuliaofavila
    @stjuliaofavila 2 місяці тому +295

    ABBIE IF YOU DONT WRITE AND PUBLISH THIS BOOK IM GOING TO DIE 😂 this is such literal GOLD! I love this so much! 😍
    ~Lia Nicole

    • @Inemin27
      @Inemin27 2 місяці тому +21

      I had the same thought when the video ended. So, I literally searched through the comments to see if anyone had said that already. Yes, Abbie, please write that book. It's 🥰amazing!

    • @worthfightingfor2299
      @worthfightingfor2299 2 місяці тому +12

      YESSSS

    • @brandic89
      @brandic89 2 місяці тому

      Oh, the best comics actually have tragic pasts!

    • @AbbieEmmons
      @AbbieEmmons  Місяць тому +24

      tbh I'm VERY excited to write it... 😍 If you want to stay in the loop about this WIP, join the waitlist here: abbieemmons.ck.page/5eeb91bd0f

    • @Inemin27
      @Inemin27 Місяць тому +2

      @@AbbieEmmons Yaaay! I'm all in. ♥ [Can't wait! 🙀]

  • @Amy_Mi6
    @Amy_Mi6 2 місяці тому +188

    Only Abbie would approach a slay-the-dragon trope and go "Nope. Animal cruelty. Gotta have a workaround for that bit." 😂❤

    • @jamie-1608
      @jamie-1608 2 місяці тому +16

      Slay the dragon 💅

    • @AbbieEmmons
      @AbbieEmmons  Місяць тому +26

      It's my inner enneagram One being empathetic all the time 🤭

    • @Amy_Mi6
      @Amy_Mi6 Місяць тому +8

      @@AbbieEmmons And we *love* you for that 😄❤️

    • @Miss_Myth
      @Miss_Myth Місяць тому +1

      ​@AbbieEmmons I have a fix!! Instead of fighting the dragon, there's some sort of reveal of needing intelligence rather than force to get past the dragon - riddle, philosophy, etc. [I'm honestly picturing the climax of the old movie Flight of Dragons if anyone remembers that.] 🥰 Whatever happens I love this so much! [Enneagram One as well!!]

    • @Buffy8Fan
      @Buffy8Fan Місяць тому

      @@AbbieEmmons Is there a profile for plae/setting you would recommend. I'm struggling and I don't like the ones that come with programs.

  • @IzzyMarrie
    @IzzyMarrie 2 місяці тому +162

    Honestly would love to see this get written. I really love the idea of an assassin woman who dresses beautifully or seems to have a gentle look to her despite her darker ambitions. For one, it hints to another side of her. But also, it'd help her blend into places where she could do her job unnoticed. It shows that she's versatile. The only thing I was kinda sad didn't make it into the outline was the community voted grumpy guy. I think having him be all the things you outlined, including having a "life of the party" and cheerful disposition for his public appearance while being a bit sardonic and grumpy when with her would've been interesting. She can be sharp witted and sarcastic, but she actually does have a sweet side that is gentle which comes out moreso when she's vulnerable would've also been interesting to see.

    • @AbbieEmmons
      @AbbieEmmons  2 місяці тому +46

      Yes I agree!! 👏 I feel like most assassin (or badass) female characters fit into this very standard "tough and mean" cookie cutter, so it would be nice to see some variation. And yes, I agree the guy could definitely have a grumpy side that comes out when he's not people-pleasing 🤣

    • @IzzyMarrie
      @IzzyMarrie 2 місяці тому +5

      @@AbbieEmmons I tend to love characters who seem all nice on the surface but are kinda dickish. Astarion from Baldur's Gate 3 is part of the reason for that. But yes!! We need more sweet looking, flower loving female baddies!

    • @meganhuffmanwrites
      @meganhuffmanwrites 2 місяці тому +8

      I feel like the grumpy part of the trope for the guy is heavily informed by the fact that he feels so out of place in his environment and among his family. He obviously isn't accepted by his family and he bears the weight of that criticism. Over years, that can cause a person to go from sunny and constantly trying harder to becoming hard and cyncial inside because they just "know" that they will never live up to expectations and can never gain the approval of the people they most aim to please. That could be really fun to explore for the trope. Conversely, the sunshine disposition of the girl strikes me as manifesting in the story in a completely forced way from the female character. She is laying on the sunny bright positivity to gain the prince's trust and that isn't really who she is, maybe? @@AbbieEmmons

    • @anonym6013
      @anonym6013 2 місяці тому +1

      So literally Celeana from Glass Throne then?

