Pity party / Dream smp animation / Tommy
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- Опубліковано 28 гру 2022
- Guys its my Birthday
Hope you like it, it's the best present for me :))
btw pity party is one of my favorite melanie martinez songs
i never feel tired to listen her song its all so great
really glad i can make an animation with her songs
thanks to you all, i cant make this far today without you guys
my twitter : / mapfalltoo
song from : • Melanie Martinez - Pit... - Фільми й анімація
I thought you were supposed to receive presents on you’re birthday and yet you’ve given us an absolute GIFT. You’ve highlighted so many aspects of his character I love, the emotion, body language, timing- this is a masterpiece. I love this so so so so so so so so much
saouy
'Have you seen THE exile animation?'
THE exile animation:
The ruins of a bright, celebratory environment suit Tommy’s arc so well: a bright kid who was beaten down and ripped apart and fought to retain even a shred of cheer.
Love how the refrain “whatever” was ominous when Dream used it to dismiss why no one showed up, but then it got WORSE when Tommy realized Dream lied…*and doesn’t care.*
This is fantastic!
God my dsmp era was so happy how i miss those days
How did i not see this before?? Its AMAZING
my dsmp era was definitely the one i felt the most safe mentally. it is now my "comfort fandom"
Dream smp remains special in my heart❤
Remember, "gift" means poison in German.
Who asked
Really?
@@amberzhao5079 yup
@@user-cy1iq8ux6fme 😛
@@kalip11 As far as I know, that doesnt mean anything
WHEN HE STABBED THE CAKE WITH THE FORK OMG OMG OMG I LOVE THE WAY YOU DREW TOM HE IS SKRUNKLY
I have so much to say, but first of all, the fact you did the entire song with AMAZING linework just raises this video's quality to the extreme. It's so beautiful, and you draw expressions on very, very well - the smiles are unsettling, the anger is so clear I can hear Tommy's frustrations at 1:41 (and when followed by _only_ Dream's smile, this is good, this is a piece of art), and Tommy looks tired and done with everything, but he still endures them. Being alone on his birthday, Ghostbur being killed (and the flash of Wilbur's "My Sunrise? Chills to the bones), and Wilbur constantly fighting Quackity, dragging Tommy along with his problems.
The balloons have Dream's face on it, and it's either because Dream supplied those to him in faux kindness or it's Tommy's mental state crumbling. Might be both. 0:43 has got to be one of my favorite frames, because it's right before the chorus and it's paired with Tommy's... sad (is an understatement) expression, which is then followed by a beautiful animation of him getting fed up. Chef's kiss.
1:00. I don't want to talk about it. Just, gut-wrenching, and your art with the "upbeat" music gave it an even more eerie feel.
The switch in 1:14, where the color scheme is blue (sadder) with Tommy in the back, watching with (how to describe these T-T?) eyes while Tubbo and Ranboo are happy - OUCH TO THE TENTH POWER. OUCH I AM SCALDED. LIKE, OUCH THERE GOES MY HEART. I may seem to be exaggerating, but when Bee and Boo are then overlapped with SMILES - who wouldn't lose their shit? And I mean this very positively. I love the conflict you've written out in a three minute video. It's gold.
THEN THERE'S 2:00. I'm thinking it's when Wilbur says he's leaving to return to Utah, and the consecutive flashes of different colors and then different scenes in 2:08 just perfectly encapsulates the emotions I felt Tommy locked up in that moment. While smiling, oh-so brokenly.
Off topic, but your art? 11/10 - wait, NO NUMBER CAN CAPTURE IT. I love it too much T-T.
The cut scenes with Tommy (where he slowly gets more and more beaten and bloodied) between the flashbacks gives me intense "this is my villain origin story now" vibes and I adore it. Yes, it causes me pain - but you pulled it off in a... "punched my heart"-esque of a way, and I can't help appreciate. (I will appreciate it lol).
The final straw is the memory of being killed by Dream wth a potato, and the way you drew his expression made me say - _oh shit, he's going to blow._
1:23 and 2:35 has some of the best animation in this video. It's smooth, and clean, and so much more that I don't know how to say.
