Heidi’s actress was the best singer here, but only because she displayed more emotion, she displayed anger, deep sadness and guilt about everything, anger that Evan did what he did, guilt and sadness over feeling she wasn’t good enough, all of the feelings have different ways of expressing themselves, like the subtle voice cracks
I just realised.... You know how people thought that Evan's letter to himself was Connor's suicide note but it really wasn't? He didn't ever write one. Connor thought no one would care enough to notice he was gone. He had no words for _anyone_ . Just sayin'.
Actually I don’t agree with that. It think it WAS Connor’s suicide note. Okay, hear me out I heard this from somewhere and I truly believe it, Connor didn’t write his own note, because when he read Evan’s he realized that someone had finally been able to verbalize what he had been feeling for probably his entire life. Evan wrote down exactly what he was going through. I mean think about it, Larry and Cynthia visit the school 3 days after Connor took the note from Evan, saying it was folded up in his pocket. Why was it folded up if Connor didn’t want them to find it huh? Why did he keep it in the first place? After he took it from Evan, he could have just thrown it out, or even if he kept it he could have crumpled it up or something, but no.. it was folded, artfully and neatly. Evan wrote Connor’s suicide note, he just didn’t do it on purpose
I don't think so? They met him because of Connor and probably didn't feel too much for him at first, but they legitimately cared about him after a little bit.
@@rrrandoms4040 On the contrary, Connor’s mom was probably the most delusional. She didn’t even feel negative emotion when Connor died because she felt Evan could replace everything Connor was in her life. As much as people hate “To Break in a Glove”, it’s the one scene where Evan makes a genuine connection with the Murphys, specifically Connor’s dad. As for Zoe, she kind of straddled the line and wanted Evan to have a deeper connection with her but was hung up on his relationship with Connor and couldn’t reconcile with the fact that was supposedly friends with the person that mistreated her for so many years.
evans mom was overbearing and trying too hard without understanding her kid. Yeah truck him off to therapy and "healthy" things but really kids just need honesty and one on one understanding. She was projecting her husband leaving her onto him
When I first saw this song without watching the entire musical, I thought this song was in the perspective of Connors mother asking him why he killed himself. “So you found a place where the grass is greener. So you jumped the fence to the other side. Was it good? Are they giving you the life I could never provide?” “Well I hope you’re proud of your big decision.” < I thought that was a grieving mother angrily asking her son why he did what he did. It didn’t occur to me these lines were about him staying at someone else’s home.
As Evan slowly gets deeper and deeper into the shit, he zips he hoodie up more and more. So it’s really interesting to see how you zipped it up all the way, showing how he’s screwed himself. I loved this, it was amazing!
@@isthisagoodusername9764 they mean that's in the beginning of the musical its unzipped and during the musical he slowly zips it up until the end its fully zipped up
Holy damn the actress playing Evan's mom delivers a 12/10 performance. Her stuttering at the start and how she abruptly switches between sentences perfectly conveys how someone in her position would be speaking. Her mind is racing and she's just so upset that she can't speak perfectly.
@@Father_of_DeathAgreed ofc, but also i think the comment is talking about the speaking which I don't think was Rachel Bay Jones because I believe that's ABF Evan
YES. And Jared too. If it were not for his advice to "nod his head off and just say yes to everything they say", it is possible Evan could have just said the truth..
"You! Are the ONLY--" "The ONE good thing that's ever happened to me, Evan! Sorry I can't give you any more than that!" *Sadness laugh* "SHit!" I dunno why but that part hit me hard, I started crying. T-T
Me to my Ex that was forced to break up with me, and has a "better" man. We both had nothing, yet i gave her everything. While i was fine with her not giving anything cause i knew she was in the same situation since i was a kid. Yet she gave up on me as if she knows she can love someone else and wants to forget me now.:')
This is my Mom, she was kicked out by my dad and was literally homeless and sent to a mental hospital right after she rented her first apartment. Now she has bought her house, and whenever I’m mad I can’t have more clothes or I’m mad (we are both depressed, which doesn’t help, and I have body dysmorphia) she does the same thing. That really hit hard for me, it really did.
Reminds me of alot of the fights my mom and I have, but no matter how rough it's been we have each other, even if we at times need a hard drawn arguement to vent the negativity out.
Elemental Wizard yeah but the one who plays as Jared (Will Ronald) was also playing as Jeremy from Be more chill 2018 version, and since Jeremy is supposed to be the main character from be more chill.. then.. I guess thats it.. he sings more in be more chill so you can listen to him there..
He _did_ have a song originally but it was cut. I think it was called "Viral". You can find it on UA-cam, I watched it a while back. Correction: " _Goin'_ Viral"
Okay so first I absolutely loved that you added some of the dialogue from the beginning to the piece, it really adds more depth to the story. Now I also have to fangirl over some of the choices you made. I love the that you spun the frame at one shot when it was Evan and his mother instead of keeping it a flat shot of his back and focused on her, added so much dimension. I gasped at that transition from Alana to Jared. So freaking smooth and good. The smearing of the ink on his hands? God like. Him grabbing Connor and Connor being with them in the end was so smart. I just loved the angles and expressions you chose. Very exaggerated and fun. As well as what and how you chose to show the people. Good job!
@@jerichogimeno4663 I looked for the lyrics and most of the sources say a different thing (off, out and even go on one). I don't know, I could be wrong but I just sounds like that more to me, also feels like it fits better... Either way 🤷♂️
I can't believe they're leaving this out of movie. It's really the most powerful song in my opinion. We see how small Evan feels and we get to feel the same emotions and stress he's under through us being overwhelmed by people who are all upset at us. I think we really get to see it from everyone's perspective here, and we get to see how Evan feels but we also witness the anger and disappointment the other characters feel and its because of what Evan did. I just think it's a major loss for the plot development towards the audience for the movie because there is so many emotions this song conveys in 4 minutes and 36 seconds.
I get what the movie is doing even though I don’t agree with it. The movie left off some of the more darker tones and consequences because they wanted the movie to be more “family” friendly is what I read from the production team. They only wanted to touch the surfaces of some of these issues but not dive down too deep. If a streaming service picked this up instead of a theatrical release then I’m sure it would have kept its darker and grungey aspects as it does make the story feel complete. However, I will say that seeing Evan trying to find anyone that knew the real Conner and then bringing that to them still showed a little what Evan was trying to do with his lies. It might have gave them a little peace as he really wasn’t just the monster and even though Evan lied about it with him involved partly it was still true to Conner’s character. I think even the family understands more than they showed and may get it, but that still is no excuse for lying the way he did even if for good intentions at first. However, their trust is broken and that door has closed as being part of their life. The daughter especially wants to forgive him and still talk, but by the end of the movie she is still not ready, but that conversation was a start to who knows. At the same time Evan doesn’t need them anymore as he realizes that he needs to mend and work on relationships closer to his home such as the mother and possibly Jared. It just goes to show as Zoey said that thinks are not always “black and white!”
i just realized that majority of the shit that happens in dear evan hansen is evan's fault. evan's mom feeling remorse, alana and jared feeling used. i know that some isn't really his fault, but the plot of dear evan hansen is about this kid with social anxiety and how he manipulates his crush's family to think that his crush's brother and him were great friends. and he used jared and alana for that. he neglected his mom because he found out that the murphy's were nicer to him. only because the murphy's thought that their son, connor, and evan were good friends. when in reality they weren't.
I think you are not empathizing enough with evan's character, also i don't think he did anything of that with the tought of "manipulating someone" or "hurt people" and we can't say Connor is a dick either because we don't know him enough, we never got the chance to know his thoughts, maybe he was just dealing with a really big depression and addiction or idk
It starts like a small lie you said without thinking, you felt anxious didn't kow what to do and it just popped out, and then it grows and grows and you can't take it anymore. You hope never had said that, you want to scape, to be alone, to take refuge in something, someone, but everything is so big now and the lie you never mean to say explode and you're in the middle, and everyone around is hurt and they blame you, and they're right, everything is your fault, but the one who feel the worse are you yourself. That's how it feels, that's how having anxiety feel, I've been there, heck I'm there right now. You didn't want it to end like this when it started, you didn't want it to start and don't know how to end the mess.
I love how at 3:45 he goes to ask Connor showing that this fake friendship he’s created is all he has left and how he truly wishes it were real and doesn’t know who else to turn to besides a dead boy he never even knew
Pao Lah what is wrong with you. Have some respect. You have no idea how much effort must've been put into this masterpiece and if you think it's not "good enough" then im sorry you cant see great artwork even if it were to hit you in the face! You're right tho, the emotion was perfect although you missed the fact that the anatomy and perspectives were incredible too. If you think it's so bad then go make you're own damned animation and see how well it turns out hotshot.
