(Jenlisa ff) || Rewrite the stars || [Episode 18]

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  • Опубліковано 29 гру 2024

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  • @belle2739
    @belle2739 4 роки тому

    I’m very impressed you really put a lot of ideas, scenarios that connected from previous episodes, I’m sure each episodes has a hint for what is next story is, for upcoming new episode. Hehehehe ( Just thinking out loud, and having some thoughts, because BEING CURIOUS AS I AM, which I’m really, really, really curious person, I also use my imagination to create a scene about your story, and put some words into it, but only my mindset and I, can condone it, I don’t write it on any paper or notebook, it just strongly and naturally popped out within me, when I started to think, or having any thoughts to get some hints or just wanted to add more into the story, and I wanna be HONEST WITH YOU, I still want more and I want this story to be longer as possible as you can allowed it. 😊💙
    This episode is quite stunning, why? Because as you mentioned before from previous comments you responded not just by me but also others, I’ve come up to a little thinking, this will be some scene I will read and what are the scenarios would be, 🤭 ( I’m sorry, I’m just in love of the story, I can’t deny it, I will admit it, I’m a little possessive, I don’t wanna be hypocritical about it. )
    Can you blame me? 🙏✌️
    I just love how you do it in your way, how you created it, how you planned it so well, that I’m always pleased by you, by your story. I’m so deeply profound by your story each episode you made, I’m getting and getting deeply attached to it, for an example; Like a relationship that I can’t hold back, and I can’t deny it, that is why I’m so into it, attached to your story Mr. Jeon, I’m really really happy and very very proud of you. 👍😍
    True, it’s not easy, how tormented Lisa is, to make a decision like this, a HUGE RESPONSIBILITY she will carry for the sake of the people she loves so dearly, especially Jennie, I really understand where she come from, and why, and also I have to admit, I’m very impressed to Mr. Song decisions and plans, not just that his doing these for his family’s justice especially what happened to Irene, but also to help Lisa, to win a fight, to be her mentor and act like a Dad to her, to help her in any way, to lessen Lisa’s pain. It just that Lisa loves Jennie so much, she almost break the RULES, A PROMISE SHE MADE with Mr. Song, LUCKILY there is JISOO her TRUE FRIEND, Lisa can always rely on to her, to anything, no matter how big or small the problem is, no matter how difficult the situation is, or not. She will always be on Lisa’s side to help her, no matter what happens, ( BESTFRIEND FOREVER) 😁
    Jennie I feel her pain, if Lisa is tormented by pain and choice, Jennie is tormented more by pain, heartbreak, deeply broken, knowingly, how it hurts so much to lose someone you love so deeply. In Jennie’s mind, her world collapse and stopped after Lisa’s fake death, to Fake Burial, she become different now, I can imagine that scene with her and Lisa in the background with Jisoo, while Jennie is crying out loud in silent and loudly in front of Lisa’s Grave. Heartbroken scene but I loved it, more likely a realistic one, like a reality always happens, but different circumstances, different places, different situation but same main point, which is the FEELING OF PAIN AND LOSS! that’s what Jennie’s world collided, However, Jisoo became her protector, watching over her, helping Jennie everytime, and sending Jennie home, because she made a promise to Lisa to help Jennie, watched over her, while Lisa is far away in a meantime. And now 3 YEARS HAS PASSED, Jennie became cold, always drunk every night, workaholic, loves to pissed off Taehyung, because this guy still fall over heels with Jennie, no matter what, persistent person. ( ohhh well, Jennie’s charm is very dangerous, in a good way. Lol🤭😂 ) that is why Taehyung always follow Jennie around, beyond a stalker, ( creepy and dangerous person 🙈 )
    On the other hand, Jennie is always cold and persistent as well, to avoid Taehyung, to let him know, there is no hope for him, that Jennie will never fall in love with him, no matter what he does.
    Thank you Mr. Jeon because you let Taehyung still chasing Jennie and courting her while Lisa is in U.S. still, #imveryhappy 🤗
    You surprised me, you know that, right?!
