We Wrote Smosh Fanfiction

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  • Опубліковано 29 вер 2024
  • Yes, you read that correctly. We wrote fanfiction about each other and will now be acting it out! And yes, things will get very weird…
    This video was shot with a very limited crew. All cast & crew followed all CDC and California COVID-19 precautions and filming guidelines.
    Read our fanfics here: smo.sh/wattpad
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    CAST
    Ian Hecox: / ianhecox
    Courtney Miller: / co_mill
    Shayne Topp: / shaynetopp
    Damien Haas: / damienhaas
    Noah Grossman: / noahgrossman214
    Jacklyn Uweh: / jacklyn_uweh
    Kimmy Jimenez: / kimmydoesstuff
    Garrett Palm: / gpalm79
    CREW
    Director: Garrett Palm
    Vice President, Unscripted: Matt Raub
    Producer/Camera Op: Kevin Rygg
    Segment Producer: Garrett Palm
    Editor: Len Wilkes
    Production Manager: Garrett Palm
    Production Coordinator: Jacqi Jones
    Assistant Director: Garrett Palm
    Art Director: Cassie Vance
    Art Coordinator: Yasmeen Mughal
    Art Assistant: Alex Aguilar
    DP: Brennan Iketani
    Sound Mixer: Greg Jones
    Assistant Editor/DIT: Matt Duran
    PA: Andrew Harmon
    PA: Austin Barrett
    GFX: Winton Foulds
    Content Manager: Kiana Parker
    Stage Manager: David Hill
    Executive Assistant: Sammie Miller
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КОМЕНТАРІ • 3,2 тис.

  • @Bafael_Reyna
    @Bafael_Reyna 3 роки тому +9468

    You can see how proud Jackie is about her script... And so are we, Jackie

    • @Sharye2001
      @Sharye2001 3 роки тому +204

      This script definitely had me rolling 😂

    • @allisonyw
      @allisonyw 3 роки тому +81

      Absolute magic.

    • @AvaAmarena94
      @AvaAmarena94 3 роки тому +113

      Made me think that it wasn’t Jackie’s first time writing fanfiction, it was awesome😆👌🏽

    • @jackl.gansner6102
      @jackl.gansner6102 3 роки тому +8

      so are we

    • @goblinboi8385
      @goblinboi8385 3 роки тому +73

      i mean,,, if jackie wants to drop her AO3 user 👀👀

  • @sarahcollins402
    @sarahcollins402 3 роки тому +6045

    Jackie’s script is INCREDIBLE. Please let her write more.

    • @scootybooty6701
      @scootybooty6701 3 роки тому +161

      actually insanely well done

    • @thaesimir
      @thaesimir 3 роки тому +114

      No, really. It's SO. FREAKING. GOOD!

    • @leinaamatsuji-berry561
      @leinaamatsuji-berry561 3 роки тому +130

      She and Shayne wrote the Disney Channel Show video on the main channel and it’s so rock solid it’s nuts! Hope she can do more

    • @syra1541
      @syra1541 3 роки тому +3

      @@leinaamatsuji-berry561 frfr

    • @bam0its0nina
      @bam0its0nina 3 роки тому +62

      she went to film school! finally she's getting a chance to show off her writing chops

  • @ellabradley4219
    @ellabradley4219 3 роки тому +2156

    I love how Shayne and Damien made it so everybody is dating everyone but made each other the most extreme

    • @lis9691
      @lis9691 2 роки тому +250

      Totally get why. Imagine doing the slapping sounds and moisture bit with anyone other than your best friend 😂 I imagine it would be more awkward with someone else. It worked for them and it worked out for all the shaymien shippers out there lmao

    • @ellabradley4219
      @ellabradley4219 2 роки тому +38

      @@lis9691 literally, this is what I was thinking !!

  • @apaulo.
    @apaulo. 3 роки тому +5324

    “It didn’t hurt the baby , did it?” was the best shock ever.
    almost spit my water out. 😳😂

    • @castlegarden2999
      @castlegarden2999 3 роки тому +234

      I don't know what was funnier, the line itself or the way everyone looked so shocked 🤣

    • @aperson0356
      @aperson0356 3 роки тому +14

      I did lol

    • @rorzoi
      @rorzoi 3 роки тому +71

      i had to pause it i was laughing in shock for so long i was *seriously* not expecting it to go there

    • @emmerson423
      @emmerson423 2 роки тому +8

      I was smoking and I nearly choked

    • @kimberlywilliams98
      @kimberlywilliams98 Рік тому +16

      That what happens when ya don’t tag yer fanfic’s

  • @slashmacleod
    @slashmacleod 3 роки тому +883

    "The eyes of a husky with glaucoma".....Damien, you delightful man.