    • @helenamenezes6056
      @helenamenezes6056 2 місяці тому +1

      What I like to imagine is that he could be like Mirabel from Encanto. He could be fun and comic relief when he's trying to get people to notice him, but in other moments he is pessimistic and grumpy

  • @PrincessDonuts
    @PrincessDonuts 2 місяці тому +78

    Maybe the prince can be an outcast AND funny/goofy/charming at the same time because :
    1. The king has considered the prince to be unworthy to be king since his childhood, maybe because of some sacred oath, or rite of passage, because of his public speaking fear or something similar.
    2. Because he did not have his father's favor, the others in the palace might have ostracized him, like the nobles and his brothers
    3. He's awkward, maybe shy because of the isolation and is not the best at socializing, but maybe sneaks out once and meets the guards of the palace and finds loyal friends in them? They might not know that he is the prince, but they're comfortable around him and like him. Maybe he goes to the towns with them and sees the conditions of the peasants and how they live. They could be suffering or something maybe, possibly because of his father's misgoverning (he could be showing favoritism to the nobles), and this becomes something the prince fixes later on in the end when the king is dethroned.

    • @PrincessDonuts
      @PrincessDonuts 2 місяці тому +7

      He is funny/goofy/charming around the guards who he's close and comfortable with, but not around the nobles, his brothers or the assasin because he's very guarded

  • @mirelevance
    @mirelevance Місяць тому +21

    I love the name “Kieran” for the softy, female assassin. The name means, “little dark one”. It fits her personality. The name has a feisty edge, but it is also sweet- a beautiful blend, just like her. ☺️

    • @GeorgiaPeach05
      @GeorgiaPeach05 Місяць тому +2

      That's a cool name! Also, I love how you describe it

  • @VXMasterson
    @VXMasterson 2 місяці тому +71

    I was so upset when Grumpy Guy/Sunshine Girl won over Sunshine Guy/Grumpy Girl
    Would love to see more challenges like this!

    • @jasmine_rice
      @jasmine_rice 2 місяці тому +13

      YES! I love sunshine guy/grumpy girl ❤❤❤

    • @AbbieEmmons
      @AbbieEmmons  Місяць тому +22

      I know same 🥲

    • @Jade.051
      @Jade.051 Місяць тому +5

      I love grumpy girl/sunshine guy, I was upset too😅

    • @mollymacaroni934
      @mollymacaroni934 Місяць тому +3

      omg yes, reminds me of Wendell and Emily from Emily wilde

  • @maj0r_t0m
    @maj0r_t0m 2 місяці тому +69

    I love how this is the perfect mix of cozy and cute with total unhingedness and honestly I love it I'm here for it

  • @BreezyRenee333
    @BreezyRenee333 2 місяці тому +31

    The Throne of Glass vibes I'm getting here 😂😂

  • @SkeeterMorey
    @SkeeterMorey 2 місяці тому +60

    Loved the way you laced all those ideas together and seeing how you built it from the ground up. Pure genius.

    • @AbbieEmmons
      @AbbieEmmons  2 місяці тому +4

      Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed this video! ☺️

    • @audreyharty4859
      @audreyharty4859 Місяць тому

      @@AbbieEmmons Please write this book. I will buy it.

    • @AbbieEmmons
      @AbbieEmmons  Місяць тому

      @@audreyharty4859 Tbh I'm very excited to write it!! If you want to stay in the loop while I work on this WIP you can join the waitlist here: abbieemmons.ck.page/5eeb91bd0f

  • @Sarah...Thatsall
    @Sarah...Thatsall 2 місяці тому +19

    Male writers: "Slay The Dragon!"
    Female writers:"That would be animal cruelty let's find another way around"

  • @somebody-dv8fr
    @somebody-dv8fr 2 місяці тому +13

    Prince thinks he's unworthy and goes on a quest to reach a magical wish granting device that will make him a better person -worthy of being a Prince. In his AHA moment he realises that whatver he was seeking, he already has or has earned during the epic quest, BUT not before sacrifing his wish of being king to save the assassin who in turn had sacrificed herself as a result of her AHA moment as she tries to prove herself to the prince.

  • @AlAA4...U
    @AlAA4...U 2 місяці тому +40

    Your story-telling is absolutely amazing :)

  • @MissRuthina
    @MissRuthina 2 місяці тому +23

    I am a fantasy lover...I do not enjoy contemporary as a genre. But on principle I felt like I had to vet Abbie and I consumed her book 100 days of sunlight in a night (I stayed up all night to read it too!!). Just wanted to message....