Tommy holding a sword against Wilbur; Wilbur then hugging him - AND YET STILL LEAVING, with the ending of Tommy returning to his failed birthday party, Dream's ghost (from exile) still being there... You wrapped it up into a small gift that, when opened, would punch me in the chin and knock me out. Thank you so much for giving so much effort on this lovely animatic. Kudos for doing the entire song again.
I have one complaint; WHY YOU GOTTA MAKE THE BALLOONS SO CUTE T-T?/j
(happy birthday
How long did it take you to write this? Don't get me wrong everything you wrote is 100% true, but seriously you literally picked up on the majority of the smaller hidden details that I missed when watching this the first time. It seems you have a great eye for details and I can respect that.
@@painfulfirebird2905 I have to admit- I follow this one manhwa animator, and I would always regularly leave essay-long comments like these to show my appreciation for their details ^-^!
I usually watch it one time, full screen, then play it again while I'm making a comment, so that I can see the little hidden easter eggs. It took me around 15-20 minutes, or so, to type it all out.
I probably just got used to it after the third time or so, and I was just super excited with this one cause the song hyped me up, so this one was quicker than others.
Okay, how have I not seen this before? Best Dream SMP animation ever.
Happy Birthday Mapfall
The way I literally have not consumed dsmp content in months but when I saw this I screamed
THAT WAS AMAZING OMG! I LOVED THE POSES, THE EXPRESSIONS JUST AHHHHHHH! 💕💕💕
The pity party is literally made with cTommy in mind lol.
The animation was incredible!! I loved the use of colors and your art style still brings much joy 💕❤
Happy late birthday! This turned out absolutely amazing. I've always wanted to see a c!Tommy video to this song, it fits him so perfectly, especially the exile party bit. Your art is stunning, there are so many details here and the characters' faces are so expressive. This is really, really good, I love it so much
omg, the second i got the hint that you were working on this animation i was shaking in my boots out of excitement. I love this song and it fits c!Tommy so well, and yet i'd never expect to be so hyped while the video was actually playing- it was just so cool!! First that caught my eye, were the expressions, all of them are so on point!! Tommy's just borderline all emotions at once lmao ( as he should considering his fragile mental state ) and Wilbur's expressions are all usually calm and collected, unbothered, even, which fits to his character even if he does actually care in that particular moment his facial features hardly ever change. and of course the setting is amazing, first, the exile and the forgotten beach party, then it flashes to ghostbur's death and wil's revival, then it goes by a little bit with quackity and wil arguing and the bench trio, and then the absolute bomb on tommy's psyche with his brother leaving once and for all. once again, all emotions on point, almost made me cry there, you really captured all the emotions necessary to make the viewer emotional themselves. so well done, one of my favourites actually
I wish I could've known the day this was posted I'd surealy have wished you a happy birthday, and this is amazing too!
I don't need a party, I just cry.
HOW DID I JUST FIND THIS NOW AAAAAA, IT IS SO GOOD
i have to start this off with a happy birthday! this was an absolute joy to watch oh my goodness me i swear i started shaking in excitement at some point!! the way you illustrate expressions is SO amazing i swear i kept replaying parts to see them.
alright, now i have so much to say about this animation because i fucking LOVE the amount of detail you’ve put into it! i’ll be putting timestamps to indicate what part im referring to !! also warning, you might cringe at some of the shit i say LMAO
0:10 i dont know if this was intentional but the balloon strings kinda look like theyre connected to tommy, and that the display of balloons had a smiley face on them earlier,,, am i reaching TT
0:43-0:47 oh my god!! OH MY GOD !! THE SWITCH BETWEEN EMOTIONS?? also poor cake :((
1:13 the color change was very abrupt and i love it !! i feel like the red in the scene of tommy’s beach party was more,,, angry? and the blue color scheme makes it feel more sadder
1:17 oh beeduo smiling at him :( shit dude,, knowing how tommy was suffering so badly in exile and going back to see bright smiles and seeing that the world was the same? that it wasnt completely shattered by the hands of dream like he did his? GOD
1:22 the transition to tommy’s vomit covered hand to dream’s hand closing the revivebook was so sudden i love it AAA !!