    • @esinger23
      @esinger23 3 роки тому +1

      Haii slash lol 😂

    • @slashmacleod
      @slashmacleod 3 роки тому +1

      @@esinger23 ohai der, hope you're doing well!

    • @esinger23
      @esinger23 3 роки тому

      @@slashmacleod I’m pretty good lol

    • @Sharye2001
      @Sharye2001 3 роки тому +2

      I died on that part I said “Glaucoma?!?!” 😂😂

  • @bluem0n0chrom3
    @bluem0n0chrom3 5 місяців тому +186

    the first fanfic is actually shayne and courtney trying to keep their relationship hidden and private until marriage 💀

    • @benowens6539
      @benowens6539 4 місяці тому +5

      I read this and was about to say that it aged really well, then I saw that it was only for my month prior to my reply

  • @TransGuyOnTheFly
    @TransGuyOnTheFly 3 роки тому +1766

    Shayne’s script literally screams his type of humor😂. Every script shows their personalities, I love it!

    • @anomallie
      @anomallie 3 роки тому +87

      I was thinking the same thing. It also got me thinking about how the fanfic writers’ each individual viewpoint of the other cast members’ characters are and how they went about incorporating that into their respective roles in each story. Shayne’s was so heavily ironic and covered many basic tropes and archetypes in an exaggerated way, Damien’s had a dark and gloomy overall setting with a flair for the melodramatic (which, to be fair, is typical for someone who watches a lot of anime), and Jackie’s was in a league of her own with a rainbow of a bunch of different flavours and styles, though it was most definitely *spicy* 🤌 .
      It was all great.

  • @lincolnluscombe8904
    @lincolnluscombe8904 3 роки тому +546

    “That does sound pretty sick......... Okay bet.” Describes this whole video

  • @devywevy2025
    @devywevy2025 3 роки тому +11875

    Shayne: I'm pretty sure all of us wrote very different types of fanfiction.
    Shayne's fanfiction: *We're all dating each other at the same time*
    Damien's fanfiction: *We're all dating each other at the same time*
    Jackie's fanfiction: *We're all dating each other at the same time*

    • @audrey2749
      @audrey2749 3 роки тому +909

      It’s like they’re trying to tell us something 😂

    • @blaszaczka
      @blaszaczka 3 роки тому +1057

      Also Jackie: We're All Preganant.

    • @muscle2500
      @muscle2500 2 роки тому +385

      We all have *secrets*

    • @GINSHOTGUN
      @GINSHOTGUN 2 роки тому +177

      This is foreshadowing

    • @TheartistArson
      @TheartistArson 2 роки тому +77

      I accidentally read this as he was saying that that was terrifying.

  • @jasonlieberman4606
    @jasonlieberman4606 3 роки тому +843

    Shayne's and Damien's were definitely hilarious, but Jackie's just went above and beyond

  • @jasminestiara
    @jasminestiara 3 роки тому +610

    Everything else was plausible except Shayne being 6' 7".

    • @shigekax
      @shigekax 3 роки тому +29

      Yeah he's easily 8'
      Forced perspective 😔

  • @roberthumphrey5119
    @roberthumphrey5119 3 роки тому +932

    Not gonna lie, Shane's fanfiction might be the funniest thing I've seen on this channel.

  • @SqweakySqwizard
    @SqweakySqwizard 3 роки тому +223

    “You a little baddie, you *my* baddie. Growing *our* baddie”
    I’M SCREAMING

  • @kaimochi_930
    @kaimochi_930 3 роки тому +681

    the fact they all end with everyone dating in a big poly commune

    • @pat6311
      @pat6311 3 роки тому +24

      That's gotta be a real fanfiction somewhere lol

    • @lostotter1956
      @lostotter1956 3 роки тому +7

      Goals lol

  • @lauragesch3939
    @lauragesch3939 3 роки тому +479

    Damien sticking to his 5'2" persona in Shane's script is just perfect! 😆😆😆

  • @graceschy8978
    @graceschy8978 3 роки тому +428

    just to let you know shayne's fake wattpad username is now a real account that joined an hour ago 💀

  • @maxmustsleep
    @maxmustsleep 3 роки тому +283

    "I'm tired"
    "I'm Noah"
    Is my new favorite quote

  • @havehope2013
    @havehope2013 5 місяців тому +36

    The wedding announcement makes Shane’s fan fic even funnier.