  • @georginakosi5411
    @georginakosi5411 2 місяці тому +22

    27:04: It's like the sudden "I don't want it anymore" like in the movie "Baby Boom". I forgot the name of this step.
    And second, Abbie you are a GENIUS to figure this out, and outline so well. Please write it and publish it, I want to read it!!!

    • @AbbieEmmons
      @AbbieEmmons  2 місяці тому +7

      Yes!! I like to call that the "temptation" story beat... I actually did a video on it using Baby Boom as an example: ua-cam.com/video/ceZbrDrecFg/v-deo.html
      And thank you for saying you'd read this if I wrote it!! I might just do that 😏

  • @lamultishipper9530
    @lamultishipper9530 Місяць тому +4

    12:05 Omg i love it when the aestathic of the person condricts what you usually imagine them to act like. It catches you ofguard and makes the person seem that more real

  • @wizardgaming758
    @wizardgaming758 2 місяці тому +14

    Just thought of something that might give the story a bit of a twist. Maybe the prince finds out that the dragon is really his mother? The king had his wife banished for some reason, and got a wizard to cast a spell on her. Maybe, fantasy isn't really my forte, but thought that might be an intriguing plot twist. Great story building though, Abbie!

    • @HelenaCross
      @HelenaCross 2 місяці тому +1

      Maybe that’s where the warring clans comes from? Possibly a war with wizards. Or the father’s need to kill the heir? Tied to this whole dragon, wish, and wizard conspiracy?🤔

    • @helenamenezes6056
      @helenamenezes6056 2 місяці тому +5

      Dragon lives, Prince gets a loving mom, and even more reason to dethrone the king... Yeah, this seems perfect.
      Why is this Prince literally Zuko?

  • @ashleycentilles9938
    @ashleycentilles9938 2 місяці тому +7

    It's kinda weird to know what abbie is gonna write and i've been spoiled about everything but omg this is so fun and entertaining!

    • @AbbieEmmons
      @AbbieEmmons  Місяць тому +2

      hehe I'm the queen of spoilers I can't help it 😅 but I’m very excited to develop this WIP more… 😍 if you want to stay in the loop as I work on this novel, you can join the waitlist here: abbieemmons.ck.page/5eeb91bd0f

  • @user-wr2uy9pj4m
    @user-wr2uy9pj4m 2 місяці тому +16

    15:21 I think this would be SO FUN if she doesn't know he's secretly the prince and then when she discovers it is also when she has to make the choice
    19:03 yes!!! This is so fun!

    • @AbbieEmmons
      @AbbieEmmons  Місяць тому +1

      Honestly I’m very excited to develop this WIP more… 😍 if you want to stay in the loop as I work on this novel, you can join the waitlist here: abbieemmons.ck.page/5eeb91bd0f

    • @user-wr2uy9pj4m
      @user-wr2uy9pj4m Місяць тому +1

      @@AbbieEmmons Ooh awesome! Will do!

  • @katiem4185
    @katiem4185 2 місяці тому +20

    That was the most fun I've ever had on instagram and this video is epic. Please do it again 😍

    • @AbbieEmmons
      @AbbieEmmons  Місяць тому +3

      I will definitely be doing more vids like this! 😊

    • @SwedishTourist
      @SwedishTourist Місяць тому

      I agree it was super fun!!!

  • @ub-4630
    @ub-4630 2 місяці тому +25

    I'm good at writing this way but it's definitely out of my comfort zone.

  • @kc-jm3cd
    @kc-jm3cd 2 місяці тому +25

    It’s so cute she didn’t wanna kill the dragon And the story is so cliché it’s good. But that was a pretty amazing first run at it. Well done!

  • @ArcherVegaMusic
    @ArcherVegaMusic 2 місяці тому +8

    Magic mirrors always act as glamours, not wish artifacts. A mirror that ACTUALLY changes something in reality is such a new concept I’d LOVE to see it.

  • @CWAChristy
    @CWAChristy 2 місяці тому +3

    I like how in the polls said they preferred grumpy guy/sunshiny girl, but every poll about the characters proved otherwise lol

  • @DzisiajwBetlejemSylwiaHazboun
    @DzisiajwBetlejemSylwiaHazboun 2 місяці тому +9

    The more drama, blood and evil the happier she is with talking about it 😂

  • @lexi_coop_
    @lexi_coop_ 2 місяці тому +5

    My current WIP already includes so many of these haha. Royalty, secret identities, an epic quest, mountains and forests, etc. We love to see it!