Destiny_xX You see, this is the problem with you suck ups, you think just because someone put in an effort it's the most *amazing* thing ever and no one should say anything otherwise, because it's *mean* and wrong. But the thing is I'm not saying it's wrong, if anything I'm very proud of this animator/artist. She took her time drawing every scene and layer probably worrying that her tablet would crash, there's not enough movement, maybe harsh criticism, etc... But what you don't understand is that people who criticise don't have to know how to animate and draw to know when something looks a little off (not bad). You think you're such a great fan, giving complements left and right, face it, anyone can do that. Do you know what everyone might not be able to do because ThEy'rE tOo NiCe, say what's wrong. Pure positive reinforcement isn't going to help anyone who's seeking to do better. But what do I know, I'm just a bitchy nobody who doesn't know what's talent if it's in my face. At least I'm not somebody who thinks they know what's right and wrong on the freaking I N T E R N E T.
Pao Lah yeesh, pull the stick out of your ass. The anatomy was actually spot on and stylized according to the perspective, if you take up a personal problem with the stylized look then that's your issue. Personally I think the expressions on the faces are a bit too exaggerated but that's just my personal feeling. You don't need to go make an essay to rant at someone who disagrees with you, much less call them suck-ups just because they enjoy something.
just google what animation means and that'll give you the image of what it is disney relied on delailed animation because they wanted to tell a story with a look of acctual real life movement that's drawn with multiple frames per second and it was done professionally and it's more famous that's why when people think about animation the first thing that pops up in their minds are desney or pixar the animation shown in this video is done at a shorter time span with less frames per second but you can see clearly what's happening in the video and the characters' interactions and gestures and the movement of the "camera" around them it is still conssidered animation disney= high quality animation high visuals this video = low quality animation high visuals
I do like that as Evan is shaking Conner and demanding he tell him how to “change the story” Conner simply shrugs and stares right at Evan. It’s a such a chilling reminder that Conner is technically a dead man, and whether you believe that the one we see after his death is his genuine ghost or a manifestation of Evan’s own consciousness, one thing is clear: Conner has NOTHING to say to Evan at this point because the dead both figuratively and literally can’t talk. Conner’s shrug and stare could also be seen as him nonverbally saying to Evan “figure it out yourself” because at the end of the day, Conner didn’t do anything. It’s all Evan’s lies that the public has filtered through the letters they believe are Conner’s, so it’s Evan’s mess to clean up, not Conner’s. Again, the dead can’t speak, and if one believes this to be Evan’s consciousness instead of Conner’s ghost, it means that Evan is technically telling HIMSELF to fix this problem, even as “the boat is about to sink”.
So true. Now in the book Conner is a ghost but in the musical it's Evan's guilty conscious. If we really look at this from the deep end it's like Evan telling himself "I have no more lies or excuses for you." Truly a chilling moment in this animatic.
WOAAHHHHH WHAT THE HECK??!!!?!! THIS MIGHT BE THE BEST ANIMATIC I HAVE EVER SEEN????? IT MOVES SO MUCH AND THE ANGLES ARE SO VARIED AND CREATIVE!!! AMAZING JOB, REALLY!
Ok so I read the script for dear Evan Hansen and I LOVE how you portrayed Jared because he is insure *" he walks toward Evan with a practiced swagger that only the deeply insure can pull off" *and you capture his reaction to it is perfect and his facials are beautiful because they are perfectly displaying that he feels *" like a helpless heartbroken little kid"*
It’s great to see how people convey Evan’s position as he gets deeper into his lies. It’s just a shame the movie twists the whole narrative into Evan being the good guy the whole time
I don't think I would consider this animation. Some of the parts are really smooth and the movement is great but a lot of is an animatic/storyboard as the title says.
jake perez it isn’t animation but it honestly wouldn’t take much more effort to animate it as all the key frames are done vs most rushed still frame animatics
That was fucking intense; I absolutely love how fluid this is with both the expressions and body language. The way Heidi moves and the expressiveness from Alana and Jared and Evan and just- AGGHH You're so incredibly talented and words can't describe how much I love this. It's my new favourite animatic EVER. I'll never be able to get over Alana's hair and how you draw Jared in general and Heidi's amazing expressions and Evan!! Evan looks so good!!? You're so talented and the transitions into scenes and your ability to give us an insight into their feelings with visuals and shading is phenomenal. And just.. Connor. The way he's staring at Evan at the end gave me chills and was just awesome. Keep up the amazing work.
3:55 is so amazing because he’s screaming to be let off a run away train, to be free of a web of lies that he created, he’s trapped in a cage he built himself and you can hear it in his voice. He trapped himself and doesn’t know how to get out
YOU MADE ALANA'S HAIR SO BEAUTIFUL!! THIS IS A GREAT ANIMATIC! I'm like actually screaming. You made Heidi's emotions so realistic, and Jared so sardonic about it all. AND YOU PUT CONNOR IN WITH THEM WHEN THEY SANG "SO YOU GOT WHAT YOU ALWAYS WANTED" AND WHEN EVAN SMEARED INK AND CONNOR APPEARED IT'S LIKE YOU WERE SHOWING THAT BASICALLY EVERYTIME WE SEE CONNOR IN THE ACTUAL MUSICAL IT'S JUST EVAN'S VERSION!! THIS IS ALL *PHENOMENAL*
In personal opinion, I think Zoe should be in Alana's place, and the ghost of Connor should be in Jared's place. If you really think about it, Jared and Alana knowingly put themselves in that situation where as Connor and Zoe where being used majorly. This song was about Evan realizing how bad he hurt those around him, so I feel that it would be so dang powerful to have the three people who he was majorly abusing (yes, he was abusing Connor by using him to get closer to Zoe) and being straight up toxic to, singing along with him as he starts to realize what he did. The three in this song represent his guilt, and that is why when he sings, "can't erase what I wrote in ink," the three in the back are so loud and dissonant to show the absolute mental turmoil (they are the voices in his head in a weird way) he is going through. Thoughts?
I agree with what you saying with Connor and Zoe in Alana and Jared's spots, but Alana didn't complete go into this knowingly, she didn't know the full situation like Jared did, she only knew about Evan trying to start the Connor project and trying to preserve Connor's memory and that is what Alana wanted to do. Also in the book for DEH, ( I never finished the play only the book so I don't know if it's the same), Evan wanted to raise money for the Connor project and after a week or two, he left Alana alone to do all the work for it even though he started it, he blew her off to go out with the Murphy's a couple of times too, so she was pretty upset with that.
I agree with most of this but completely disagree with the fact he was abusing his mom. Hell I’d say it’s the other way around as his only point was that they genuinely make home feel wanted whereas she’s never home and when she is treats him like a freak. Despite this the entire argument she only antagonizes Evan and villanizes him for her shortcomings and wanting a genuinely loving relationship
@@theazureeyedaassassin885 I'd say it's the opposite. Evan demonizes his mother for being "absent" even though she's a single parent. He manipulated another family into feeling as though he's the only remnant of their dead son, and the narrative goes out of its way to somehow say anti anxiety meds are bad which.... Is not how chronic anxiety works. It was highly irresponsible of the play to make Heidi out to be the bad guy. She's not trying to "fix" her son as Evan put it, she's trying to give him tools to cope, Evan just doesn't feel like trying. He'd rather wait until something better comes along, and oh look would you look at that? A boy commits suicide and he accidentally involved himself, well better continue to ride this to it's conclusion. Heidi literally did nothing wrong. She cared about her son, awww boo hoo. As someone who has two chronic mental illnesses Evan can get bent.
The angles, the bounces(?), the facial expressions, the transitions from character to character, the body language, and the symbolism are just incredible in this ,its insane.
This is amazing!!! Between the expressions in the wonderful art, the amazing animation and the OUTSTANDING cinemography??? It's so engaging!!! This is one of the best animatics I've seen!! LOVE THIS!
3:38 Evan venting his problems to Connor is my absolute favourite part of this animatic. He's asking a dead man for help, and it proves futile cuz Evan never even really knew Connor; he's just lied to himself and others about knowing him, hence why when he wonders what Connor would advise Connor has no words to give (cuz Evan has no grasp of the real Connor). All this to say you've made a wonderful animatic!!
My heart is beating of excitement from this, it was so investing and creative, also very thought out, this might be one the best DEH Animatics to date yet!
I was really pumped for the movie but then I found a few things out. Apparently they took out any parts where Evan questions if he’s a good person or not. Which defeats the purpose of the musical. It’s about a kid who fakes emails from a kid who killed himself over something he wrote. They also changed Connor’s dad from his abusive and uncaring father to a stepdad which kinda defeats the purpose. Connor is a bully because of his problems with his dad. That’s all I have thank you
I HAVE NEVER BEEN PROUDER OF SOMEONE IN MY WHOLE LIFE!!!! YOUVE DONE IT! YOUVE FINISHED!! GOOD FOR YOU!!! I loved everything especially all the emotions you took time to incorporate like wow have you ever seen people emote like this Also mood for this animatic is when he falls to his knees
I love how you portrayed evan becoming like connor from everything he’s lied about. Angry and regretful. Great new perspective! Love the art, btw! So smooth!