  • @Blerdbrain
    @Blerdbrain 3 роки тому +312

    The creature has become self aware

    • @SamuelDuplessis12
      @SamuelDuplessis12 3 роки тому +4

      That's one thing Cody Rhodes hasn't learned yet lol 🤦‍♂️

  • @Calcucorn
    @Calcucorn 3 роки тому +239

    Jackie’s story was incredible. I would watch that Lifetime movie.

    • @sarahwalters5025
      @sarahwalters5025 3 роки тому

      Incredibly uncomfortable, awkward, and inappropriate.

  • @jadedrg
    @jadedrg 3 роки тому +159

    "JB was right about peaches out in Georgia" Jackie's smile at her genius XD

  • @savannahwiththegreenest_eyes
    @savannahwiththegreenest_eyes 5 місяців тому +36

    6:40 rewatching this post marriage announcement is even more funny lol

  • @GuineaPigEveryday
    @GuineaPigEveryday 3 роки тому +107

    Jackie’s script is too hilarious. I couldn’t help laughing at Shayne’s lines about Jackie being ‘fat’ or the Damien-Kimmy relationship

  • @rpanther96
    @rpanther96 3 роки тому +509

    Jackie fully understood the assignment and took it to the extra level 🤣

  • @Jes684
    @Jes684 5 місяців тому +20

    6:05 In retrospect, Jackie's reaction is a gem 😂

  • @januarystrawberries
    @januarystrawberries Рік тому +49

    18:39 1st baby reveal
    20:15 you a little baddy
    25:34 "she carries the spawn of damian haas inside her"
    27:42 "the smosh boys are fertile af" 👏

  • @lifeisconfuzzilifying5373
    @lifeisconfuzzilifying5373 3 роки тому +1066

    I can't tell if the other Smosh members think Jackie went too far, but I'm just saying that this was a fucking masterpiece

    • @destinywilder4808
      @destinywilder4808 3 роки тому +301

      Honestly I don't think they think she took it too far. I think they just weren't expecting such a well written drama 😂

    • @ApostleO
      @ApostleO 10 місяців тому +45

      Hers felt the most like an actual fanfic. Shayne and Damien wrote theirs more like parodies.

    • @amandamartin8709
      @amandamartin8709 9 місяців тому +15

      It seemed like Damien was honestly super impressed

  • @beniscool
    @beniscool 3 роки тому +187

    Jackie’s story was legitimately some of the funniest writing I’ve seen in ages omfg that was fantastic

  • @Alyssaishunting
    @Alyssaishunting 3 роки тому +134

    Shayne including the "heights" of everyone in his fanfic is just the most hilarious thing ever

  • @eleahleng
    @eleahleng 3 роки тому +96

    NOT JACKIE CALLING ALL OF US OUT ABOUT SHIPPING 😂😂

  • @95021105
    @95021105 3 роки тому +173

    I love how comfortable Shayne and Damien are being fantasy boyfriends 😆

    • @IceMetalPunk
      @IceMetalPunk 3 роки тому +9

      Riiiggghhhhttt.... "fantasy".... 😂

    • @theonlybitsy
      @theonlybitsy 3 роки тому +4

      Mmmh yes, fantasy

    • @95021105
      @95021105 3 роки тому

      Yall are ridiculous 😆

  • @helenhill9983
    @helenhill9983 5 місяців тому +17

    Watching this after Shayne and Courtney revealed their marriage is trippy

  • @saskiatattam2936
    @saskiatattam2936 3 роки тому +561

    Shayne 100% could have used “reading the bible” instead of mining bitcoin

    • @janaloff
      @janaloff 2 роки тому +9

      that would have been GREAT OMG

  • @oliviarupe9909
    @oliviarupe9909 3 роки тому +150

    The fact that both Shayne and Damien put them dating in their scripts 💀

  • @gokulnair
    @gokulnair 3 роки тому +123

    "Shayne, 5'10", walks out holding a red phone."