1:29 ah how i love the imagery of tommy being a puppet with the strings and all,,, also another color scheme change !! dreams colors. :)
1:40 FUCK the way the screen darkened in a slight maroon color absolutely sended me i literally just felt tommys emotions in my BONES. hes about to murder somebody and that somebody is dream. or sam idk
1:43 ONCE AGAIN WITH THE EXPRESSIONS mapfall you never disappoint i swear. the pure ANGER u can see on his face shook me to my core holy fuck
1:46 its really depressing to think about how tommy had to see his brother die TWICE. of course he saw his ghost die but still?? you watch your brother get stabbed by your father, and then his ghost gets killed by your abuser, which both happened in front of you??? jeez talk about trauma
1:51 BITCH !! sorry that was on instinct. anyway i like how hes smiling the exact same way he was on 0:38, nice to see his bastardness never left once he got into the prison ! hes the same person, through and through
1:54 oh and to add insult to injury his previously verbally abusive and mentally unstable older brother comes back, probably bringing tommy so many shit memories back
1:58 god tommy looks so sad here and you can see it in the next frame where the colors dull oh my sweet jesus i feel so bad for tommy, it doesnt help how it also hints that the argument wilbur and quackity were having escalated, and probably got louder, and would probably remind tommy of pogtopia and how wilbur would shout at him
2:06 those sequence of expressions just shot me in the heart and stabbed me in my diaphragm. holy shit how are you so good at making me cry??? the gradual shift to a more frenzied expression just RAAAAAAAAAAAA
2:09 these scenes may have hurt me the most in this whole animation SHIT DUDE !! in 2:12 you can see how tommy’s heart is still somewhat intact but you cant see it that well because it cuts off but you can see in 2:19 that his heart is PROPERLY BROKEN. i fucking love how these frames where it shows tommys death doesnt show tommy at the time, cause at 2:12 you can clearly see its not tommy in a lmanburg uniform whereas its tommy at present. its not showing his past self getting murdered its showing the accumulation of those deaths and how it has completely broken tommy.
2:22-2:23 here we are again with the strings ! again, back to 0:10, mayb i wasnt reaching after all LMAO !! oh the cracks in tommys face and hands and most likely his whole body solidifies my last statement oh my fucking god
2:30 THE SWITCHING BETWEEN TOMMY NOW AND HIS SELF IN EXILE IS MAKING ME GO ABSOLUTELY INSANE OH MY GOD,, i think this means that tommy hasnt full moved on from exile and theres this small bit of him inside him that still trusts dream, thinks of dream as a friend. tldr: stockholm syndrome /j
2:35 theres a reason why i love melanie’s scream in this song. the EMOTION !!! i realize im being very repititive but im being fr abt how i love you portray emotion, the way it all builds up, and the expression you drew on tommy for that scream??? ARISVORUGBSJKELJNLD
2:44 youve done it again with the expressions mapfall,,, OH MY GOD ?? the way he looks so frantic, thinking wilbur’s about to khs?? STOP NOWWWWWWW PLEASE MY HEART CANT TAKE IT
2:53 the fucking hug man i cant do this anymore i miss c!crimeboys so much,,, the shit theyve been through hurts my soul their pasts are so intertwined with eachother that even if wilbur leaves, tommy will never forget him. wilbur will never forget him.
3:12 the way tommy comes back to the beach party,, this could mean that no matter what, he always comes back to dream. refer to the statement i said 5 statements before, STOCKHOLM SYNDROME
3:18 regarding the subtitles, i fucking love how instead of it gradually turning red and into caps, it just,,, turns greyer. i feel like it represents the amount of fight tommy had in him. it was bright red and firey, and at the end of the server, when wilbur left, it was just a pile of ashes.
in summary: im insane for writing over a thousand words for a 3 minute video ! /j this was just fucking lovely and overall just amazing art, and if i havent mentioned it still, AMAZING EXPRESSIONS AND EMOTIONS!!
the "kill me philza KILL ME kill me phil " history repeat but with tommy and wilbur i got from 2:36 to 2:58 were insane and insanely fucking epic
That was an emotional rollercoaster, C!Tommy deserves so much better. Also I love ur art! And this is beautiful! Keep up the great work!