That first part messed me up Evan’s mom: You are the only- the one good thing that ever happened to me EVAN ! SORRY IF I CANT GIVE YOU ANYTHING MORE THAN THAT! CHET. Evan: Well it’s not my Fault other people can.
Okay so maybe I'm going to have a heart attack? Don't know though AHHHHHHH EVERYTHING WAS *SO GOOD!* The movements were elegant, the symbolism was hECCIN, just generally all of it! One thing I liked a lot was that on the scene where Heidi is looking at the flowers the lines weren't always in the same place, which shows a lot of how her and Evan's world was shifting. I liked your choice of audio, too. It was unexpected because I just assumed you would use Jared and Alana's too, but you didn't and it was still perfect! Also, Jared? Is beyond perfection? Alana's really good too? And Heidi was worry lines? And you flash the family a lot? And the end scene was great? And did I mention Jared? I just think (and I've never thought this as much as I have here before) that this... STYLE of art, and the way it's ANIMATED, just MATCHES the ENTIRE musical PERFECTLY. The same despair and emotion that I get from the entire musical is here, and i feel like I just listened to the whole soundtrack I'm such a mess. Keep going until you reach the sun!
(because the emotions and transitions, btw there is a lot) Favorite parts, by far: 0:22 - 0:26 0:48 - 0:51 1:04 - 1:14 3:00 - 3:02 3:11 - 3:19 3:32 - 3:36 3:43 - 3:44 4:17 - 4:26 All of these either have too much emotion for my tiny heart to handle, or the transitions are just absolutely beautiful. Great job at this
A lot of people here aren’t really appreciating how horrible this actually is for Evan. As someone whose parents act kind of similar to Evan’s mum, I can say for sure that regardless of whether her outburst is justified or not, it is absolutely certain to damage Evan’s mental state significantly. He is effectively in the process of being convinced that he is just a bad person, someone who is unloving and manipulative and doesn’t deserve the good things in his life. And when someone convinced themselves of this, they start acting it out. They will start to push away any loving emotions, convinced that they’re just faking those feelings. And after enough time, they become that person. Evan’s response “it’s not my fault other people can” is incredibly concerning. “You’re the only good thing that’s ever happened to me” is a common enough sentiment that this sort of interaction happens a lot, and there are a few ways of reacting to it. Given that Evan genuinely believed his mum regretted having him, a conviction so clearly deeply ingrained that he would never believe her just saying something like that, him agreeing and trying to convince her that he still loved her would have meant he felt guilty about upsetting her and wanted to calm her down. The fact he didn’t do that means he didn’t feel guilty, or at least not guilty enough to open up at all. This could either mean he actually feels nothing for her, which would be incredibly concerning, or he’s used to the feeling of guilt to such an extent that he doesn’t feel any. Since he does seem to care at least a little about her, I think the latter is more likely, which means that he’s already experienced significant amounts of guilt over his life and is late in the process of convincing himself that he is a bad person.
I love the inclusion of Connor in this. He’s not angry, or sad, he’s just indifferent. He’s not trying to help or make things worse, like he’s saying ‘This is what you wanted, right?’ I wish the musical would’ve included him more, even if he was just standing on stage doing nothing. It would give a great wary feeling of him still haunting everyone, him being the only one that really knows the full story, and the only one that really can’t tell it.
Wow you can really see the difference between that deh animatic you posted a year ago and this one!! Beautiful job, the expressions and movement are so well drawn and realistic!!
With Dear Evan Hansen it really shows this sentiment I think: People are just people. They're not good nor bad, however their actions can be good or bad. Evan made a terrible mistake, which may have brought temporary happiness, to himself and others, but came at the cost of expoliting grieve. He's trying to mask that, and it all comes crashing down in this song. His mother has a right to be upset, so does Evan. Because he feels upset she isn't around much (which he interprets as her indirectly abandoning him) while his mother is upset because he did, in fact, directly abandone her. Despite her trying so hard to give him a good life.
something i read that makes this whole song more clear: according to wikipedia, this whole song is just the three characters (heidi, alana, & jared) messing in evans mind. he’s basically having like a panic attack? or something like that if the characters were actually talking to evan, it wouldn’t make sense because alana and jared basically put themselves into the situation they’re in; but if they’re just in his mind, then evan is feeling really guilty about what he did okay that’s my two cents bye 🏃
this is my favorite song in the musical and you’re animation really does it justice. i love how all the emotion is so clear. i love how Evan is angry as well and I love how you show each of them expressing anger differently. the emotion in the art and the animation is so smooth, it’s amazing all around!!!!
If you listen to the song it's more the characters projecting other aspects of their lives onto Evan. Alana says he dragged her along but she was doing all the dragging and forcing, and jared talks about "playing who you need to play" which isnt what evan was doing, if anything it's what he was doing. Finally, his mom talks about him leaving and how she doesnt feel good enough, but evan never actually left her, he just stayed at ttthe murphys (mostly when his mom wasnt even home) his father was the one who left. Obviously Evan is in the wrong b,ut the characters act as if he manipulated them into this situation, and he didn't.
This is exacly what i had in mind, thank you, when i first watched the musical i got so confused when that song started, like i know that what Evan did was wrong but he did none of the things they said and i was just there like am i missing something? XD
It’s worth noting that Alana and Jared’s singing parts are meant to be manifestations of Evan’s conscience rather than actually them, meaning his mind could be exaggerating them through his anxiety. There are dialogue bits in the middle of the song with the real Jared and Alana and, well, they’re not very uplifting.
Cool things I love about this!!: 0:23 You can literally SEE his mouth forming the letter "f" as he's about to say family 2:16 The aggressive curtain pull that works so on beat 1:48 This part with Evan's mom putting her hand on Murphey's table where Evan is eating with another family instead of her is just sooooo heart wrenching! 2:45 The walking away from his mom only to bump into Alana. This idea is just so cool and works so well 3:01 The transition from Alana to Jared is genius. 3:08 Jared's hand gestures here are so good and expressive 3:17 Ok I'm sorry but like this animation here is AMAZINNNNGG! 3:43 You portrayed so amazingly how Conner's whole character in the letters was really just made from something Evan wrote in ink. This part is probably my favourite. It's so genius. 3:38-3:59 Evan's whole breakdown here you animated with such EMOTION! These are just some of my favourite bits but this whole animatic is truly amazing. Every hand gesture, every position, every lipsync, every expression, every character design, just absolutely incredible. You're really cool :)
I cannot believe how amazing this is. I have never, EVER seen an animatic that conveys emotion as well as this one. Not to mention all these movement?? And the use of angles??? This is seriously incredible. 11/10
WOW!!!! THIS IS AMAZING! The way you animated so much movement, and had clear drawings of the characters the whole time. I love how you draw the characters especially Alana.... And Jared..... And Evan YOU KNOW WHAT? You draw them all perfect. I also love how you added (and drew) Connor. Like no one does that and I think it really fits plus he's probably my favorite character... I love the angles too! Just your animation skills are great please keep animating whatever it may be
I like how Evan is more angry than sad in this unlike most animatics I see I think the others should take some blame too it's not completely Evans fault but that's just me and my opinion disagree if you like (also english isn't my first language sorry about any mistakes)
clairvoyant angel no, I agree. I’m angry at Jared and Alana because Jared was NEVER a good friend to Evan and borderline bullied him and knew what he was signing up for when he started writing emails with Evan and then Alana (who I love!) used Evan just as much as he used the Connor project because she wanted the clout and college credit. Evan’s Mom was never with him, so it’s not like it was really that wrong of him to spend time with other people while she wasn’t there. Being alone for too long probably worsened his depression and anxiety.
Basically Evans mom finds out about the Murphy's and gets pissed at him for jumping ship to another family because she has insecurities about how his father left for "something better", meanwhile Alana has discover Evans lie and Jared is just being an asshole because apparently he thought him and Evan were friends despite him treating Evan like shit through most of everything. It's pretty common with depressed and anxious people actually, people exacerbate the issue and then get pissed when that leads to poor decision making.
You've improved ever since 'If I could tell her'!! You made them move so much and smoothly that it looks like an animation without colors! Also, I love how you showed how frustration, anger and regret in a single expression of Evan! Plus the perspective and angles? It's definitely wholesome and actually really refreshing! I also love how you made their expressions actually match the tone of their singing. (This may be a common mistake for animators). The sarcasm, the anger, and just full hatred is displayed so well that I can't help but feel mad and sympathetic for Evan at the same time! Also how you made Evan got pissed at Connor even though it was clearly Evan's fault, just adds more detail and how Evan wanted to take the blame on someone else. (at least for me) Anyway, I'm really hoping future animatics from you soon! From the past year you've improved so much!