  • @rickelvi
    @rickelvi 2 роки тому +147

    While I loved them all, Jackie's is the only one that reads like an actual fanfic. Shayne's and Damian's are more like traditional screenplays. I wouldn't be surprised to learn Jackie has written fanfic before.

    • @k.mswain2228
      @k.mswain2228 2 роки тому +17

      Shayne's and Damien's are still fanfics, it's just that they formatted it that way cause they know they're going to act it out

  • @mr_barreraa
    @mr_barreraa 3 роки тому +70

    7:25 that was the straightest gay conversation that I've ever seen!
    👏🏽 bravo 👏🏽

  • @livecement6928
    @livecement6928 3 роки тому +61

    "Ian got loud on that last word..." sounded SO perfectly fanfiction-y. I had to pause the video to laugh about it. And Jackie's fic was simply a masterpiece.

  • @tomaszskowronski1406
    @tomaszskowronski1406 3 роки тому +72

    Goddamn Jackie, that went above and beyond. There's no reason why this should be that good

  • @joetp1312
    @joetp1312 3 роки тому +335

    Is Shayne's script just the whole cast being each other's side pieces? 😂

  • @emmalina5284
    @emmalina5284 3 роки тому +284

    as someone who is a seasoned fanfic reader,,,, jackie's is 100% the best

  • @cateyoung5705
    @cateyoung5705 3 роки тому +46

    Jackie making Damien & Shayne uncomfortable has become one of my favorite parts of this channel 😂😂😂

  • @sanniichi_
    @sanniichi_ 3 роки тому +71

    The camera zooming in on Kimmy fangirling while the scenes play out gives me heaps of serotonin

  • @Write_0ff
    @Write_0ff 6 місяців тому +19

    we can be each others skid marks 🥹🥹🥹

    • @Write_0ff
      @Write_0ff 6 місяців тому +3

      yes commenting this after the announcement

  • @vinad5948
    @vinad5948 3 роки тому +59

    27:19 I’ve already seen this video three times yet every time Noah says “nourtney” I still ugly laugh for some reason

  • @rmdcade1717
    @rmdcade1717 3 роки тому +71

    "INTERIOR! Jackie's bedroom. Night." I want to be this verison of Damien all the time

    • @DezerayHope
      @DezerayHope 3 роки тому

      Easy. Find a main character and start following them around.

  • @pernoninnoobs3872
    @pernoninnoobs3872 3 роки тому +27

    I think we learned from all of these scripts that the obvious shipping choice is to ship all of smosh with each other.

  • @cynthia4670
    @cynthia4670 3 роки тому +94

    "Friends and nothing more" 😃 Somehow knows where this is going.

  • @abbybaudhuin7859
    @abbybaudhuin7859 4 місяці тому +12

    Ok Shayne, for sure, definitely not about to be more than friends…

  • @MrJPG7
    @MrJPG7 3 роки тому +122

    I think Noah was the best actor in this video. All because he said “I drive a Mazda”

  • @rorror651
    @rorror651 3 роки тому +49

    it’s actually published in wattpad i-☠️☠️

  • @toniivanova9360
    @toniivanova9360 2 роки тому +28

    Wow Jackie did great job. That story has potential. I'd like to see it in real acting skit

  • @alexzzz3149
    @alexzzz3149 3 роки тому +27

    I literally gave them a standing ovation at the end of the video, the scripts and acting are just immaculate, especially Jackie's script was SO GOOD

  • @Jubbano
    @Jubbano 3 роки тому +55

    Jackie really wrote the story well. Suspicious…. *SUSPICIOUS…* Jackie you got something to tell us? 😏✨

  • @nyalpiers7203
    @nyalpiers7203 3 роки тому +53

    “I’m tired”
    “I’m Noah”
    Had me on the floor 🤣

  • @Tumnis_The_4th
    @Tumnis_The_4th Місяць тому +3

    27:44 The moment the game was changed. Single handedly the sole line, for Jackies Oscar as a script writer. ❤🎉

  • @malachaihalstead
    @malachaihalstead 3 роки тому +42

    “i’m tired”
    “i’m noah”
    i’m dead

  • @forkingsandkeys
    @forkingsandkeys 3 роки тому +26

    Kimmy cheering for Jackie during Shayne's skit is so wholesome.

