Well I did enjoy the story it flowed very well. Listening was great. A good story told without cussing and sex. Really good stories like this can be told. Thank you 😊
What a wonderful narrative. What a learning curve for the janitor and the owner’s son. The rich man’s son came to realisation that his father had no luxuries in his life when growing up hence decided to change his ways. The ex janitor now a Personnel Manager was given a chance in her lifetime to better her position. The father in all his wisdom saw a wife material in the new PM as both the rich man’s son n the young lady had grown close. Am glad the rich man’s son dropped his old buddies who were users as the ex janitor pointed out to him. She had taught him how to become a better form of his self and embrace the basic necessities of life. How heartwarming n humbling. God Bless them all. Indeed it’s was a learning curve for all involved. So glad.
Jacob’s change of heart is the real twist here! Who would’ve thought he’d go from being a jerk to genuinely trying to make things right? Props to Fiona for holding her ground!
A beautiful and warming story. Having the same background as her l could understand her problems, and how difficultitwas to stand up to powerfulpeople. I loved the happy ending.😊❤🎉
I enjoyed the story very much. Loved the ending. With a little imagination...I can finish what happened afterthe story ended. One of the best stories I have heard so far. 😊
Wow! I truly love d story very commendable! I like so much how d author holds d. reader wd inspirations and thrill wd so much enjoyment in every aspects of d story for all d lead characters! It has a very nice ending as well!Kodus to d author keep it up please! Tnx so much ur story is well appreciated!
I'm glad this story resonated with you! Sometimes, a story touches us in ways we don’t expect, reminding us of the beauty of kindness and humanity. Here’s to more heartwarming tales that lift our spirits and restore our faith in the goodness around us
Beautiful and unique story, at my age I usually can predict the ending from the third of the story but I missed this beautiful ending although I know from the beginning that Fiona and Jacob will be in love with each other..
This was an excellent story. I must be going through some rough memories of my ex because I instantly got angry that he was manipulating her and forcing her to submit to his wishes just to keep her job. These kinds of stories normalize the abuse.
(16:58) Fiona, angry and humiliated, confronts Jacob during the bet, refusing to escort him to the wedding. But after an internal struggle, realizing her precarious position, she hesitantly agrees, taking the money he offers, which sets the stage for further conflict and transformation.
I enjoy many of the stories... But I wish the robotic narrator did a better job of pronouncing words and the 'inflections'... and some of the pictures/images make no sense to the storyline...
Ah ? What happened did you not have backing for the movie ? You resorted to tell a story ? Wow ! How did you get in Movie time? Please don’t waste my time again! Call it story time !
Not everyone is a great speller or expert in English! This was most likely a talk to text? But I digress…. It was however a very wonderful story! No repeats or other things that are in most stores posted online! Why not sit or lie back and just listen to it and enjoy it? This is after all a great find! I to notice a lot of mistakes but if it’s not repetitive several times I try to find some joy in the time spent listening to the story… it sure beats trying to see with my double vision from the stroke just over a year ago…. That’s my 2 minute long speech! To each their own! My time here is short, I think? Never thought I would be here long enough to see my son’s graduation much less live longer than my youngest son.. Enjoy your life while’s there is time! You blink and ten or even 30 years have passed before you know it! I thought I would never see 40, much less 50… in a few years I guess I may see 60 but I am not holding my breath for now as I lie here typing this comment I am currently on oxygen with a tube in my nose.
I can build your house or your hi rise office building. Or a multi story dam project. I went to one of the two best vocational schools in America.my spelling skill is not the best but, while you are great at spelling but without people like me you and your computer would be out in the rain construction workers are the back bone of our economy. Very few occupations can carry out their daily work without US!!
Well I did enjoy the story it flowed very well. Listening was great. A good story told without cussing and sex. Really good stories like this can be told. Thank you 😊
What a wonderful narrative.
What a learning curve for the janitor and the owner’s son.
The rich man’s son came to realisation that his father had no luxuries in his life when growing up hence decided to change his ways.
The ex janitor now a Personnel Manager was given a chance in her lifetime to better her position.
The father in all his wisdom saw a wife material in the new PM as both the rich man’s son n the young lady had grown close.
Am glad the rich man’s son dropped his old buddies who were users as the ex janitor pointed out to him.
She had taught him how to become a better form of his self and embrace the basic necessities of life.
How heartwarming n humbling. God Bless them all. Indeed it’s was a learning curve for all involved.
So glad.
❤ One of the best I have read on UA-cam. It lifted my heart, just what I needed. Thank you so much. 🌻🌞🌿
Young people start out as humble as a job! New beginnings, but she still understood what the guys who act stupid
Very cute story in the end. Thanks for sharing!
This story was truly outstanding, perhaps my favorite one yet.
This was such a great story 🎉😂I really enjoyed it.😁
What a good story keep the good work up .
The story as a whole is excellent with tidbits of humour. Thanks for sharing your powerful story. 😊😊😊❤❤❤
Wow, that’s a setup for some serious drama! Can’t wait to see how this twist plays out!
Jacob’s change of heart is the real twist here! Who would’ve thought he’d go from being a jerk to genuinely trying to make things right? Props to Fiona for holding her ground!
A beautiful and warming story. Having the same background as her l could understand her problems, and how difficultitwas to stand up to powerfulpeople.