    Unexpected situation between Rosè and Jisoo, you created the idea of them both become a BUSINESS PARTNERS?! 🤭🤗hehehehe, becomes friends and close again like before, though I’m still waiting for their cute scenes, funny scenes, love scenes. Lol 🙈🤭😄😉🤫
    I’m really happy you created a scene for them to be Business Partners, hopefully soon, LOVE PARTNERS. 🤩 I feel excited to imagine the scenes, BUT OF COURSE, I let you decide, I let you do your thing, your way, because I love how you do it. 😉 NOW, Lisa is very successful, became A WISER, CLEVER, SMART CEO in the company, she change as well just like Jennie, workaholic, matured, carrying a lots of responsibilities, preparing for comeback, to fight with Mr. Chairman Kim, and the other unknown person, to have her justice, revenge, to RE-CLAIM what’s rightfully for Her, and to WIN BACK JENNIE KIM TO HER ARMS ONCE AGAIN. Mr. Jeon I’m very well please again for this episode, it’s like you knew how to satisfy me every each episode you updated, like you knew how to pull a string and manage to create something dynamic episode, consistently amazing and beautifully written by YOU. It’s like YOUR ALMOST PERFECT, the way you created a story like this, the more I’m in love with it. ( I dont wanna be hypocrite, and say YOUR PERFECT, I think that’s just very common, so basic to describe you or defined you, won’t you agree? )
    In my opinion, “YOUR ALMOST PERFECT” meaning; Quite endearing to defined you as who you truly are, what is meant to say, to describe you as a person... ( it’s up to you, how you interpret my words, but know this, I am being honest with you, my intentions are good, that you can imagine it. 😁🤫
    I will not tired to keep saying, how I am very very proud of you, how I am very very grateful to you, how amazingly good you are, to create this kind of story, that Reflects All Kinds of Emotions, How Love Can Be Profound, also this story gives a big definition of”What is Love”, “How Love Can Change The Person” “How love Can be everything Of Person Desire”, “How Love Can Win against All Odds”, So on, and so forth, regardless of whatever the outcome are, I know Jennie and Lisa will have the happiness that they deserve. what do you think? Disagree? Or Agree?🤔
    Well...I have so many thoughts, many words to say, but I don’t wanna hold you up too long, ( that’s not fair right? ) lol 😂
    Anyways, I wonder in next episode, When will Jennie and Lisa meet again? And where? Is there a scene where Lisa and Jennie meet up in the flower shop?, a scene where Jennie is inside the car, then look up by the window and sees Lisa standing next to her car while texting someone on the phone? Is there scene like that? Or they will meet up in a special event which is planned by Mr.Song, that Lisa will be introduce as the daughter and the Heiress of Song Company.? Are they gonna meet up on that scene? Or perhaps Jennie visit Jisoo in her office to talk about something important, then suddenly unexpected situation, randomly, by accident, she will see Lisa sitting down in the couch while texting on the phone, and Jisoo was shocked seeing Jennie shows up out of nowhere. Is there a scene like that?
    Or maybe Jennie went out in the bar again to get drunk, then out of nowhere a random guy, approached Jennie to talk to her, being flirty with her, but of course, Jennie will give a cold stare, and say a harsh words to pissed off the guy, to leave her alone, but the random guy got mad, hurt by Jennie’s words, got angry, and become aggressive to Jennie, forcing her to come with him to somewhere dark area, thinking to harassing her, touching her, but Jennie fights back and slap the random guy face, and say “ Fuck off Jerk! Don’t you dare touch me again! Don’t you know who I am?! Huh? I’m Jennie Kim!!! And then, the random guy, getting more angrier, he was about to slap Jennie but someone block his hand, and it was Lisa, who was giving the random guy, a death stare, she was furious, ready to beat up the guy, then she punch him, right hook, a big punch that he end up pass out. That’s when Jennie froze, seeing Lisa in front of her, she thinks this is not real, she is dreaming of her again, but she wanted to think it is real. That Lisa is actually real and looking at her. Is there a scene like that Mr. Jeon????
    Another huge, longer, comment again, sorry but I’m not sorry. 💙🦋❤️
    #imjustbeinghappy #ifeelbless
    #thankyou #imveryproudofyou

    • @belle2739
      @belle2739 4 роки тому

      Can I ask a personal question from you?