  • @not_sienn4
    @not_sienn4 Рік тому +9

    shayne giving Jackie that pep talk and then cutting her off later is actually the funniest thing ever 😭

  • @apaulo.
    @apaulo. 3 роки тому +27

    jackie’s fanfic is like a whole soap opera show with so much rollercoaster
    and I’m here for it. pls do more.

  • @maddie21070
    @maddie21070 3 роки тому +31

    “Let’s all wear long sleeves and not tell courtney”

  • @ejoshcoron
    @ejoshcoron 3 роки тому +18

    It's adorable watching Jackie reacting to her play

  • @hayden_fz
    @hayden_fz 3 роки тому +46

    Kimmy's facial expressions are incredible

  • @kimmorris9664
    @kimmorris9664 7 місяців тому +3

    ‘Secrets’ sounds like a Shakespeare play, turn 1930’s play skit, that then became a rendition remade by some teenagers in the early 2000’s.

  • @spotonstupid
    @spotonstupid 2 роки тому +21

    These were incredible. Kimmy as audience member reacting to the drama was fucking hilarious.

  • @loafyspark4234
    @loafyspark4234 3 роки тому +46

    omg jackie's fanfiction im laughing hysterically 😂😂😂

  • @isabelmays665
    @isabelmays665 3 роки тому +27

    I love how Shayne acted like he was trying to deny the shartney fans as lovers in his fic, but in the end got them together. I died at their scenes together, so funny.

  • @abucket3222
    @abucket3222 3 роки тому +27

    No one ganna talk about how Shane roasted Noah "IM GANNA GO DIE MY HAIR USING A BOWL OF LUCKY CHARMS AS INSPIRATION"😂

  • @MYSTERIOMUSIK
    @MYSTERIOMUSIK 5 місяців тому +14

    THIS FIRST ONE IS BAT SHIT KNOWING WHAT HAPPENED MONDAY

  • @lindsaysix514
    @lindsaysix514 3 роки тому +37

    Okay they were all great, but Jackie’s was on another level 🤣

  • @ysabelmercado3739
    @ysabelmercado3739 3 роки тому +55

    “You a little baddy. You my baddy.” IM DEAD

    • @jadedrg
      @jadedrg 3 роки тому +2

      I WAS CRYINGGGG

  • @e.d.5766
    @e.d.5766 3 роки тому +25

    "The Smosh boys are fertile as shit" is a great line.

  • @laurellove03
    @laurellove03 Рік тому +7

    This was amazing. Please make another one!! It’s hilarious how you accidentally all had the same theme, maybe keep that going in the future! Ex. Mystery, decades theme etc. Love you guys! ❤❤

  • @_c_analompe1650
    @_c_analompe1650 3 роки тому +53

    Oh boy, all the fanfic writers are sweating
    Rn

  • @alyssawagner3109
    @alyssawagner3109 Рік тому +3499

    It's iconic that Shayne and Damien's "romances" are the most intense in their own stories bc they both knew the other would be the most comfortable with it. We love best friends

    • @gigibeal
      @gigibeal Рік тому +229

      *just* best friends.

    • @fantasygamer1769
      @fantasygamer1769 11 місяців тому +214

      @@gigibealand nothing more

    • @the_richcat
      @the_richcat 11 місяців тому +199

      @@fantasygamer1769 Best friends who kiss a little

    • @lose_umi1811
      @lose_umi1811 11 місяців тому +182

      @@the_richcat Friends who take off each other's clothes and just oil each other up

    • @grace_wh
      @grace_wh 10 місяців тому +2

      YEAH FRIENDS WHO JUST WRESTLE AROUND WITH NOTHING ON@@lose_umi1811

  • @sennacookie5043
    @sennacookie5043 3 роки тому +7882

    These fan fictions are like a car crash: I don’t want to look, but I can’t look away

  • @SabC646
    @SabC646 5 місяців тому +984

    So now that we know Shayne and Courtney are married, we can all agree that Shayne’s bitcoin thing was the ultimate inside joke for the cast and crew

    • @hernameispekka_Rebecca
      @hernameispekka_Rebecca 5 місяців тому +76

      Everyones reactions are spectacular in hindsight!