  • @user-wt1fn5gb1v
    @user-wt1fn5gb1v 2 місяці тому +15

    OH. MY. GOSH.
    I finally read One Hundred Days of Sunlight, and man, I was HOOKED!
    I got through the whole book in like 3 days!!
    It was awesome!!!!!!
    I've never identified with a character more than I have Tessa 😅

    • @makeros1963
      @makeros1963 2 місяці тому +2

      do you think it’s good for 12 year olds

    • @user-wt1fn5gb1v
      @user-wt1fn5gb1v 2 місяці тому +4

      @@makeros1963
      Hm? Like is it appropriate?
      I'd say so! There's some swearing, but nothing more severe then the S word, and none of the romance is really innapropriate!

    • @makeros1963
      @makeros1963 2 місяці тому

      @@user-wt1fn5gb1v thank you for that☺️

    • @sarahdenton7559
      @sarahdenton7559 2 місяці тому +2

      @@makeros1963Yeah it should be fine! I read it when I was either 12 or 13 and it was ok. It might just depend on maturity. I don’t remember anything really inappropriate either

    • @makeros1963
      @makeros1963 2 місяці тому

      @@sarahdenton7559 thank you ☺️

  • @pixie_angel_10
    @pixie_angel_10 27 днів тому +1

    Honestly, I am writing a book that combines several genres including murder and suicide mystery, romance, fantasy, and science fiction. However, I just wanted to say that your videos have been incredibly helpful in my learning process. Thank you, Abbie, for sharing such valuable content. I look forward to seeing more from you.

  • @JustAnotherWritingBookworm
    @JustAnotherWritingBookworm 2 місяці тому +3

    Are you planning on writing this??? I’d love to see it!😊

    • @AbbieEmmons
      @AbbieEmmons  Місяць тому

      Yes! I’m actually quite excited to develop this WIP more… 😍 if you want to stay in the loop as I work on this novel, you can join the waitlist here: abbieemmons.ck.page/5eeb91bd0f

  • @MrZkoki
    @MrZkoki 2 місяці тому +3

    You really aced this improvisational exercise, fueled by popular demand so to say. And you were able to come up with very concrete ideas on the fly. Your writer's mindset has become much more grounded and multifaceted in a matter of months. Good for you, Abbie.

  • @caitiebys8883
    @caitiebys8883 2 місяці тому +6

    This is probably one of my favorite Writer's Life Wednesdays videos ❤❤❤

  • @HelenaCross
    @HelenaCross 2 місяці тому +4

    Bethany Atazadeh (another UA-camr and author) did something similar. She mixed up a lot of different story ingredients and planned a book outline. Called it her “butter book” after the term used in 7 Figure Fiction (butter being all the tropes and cool ideas you love about the books you read). This sounds like a ton of fun! ❤

  • @AlisonK-hf6ol
    @AlisonK-hf6ol 2 місяці тому +5

    She had me hooked at the title. ABBBIIEEE THIS BOOK IS TOO PERFECT ITS NOT POSSSIBLE

    • @AbbieEmmons
      @AbbieEmmons  Місяць тому +1

      Thank you!! Tbh I’m very excited to develop this WIP more… 😍 if you want to stay in the loop as I work on this novel, you can join the waitlist here: abbieemmons.ck.page/5eeb91bd0f

    • @AlisonK-hf6ol
      @AlisonK-hf6ol Місяць тому

      @@AbbieEmmons AHHH TYSM!! I will def stay in the loop

  • @evastrgar
    @evastrgar 2 місяці тому +3

    This is one of your best videos. I want to see more videos like this.

  • @AyakaSakura113
    @AyakaSakura113 2 місяці тому +3

    OMG I LOVE THAT STORY ALREADY!! Please keep writing this with us, this was SO much fun! I want to read this book already, in fact, i even want to write it. But i love this format of working on a book together with you!! It was soo so much fun ah! Love you Abbie, you're the literal definition of comfort

    • @AbbieEmmons
      @AbbieEmmons  Місяць тому

      Thank you so much!! Tbh I’m very excited to develop this WIP more… 😍 if you want to stay in the loop as I work on this novel, you can join the waitlist here: abbieemmons.ck.page/5eeb91bd0f

