[read desc.] original stage 1 music (beta)

i know the video is a completely joke but here's some context:
I decided to quit making mus- wait no why did I say that? I didn't even planned to.
alright time to be serious.
I've been worked on this since last december, its still in beta since only the composition draft was done, the mixing and instrument choices are still going to be changed in final mix.
but I'm not sure of which part should be fixed/rewritten, and I don't really have much patience and motivation right now(until winter vacation I hope), so I decided it would be the best for ask my viewers to decide how can this track to be improved.
please leave your suggestions in the comment section to let me know where should I fix it, i would be appreciate if you do that.

[@mikeforte123]

Fuckin hell, this is just a beta?! It's amazing!

[@-Zaby-]

I always like putting a panned out synth (potentially with reverb) in the background that plays the basic chord structure to make the track sound more "full". That's just me though. And it's hard to say if it would really fit the track without hearing it first. Also the ending is a bit abrupt, but idk if you planned to loop the song from there. Just some ideas :)
But other than that, I really like the demo. Especially the section at 1:00

[@-Cryo-]

I really like this track a lot! Reminds me of F-Zero in many ways, actually!
Good work as always!

[@direktexe8436]

Why eschatos? Sounds like fzero