    • @nathanieldickens2509
      @nathanieldickens2509 4 місяці тому +16

      I searched just for this! You’re right

    • @alina1216
      @alina1216 2 місяці тому +16

      It makes sense why their delivery is always so “In sync” it’s because THEY HAVE BEEN TOGETHER AND I HONESTLY DIDNT KNOW. I’m a huge fan, been a huge fan since before Anthony left and I still never suspected a thing!!

  • @puppetqueen26
    @puppetqueen26 3 роки тому +6453

    Jackie’s was hands down the funniest, she did not hold back. Something tells me this isn’t the first time she’s written fanfiction…

  • @bluebuffy9751
    @bluebuffy9751 3 роки тому +4505

    This should’ve been titled, “Everyone hooking up for 34 minutes straight”

  • @2kjae789
    @2kjae789 3 роки тому +2916

    “Im tired”
    “Im Noah”
    Why tf was that so funny

    • @neilcognito
      @neilcognito 3 роки тому +37

      I kid you not,
      I laughed way to long at that.

    • @lauragesch3939
      @lauragesch3939 3 роки тому +1

      @@neilcognito same here!! 😆😆😆

    • @vicboi87
      @vicboi87 3 роки тому +2

      Delivery

    • @rarapas
      @rarapas 2 роки тому +4

      That delivery was EPIC! I had to pause the video to laugh it out hahahahah!!!!!!!

  • @jessiahmarielle
    @jessiahmarielle 3 роки тому +3718

    "and i cannot breathe without my lungs" LITERALLY JACKIE WRITE A BOOK THIS IS TOO GOOODDD 😭😭😭

  • @kimmychanga090
    @kimmychanga090 3 роки тому +6399

    We need merch that says “the smosh boys are fertile as shit” with a high five on it. Make it happen. Lol.

    • @NoThankUBeQuiet
      @NoThankUBeQuiet 3 роки тому +39

      Shit isn't all that fertile

    • @seanlegumes8580
      @seanlegumes8580 3 роки тому +236

      @@NoThankUBeQuiet But it is used as fertiliser. So in some ways it is fertile

    • @_officialwatson
      @_officialwatson 3 роки тому +8

      YES

    • @unknown4957
      @unknown4957 3 роки тому +48

      @@NoThankUBeQuiet the “as shit” is just a modifier of fertile. It’s just there to add, it’s like adding so to a sentence: I’m so tired. The so is modifying tired, and that’s essentially what “as shit” is doing to fertile.

    • @GoblinQueen.
      @GoblinQueen. 3 роки тому +7

      Would buy!😭😂

  • @danielcabrera8671
    @danielcabrera8671 3 роки тому +7659

    "You a little baddy, you my baddy, growing our baddy" That will never not be funny

    • @gobby_kiwi
      @gobby_kiwi 3 роки тому +111

      Raw

    • @joezr952
      @joezr952 3 роки тому +39

      Damn I came down here to comment that and it’s the first comment 🤣

    • @Sampo788
      @Sampo788 3 роки тому +24

      20:13

    • @alixx3622
      @alixx3622 3 роки тому +59

      Smosh needs to make this a shirt and a pair of maternity (pregnant lady ) pants and a baby onesie that says, "I'm momma's baddy" and "im daddies baddy"

    • @maimaibacay
      @maimaibacay Рік тому +5

      It’s such a funny line 😭😭

  • @noodle4pancakes
    @noodle4pancakes 3 роки тому +4191

    Okay, but not only way Jackie's just the most amazing thing ever, but she was so considerate... Like... All of the very potentially too awkward bits she put herself in it first. First one we knew was preggers, the "spawn" joke, the "fat" joke, she took the brunt of everything so the flow never broke. Just amazing.

    • @wayababaya
      @wayababaya Рік тому +61

      yeah i noticed too!

    • @cassiesayshi8174
      @cassiesayshi8174 Рік тому +12

      What was the preggers and spawn joke again

    • @markangeloomayon1230
      @markangeloomayon1230 Рік тому +44

      ​@@cassiesayshi8174
      18:35 - Her character was the first one to be revealed as pregnant.
      25:35 - The one with "carrying the spawn of Damian Haas".

  • @tramethozeine
    @tramethozeine 3 роки тому +4685

    The best joke is absolutely "I'm tired" "I'm noah" congrats Jackie. I rewound that 5 times

    • @Travis7060312
      @Travis7060312 3 роки тому +60

      "rewound"hello fellow old.