  • @emmapatterson9797
    @emmapatterson9797 2 місяці тому +5

    Ok but how does Abbie make this look so easy😅😭 Thank you for this Abbie, this actually helped me come up with some more ideas for my own story that I'm outline right now! Would love to see this as a series - either (AKA BOTH) doing more polls that you turn into outlines or seeing this one through and showing us your process for taking an idea to outline to writing to editing to cover design + book naming to publishing. That would be SO cool, I would watch the heck out of that series!! P.S. If you actually write this book I would devour it SO FAST😍🤤

    • @AbbieEmmons
      @AbbieEmmons  Місяць тому +1

      These are such great ideas! Thank you for watching, I'm so glad you were inspired by this video. I'm definitely going to do more writing challenges like this one and develop this WIP more as well! 😍 if you want to stay in the loop as I work on this novel, you can join the waitlist here: abbieemmons.ck.page/5eeb91bd0f

  • @CMHolst
    @CMHolst Місяць тому +3

    Idk if anyone else has contributed their thoughts on the end, but maybe the dragon slays the evil king as thanks for sparing its life. Now the prince/king has a dragon protector. 🤷‍♀️

  • @maaquijano
    @maaquijano 2 місяці тому +2

    The way I DEVOURED every second of this video! 👏 Thank you for this, Abbie! Now I'm inspired to mix all my favorite tropes into a novel. 😭

  • @katiewillson7759
    @katiewillson7759 2 місяці тому

    Watched the entire video straight through!! This is a gem!! Thanks Abbie 💜

  • @meharbrar3132
    @meharbrar3132 2 місяці тому +3

    after you wrote that FMC 'who' section I also did the "gleeful writer plotting angst" laugh-

  • @mazegazer2753
    @mazegazer2753 2 місяці тому +1

    gah your glow in this is contagious...

  • @ThePinkLatte
    @ThePinkLatte 2 місяці тому +8

    ooo im gonna use some of these tropes, i have been trying to plot a fantasy and no idea ever seems good enough 📖

  • @LV-bk4it
    @LV-bk4it 2 місяці тому +2

    You're truly gifted.

  • @maddieburnett4554
    @maddieburnett4554 2 місяці тому +1

    Absolutely LOVED this!! It was so fun! Please do more of them!!

  • @craftsstuff1774
    @craftsstuff1774 Місяць тому +1

    You HAVE to write this book! I would read it over and over for forever.

    • @AbbieEmmons
      @AbbieEmmons  Місяць тому +1

      Tbh I’m very excited to develop this WIP more… 😍 if you want to stay in the loop as I work on this novel, you can join the waitlist here: abbieemmons.ck.page/5eeb91bd0f

  • @eallae
    @eallae 27 днів тому

    I needed this video ! I realised that the first novel I ever wrote has so many (honestly SO many) of these same ingredients, yet the story is waaay different. And all of a suden, my fear of not being original is gone ♥

  • @angelicanavarro5311
    @angelicanavarro5311 2 місяці тому

    It was helpful to see how you take your time hashing out elements of the story. Thank you.

  • @TheZetaKai
    @TheZetaKai 2 місяці тому +2

    This reminds me a lot of polls that I conducted years ago in a homebrew D&D forum to vote up an entire campaign setting. The results of the polls were very interesting, not what we expected, and not what we would have always chosen on our own. But it was great learning experience, and I'm still proud of our results. It took us over two years to publish, but we did complete it eventually.

  • @krystal_stephanie_958
    @krystal_stephanie_958 2 місяці тому

    Pleaseee do more of these, this was so insightful and fun!! ❤

  • @mariavalente6304
    @mariavalente6304 2 місяці тому +5

    IN 2 DAYS ABBIE'S LIKE: HERE'S MY BOOK - ITS ON PREORDER. god I wish.

    • @AbbieEmmons
      @AbbieEmmons  Місяць тому

      hehe not quite but here's the waitlist!!! 😍 abbieemmons.ck.page/5eeb91bd0f

  • @angelabublitz5912
    @angelabublitz5912 2 місяці тому

    One of my most favorite Abbie videos EVER 😍

  • @im_autumnbreeze
    @im_autumnbreeze 2 місяці тому

    This video and story ingredient exercise genuinely has me SO EXCITED to write!! The inspiration and discover juices are flowing immediately. Love love love

  • @EveryFurtherMile
    @EveryFurtherMile 2 місяці тому +2

    This was quite interesting. It holds a decent amount of the aspects I want to include in my book, so it was neat to see how much the storyline can differ even with similar tropes.