    • @jeonkookie2782
      @jeonkookie2782  4 роки тому +1

      To be honest, you made me smile with your comment and everytime i'm reading your comments in each episode that i made :) you're so good in english too .. A comment like this is the reason why i'm giving my best to make every episode beautiful .. So you guys could enjoy it .. Thank you so much for this another long comment :) i appreciate it a lot 😉

    • @jeonkookie2782
      @jeonkookie2782  4 роки тому +1

      @@belle2739 sure, as long as i can answer it :)

    • @belle2739
      @belle2739 4 роки тому

      Uhm... I knew you already deleted the previous post, but I’ve mentioned I will ask questions, but I didn’t get a chance to it. Because I was in the middle of work, then I didn’t know you responded to me really quick, but I was too late to see your reply from my notifications, because it was done, deleted. 😭
      I was gonna response to your reply but I cannot, it’s not in public anymore.
      So I thought of asking a question here, but I feel like it’s the right place to ask.
      I’m sorry, I was too late to respond. :(
      I got caught up from work and other stuff.... will you forgive me?🥺😭
      I hope your not disappointed? Or maybe mad? I was really busy, only now I get a chance to respond.

    • @belle2739
      @belle2739 4 роки тому

      Mr. Jeon Your not the only one, you made me smile too, of course you can’t see me smiling, lol but just imagine it.
      Not just how good your story is, how you reconnect with everyone, with me. Your pleasant to answer any questions, at your best ability. :) which I think is quite sweet of you. Your being too kind and nice, it’s like we are friends now. Can I be your friend? Will you be my friend?
      On top of that, I only speak from my mind and my heart, what are my thoughts, my feelings, my opinions. I’m just being true to myself and being true to you. :) hope you don’t mind?

  • @jenlisajenlisa8732
    @jenlisajenlisa8732 4 роки тому

    Wait??!!!! exciting episode omg!!!!!

  • @nallicjoble8666
    @nallicjoble8666 4 роки тому

    Wow. I love this story

  • @JENLISASONE
    @JENLISASONE 4 роки тому

    Ahhhhhhh... I have no voice because you author... You are....!!!!

  • @aseasalman6223
    @aseasalman6223 4 роки тому

    Ito talaga si jisso panira nang moment alamo ung nageemot kana tas bigla kang makatawa

  • @gustin7601
    @gustin7601 4 роки тому

    Pls update fast author i REALLY LOVE your STORY

  • @chickenwings722
    @chickenwings722 3 роки тому

    I am scrolling through the comments and people are talking about how sad it was but they laugh because of Jisoo's umbrella I am so curious about that umbrella that making them laugh I paused the video at 3
    ;47 so I am only 3 minutes into the video and I really want to see Jisoo's umbrella which is probably 30-40 minutes into the video

  • @chenyilee8452
    @chenyilee8452 4 роки тому +2

    What is the song name on 8:09??

    • @jeonkookie2782
      @jeonkookie2782  4 роки тому +1

      I will go to you just like tge first snow .. By kim shi x eun tak

    • @chenyilee8452
      @chenyilee8452 4 роки тому

      @@jeonkookie2782 Thank u Author😊btw i love your story

  • @reshelannbayron9148
    @reshelannbayron9148 4 роки тому

    ohmaygad author why does it hurt so much 😭😭 i feel so carried away on your story. i cant help but cry and cry 😭 your the best author all of your stories are so damn good. feel so relatable. why does they need to be get hurt??

  • @bernablao6535
    @bernablao6535 4 роки тому

    I hope someday i'll watch one of the stories you write not only in here but also on the cinema or tv!!!
    I'am a big fan of your's authornim!

