Okay the story is very good I did enjoy it I like the plot line and the character development I like how the deviates from the actual story I do wish it was a lot longer I hope you come back make a part 2 and keep up the good work
This one reminds me of another story almost similar to this one. But with some changes to the original version. In that one, Naruto was with Ino. In this one, Naruto is with Temari. The fights in the second half of the Chunin Exams were altered.
Okay the story is very good I did enjoy it I like the plot line and the character development I like how the deviates from the actual story I do wish it was a lot longer I hope you come back make a part 2 and keep up the good work
This one reminds me of another story almost similar to this one. But with some changes to the original version. In that one, Naruto was with Ino. In this one, Naruto is with Temari. The fights in the second half of the Chunin Exams were altered.
More please❤ make part 2 please
2 plzzz
part 2 please!!!!
soo why does he still have to train the duckhaired clowifif hes already out of the finals?