3:34 seen this animatic tons of times but just gotta comment; I adore how you captured that Look ™ where Evan is glaring at the floor. Because that is genuinely so realistic; if you’re under such extreme emotional distress but trying not to let it show, you tend to glare- compensating for the emotional distress by making yourself look like nothing’s wrong, which in turn comes out looking like something is _definitely wrong_ because it’s an overcompensation. And if you can’t look someone in the eye, you tend to glare at anywhere else; most common being the floor. Idk if I’m even making sense but the way you captured that very specific experience is so perfect
I always see Evan as a little selfish. He has this tendency to think about himself and how it affects him first. Making him overlook the way other people around him are also having a bad time. Evan, at least on the book, literally admits that he wants to go after his father, go to college close to him. The father that abandoned him and his mother, and left them to survive on their own. He doesn’t appreciate Heide or what she does just so he can have a average life as a teenager. I know how much it hurts to not have a parent around, but he never thinks about how she is trying her best to support him. He often forgets that he is not the only person with problems.
Well that's just it: does he really think about himself first because he's selfish, or because he has never had healthy interpersonal relationships before?
That was the first time I actually FELT this song and liked and it and all thanks to your mind blowing work with emotions and expressions! I’m out of words, it’s TOO GOOD FOR ME to be true. Cheers for your hard work!
3:55 is so heart wrenching, and unfortunately so relatable sometimes I feel like everyone around me is backing me against a wall and it's so painful, my anxiety sucks
This song is honestly probably my favorite DEH song (even tho idk if I could ever choose lmao), and you captured the emotion so perfectly from it (not to mention the art). I'm incapable of explaining how much I love this.
Whoa. This is like- one of my favorite songs???? And the way you animated it is just freaking AMAZING! Especially when Evan's friends were coming along and his mom breaks the fight part with her song and the spinning and GAH congrats man! It's awesome!
peppa pig is 90 years old and 7 feet tall. not your typical 4-year-old pig, aint it?
Tf-
owo
What the fuck
How did you even get pinned-
And how did you get thid information
I’m sorry what?
Heidi’s actress was the best singer here, but only because she displayed more emotion, she displayed anger, deep sadness and guilt about everything, anger that Evan did what he did, guilt and sadness over feeling she wasn’t good enough, all of the feelings have different ways of expressing themselves, like the subtle voice cracks
You called lol
ua-cam.com/video/TLnOLLSywMU/v-deo.html
Just a confused Person Rachel bay jones really is amazing
Tsuyu Asui you name yourself that and don’t and don’t have her as your profile pic.
Heresy
Jared did anger, but I mean, that's it.
God your expressions are to die for
Omg I love your channel 😂
666 likes 😳
I’ve only just recognised this comment OMG. 😧
O cool
Rea!!!!
When Evan said, "They're my fam..." when I went to go see it the audience went collectively, "Oooo..."
Man...
The tea has been spilled
when- I mean if- I see it on broadway, I WILL say that
Same
I was gonna reply “and everyone clapped” but tbh it’s kinda believable
Anybody ever think that Evan’s mom is so angry because Evan’s leaving her the second he sees something better JUST LIKE HIS DAD DID
FUCK, I DIDNT REALIZE IT LIKE THAT..
o h
O H
Josh Angrian Wow
Oh shI-
Holy fUck I hadn’t thought of it like that...
Heidi:YOU..ARE THE ONE GOOD THING THAT HAPPENED TO ME EVAN!!..
Me:*crying my eyes out*
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SF Art AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
My heart shattered and was rebuild again
@@gigi-sg3hy i understand where he's coming from but that's fucked up
I sang this song on freaking repeat when my ex cheated on me
I can feel the anger in Heidi’s voice. I’m really curious as to how it looked on the stage.
I agree. I would love to watch it
I saw it yesterday it was *SO GOOD*
Pst..... I got the bootleg for you
drive.google.com/file/d/1AtZ5QfkodAhPK0rkLQL-VINoL7tpuEh1/view?usp=drivesdk
@@madisonarnold4092 THANK YOU THANK YOU ! DO YOU HAVE A BOOTLEG FOR HEATHERS AND BE MORE CHILL!? If you do I will subscribe to you!
@@madisonarnold4092 do u also have a bootleg for Hamilton?
I just realised....
You know how people thought that Evan's letter to himself was Connor's suicide note but it really wasn't? He didn't ever write one. Connor thought no one would care enough to notice he was gone. He had no words for _anyone_ .
Just sayin'.
MY POOR CONNOR!!!!~○~
Connor is my favorite...
...what if it was Evans suicide note......
Actually I don’t agree with that. It think it WAS Connor’s suicide note.
Okay, hear me out
I heard this from somewhere and I truly believe it, Connor didn’t write his own note, because when he read Evan’s he realized that someone had finally been able to verbalize what he had been feeling for probably his entire life. Evan wrote down exactly what he was going through. I mean think about it, Larry and Cynthia visit the school 3 days after Connor took the note from Evan, saying it was folded up in his pocket. Why was it folded up if Connor didn’t want them to find it huh? Why did he keep it in the first place? After he took it from Evan, he could have just thrown it out, or even if he kept it he could have crumpled it up or something, but no.. it was folded, artfully and neatly. Evan wrote Connor’s suicide note, he just didn’t do it on purpose
Nkiruka J so even couldve wrote it. I understand, good proof tho!!
Nkiruka J and that was the only thing with him. This theory is amazing
The real sad thing is the fact that Connor's family only cared about Evan because of Connor while his mother actually cared about him
I don't think so? They met him because of Connor and probably didn't feel too much for him at first, but they legitimately cared about him after a little bit.
@@ihavenonamestilldonthaveon8970 yea especially connors mom, but really the whole family
@@rrrandoms4040 On the contrary, Connor’s mom was probably the most delusional. She didn’t even feel negative emotion when Connor died because she felt Evan could replace everything Connor was in her life. As much as people hate “To Break in a Glove”, it’s the one scene where Evan makes a genuine connection with the Murphys, specifically Connor’s dad. As for Zoe, she kind of straddled the line and wanted Evan to have a deeper connection with her but was hung up on his relationship with Connor and couldn’t reconcile with the fact that was supposedly friends with the person that mistreated her for so many years.
evans mom was overbearing and trying too hard without understanding her kid. Yeah truck him off to therapy and "healthy" things but really kids just need honesty and one on one understanding. She was projecting her husband leaving her onto him
@@zeegoodysun6109at least Heidi makes it up to Evan in So Big/So Small 😭 😭 😭
I love how in a lot of shots, you show LITERALLY how small and weak Evan feels and how he realizes what he’s done.
He fell from so big, to so small
I like it because of reasons
@@willellis153 Y O U D I D N O T D A R E
IKRRRR
I can sympathize about feeling like your family doesn't love you, mine never cared.
no i-i didnt cry
EchoedCosmo it's youuu
Lmao the two i's look like a crying emote 😂
i-i
N-neither did i
T-T
3:02 Smoothest transition ever
Obviously.
I liked the 3:43 transition too
Elemental Wizard I like that’s too
Yeah, No thanks aa
IKR
When I first saw this song without watching the entire musical, I thought this song was in the perspective of Connors mother asking him why he killed himself.
“So you found a place where the grass is greener. So you jumped the fence to the other side. Was it good? Are they giving you the life I could never provide?”
“Well I hope you’re proud of your big decision.” < I thought that was a grieving mother angrily asking her son why he did what he did.
It didn’t occur to me these lines were about him staying at someone else’s home.
Abel A thats what i thought too at first, i thought the one girl was zoe too
That would be a lot sadder. Please don't make me cry more. ;-;
Maybe, at somepoint, thats true. Like, there are so much parallels between the life of Evan and Connor
do you know where i can watch the musical?
I mean yeah, running from home for a bit is a little less dramatic then fucking suicide.
As Evan slowly gets deeper and deeper into the shit, he zips he hoodie up more and more. So it’s really interesting to see how you zipped it up all the way, showing how he’s screwed himself. I loved this, it was amazing!
Oh that's interesting
Sorry could someone stamp the times Evan zips it up
@@isthisagoodusername9764 they mean that's in the beginning of the musical its unzipped and during the musical he slowly zips it up until the end its fully zipped up
I always see undertale in the comments of musicals.... weird.
Y’hear!
Onion San 800th like lol and i totally ageee
Everyone: Talking bout song
Me: how do u draw hands so perfect
There are two ways: practice until you know everything
OR SELL YOUR SOUL TO THE DEVIL
@@tiny_mini_sunny seems I can only go with the second one
@@andreahdez7627 same ToT
No but seriously, I have traced my own goddam fingers but somewhere along the line the paper’s like “Lol fingers are lame, I want claws!!”
@@bible91 rather than tracing, try and use your hands as reference
Holy damn the actress playing Evan's mom delivers a 12/10 performance. Her stuttering at the start and how she abruptly switches between sentences perfectly conveys how someone in her position would be speaking. Her mind is racing and she's just so upset that she can't speak perfectly.
Yeah.
Rachel Bay Jones does a great job as Heidi. Love her!