    • @tramethozeine
      @tramethozeine 3 роки тому +43

      @@Travis7060312 I'm only 84 please stop

    • @mrdewarion
      @mrdewarion 3 роки тому +92

      Let's also clarify that it's at least 50% Noah's perfect delivery what makes it so hilarious.

    • @fatmambodje2944
      @fatmambodje2944 3 роки тому +2

      Go you go

    • @angelaoriel5912
      @angelaoriel5912 3 роки тому +4

      @@mrdewarion YES

  • @Samantha-yo1ht
    @Samantha-yo1ht 3 роки тому +4100

    I think that they should do this again but they don’t know who wrote the script and they have to figure out who wrote it based off of clues in it. I feel like they would have a lot of fun with it and I would have fun watching it. 🤠
    Edit: thank you for the likes!!! 🙏

  • @cheyennemarie7075
    @cheyennemarie7075 3 роки тому +4374

    Not Jackie writing Shayne laughing at his own jokes into the script 😂😂

    • @saisrivarshamalladi6138
      @saisrivarshamalladi6138 3 роки тому +111

      Honestly she's brilliant😂😂

    • @aniyilator
      @aniyilator 3 роки тому +53

      And that floppy hair line too, I wheezed 😆

    • @anitacsavajda6461
      @anitacsavajda6461 2 роки тому +21

      And the screaming all the time 😂 She really threw him under the bus 😂😂

  • @M3xicanAmerican1
    @M3xicanAmerican1 3 роки тому +2927

    Shayne and Damien did a great job with their scripts and it was clear that they were going for more of a “parody” fan fiction that danced around the whole shipping thing and had more of comedic approach overall. But Jackie’s was just on another level. Fantastic Writing. She totally went all in on trying to capture the true spirit of a fanfic author. And with the help of everyone’s acting it made for a very entertaining display! Really great vid overall, hope they do more of these!

    • @Chris-io2cs
      @Chris-io2cs 3 роки тому +58

      Well said, I totally agree. Jackie really went above and beyond. Even just the little things she put in like "I'm noah" were hilarious.

    • @creekstar7
      @creekstar7 3 роки тому +37

      While we’re comparing Jackie’s to Shayne and Damian’s… I also appreciate that in Jackie’s instead of a buildup to the cast hooking up, THEY ALREADY DID and her story was more about the aftermath. XD

    • @madill930
      @madill930 3 роки тому +6

      Dude she been slappin I’m with ya

    • @iliilianaana
      @iliilianaana 3 роки тому +15

      she really has no choice but to drop her ao3 username

  • @leila9050
    @leila9050 3 роки тому +1266

    I liked every story but Jackie’s was a masterpiece. The twists and turns, and nonstop hilarious jokes was great. Shayne breaking the fourth wall? “Growing our baddie”? Jackie is a genius.

  • @thisisANGERACHEN
    @thisisANGERACHEN 3 роки тому +4519

    Jacky's fanfic was straight up a Mexican telenovela

    • @heyhey9103
      @heyhey9103 3 роки тому +13

      HSHSHHAHAHAHAHAAHHAHAA

    • @PetrichorPal
      @PetrichorPal 3 роки тому +8

      @@heyhey9103 HSHSHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHHHHAAA

    • @ZeadBelmont
      @ZeadBelmont 3 роки тому +45

      It was a "!Maldita Lisiada¡" away from being one

    • @milkyyyyway
      @milkyyyyway 3 роки тому +10

      I love this comment so much lmao 💀

    • @asees5866
      @asees5866 3 роки тому +19

      True! That baby thing had me slapping my own face twice.

  • @lindsaybullock7611
    @lindsaybullock7611 3 роки тому +2160

    Shayne just screaming "SEEEEXXX" is the scariest thing he has ever done😂😂😭😭

    • @theoutsiderjess1869
      @theoutsiderjess1869 3 роки тому +104

      Slapping moisture 😂

    • @tiffanyerskine916
      @tiffanyerskine916 3 роки тому +28

      I kinda wonder of parts of that scene were just the two of them.playing off of each other, or if it was all written in. It was a little too perfect, lol.