  • @tahirsayyed1390
    @tahirsayyed1390 4 роки тому +2

    I feel like this time lisa is the one you who win the game and one Who control the hole game coz Manoban Never give up ❤

  • @frincheallydanielly3526
    @frincheallydanielly3526 4 роки тому

    Hhmmmm.... Excited for the next episodes, love it so much 😘 👍👍👍

  • @marygracegerero9483
    @marygracegerero9483 4 роки тому

    Nextt epp pleasee athournimmm

  • @alainebautista9791
    @alainebautista9791 4 роки тому

    Next episode😍😍😍😍

  • @russelnisnisan5781
    @russelnisnisan5781 4 роки тому

    Make it sad story again next plsssss

  • @ejayahmad9838
    @ejayahmad9838 4 роки тому

    Tq author 😔😔😔

  • @cakefevertv9104
    @cakefevertv9104 3 роки тому

    I was crying hard with your story author, but then i suddenly laughed with jisoo's umbrella story 😂

  • @dclown7312
    @dclown7312 4 роки тому

    The only update in yt that im excited to open😊😊

  • @slipperqueenbitch634
    @slipperqueenbitch634 4 роки тому +3

    Me: *saw 3 years later*.....why tf does it have to be that long in every single jenlisa story😭😭😭

  • @hanakekoa9908
    @hanakekoa9908 4 роки тому

    WAIT A MIN wat about Irene 🤔🤔🤔🤔

  • @lisalover3427
    @lisalover3427 4 роки тому +5

    Authornim you always make me cry with your story 😭 I can't handle it... Cant wait for next ep 😩

  • @leonacaindoc267
    @leonacaindoc267 4 роки тому

    Please next episode

  • @manilynhagus1116
    @manilynhagus1116 4 роки тому

    Wow,thnks author,what a great story,i love it keep it up,can't wait for next episode.stay safe..

  • @dayieaddelie4774
    @dayieaddelie4774 4 роки тому

    can't wait for next..be nice to them💙☺

  • @jeadadeloterio9877
    @jeadadeloterio9877 4 роки тому

    I can't wait the next chapter of. Thank u
    The best🥰🥰🥰🥰

  • @hananiah4781
    @hananiah4781 4 роки тому

    Urmmm...im crying hard part lisa funeral😭..suddenly remember my father...its so hurt me...its been 18 years and im still miss my father😭😢😣

  • @donnarosejalbuena2939
    @donnarosejalbuena2939 4 роки тому

    You're great author. I'm excited to the next episode. 👍

  • @jlskidnc9773
    @jlskidnc9773 4 роки тому

    Finally!!! This's the best authornim. My favorite ff ever ❤

  • @SAFLEGACY
    @SAFLEGACY 4 роки тому

    Im crying non stop... 😭😭😭 Really feel it... But suddenly im laugh because of jisooo... Lol umbrella 🤣🤣🤣 never fail make proud of this plot...

  • @bambaaa6412
    @bambaaa6412 4 роки тому

    Ahhh its really good author! Hope you will upload next ep soon. Take care! 🤠👍

  • @areyouhooman2639
    @areyouhooman2639 4 роки тому

    Thank you for uploading this ♥️

  • @areyouhooman2639
    @areyouhooman2639 4 роки тому

    Omg I've been waiting for this!!

  • @areyouhooman2639
    @areyouhooman2639 4 роки тому +6

    Authornim what took you so long to upload this? This is the most beautiful Jenlisa FF I've ever read on UA-cam.

    • @ITEEZ-
      @ITEEZ- 4 роки тому

      she has been very busy and had alot of work i understand her because it happens

    • @areyouhooman2639
      @areyouhooman2639 4 роки тому +1

      @@ITEEZ- I really can't wait for the next episode 😭😭😭 I keep reading the episode 12 and 13 over and over again cause that's the most beautiful and dramatic episodes in this ff. I hope the authornim can upload another episode this week.

    • @hanakekoa9908
      @hanakekoa9908 4 роки тому

      Lexy Is a good girl yas queen

  • @andreatababa7031
    @andreatababa7031 4 роки тому

    More update sana author thanks :)

  • @blacpinkinyourarea6062
    @blacpinkinyourarea6062 4 роки тому

    Nice story... I love it.. Super.

  • @haikalbayhaki2240
    @haikalbayhaki2240 4 роки тому

    You make me cry ... Cant wait your next eps authornim..

  • @emotion992
    @emotion992 4 роки тому

    Author next episode please.. cant wait.. Please let Lisa control the game till the end and there happy ending for Jenlisa..