1:57 mom and dad are fighting again
I absolutely love the art style in this there’s so much emotion I could feel in the visuals that were greatly choreographed happy birthday man thanks for sharing this gift with us
The lore and emotion are simply spiffing ngl.
And Happy birthday
What a subtle and underrated MASTERPIECE! The entire tragedy of TommyInnit in 3 and a half stark and gorgeously rendered minutes. Thank you for this beautiful heartbreak, and happy birthday!
You can't see me so I'm absolutely not crying. Nope. Not me. Even if I did it's because of the amazing display of art skills here and not amplified by my unnecessary attachment to Minecraft roleplay. Nu-uh
I have watched this at least like 10 times in the past week every time it comes in my recommended I watch it, it's genuinely such a cool animation.
This is so insanely well done. I remember watching this arc for the first time years ago. I'm not in the fandom anymore but I always come back to the animatics because of how talented/skilled everyone is. Amazing work T-T
Brb I'm gonn go cry because the dsmp is over-
I JUST FINISHED REWATCHING TOMMYS EXILE ARC YO
i wish i could like this many times again. that's so amazing, even though i'm not into the dream smp anymore.
Same
MY GOODNESS I MISS THE EXILE ERA😭
BUT DAMN THIS IS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING-
One of my favourite songs???? Accompanied by some God-tiered animation???
Sign me up!!
2:37 *phi moment go BRRRR*
Tommy threatening Wilbur with a sword was LITERALLY tommys emotional climax and I love finally seeing it drawn
HAPPY BIRTHDAY I WISH YOU A GREAT DAY
God, I love this so much!
生日快樂！梅蘭妮的歌配上c!tommy的故事線真的好棒！
This is so well done??? The expressions,,,,, the emotions???? It's all so so good????
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! ❤
And hope for you to stay healthy and an amazing day~!!
Gooosh, I dunno if it's coz I relate to C!Tommy's frustration and anger issues plus inability to express emotions (without being through anger), but the way u portraited those points in his lore and how the frustration built up, Man, I just laughted in the end I don't even know, It felt like laughting from frustration, like GOD-- there was literally NO good ending to the kid, like LITERALLY he HAD to have a restart to have some similarity of freedom.
Ur art and script were 100/100 rlly perfect, it made me SO invested in what u were telling with the animation, I loved It 💛💛💛💛
Happy birthday!!! The animatic was so good!!! There was so much detail just mwah perfect
These animatics are what’s been getting to me because in the bits themselves,, it’s a Minecraft role play, yeah? But when it’s animated it’s like a new experience and as someone who has been through extreme manipulation leading to making me question what real was for over a year like, Tommy’s character was like someone I could just relate with and but the animatics make it like woah that’s it. And it’s so ducking well acted too it’s quite insane, I’m super rambling but I really hope I got my point across I have no idea
its the animatics that got me into dsmp
i adore tommy's character so much so when i saw this animation i sobbed so hard. it captured his character as a whole and all the tragedies he's gone through. the animations are all so smooth and the line art is gorgeously clean. i find myself coming back everytime to this animation. every frame is a work of art, and i just love it smm. im like 5 months late but i hope you had an amazing birthday !!