  • @ashleymitchell5288
    @ashleymitchell5288 Місяць тому +2

    I'd love to see this video concept for a mystery thriller! I'm so curious how you'd go about drafting

  • @videnlu966
    @videnlu966 2 місяці тому +1

    This is the most fun I've had in a while! I loved every second of this video !!!!💗😍

  • @nancywakeley9853
    @nancywakeley9853 2 місяці тому +5

    MAYBE because the dragon is killed, that automatically meant that the king would also be 'dethroned' but the two MC's didn't know it at the time. When they return home, no matter the cost, they find that by slaying the dragon, they have 'slayed' the evil king as well. Such a great story!!

    • @usdutchkitty
      @usdutchkitty 2 місяці тому +2

      I was thinking that the dragon is only "slain" by self-sacrifice by the person/persons involved. It can be a sudden twist on the "slay the dragon" trope, like... it is an extension to who might be worthy of "The wish mirror". What are dragons known for? Being greedy. Even though the prince is wanting his dreams to come true, he's being greedy. What if the dragon is a reflection of "greed" and maybe, in the battle against it, declarations are made and once the prince wants to forgo his wish, his greed, to save the assassin, the dragon sees that the prince is selfless, and, as an extension of the mirror... I see this in my head as almost illusionary crystal-glass magic shows around the dragon, breaking and it is actually becomes the item.
      So another twist on the "slay the dragon" trope. You're only worthy if you slay your greed.

    • @jpainter7147
      @jpainter7147 2 місяці тому

      Maybe the prophecy is ambiguous and it is taken to mean that the dragon needs slaying, but actually it meant the king needed dethroning the whole time

    • @usdutchkitty
      @usdutchkitty 2 місяці тому

      Maybe, I just let my brain go as she was trying to plot out the self-sacrifice/dragon bit. My D&D brain turned on at that point of "oh, there's a classic but there could be a really good twist if played right"@@jpainter7147

    • @AbbieEmmons
      @AbbieEmmons  2 місяці тому +1

      "You're only worthy if you slay your greed." I love that!! 👏

  • @peachespallet
    @peachespallet 2 місяці тому

    Thanks for the tips, Abbie I always look forward to your videos!

  • @janinawittkopp4995
    @janinawittkopp4995 2 місяці тому +1

    That was amazing. Please do more of this, this was so inspireing for me as a baby author 😊

  • @isabellavieiraventura7384
    @isabellavieiraventura7384 2 місяці тому +2

    I'm just BLOWN AWAY by this video. The ideia, the storytelling, the amount of fun and inspiration this gave me is INSANE. PLEASE MAKE MORE

    • @AbbieEmmons
      @AbbieEmmons  Місяць тому

      Thank you! I'm definitely going to make more vids like this one! and I'm quite excited to develop this WIP more… 😍 if you want to stay in the loop as I work on this novel, you can join the waitlist here: abbieemmons.ck.page/5eeb91bd0f

  • @somebody-dv8fr
    @somebody-dv8fr 2 місяці тому +8

    The idea that comes to mind right of the bat at the thought of forbidden romance and mistaken identity is that two people -who hated each other- fall in love. One of them has their identity undercover for which ever reason and they later come to realise that they come from opposing family lines or species that cant be together but its too late cause they've already fallen in love.

  • @alenabaez
    @alenabaez 2 місяці тому +1

    tell me why i was just about to ask for the prompts and tropes and right then... you gives it to us... you are so on it, I love it! Thank you 🤣💖

  • @grumpypunch3910
    @grumpypunch3910 Місяць тому

    I have been ploughing through my outline for ages. Watching Abbie craft this in the way she has is humbling. I'm completely here for it. Thanks Abbie!

  • @Al-rn5qy
    @Al-rn5qy 2 місяці тому

    Love this method.❤️
    You are a creative genius, Abbie!

  • @HiHi-lt1cb
    @HiHi-lt1cb 2 місяці тому +1

    LOVE THIS!! It's a great way to outline a book!!

  • @lyndacamacho1056
    @lyndacamacho1056 2 місяці тому +1

    Yayyy i was waiting for this vid!!! Can't wait to see the final result of the outline!

    • @AbbieEmmons
      @AbbieEmmons  Місяць тому

      Thank you! I’m very excited to develop this WIP more… 😍 if you want to stay in the loop as I work on this novel, you can join the waitlist here: abbieemmons.ck.page/5eeb91bd0f

  • @karensullivan7050
    @karensullivan7050 2 місяці тому

    I'm barely halfway through the video and already think this is the most fun, insane, and inspiring writing challenge to date! What a good time I'm having, can't wait to see the rest...okay just finished it and it was as fun and informative as I thought it would be.