  • @jackieloudelariarte6360
    @jackieloudelariarte6360 4 роки тому

    Yaaahhh you make me cry alot😭😭😭😭😭, but thank you for the update, and i can't wait for the next episode 😊😊😊😊

  • @daniellaporshin-xye8582
    @daniellaporshin-xye8582 4 роки тому

    Thanks unnie and shout out for you!!! And love you

  • @blinkphilsophie1687
    @blinkphilsophie1687 4 роки тому

    author ang galing mo. subrang interesting at nakaka iyak Ang story. Subrang ramdam ko lahat ng emotion. Thank you author. Hoping for your next upload. I can't wait sa next episode.

  • @gen_lunas4128
    @gen_lunas4128 4 роки тому

    The long wait is over. Thank you for the update. 😊

  • @kauinoej
    @kauinoej 3 роки тому

    awhile ago, I said to myself that im not gonna continue this story anymore because its so sad and it hurts me even though this is all fiction, I kept on forcing myself to stop watching though. Then I looked at all your thumbnails of your other episodes seeing Jenlisa finally together and working things out, it made me curious so much that I wanted to continue this. Here I am, continuing your stories.. Hope it has a good ending 😊 Stay safe and god bless.

  • @dummyoneeunwoo3949
    @dummyoneeunwoo3949 4 роки тому

    Waahhhh my favorite author

  • @oreo6373
    @oreo6373 4 роки тому

    Thank you so much author I can wait what ever happens heheh cause your story is so interisteng be safe author

  • @bp3007
    @bp3007 4 роки тому +1

    Super nice story! I dindt regret to wait!
    But author please this time.dont be too long hahaha cause the story ig really reallt great! Thankyou so much for this!
    Take care too author!💕

  • @jesa04
    @jesa04 4 роки тому +10

    make it sad as long as you want authornim 🙁but pls pls pls make it still a happy ending pls because our jenlisa hearts been really hurt already by the story line😔and next pls ASAP and still make it longer plss 🥺

  • @sakurasizuka241
    @sakurasizuka241 4 роки тому

    i cry so hard author....poor Jennie....she also through the hard time...hope jenlisa will be together after this please author

  • @juelkhan1091
    @juelkhan1091 4 роки тому

    Please do not Jan fall for V wean this happen I really sad you know.. And makit fast please anther
    Ff

  • @alainebautista9791
    @alainebautista9791 4 роки тому

    What 's all the title of song playlist?

  • @wenadulpinalustre5646
    @wenadulpinalustre5646 4 роки тому

    Author sana maging maayos na lahat ,at mag kita na uli sila

  • @ernierivamonte9244
    @ernierivamonte9244 4 роки тому

    Next ep.author pls, beautiful story❤

  • @kriziarespicio4147
    @kriziarespicio4147 4 роки тому

    the game will begin💓

  • @garridojoan4841
    @garridojoan4841 4 роки тому

    Oh my g!! Love yah!!authornim,, 😍😘😘finally lisa she's strong now.!!woah!! I'm so excited what happen next ep..thanks author. Next plzzzzz

  • @SRMY-oh7do
    @SRMY-oh7do 4 роки тому

    Omg, i am crying again, i feel pity to jenlisa now, author please, dont make it too hard for them, I wanna see how Love will find them a way for comeback together, keep healty author and enjoy live with love

  • @firasyafitri567
    @firasyafitri567 4 роки тому

    I hope they meet soon 😣 neext 💕😘

  • @dhang8labaya971
    @dhang8labaya971 4 роки тому

    Huhuhu 😭😭.pls next author.

  • @anelindira
    @anelindira 4 роки тому

    Finally your back!! And u never failed to make me cry so hard... so to see your update soon excited for your next episode......

  • @diannapinlac8461
    @diannapinlac8461 4 роки тому

    THANK YOU AUTHOR.