I loved the happy ending.😊❤🎉
beautiful
i wanted to hear more, a good narrator
as the saying goes choose your friends wisely
Amazing story enjoyed & laughed till the end ❤ lovely
I enjoyed the story very much. Loved the ending. With a little imagination...I can finish what happened afterthe story ended. One of the best stories I have heard so far. 😊
What a lovely story. Enjoyed immensely. Please more in this genre❤😂🎉
Wow! I truly love d story very commendable! I like so much how d author holds d. reader wd inspirations and thrill wd so much enjoyment in every aspects of d story for all d lead characters! It has a very nice ending as well!Kodus to d author keep it up please! Tnx so much ur story is well appreciated!
This is so pointed. Everyone grew up anf accepted their responsibility. Well done❤
This is a great story. I couldn’t even put it on pause.
Enjoyed this story very much‼️
This was indeed an excellent story probably my favorite thus far.
❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😅
Good, Ty🌺
I agree Wholeheartedly ❤
Really good story, ending on a positive note too that I loved ❤
I'm glad this story resonated with you! Sometimes, a story touches us in ways we don’t expect, reminding us of the beauty of kindness and humanity. Here’s to more heartwarming tales that lift our spirits and restore our faith in the goodness around us
The best story so far.
I really appreciated this experience presented!
I would have enjoyed a longer story 😊.
I want the marriage and all the next following 😊
Good story for a change.😂😂😂
This story reminds me of the film "Pretty Woman" 😉.
I like the story. 😊👍
More like Maid in Manhattan
this movie is nothing related to Pretty Woman...... sure dont
know how you arrived at that idea.
No repeats... enjoyable
I love how Martha tells her to hold on to her own truth.
It's aweful when people use truth and twist them into sinister lies.
Great story but you should have given them a lavish wedding.
Very amusing story ending. I enjoyed reading it.
Awesome story! ❤❤❤
Lovely story. Great.
Romantic story indeed, fit to be converted to a motion picture.
Cracking story, total BS but I loved it (but then I'm a sucker for a happy ending).
Maybe you should watch other stories who has a beautiful voice! It's called true and faithful
A beautiful heartwarming story❤
I love this story I don't want it to end.
Beautiful and unique story, at my age I usually can predict the ending from the third of the story but I missed this beautiful ending although I know from the beginning that Fiona and Jacob will be in love with each other..
Story finished to soon didn't expect it to end that soon
Interesting story guess everybody grew to grow to their next learning experience? Peace to All ✌❤😂😊
Wonderful narrative
I enjoyed this one, thanks
Nice story
9:30 That bet between Jacob and his friends is so cruel! Fiona deserves way better than to be a part of their twisted games.
That was awesome.
This was an excellent story. I must be going through some rough memories of my ex because I instantly got angry that he was manipulating her and forcing her to submit to his wishes just to keep her job. These kinds of stories normalize the abuse.
True! But her time will come! Think about that
Great Story.
(16:58) Fiona, angry and humiliated, confronts Jacob during the bet, refusing to escort him to the wedding. But after an internal struggle, realizing her precarious position, she hesitantly agrees, taking the money he offers, which sets the stage for further conflict and transformation.
tense silence not 10
Good story 😊😊
Wow! Amazing story...from rags to riches 58:19
Very challenging, lifelike storyline
GAWD AWFUL red dress! I liked the story tho.
😂😂😂
the ladder of Jacob
She should have gone and tell his dad.
I like it though some spelling are incorrect. Good story though.😊
God help our children - learning to speak and spell and understand English from AI. The story is OK, but the language skills are atrocious.
This story has pissed me off. The narration needs to be corrected for spelling errors. I can't even finish this story. :(
bet not bit
This story needs corrective spelling
Cool story
Comments need to be written by someone who can spell!😢
Good comment
I enjoy many of the stories...
But I wish the robotic narrator did a better job of pronouncing words and the 'inflections'... and some of the pictures/images make no sense to the storyline...
Ah ? What happened did you not have backing for the movie ? You resorted to tell a story ? Wow ! How did you get in Movie time? Please don’t waste my time again! Call it story time !
Good story but they need to learn how to spell.
JEBUS CRISP LEARN TO SPELL!!!
😅
Not everyone is a great speller or expert in English! This was most likely a talk to text? But I digress….
It was however a very wonderful story! No repeats or other things that are in most stores posted online!
Why not sit or lie back and just listen to it and enjoy it? This is after all a great find!
I to notice a lot of mistakes but if it’s not repetitive several times I try to find some joy in the time spent listening to the story… it sure beats trying to see with my double vision from the stroke just over a year ago…. That’s my 2 minute long speech!
To each their own! My time here is short, I think? Never thought I would be here long enough to see my son’s graduation much less live longer than my youngest son..
Enjoy your life while’s there is time! You blink and ten or even 30 years have passed before you know it! I thought I would never see 40, much less 50… in a few years I guess I may see 60 but I am not holding my breath for now as I lie here typing this comment I am currently on oxygen with a tube in my nose.
BE MINDFUL OF UR SPELLING & COMPREHENSION ACTVELY LISTEN " ITS MENTOR " NOT (MINTER) WAT S DS ?
I can build your house or your hi rise office building. Or a multi story dam project. I went to one of the two best vocational schools in America.my spelling skill is not the best but, while you are great at spelling but without people like me you and your computer would be out in the rain construction workers are the back bone of our economy. Very few occupations can carry out their daily work without US!!