@@Father_of_DeathAgreed ofc, but also i think the comment is talking about the speaking which I don't think was Rachel Bay Jones because I believe that's ABF Evan
@@jparnham1931Nah its not andrew, its defo ben
"you dragged me along"
ALANA
*YOU PUT YOURSELF IN THIS*
😆😆😆😆👏👏👏👏
YES. And Jared too. If it were not for his advice to "nod his head off and just say yes to everything they say", it is possible Evan could have just said the truth..
How betrayal looks like. =-=
God I hate Alana but she sings SUPER GREAT
@@ShinSeul sometimes I think "God damnit Evan why did you have to print that letter" it would've all been avoided😧😟
"You! Are the ONLY--"
"The ONE good thing that's ever happened to me, Evan! Sorry I can't give you any more than that!"
*Sadness laugh* "SHit!"
I dunno why but that part hit me hard, I started crying. T-T
Me to my Ex that was forced to break up with me, and has a "better" man. We both had nothing, yet i gave her everything. While i was fine with her not giving anything cause i knew she was in the same situation since i was a kid. Yet she gave up on me as if she knows she can love someone else and wants to forget me now.:')
This is my Mom, she was kicked out by my dad and was literally homeless and sent to a mental hospital right after she rented her first apartment. Now she has bought her house, and whenever I’m mad I can’t have more clothes or I’m mad (we are both depressed, which doesn’t help, and I have body dysmorphia) she does the same thing. That really hit hard for me, it really did.
🥺
ME TOO AND IN THE ONLINE CLASSES THEY ASK ME WHY WAS I CRYING
Reminds me of alot of the fights my mom and I have, but no matter how rough it's been we have each other, even if we at times need a hard drawn arguement to vent the negativity out.
Thanks for making Jared the handsome boy he is meant to be.
Yup.
Yup.
Yup.
Yup.
Yup.
Lol my first reaction was:
“Heck this is intense.”
me too
I love the fact that while Connor's dead, he still manages to look high 😂
lmAO-
I was looking for this comment
I know especially the ending scene he looks so out of place it is funny
I like Jareds singing voice a lot too bad he doesn't sing as much in this musical
Elemental Wizard yeah but the one who plays as Jared (Will Ronald) was also playing as Jeremy from Be more chill 2018 version, and since Jeremy is supposed to be the main character from be more chill.. then.. I guess thats it.. he sings more in be more chill so you can listen to him there..
Yanuki Animations 'sings more' he is litteraly the main character lol
Me to I wish she had more lines
Susie Delta Rune lol yeah :v I dont know why I said it like that :P
He _did_ have a song originally but it was cut. I think it was called "Viral". You can find it on UA-cam, I watched it a while back.
Correction: " _Goin'_ Viral"
M-my heart...
The way Connor looked at Evan when he grabbed him killed me omg
God yes he’s just like... what do you want me to do? I’m dead. You did this to yourself.
Yeahh... I kinda think it looks hot though
Okay so first I absolutely loved that you added some of the dialogue from the beginning to the piece, it really adds more depth to the story. Now I also have to fangirl over some of the choices you made. I love the that you spun the frame at one shot when it was Evan and his mother instead of keeping it a flat shot of his back and focused on her, added so much dimension. I gasped at that transition from Alana to Jared. So freaking smooth and good. The smearing of the ink on his hands? God like. Him grabbing Connor and Connor being with them in the end was so smart. I just loved the angles and expressions you chose. Very exaggerated and fun. As well as what and how you chose to show the people. Good job!
You put into words exactly how I felt about this!
Ikr
Oof I don't remember the dialogue sjd
Oh my god Evan's line "stop it stop it, please let me go!" Was so powerful.
cool dude actually it’s “Just let me out” not “Please let me go”
Just let me off*
LOL
@@jerichogimeno4663 *out
@@charlietrelawney6867 search the lyrics... And listen carefully with head phones
@@jerichogimeno4663 I looked for the lyrics and most of the sources say a different thing (off, out and even go on one). I don't know, I could be wrong but I just sounds like that more to me, also feels like it fits better... Either way 🤷♂️
I can't believe they're leaving this out of movie. It's really the most powerful song in my opinion. We see how small Evan feels and we get to feel the same emotions and stress he's under through us being overwhelmed by people who are all upset at us. I think we really get to see it from everyone's perspective here, and we get to see how Evan feels but we also witness the anger and disappointment the other characters feel and its because of what Evan did. I just think it's a major loss for the plot development towards the audience for the movie because there is so many emotions this song conveys in 4 minutes and 36 seconds.
Wow are you serious????
I’m not mad just disappointed that they’re going the In the Heights route.
I get what the movie is doing even though I don’t agree with it. The movie left off some of the more darker tones and consequences because they wanted the movie to be more “family” friendly is what I read from the production team. They only wanted to touch the surfaces of some of these issues but not dive down too deep. If a streaming service picked this up instead of a theatrical release then I’m sure it would have kept its darker and grungey aspects as it does make the story feel complete. However, I will say that seeing Evan trying to find anyone that knew the real Conner and then bringing that to them still showed a little what Evan was trying to do with his lies. It might have gave them a little peace as he really wasn’t just the monster and even though Evan lied about it with him involved partly it was still true to Conner’s character. I think even the family understands more than they showed and may get it, but that still is no excuse for lying the way he did even if for good intentions at first. However, their trust is broken and that door has closed as being part of their life. The daughter especially wants to forgive him and still talk, but by the end of the movie she is still not ready, but that conversation was a start to who knows. At the same time Evan doesn’t need them anymore as he realizes that he needs to mend and work on relationships closer to his home such as the mother and possibly Jared. It just goes to show as Zoey said that thinks are not always “black and white!”
Evan's mom: Well i'm sorry you had it rough...
Jared:KiNkY~
She said
Well im sorry I HAD it rough
😂And I oop-
Evan: nOT NOW JARED
...get The fuck out of the comment section.
I mean the captions say “you had”
But okay
i just realized that majority of the shit that happens in dear evan hansen is evan's fault. evan's mom feeling remorse, alana and jared feeling used. i know that some isn't really his fault, but the plot of dear evan hansen is about this kid with social anxiety and how he manipulates his crush's family to think that his crush's brother and him were great friends. and he used jared and alana for that. he neglected his mom because he found out that the murphy's were nicer to him. only because the murphy's thought that their son, connor, and evan were good friends. when in reality they weren't.
dudes, hes just a kid :(
Trevor K, being a kid doesn't excuse manipulation
Trevor K isn’t he almost 18? not just a kid lol
I think you are not empathizing enough with evan's character, also i don't think he did anything of that with the tought of "manipulating someone" or "hurt people" and we can't say Connor is a dick either because we don't know him enough, we never got the chance to know his thoughts, maybe he was just dealing with a really big depression and addiction or idk
It starts like a small lie you said without thinking, you felt anxious didn't kow what to do and it just popped out, and then it grows and grows and you can't take it anymore. You hope never had said that, you want to scape, to be alone, to take refuge in something, someone, but everything is so big now and the lie you never mean to say explode and you're in the middle, and everyone around is hurt and they blame you, and they're right, everything is your fault, but the one who feel the worse are you yourself. That's how it feels, that's how having anxiety feel, I've been there, heck I'm there right now. You didn't want it to end like this when it started, you didn't want it to start and don't know how to end the mess.
when Evan says "I don't know, stop!" at 0:26 it just sounds so awful and I feel bad for both of them
I didn't really hear that until now 😢
Ok but Jared looks *hot*
Agreed!
It certainly is a different Jared. I like it as well.
Jared always looks hot wym (but yeah, I really love how they drew him! He looks amazing in this)
Honestly yeah...I'd date him lol
Right?! 😍
Did anyone notice how Evans hands went to his neck when he screamed "stop it stop it"? Like he was considering doing something harmful
I was thinking it meant that he was feeling choked and constrained by his own words, but .... damn
That split second was so-
I DIDNT NOTICE THAT
I love how at 3:45 he goes to ask Connor showing that this fake friendship he’s created is all he has left and how he truly wishes it were real and doesn’t know who else to turn to besides a dead boy he never even knew
Its official: Every Good For You Animatic needs the opening argument between Evan and His Mom.
Holy shit
*THAT WAS AMAZING*
Nyan DogeNerd I LOVE UR PROFILE PICTURE Lance
This activated my particle bar- No, Lance.
Nyan DogeNerd are you from outer space? Cause your body is out of this world!
Averosia O-oh wow. I'm not used to be flirted with even jokingly.
Nyan DogeNerd hehe
Wow! You are great at perspectives! Also why has nobody seen this?!! Something is very wrong.
Because it was uploaded today😅 But yeah I agree it’s awesome!
Gisaisme what are you talking about? The perspective and anatomy is very off and the only thing she got right was the emotion.