  • @ailenesalavaria1327
    @ailenesalavaria1327 4 роки тому

    wow. so great author .. can't take my eyes that made me cry this episode.. can't wait your next episode authornim. .keep it up .god bless 😍😍😘

  • @gladyslozada2839
    @gladyslozada2839 4 роки тому

    Uwioooo cant wait for the next episode when they will encounter each other hehehe 🤘😬

  • @lhengisidro742
    @lhengisidro742 4 роки тому

    Hopefully you will upload soon author thank you and take care

  • @ITEEZ-
    @ITEEZ- 4 роки тому +1

    so lisa almost blew her cover but thank god jisoo was there and when Lisa went away and jisoo was accompanying Jennie well sort of she always felt bad i guess she is gaining back her family feelings again hopefully jisoo can tell Jennie she loves her so they can be back to cousins and hopefully chaesoo can have their moments while jenlisa is separated and broken lol that would be so great and 3 years passed and Jennie hair grew and she looks beautiful if Lisa see her when she go back she is going to be amazed what if Lisa act like she doesn't know who Jennie is and Jennie say oh really so you dont know Lisa either well since you dont know Lisa either why dont you go to her grave and tell her that im so mad at her tell her i want to slap her so hard that her whole family gonna feel it and then Jennie grandpa slap her in front of Lisa and then Jennie says and tell Lisa that because of her death she is now never going to be happy because she broke her promise and left her that was my prediction but eventually even if Lisa has a plan Jennie and Lisa both gonna end up in the hospital because at the end of the day she didn't save Jennie so yes grandpa is going to find Lisa identity because i saw the teaser for reach for the stars before you even started writing and publishing oh and author a question for the next ff you do can you make Lisa and Jennie just have the same genitals of what they have in real life i love them just the way they are you know you dont need to change jenlisa or chaesoo genitals to a guy genital to make a girl release their liquid lol just my suggestion and question thank you so much for this ep your doing great and take your time and yesterday i claimed that you were going to publish a new ep well what a coincidence thank you again

    • @jeonkookie2782
      @jeonkookie2782  4 роки тому +1

      Wow :) i didn't know that someone will have the same idea as i am .. you're a spoiler haha :) your idea was slightly the same as mine and it will be on the next episode or in the next next episode :) i was surprise that you guess some of my thoughts and some scenes that will happen in my story :) i can tell that your imagination is broad too .. Some of your predictions are right .. I'm glad that a lot of my readers really sharing their predictions and ideas in my story and you're the one who made me surprise the most for having the same thought as i am .. :) well, let's wait and see what will happen next :) two thumbs up for that 😉

  • @jocelynalicaway9137
    @jocelynalicaway9137 4 роки тому

    thank you so much author you never failed to amazed me it's so hurt breaking then at the same time it's funny bec of the character of jiso hoping lisa will win the game and jennie gid bless always 😇😊✌ can't for the next

  • @aprilliu390
    @aprilliu390 4 роки тому

    I miss u so much.. N i've been waiting for you .. Gumawo yo sajangninm..

  • @widhiarsana7008
    @widhiarsana7008 4 роки тому

    😊🙏

  • @kheiannachica750
    @kheiannachica750 4 роки тому

    wahh author we miss you no worries we always waiting for you hehe just take care always next episode plss asap author godbess you

  • @Sandee6030
    @Sandee6030 4 роки тому

    Upload soon author please😁

  • @imruffiacbyd2509
    @imruffiacbyd2509 4 роки тому

    You really like me crying oppa don't you

  • @mr.kimtaetae1932
    @mr.kimtaetae1932 4 роки тому

    Lol hi authornim

  • @lenioktafia8271
    @lenioktafia8271 4 роки тому

    ❤️❤️❤️👍👍👍

  • @arlisangma
    @arlisangma 4 роки тому

    Wow im crying again. Update soon author hehehe 😉

  • @nathanielnalla8523
    @nathanielnalla8523 4 роки тому

    ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

  • @anjanetteaquino1452
    @anjanetteaquino1452 4 роки тому

    Nice Authorim at least jennie still loyal to lisa even after 3years she still didn’t give tae a chance on her. Please let lisa come back to korea in your next episode and meet jennie. I hope lisa will not include jennie on her revenge to her grandpa. I hope lisa’s mission and plan will be successful. But what happened to irene did she survive and just hiding? Please make your story a happy ending 😘❤️💋💕

  • @captainfairies9846
    @captainfairies9846 4 роки тому

    So let's play the game author-nim... kekekeke... I hope Lisa always win the game,, but Jennie will lost her memory bcuz of accident right...

  • @annakassandratalfaro5141
    @annakassandratalfaro5141 4 роки тому

    Can I have shout out author?