I love this so much you did a very great job! 💚🎉
Happy birthday!!! And Oh my GOD!!!! This is phenomenal!! Your line work is gorgeous, your expressions are so packed with emotion, the movement is sharp and clear, the symbolism in every frame broooo this is a masterpiece, easily jumping into my favorite animatics. The storytelling too, it’s so clear to follow what’s going on, and feel what c!tommy is feeling :((
This is so beautiful, everything about it. Wonderful amazing job
I can't help myself to dont cry it is high level omg crying+
I'm SO GLAD people are still making stuff about the dsmp, It feels like Im seeing less and less 😭
1:40 First post finale depiction of not Tommys victory over Dream but *Punz literally grabbing tommy's arm because killing dream here isn't part of the script*
I mean I know its The Warden but its an exact mimic of the "this is it dream, the axe of peace" scene. tommy, axe, dream, someone in armor 'helping' tommy
Happy birthday 🎉🥳
that was so dam good. already added it to my fav animatics playlist
THIS IS SO COOL
ЭТО. АБСОЛЮТНО. ШИКАРНО
🤲✨✨🤲❤️✨❤️
С днем рождения солнышко!
Favorite scenes: 1:18, and 2:35
This is why I subscribed, *this* is why I subscribed! Oh gods, the moment I saw the premiere last night I knew I am going to be in hell once i see this..and I watched it late..haha- Oh gods everything about it, it's too ughh I love your art style, the timing, the colours- everything! The emotions, the movements, the chose of scenes I don't know what to do anymore. I have always wanted someone to relate Pity Party by Melanie Martinez to Tommy's Beach Party because definitely, those are made to be together. I really loved 1:18 how Tommy experienced a flashback, and I barely see artists like include something as gross as that like vomiting, and I just love how you portrayed it- 2:35 was also so so good, just everything, how cc!Tommy played his character so well; breaking down, getting all mad to c!Wilbur, you captured it so well- I love that Wilbur didn't even imitate how Tommy treated him, he handled the situation gently, and understood why Tommy's upset and deserved all the rage and hate. I love that the ending was terrible: c!Wilbur left him, leaving him alone; vulnerable to Dream's manipulation even more. It became a canon that c!Tommy became a stoner after c!Wilbur left, unable to cope from being abandoned, even if c!Wilbur was toxic..Oh gods..happy birthday Mapfall! You're one of my favorite animators, and I wish you the best of days^^
This is amazing! One of the best dream smp animations I've ever seen! Happy birthday to you too :D
YOOOO HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!
thanks for making the animatic m8! it was very beautiful and angst
I can't give you any gifts so I hope a hug is enough
This is actually amazing!! This actually made me understand the lore so much better
I love this so much 😭 the beautiful art, all the details… this perfectly describes Tommy’s anguish in the dsmp, all 3 1/2 minutes of it
🎈happy birthday!!!🎂🎉
UA-cam LET ME LIKE THIS TEN TIMES PLEASE 🙏
THIS IS BEAUTIFUL I LOVE IT SO MUCH OMFG
Okay not in dream smp fandom never have been, but this is just amazing! The characters, the lighting, the timing, the animation! All of it is absolutely spectacular! Keep it up! Happy late birthday!
Im honestly speechless, how could one person hold this much talent? This was amazing.
Happy Birthday!!! 🎉
Imma kinnie fr
Happy birthday!!
This looks great, I always thought this song fit exile perfectly so ty for making this :D
👌👌👌and there’s nothing more to say
It's also one of my fav Melanie Martinez song happy birthday 🎉🎂
WOAH! this is freaking incredible and every frame and drawing was just amazing. Happy birthday, you deserve a lot more recognition!
The fuckin emotions portrayed in this is fucking immaculate and indescribable, and everything is literally so breathtaking and I absolutely adore the animation so much! This is so cool!
Maybe he pukin so much bc he eatin expired cake 👀
(I love this animatic sm)
WHOA THE BOOK CLOSING
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH THIS IS AMAZING THE SONG CHOICE IS AMAZINGLY PERFECT
can we also make it canon that tommy screams like that 2:36
i absolutely LOVE the way you do expressions and body language and your use of certain general colours, this is sooo well made it looks so amazing n its very fun to watch
Happy birthday!!! :D This animation is so well done and the style is just👌
I love how you draw eyes! It really shows the characters emotions :)
Я не знаю какие слова подобрать, это просто прекрасно выглядит
Absolutely amazing- Bravo 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
You capture so much emotion in every single frame-
HAPPY BIRTHDAYYYYYY 🎉🎉🎉
dude I know I'm gonna be replaying this over and over because this is so GOOD. like, I can't even express how amazing- OUTSTANDING this animatic is, like, being able to fit all of that story into this one song and making the lyrics fit for each arc, AND making it look amazing I'm INLOVEEE
This made me tear up,
omg your art style is beautiful, i love your line-art and expressions
Wilbur hugging Tommy was so wholesome I loved it!
holy shit i have no words
this was fucking amazing to watch
AAAAAAAAAAA IT'S SO COOOOOL, SOO AMAZING, I CAN'T BREATHE..