  • @yaelzivanartist
    @yaelzivanartist 2 місяці тому +1

    Im so inspired!! Thank you for this breakdown and the pdf!

  • @writeitrightwithmoi
    @writeitrightwithmoi Місяць тому

    This is such a unique way to write a novel. I guess everyone has their own perspective and like you said, everyone has their own ingredient that will comprise their story. Thanks for creating this template. Kudos!

  • @mirelevance
    @mirelevance Місяць тому +1

    Thank you for having the writing community/ your followers involved with the ideas behind this new WIP. You have made us feel seen and also are writing a story not only that you enjoy, but that we all will enjoy based on popular demand. I hope that the writing community will continue to be involved in Project Dragon 🐉 and that we will have more opportunities to contribute to the formation of this story. Thank you for creating the link to follow along with your journey. We as a community appreciate you and your hard work! Rock on! 🤘🏻❤️ @AbbieEmmons

  • @taliw7736
    @taliw7736 18 днів тому

    Looking so beautiful Abbie
    Excited to see how this story goes

  • @itshannahost
    @itshannahost 2 місяці тому

    Just followed this to solidify my story that I've been writing for the past 3.5yrs. I always enjoy doing exercises like these to streamline my plot and make sure I'm sticking to my themes/character motivations while I write. Helps to go back to the planning stage sometimes when you've had your head in the writing for so long! Would love to see the friends or strangers to lovers trope breakdown at some point too!

  • @sonja.86
    @sonja.86 2 місяці тому

    Hey Abbie. I think this is going to be one of my most favorite videos from you.
    Great work! Thank you so much! 🍀

  • @EmmaJessop
    @EmmaJessop Місяць тому

    I love the sound of this book. Please get IT DONE😊

  • @RosieIfYouKnowMe
    @RosieIfYouKnowMe 2 місяці тому

    Watching to see if there's a better way to outline than what I've been using. Didn't expect so much information 😊 My first novel has a lot of these so I'm pretty happy.

  • @SprinkleGirl
    @SprinkleGirl 2 місяці тому +1

    I love this concept!

  • @Alyssaruthwrites
    @Alyssaruthwrites 2 місяці тому

    I truly needed this video so much. Thank you for getting me excited to write again ❤

  • @lalaladybird
    @lalaladybird Місяць тому

    The way I've been writing (attempting) a novel/series with all of this, and thinking it was too much. This is GOLD.

  • @dm8640
    @dm8640 2 місяці тому +1

    that was such a fun video to watch!!! ❤ would love more challenges like this!

  • @Elia-fn8jv
    @Elia-fn8jv 2 місяці тому +2

    Best and most useful video that you have made!

  • @Fenchy_Artz
    @Fenchy_Artz 2 місяці тому +3

    Literally was struggling to find a video like this all day 😭 thank youu amazing as always! 👏

    • @SwedishTourist
      @SwedishTourist 24 дні тому

      right??? i wrote a reddit post asking for this, and I was literally MOCKED for wanting to see people plot their stories... "do you like to watch paint dry? wanna visit your neighbours when they pay their bills?".
      good thing I already had abbies video in my watchlist haha..
      though some actually gave me good advice. brandon sanderson have a couple of livestreams writing stuff, for example.

  • @sarahwithanhyouheathen3210
    @sarahwithanhyouheathen3210 2 місяці тому

    Omg this was soooo much fun! PLEASE do another one 😁

  • @richardrahl1001
    @richardrahl1001 2 місяці тому +1

    Wonderful! Perhaps your best video in a while. Lovely & helpful as always! :)

  • @Orchidmami
    @Orchidmami 2 місяці тому

    Now I neeeed the finished novel. Also those earrings are so pretty! 💕💕

  • @TheDoomKnight
    @TheDoomKnight 2 місяці тому

    I found it incredibly fun watching you come up with this story. I pants most of my stories, so I don't think would work for me. However, despite this not being the type of book I normally go for, I'd buy this if you wrote it. Thanks for all your videos!

  • @zenmariac7956
    @zenmariac7956 2 місяці тому

    This was great! And honestly, the issue of not having time to flush it out meant that inevitably decisions were made where I was like "no, not that!" which just triggers my own creativity. Sometimes seeing what you don't want to happen works even better to show you what you would like to see in your own stories. I've had entire story plotline formulate in my mind based off the times I don't like what happened with a character in someone else's story. Thank you for the brainstorming inspiration!