Pao Lah what is wrong with you. Have some respect. You have no idea how much effort must've been put into this masterpiece and if you think it's not "good enough" then im sorry you cant see great artwork even if it were to hit you in the face! You're right tho, the emotion was perfect although you missed the fact that the anatomy and perspectives were incredible too. If you think it's so bad then go make you're own damned animation and see how well it turns out hotshot.
Destiny_xX You see, this is the problem with you suck ups, you think just because someone put in an effort it's the most *amazing* thing ever and no one should say anything otherwise, because it's *mean* and wrong.
But the thing is I'm not saying it's wrong, if anything I'm very proud of this animator/artist.
She took her time drawing every scene and layer probably worrying that her tablet would crash, there's not enough movement, maybe harsh criticism, etc...
But what you don't understand is that people who criticise don't have to know how to animate and draw to know when something looks a little off (not bad).
You think you're such a great fan, giving complements left and right, face it, anyone can do that. Do you know what everyone might not be able to do because ThEy'rE tOo NiCe, say what's wrong.
Pure positive reinforcement isn't going to help anyone who's seeking to do better.
But what do I know, I'm just a bitchy nobody who doesn't know what's talent if it's in my face.
At least I'm not somebody who thinks they know what's right and wrong on the freaking
I N T E R N E T.
Pao Lah yeesh, pull the stick out of your ass. The anatomy was actually spot on and stylized according to the perspective, if you take up a personal problem with the stylized look then that's your issue. Personally I think the expressions on the faces are a bit too exaggerated but that's just my personal feeling. You don't need to go make an essay to rant at someone who disagrees with you, much less call them suck-ups just because they enjoy something.
the animatic...no, _animation_ is so clean and put together and the emotion...
*_yeah i felt that_*
Just a really advance animatic
aniamtion is picture movement it doesn't have to be detailed like for example disney
it's considered animation
i know what animation is.. this isnt an animation. still an animatic, an animation is much more smooth, you know, like disney. not this
just google what animation means and that'll give you the image of what it is
disney relied on delailed animation because they wanted to tell a story with a look of acctual real life movement that's drawn with multiple frames per second and it was done professionally and it's more famous that's why when people think about animation the first thing that pops up in their minds are desney or pixar
the animation shown in this video is done at a shorter time span with less frames per second but you can see clearly what's happening in the video and the characters' interactions and gestures and the movement of the "camera" around them it is still conssidered animation
disney= high quality animation high visuals
this video = low quality animation high visuals
mmmhhhhmm
I do like that as Evan is shaking Conner and demanding he tell him how to “change the story” Conner simply shrugs and stares right at Evan.
It’s a such a chilling reminder that Conner is technically a dead man, and whether you believe that the one we see after his death is his genuine ghost or a manifestation of Evan’s own consciousness, one thing is clear: Conner has NOTHING to say to Evan at this point because the dead both figuratively and literally can’t talk.
Conner’s shrug and stare could also be seen as him nonverbally saying to Evan “figure it out yourself” because at the end of the day, Conner didn’t do anything. It’s all Evan’s lies that the public has filtered through the letters they believe are Conner’s, so it’s Evan’s mess to clean up, not Conner’s. Again, the dead can’t speak, and if one believes this to be Evan’s consciousness instead of Conner’s ghost, it means that Evan is technically telling HIMSELF to fix this problem, even as “the boat is about to sink”.
So true. Now in the book Conner is a ghost but in the musical it's Evan's guilty conscious. If we really look at this from the deep end it's like Evan telling himself "I have no more lies or excuses for you." Truly a chilling moment in this animatic.
The best part was from 0:00-4:36
Sk3tch 101 I don’t like 4:36 cause that’s when it ends
Trueeeee
HE'S TRYING TO HAVE "CONNOR' help him, I'm not crying, you are
WOAAHHHHH WHAT THE HECK??!!!?!! THIS MIGHT BE THE BEST ANIMATIC I HAVE EVER SEEN????? IT MOVES SO MUCH AND THE ANGLES ARE SO VARIED AND CREATIVE!!! AMAZING JOB, REALLY!
13elephantburger missyasylum is really good for heathers as well
I suggest the new animation of Beautiful from Heathers. It’s insanely good.
I recommend Claudia Cacace
This is my favorite animtic of hers - ua-cam.com/video/4DJnjhKKCXU/v-deo.html
Nina's Nachos ah man i love her animatics! Theyre so dynamic and expressive! She's a comic book artist, too, maybe thats why :D
This song just hits every single nerve in my body, and its not even nostalgia because I never watched dear evan hansen
I can relate T~T
Ok so I read the script for dear Evan Hansen and I LOVE how you portrayed Jared because he is insure *" he walks toward Evan with a practiced swagger that only the deeply insure can pull off" *and you capture his reaction to it is perfect and his facials are beautiful because they are perfectly displaying that he feels *" like a helpless heartbroken little kid"*
I love how they described it
Anna Ellis *insecure
ah yes, the exaggerated swagger of an insecure teen
The raw emotion in this animation is amazing. You nailed it and then some. Keep it up! I love this
THE FRICKEN PERSPECTIVES AND EXAGGERATED EMOTIONS/POSES HAVE ME SHOOK
It’s great to see how people convey Evan’s position as he gets deeper into his lies. It’s just a shame the movie twists the whole narrative into Evan being the good guy the whole time
I hope to animate just like you one day it’s so expressive and the flow is so smooth!!
Sad Plant
Same
I don't think I would consider this animation. Some of the parts are really smooth and the movement is great but a lot of is an animatic/storyboard as the title says.
This isn't really animation..
can yall chill?some parts are animated, and that's rare for an animatic. And it's way smoother than a normal animatic, so I think they mean that
jake perez it isn’t animation but it honestly wouldn’t take much more effort to animate it as all the key frames are done vs most rushed still frame animatics
I live for Alana’s hair.
You actually took the words out of my mouth.
S a m e
Meanwhile I have a mop on my head 😂
*S a m e*
Sameee!
Same here m8
That was fucking intense; I absolutely love how fluid this is with both the expressions and body language. The way Heidi moves and the expressiveness from Alana and Jared and Evan and just- AGGHH You're so incredibly talented and words can't describe how much I love this. It's my new favourite animatic EVER. I'll never be able to get over Alana's hair and how you draw Jared in general and Heidi's amazing expressions and Evan!! Evan looks so good!!? You're so talented and the transitions into scenes and your ability to give us an insight into their feelings with visuals and shading is phenomenal. And just.. Connor. The way he's staring at Evan at the end gave me chills and was just awesome. Keep up the amazing work.
vi Practice. Makes. Perfect.
Also, HANDSs. Such nice ones, (I've been arting too long, haven't I?)
3:55 is so amazing because he’s screaming to be let off a run away train, to be free of a web of lies that he created, he’s trapped in a cage he built himself and you can hear it in his voice. He trapped himself and doesn’t know how to get out
*H o w d o y o u h a n d*
-this was so beautiful holy shi t-
Also, *H O W D O Y O U P R E S P E C T I V E ?*
*H o w d o y o u d r a w*
*H O W D O Y O U P R E S P E C T I V E H A N D?*
0:15 WHERE'D THAT PHONE COME FROM
0:17 *WHERE'D THAT PHONE GO!?!?*
Well there wasn't enough space to show that there was a table there
It went to hyperspace
Into the void
*_THE VOOOOOID_*
Where'd did it come from Cottoneye Joe
YOU MADE ALANA'S HAIR SO BEAUTIFUL!! THIS IS A GREAT ANIMATIC! I'm like actually screaming. You made Heidi's emotions so realistic, and Jared so sardonic about it all. AND YOU PUT CONNOR IN WITH THEM WHEN THEY SANG "SO YOU GOT WHAT YOU ALWAYS WANTED" AND WHEN EVAN SMEARED INK AND CONNOR APPEARED IT'S LIKE YOU WERE SHOWING THAT BASICALLY EVERYTIME WE SEE CONNOR IN THE ACTUAL MUSICAL IT'S JUST EVAN'S VERSION!! THIS IS ALL *PHENOMENAL*
Apollo Enjolras
*I know right! I love it!!*
Omgawed chill
@@yane2282//
Um, why? It's such a great animatic!!
Silverberry Loves memes I know it is dude but like dam.
@@yane2282 //
Is there something wrong with celebrating it?
In personal opinion, I think Zoe should be in Alana's place, and the ghost of Connor should be in Jared's place. If you really think about it, Jared and Alana knowingly put themselves in that situation where as Connor and Zoe where being used majorly. This song was about Evan realizing how bad he hurt those around him, so I feel that it would be so dang powerful to have the three people who he was majorly abusing (yes, he was abusing Connor by using him to get closer to Zoe) and being straight up toxic to, singing along with him as he starts to realize what he did. The three in this song represent his guilt, and that is why when he sings, "can't erase what I wrote in ink," the three in the back are so loud and dissonant to show the absolute mental turmoil (they are the voices in his head in a weird way) he is going through. Thoughts?