This is a amazing video to celebrate your birthday with! Happy late bday!
YES I REMEMBER WHEN EVERYONE MADE THIS IN 2020
This is absolutely incredible, I love the timing of everything and the flashing colours. I could really feel Tommy’s pain in this, you did such a good job expressing that.
THIS IS AMAZING i cant describe how much i love this WOAH
If I watched one more video about this party I will just let it out and cry 😭
(Happy birthday 🎉)
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! THIS IS SO GORGOUES
let’s gooooooooooooooooo
This is the best animation I've seen so far in 2023
AAAA I WILL NEVER FUCKING GET OVER EXILE, IT MAKES ME SO HAPPY WHICH IS MAYBE WEIRD BUT ALSO LIKE NO ITS NOT, *ITS ART*
BRO I stumbled on your post on twitter and speedran to youtube to re-watch it. THIS. WAS A SURPRISE I'LL TELL YOU THAT MUCH first of all Thank you for the gift? hello?? I hope you have an incredible and amazing birthday!! second of all o m g i've been associating pity party with the exile arc _HOWEVER_ this is the first pity party dsmp animatic i've seen taking place _after_ the Texas lore and wow just wow that ending punched my soul to Mars THE SUBTLE CHANGES AAAAAAAAAA
I'm supposed to be writing my commodity science project paper but eH IT CAN WAIT I'm totally saving this. Those tiny details need all of the appreciation! 1:22 LOOK AT THAT BOOK SLAM THAT TRANSITION JUMPSCARED ME WITH HOW SMOOTH IT WAS
Your art-style is simply gorgeous, each frame has the right amount of outlines to leave an impact, beautifully done!💛
This is crazy, like crazy good. The emotions portrayed were really realistic, it made my heart beat fast. And the way his emotions, sadness and anger keep increasing during the middle towards the end is spectacular. Amazing, the most amazing fan animation ever
очень крутая анимация, заслуживает намного большего внимания !!
oh my goodness this is SO well done, the art is outstanding, and the way you covered the progression of c!tommy is so SO good. Im in absolute AWE at how pretty this was,!!
Some of my fave bits
0:48 [torn up party decor makes me feel some type of way,,,/pos]
1:07 [view from up high is so pretty yet so terrifying,,]
1:18 [I don't know, Tommy throwing up the cake that he probably didn't really eat? nnhh.. and the transition from his hand to dreams holding the revive book oh...g...damn.]
1:43 [really damn cool frame]
1:54 till 2:10 [the sequence of frames here and beyond, IS SO GOOD...!!!, Tubbo n Ranboo,,, revivedbur,,, the two frames of a close-up on Tommy's eyes, he's just so angry, traumatized and tired.... then the squabble between wil and quackity making him feel worse,, more revivedbur trauma noo,,,,
Happy belated birthday! I hope your day went well
CHECKING BACK ON THIS
THIS IS STILL SO GODDamn GOOD
This animation is so cool! I've always associated the song Pity Party with c!Tommy so it's super cool to see an animatic with the song. I've seen animatics with the song before but they all just focused on exile arc, so seeing more of the DSMP plotline included in this animatic is super neat! I haven't watched DSMP in awhile so this animatic brings back a ton of memories lol.
This is AMAZING. This deserves at least 10K likes, AT LEAST! Got me in the feels T-T
This is such a good way to portray Tommy's most traumatizing experiences and how he's slowly losing it (in the sence that he can't pretend to be fine for much longer)
Your art style is so good and the expressions on Tommy show how much he's going through so perfectly AAHH, cheff kiss