    • @nicoe2010
      @nicoe2010 2 роки тому +10

      That bit makes me giggle my head off every time I see that scene hahahhhahahahahaa

  • @corpseofana5272
    @corpseofana5272 3 роки тому +3072

    "Gets pregnant by a coworker noone ever ships me with" Lmaooo

    • @Demisearts
      @Demisearts 3 роки тому +28

      Time to ship i guess😂😂

    • @BouncingTribbles
      @BouncingTribbles 3 роки тому +6

      How does she know? Hmmmmm....

    • @alainasemler1505
      @alainasemler1505 3 роки тому +74

      @@BouncingTribbles Jackie wrote the script as a fan, not a cast member

    • @alainasemler1505
      @alainasemler1505 3 роки тому

      @@Demisearts nahhh

    • @BouncingTribbles
      @BouncingTribbles 3 роки тому +13

      @@alainasemler1505 lol, obviously. My point was she's been reading all the fanfics... a lot

  • @imzarxki
    @imzarxki 3 роки тому +2387

    Just Jackie intensely reading the script while the others acted out the script, she's so proud.

  • @bethanycampione3558
    @bethanycampione3558 2 роки тому +671

    Did anyone else get WAY too into Jackie's story? That literally could've come straight out of a soap opera!

  • @outofthegrey1
    @outofthegrey1 3 роки тому +737

    Things I learned from this:
    1. Never have a secret affair with someone whose name sounds like "no one" (Noah)
    2. If you want to keep your pregnancy a secret, carry tampons with you in case a friend in the ladies room needs one.
    3. Speaking in a southern accent can wake someone out of a coma.

  • @belensanchezs5526
    @belensanchezs5526 3 роки тому +721

    “No! I’m the dingus! For getting pregnant by the coworker no one ever ships me with!” I SCREAMED

  • @daytimedeity9643
    @daytimedeity9643 3 роки тому +5694

    "Shayne and Damien who are actually ACTUAL boyfriends" lolol
    Also, Jackie's went from sweet Hallmark movie to dramatic Lifetime film REAL fast

    • @garytheman7163
      @garytheman7163 3 роки тому +4

      ?

    • @daytimedeity9643
      @daytimedeity9643 3 роки тому +33

      guys that first part was literally me just quoting the video itself (hence the quotation marks)
      i don't think they're actual boyfriends. that's just what one of the scripts said in the video......

    • @Jexpler
      @Jexpler 2 роки тому +16

      But then it turns out that they're all dating each other so.....

    • @Vextri51
      @Vextri51 Рік тому +5

      FACTS

  • @Marie.Jager.
    @Marie.Jager. 3 роки тому +4893

    “You remember what happened to Anthony, dont you?!” EVERYONES EYES WHEN IAN READ THAT OMG STAHP-

    • @Rawt173
      @Rawt173 3 роки тому +143

      I guess we'll just never know what happened after they broke up, will we....

    • @Travis7060312
      @Travis7060312 3 роки тому +25

      im gonna be honest, i didnt really like anthony and I like smosh more now that he's gone.

    • @danielpleitez-martinez7638
      @danielpleitez-martinez7638 3 роки тому +8

      Yea he chose to leave... lol

    • @theoriginalmeowcat
      @theoriginalmeowcat 3 роки тому +5

      @@Travis7060312 honestly Anthony seems so overrated

    • @amyccc56
      @amyccc56 3 роки тому +81

      @@theoriginalmeowcat overrated? he literally created smosh

  • @elizabethwallace8714
    @elizabethwallace8714 3 роки тому +540

    Okay, I agree with everyone that Jackie's script killed but can we talk about the fact that Noah *consistently* brings an A+ acting game to these?

  • @ramefy5551
    @ramefy5551 3 роки тому +5659

    Courtney: "You think I'm a little baddy"
    Noah: ✨Rawr✨

    • @clye7788
      @clye7788 3 роки тому +10

      was it roar or we are lol

    • @ramefy5551
      @ramefy5551 3 роки тому +23

      @@clye7788 pretty sure it was Roar 😂

    • @clye7788
      @clye7788 3 роки тому +9

      @@ramefy5551 cuz the subtitle says we are haha

    • @ramefy5551
      @ramefy5551 3 роки тому +20

      @@clye7788 the subtitle is wrong, you can even see it if you read his lips 😅 20:25

    • @jeenako
      @jeenako 3 роки тому +54

      it should be ✨rawr✨