I agree with what you saying with Connor and Zoe in Alana and Jared's spots, but Alana didn't complete go into this knowingly, she didn't know the full situation like Jared did, she only knew about Evan trying to start the Connor project and trying to preserve Connor's memory and that is what Alana wanted to do. Also in the book for DEH, ( I never finished the play only the book so I don't know if it's the same), Evan wanted to raise money for the Connor project and after a week or two, he left Alana alone to do all the work for it even though he started it, he blew her off to go out with the Murphy's a couple of times too, so she was pretty upset with that.
@@meandonlyme9047 I 100% get you, thank you for your opinion!
YES! THIS IS AN EXCELLENT IDEA!
I agree with most of this but completely disagree with the fact he was abusing his mom. Hell I’d say it’s the other way around as his only point was that they genuinely make home feel wanted whereas she’s never home and when she is treats him like a freak. Despite this the entire argument she only antagonizes Evan and villanizes him for her shortcomings and wanting a genuinely loving relationship
@@theazureeyedaassassin885 I'd say it's the opposite. Evan demonizes his mother for being "absent" even though she's a single parent. He manipulated another family into feeling as though he's the only remnant of their dead son, and the narrative goes out of its way to somehow say anti anxiety meds are bad which.... Is not how chronic anxiety works. It was highly irresponsible of the play to make Heidi out to be the bad guy. She's not trying to "fix" her son as Evan put it, she's trying to give him tools to cope, Evan just doesn't feel like trying. He'd rather wait until something better comes along, and oh look would you look at that? A boy commits suicide and he accidentally involved himself, well better continue to ride this to it's conclusion.
Heidi literally did nothing wrong. She cared about her son, awww boo hoo.
As someone who has two chronic mental illnesses Evan can get bent.
we need to talk about how Connor comes into the mess with it,,
It really adds to Evan really seeing what he’s done at the end.
This is just so good
finally someone else who noticed connor in this
The angles, the bounces(?), the facial expressions, the transitions from character to character, the body language, and the symbolism are just incredible in this ,its insane.
This is amazing!!! Between the expressions in the wonderful art, the amazing animation and the OUTSTANDING cinemography??? It's so engaging!!! This is one of the best animatics I've seen!! LOVE THIS!
3:38 Evan venting his problems to Connor is my absolute favourite part of this animatic. He's asking a dead man for help, and it proves futile cuz Evan never even really knew Connor; he's just lied to himself and others about knowing him, hence why when he wonders what Connor would advise Connor has no words to give (cuz Evan has no grasp of the real Connor).
All this to say you've made a wonderful animatic!!
Me:This needs more views
My friend:It already has 400k vie-
Me:dID I STUTTER
I'm on it bro
Wapplə Fancake DiD i StUtTeR, bItCh?!
It's approaching 1 million now 😎👌😂
Wapplə Fancake it has 995k now but I think it should have 995 mil
Wapplə Fancake houston, we’ve hit 1 million
Me: *is crying*
Someone sees me: Are you okay?
Me mentally: ummm, just blame it on weed or something in my eye
Wrong musical... okay
*your actually in a bathroom*
"Oh hey Michael!"
Yes
Oof
This reminds me of some kind of musical...
yet I can't put my finger on it....
oh right I remember!
*Be more cold*
Ashton Animations Oh. No. Omg. WILL ROLAND/JARED PLAYED THE ORIGINAL JEREMY HEE HEERE!
My heart is beating of excitement from this, it was so investing and creative, also very thought out, this might be one the best DEH Animatics to date yet!
I was really pumped for the movie but then I found a few things out. Apparently they took out any parts where Evan questions if he’s a good person or not. Which defeats the purpose of the musical. It’s about a kid who fakes emails from a kid who killed himself over something he wrote. They also changed Connor’s dad from his abusive and uncaring father to a stepdad which kinda defeats the purpose. Connor is a bully because of his problems with his dad. That’s all I have thank you
Not the message they wanted I guess but I like the og version better
I HAVE NEVER BEEN PROUDER OF SOMEONE IN MY WHOLE LIFE!!!! YOUVE DONE IT! YOUVE FINISHED!! GOOD FOR YOU!!!
I loved everything especially all the emotions you took time to incorporate like wow have you ever seen people emote like this
Also mood for this animatic is when he falls to his knees
*good for you*
Oh shit it's so INTENSE
Valeria Arkhipova-Sklar omg i somehow read this at the same time Heidi said shit
4:03 When Evan starts crying oh my god it's the best crying part of a animatic I have seen :( it made me wanna cry harder then he was :((
2:17
*Jared breaks in*
Jared: Kinky
Super Average OH MY GOD YOU DID NOT XD
i'm not good at writing heartfelt paragraphs about how beautiful this animatic is so I'm just going to meme
press f to pay respects
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3:03 gives me literal chills... every time.
Same
My favorite part honestly 😔👌
Real
I love how you portrayed evan becoming like connor from everything he’s lied about. Angry and regretful. Great new perspective! Love the art, btw! So smooth!
UM
THIS IS THE MOST GODLIKE ANIMATIC IVE EVER SEEN. ITS LITERAL PERFECTION. sorry but like it’s so damn good im-
DUDE LITERALLY ITS SOOO GOODD UGH
That first part messed me up
Evan’s mom: You are the only- the one good thing that ever happened to me EVAN ! SORRY IF I CANT GIVE YOU ANYTHING MORE THAN THAT! CHET.
Evan: Well it’s not my Fault other people can.
Woah...
I loved that song omkkkkk
Ant your art style is a m a z i n g!
That's masterpiece, keep going ♥
Sayori nor did i
I SEE YOU EVERYWHERE
@@supernova._.482 same here
Waifu takes the stage.
Hey sayori! Hows it hanging ?
You express the emotions so clearly especially when our snol bean Evan is SO confused and sad and angry he grabs Connor by the collar and yanks him
Nobody:
My mom when I say the food at my friend’s place was better than hers:
Lmfao
Nobody:
My mom when my counselor called me her "daughter":
matching pfp T^T
@@inserthahafunniusername9656 me-
@@addiewashere2024 ayo!!
Okay so maybe I'm going to have a heart attack? Don't know though
AHHHHHHH EVERYTHING WAS *SO GOOD!* The movements were elegant, the symbolism was hECCIN, just generally all of it!
One thing I liked a lot was that on the scene where Heidi is looking at the flowers the lines weren't always in the same place, which shows a lot of how her and Evan's world was shifting.
I liked your choice of audio, too. It was unexpected because I just assumed you would use Jared and Alana's too, but you didn't and it was still perfect!
Also, Jared? Is beyond perfection? Alana's really good too? And Heidi was worry lines? And you flash the family a lot? And the end scene was great? And did I mention Jared?
I just think (and I've never thought this as much as I have here before) that this... STYLE of art, and the way it's ANIMATED, just MATCHES the ENTIRE musical PERFECTLY. The same despair and emotion that I get from the entire musical is here, and i feel like I just listened to the whole soundtrack I'm such a mess.
Keep going until you reach the sun!
(because the emotions and transitions, btw there is a lot) Favorite parts, by far:
0:22 - 0:26
0:48 - 0:51
1:04 - 1:14
3:00 - 3:02
3:11 - 3:19
3:32 - 3:36
3:43 - 3:44
4:17 - 4:26
All of these either have too much emotion for my tiny heart to handle, or the transitions are just absolutely beautiful. Great job at this
My fav 0:00-4:36
Shifty 14 yes
A lot of people here aren’t really appreciating how horrible this actually is for Evan. As someone whose parents act kind of similar to Evan’s mum, I can say for sure that regardless of whether her outburst is justified or not, it is absolutely certain to damage Evan’s mental state significantly. He is effectively in the process of being convinced that he is just a bad person, someone who is unloving and manipulative and doesn’t deserve the good things in his life. And when someone convinced themselves of this, they start acting it out. They will start to push away any loving emotions, convinced that they’re just faking those feelings. And after enough time, they become that person.
Evan’s response “it’s not my fault other people can” is incredibly concerning. “You’re the only good thing that’s ever happened to me” is a common enough sentiment that this sort of interaction happens a lot, and there are a few ways of reacting to it. Given that Evan genuinely believed his mum regretted having him, a conviction so clearly deeply ingrained that he would never believe her just saying something like that, him agreeing and trying to convince her that he still loved her would have meant he felt guilty about upsetting her and wanted to calm her down. The fact he didn’t do that means he didn’t feel guilty, or at least not guilty enough to open up at all. This could either mean he actually feels nothing for her, which would be incredibly concerning, or he’s used to the feeling of guilt to such an extent that he doesn’t feel any. Since he does seem to care at least a little about her, I think the latter is more likely, which means that he’s already experienced significant amounts of guilt over his life and is late in the process of convincing himself that he is a bad person.
I feel so bad for evan😭
Couldn't said it better myself
I love the inclusion of Connor in this. He’s not angry, or sad, he’s just indifferent. He’s not trying to help or make things worse, like he’s saying ‘This is what you wanted, right?’ I wish the musical would’ve included him more, even if he was just standing on stage doing nothing. It would give a great wary feeling of him still haunting everyone, him being the only one that really knows the full story, and the only one that really can’t tell it.