  • @ZachScottB
    @ZachScottB 2 місяці тому

    Hey Abby!
    This was great. So much fun and learning.
    It was really beneficial to see how your mind works while outlining a book.
    Even if this was just you playing around and having fun.
    Thanks!

  • @AuroraRose_Andromeda
    @AuroraRose_Andromeda 2 місяці тому

    Thank you Abbie for putting together this amazing video. This has helped me so much as I watched. I even bought your template and will use it with my current WIPS and future WIPs.

    • @AbbieEmmons
      @AbbieEmmons  Місяць тому +1

      Thank you so much, AuroraRose! You're the best. 💗 I'm so glad this inspired you!

  • @nerdgirl8978
    @nerdgirl8978 2 місяці тому +1

    I feel like the Forth wing-series (by Rebecca Yarros) was a book like this. Alot of the favorite trops from other popular books thrown in it's own mix. 😄

  • @KaylaOfficx
    @KaylaOfficx Місяць тому

    The way you were able to think of the whole thing like that is impressive, though in fantasy novels, I tend to look more for the fantasy part, thats why my book, very detailed but doesn't have a concrete story line had been going on for like 2 years now and I'm not even half way done.
    This video would probably help me figuring out how to write my characters, anyways a very helpful and captivating vid!

  • @zenebornman7917
    @zenebornman7917 2 місяці тому +1

    This is so awesome and I love the fact that Abbie says to create your own ideal book cause by all popular votes I know I would've chosen the least popular. Every story is uniquely perfect for each individual writer. 💙

  • @alexisdaylynn
    @alexisdaylynn Місяць тому

    This was extremely impressive and got me excited to read this book

  • @saradeandres2131
    @saradeandres2131 2 місяці тому +13

    Wait, I went through the entire video thinking she was going to announce that she was going to write the book for real so we can see every detail. I hope the ideas not off the table!

    • @usdutchkitty
      @usdutchkitty 2 місяці тому

      Absolutely. I don't actually read fantasy romance but I would give this story a chance.

    • @AbbieEmmons
      @AbbieEmmons  Місяць тому +2

      Tbh I’m very excited to develop this WIP more… 😍 I can't say when it will be published, but someday!! if you want to stay in the loop as I work on this novel, you can join the waitlist here: abbieemmons.ck.page/5eeb91bd0f

    • @georgiasomething2064
      @georgiasomething2064 Місяць тому

      @@AbbieEmmonsEYYYYYYYY

  • @ce3772
    @ce3772 2 місяці тому +2

    Okay, I would love more of these. As you were laying out the voting options I was getting ideas! ❤
    My brain leaned more into the idea of warring clans (you could even use the elemental powers bit in here) - the girl puts up the girlie facade to hide the fact she's an assassin, (Wears a flower crown and a smile as she slips the blade between his ribs. Sweet and sharp - her kiss of death.) and joins with the prince to go on a kingdom/world saving quest, but her clan elders have directed her to make sure something unfortunate happens to him on the way, undermining the strength of their enemy and allowing them to seize power in the aftermath. Especially if they can hold her up to the kingdom as the savior who completed the quest and saved them all. Maybe she's not very high ranked in her own family, she wants freedom and independance, but she's been conditioned to believe her only worth is doing as her family tells her.
    The prince, friendly and seemingly lighthearted/humorous, but quite distant to those around him when it actually matters, sees value in her beyond her skill (he has to, he doesn't know she's an assassin). In truth he carries a heavy secret - his father is greviously ill, and is likely to pass within the next year or so. He fears he is too young and will fail all those who depend on him to be a good king. When it comes to others under his care he is loyal and protective, but ask him to show his soft underside and he turns hostile - defensive. "Kings can not be weak men." Despite his apparent friendliness and flipancy, and his proficancy with a sword, he is an acedemic at heart, and it comes through in his style, though with a practical slant as necessitated by the quest.

  • @Avaleigh-sp9hx
    @Avaleigh-sp9hx 2 місяці тому +2

    This video gave me so much inspiration to write my comfort book so now I know what I will be working on for the next few months! Thank you so much for the awesome video Abbie! 😁

    • @AbbieEmmons
      @AbbieEmmons  Місяць тому +1

      This comment brightened my day! Thank you so much! 🤩

  • @LivTheElf
    @LivTheElf 2 місяці тому

    this was so fun to watch! thanks, Abbie!
    (also, I’m looking forward to the book series you’re writing with Kate. :D)