Ok... so Im going to be the only one to leave a feedback over there... xD In certain type of metal styles of intros which I often notice, the text is usually scattered by the letters individually, and then they start executing some odd movements by orbiting around a point or an axis, almost like the letters are just following a certain path, at 0:08 - 0:11 you dont keep tilting the camera and when it stops, it always end up tilted a bit either to the left or to the right (which I personally dont like, especially when it happens in between, make sure it is rotated properly!), in that case, you should start moving specifically the whole background by rotating it on the y axis, it will definitely make it up for this, you did included the "cloning" effect on the letters at 0:13 till the end, try to add it more often where it needs it! Look forward to search around and get some underground "experimental" songs to use for the next ones, it will really help if you would like your style to stand out more and be more unique already! :D Btw, I would recommend to add a grid or a simple particle floor system in order to define better the text movs and the background movs, I will send you those on discord in a moment in any case if you dont have any! Everything else is done decently! That took a fucking while to think and type it out, hope you find it useful and clear ig! :P xD
Ok... so Im going to be the only one to leave a feedback over there... xD
In certain type of metal styles of intros which I often notice, the text is usually scattered by the letters individually, and then they start executing some odd movements by orbiting around a point or an axis, almost like the letters are just following a certain path, at 0:08 - 0:11 you dont keep tilting the camera and when it stops, it always end up tilted a bit either to the left or to the right (which I personally dont like, especially when it happens in between, make sure it is rotated properly!), in that case, you should start moving specifically the whole background by rotating it on the y axis, it will definitely make it up for this, you did included the "cloning" effect on the letters at 0:13 till the end, try to add it more often where it needs it! Look forward to search around and get some underground "experimental" songs to use for the next ones, it will really help if you would like your style to stand out more and be more unique already! :D
Btw, I would recommend to add a grid or a simple particle floor system in order to define better the text movs and the background movs, I will send you those on discord in a moment in any case if you dont have any! Everything else is done decently! That took a fucking while to think and type it out, hope you find it useful and clear ig! :P xD
they usually do odd moves in metal xD idk i just freestyled it