Wow you can really see the difference between that deh animatic you posted a year ago and this one!! Beautiful job, the expressions and movement are so well drawn and realistic!!
YES I KNOW EXACTLY HOW YOU FEEL
With Dear Evan Hansen it really shows this sentiment I think: People are just people. They're not good nor bad, however their actions can be good or bad.
Evan made a terrible mistake, which may have brought temporary happiness, to himself and others, but came at the cost of expoliting grieve. He's trying to mask that, and it all comes crashing down in this song.
His mother has a right to be upset, so does Evan. Because he feels upset she isn't around much (which he interprets as her indirectly abandoning him) while his mother is upset because he did, in fact, directly abandone her. Despite her trying so hard to give him a good life.
That was literally the most stunning thing I have ever seen!!! You clearly put heaps of effort into this and holy shit did it pay off oh my GOD
something i read that makes this whole song more clear:
according to wikipedia, this whole song is just the three characters (heidi, alana, & jared) messing in evans mind. he’s basically having like a panic attack? or something like that
if the characters were actually talking to evan, it wouldn’t make sense because alana and jared basically put themselves into the situation they’re in; but if they’re just in his mind, then evan is feeling really guilty about what he did
okay that’s my two cents bye 🏃
OMG THATS THE BEST TRANSITION FROM ALANA TO JARED AT 3:01
YES
this is my favorite song in the musical and you’re animation really does it justice. i love how all the emotion is so clear. i love how Evan is angry as well and I love how you show each of them expressing anger differently. the emotion in the art and the animation is so smooth, it’s amazing all around!!!!
If you listen to the song it's more the characters projecting other aspects of their lives onto Evan. Alana says he dragged her along but she was doing all the dragging and forcing, and jared talks about "playing who you need to play" which isnt what evan was doing, if anything it's what he was doing. Finally, his mom talks about him leaving and how she doesnt feel good enough, but evan never actually left her, he just stayed at ttthe murphys (mostly when his mom wasnt even home) his father was the one who left.
Obviously Evan is in the wrong b,ut the characters act as if he manipulated them into this situation, and he didn't.
This is exacly what i had in mind, thank you, when i first watched the musical i got so confused when that song started, like i know that what Evan did was wrong but he did none of the things they said and i was just there like am i missing something? XD
It’s worth noting that Alana and Jared’s singing parts are meant to be manifestations of Evan’s conscience rather than actually them, meaning his mind could be exaggerating them through his anxiety.
There are dialogue bits in the middle of the song with the real Jared and Alana and, well, they’re not very uplifting.
@@Justice237 oh i know! i just wanted to put that out there
So that's why the song sounds like they're being abusive.
he indeed manipulated everyone lol
Cool things I love about this!!:
0:23 You can literally SEE his mouth forming the letter "f" as he's about to say family
2:16 The aggressive curtain pull that works so on beat
1:48 This part with Evan's mom putting her hand on Murphey's table where Evan is eating with another family instead of her is just sooooo heart wrenching!
2:45 The walking away from his mom only to bump into Alana. This idea is just so cool and works so well
3:01 The transition from Alana to Jared is genius.
3:08 Jared's hand gestures here are so good and expressive
3:17 Ok I'm sorry but like this animation here is AMAZINNNNGG!
3:43 You portrayed so amazingly how Conner's whole character in the letters was really just made from something Evan wrote in ink. This part is probably my favourite. It's so genius.
3:38-3:59 Evan's whole breakdown here you animated with such EMOTION!
These are just some of my favourite bits but this whole animatic is truly amazing. Every hand gesture, every position, every lipsync, every expression, every character design, just absolutely incredible. You're really cool :)
I cannot believe how amazing this is. I have never, EVER seen an animatic that conveys emotion as well as this one. Not to mention all these movement?? And the use of angles??? This is seriously incredible. 11/10
WOW!!!! THIS IS AMAZING! The way you animated so much movement, and had clear drawings of the characters the whole time. I love how you draw the characters especially Alana.... And Jared..... And Evan YOU KNOW WHAT? You draw them all perfect. I also love how you added (and drew) Connor. Like no one does that and I think it really fits plus he's probably my favorite character... I love the angles too! Just your animation skills are great please keep animating whatever it may be
I like how Evan is more angry than sad in this unlike most animatics I see I think the others should take some blame too it's not completely Evans fault but that's just me and my opinion disagree if you like (also english isn't my first language sorry about any mistakes)
clairvoyant angel no, I agree. I’m angry at Jared and Alana because Jared was NEVER a good friend to Evan and borderline bullied him and knew what he was signing up for when he started writing emails with Evan and then Alana (who I love!) used Evan just as much as he used the Connor project because she wanted the clout and college credit. Evan’s Mom was never with him, so it’s not like it was really that wrong of him to spend time with other people while she wasn’t there. Being alone for too long probably worsened his depression and anxiety.
clairvoyant angel I agree
Yup, might as well vilify a starving man for taking food that was offered just because it happened from a misunderstanding.
Hey guys can you explain whats happening in this part of the story cuz I really dont understand
Basically Evans mom finds out about the Murphy's and gets pissed at him for jumping ship to another family because she has insecurities about how his father left for "something better", meanwhile Alana has discover Evans lie and Jared is just being an asshole because apparently he thought him and Evan were friends despite him treating Evan like shit through most of everything.
It's pretty common with depressed and anxious people actually, people exacerbate the issue and then get pissed when that leads to poor decision making.
Jared's singing in this is so good
(He is also hot in this)
IKR !!!!!!!!!!!
NATSUKI WHAT ARE yOu doing here👀👀👀👀
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I never thought I would agree with you, but I agree!
You've improved ever since 'If I could tell her'!! You made them move so much and smoothly that it looks like an animation without colors! Also, I love how you showed how frustration, anger and regret in a single expression of Evan! Plus the perspective and angles? It's definitely wholesome and actually really refreshing!
I also love how you made their expressions actually match the tone of their singing. (This may be a common mistake for animators).
The sarcasm, the anger, and just full hatred is displayed so well that I can't help but feel mad and sympathetic for Evan at the same time! Also how you made Evan got pissed at Connor even though it was clearly Evan's fault, just adds more detail and how Evan wanted to take the blame on someone else. (at least for me)
Anyway, I'm really hoping future animatics from you soon! From the past year you've improved so much!
NO, i cant go down thise evan hansen hole again. my heart cant take this
Crush them and leaf them behind, XD
Lettuce leaf?
Rampant Raven 😂😂😂
Rampant Raven ik I can Treeyeet you better. ThanHEE HEE CAN
Crush them and 🍁 them behind
3:34 seen this animatic tons of times but just gotta comment; I adore how you captured that Look ™ where Evan is glaring at the floor.
Because that is genuinely so realistic; if you’re under such extreme emotional distress but trying not to let it show, you tend to glare- compensating for the emotional distress by making yourself look like nothing’s wrong, which in turn comes out looking like something is _definitely wrong_ because it’s an overcompensation.
And if you can’t look someone in the eye, you tend to glare at anywhere else; most common being the floor.
Idk if I’m even making sense but the way you captured that very specific experience is so perfect
*Nobody:*
Evan's mom: *Leans out window in the middle of an argument to poke flower*
I always see Evan as a little selfish. He has this tendency to think about himself and how it affects him first. Making him overlook the way other people around him are also having a bad time. Evan, at least on the book, literally admits that he wants to go after his father, go to college close to him. The father that abandoned him and his mother, and left them to survive on their own. He doesn’t appreciate Heide or what she does just so he can have a average life as a teenager. I know how much it hurts to not have a parent around, but he never thinks about how she is trying her best to support him. He often forgets that he is not the only person with problems.
He's also sheltered as hell, so that'll effect it too
Well that's just it: does he really think about himself first because he's selfish, or because he has never had healthy interpersonal relationships before?
A LITTLE selfish? Honey he takes the cake for selfish behavior. He manipulated a girl into dating him by utilizing her brothers suicide.
That was the first time I actually FELT this song and liked and it and all thanks to your mind blowing work with emotions and expressions! I’m out of words, it’s TOO GOOD FOR ME to be true. Cheers for your hard work!
3:55 is so heart wrenching, and unfortunately so relatable sometimes I feel like everyone around me is backing me against a wall and it's so painful, my anxiety sucks
This song is honestly probably my favorite DEH song (even tho idk if I could ever choose lmao), and you captured the emotion so perfectly from it (not to mention the art). I'm incapable of explaining how much I love this.
Whoa. This is like- one of my favorite songs???? And the way you animated it is just freaking AMAZING! Especially when Evan's friends were coming along and his mom breaks the fight part with her song and the spinning and GAH congrats man! It's awesome!
I love how you also included the audio and the movement and emotions are shown easily it's amazing!