I wish the song had an actual bridge for how long it is. The bridge out is in the wrong place more like a BREAK.. otherwise this is 🔥🔥 structurally im looking for more classic when it come to blues type like into, v1, (maybe pre) not needed, hook, v2, hook, BRIDGE, hook, outro.. or even after the bridge can be a completely different shift adding ump to the chorus for build up closing out
I feel like the first half of the hook is very "forcing" in terms of vocals. I dont feel like there is really any other option than to follow along with the guitar. Its sounds fantastic tho.
@CinoBiz absolutely. I think it flows very well. And it could certainly be due to my lack of ability that I feel so constrained. I just wanted to pass along my take because I love your work and hope to continue to write to it. Keep it up. I really like the teddy swims vibes
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Thank you jay ! It remembers me also Janis Joplin
Definitely writing to this master piece !
Do IT!!!!
Got to have a "doze" of Teddy Swims every day !😄🤩Love the voice and songs 😍🥰
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I wish the song had an actual bridge for how long it is. The bridge out is in the wrong place more like a BREAK.. otherwise this is 🔥🔥 structurally im looking for more classic when it come to blues type like into, v1, (maybe pre) not needed, hook, v2, hook, BRIDGE, hook, outro.. or even after the bridge can be a completely different shift adding ump to the chorus for build up closing out
Thank you . The only think is writing music without singers means using imagination . So my fantasy song was structured like this 😂❤
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I wanna buy this instrumental I have some platinum material to this
Thank you for your interest !
But I've seen that everytime people say I wanna buy they never buy.
When people buy they never tell you before 🫠
I feel like the first half of the hook is very "forcing" in terms of vocals. I dont feel like there is really any other option than to follow along with the guitar. Its sounds fantastic tho.
Thank you , everytime there is an hard challenge to chose what direction take . I prefer let the tracks go as I'm inspired . 🙏🏻
@CinoBiz absolutely. I think it flows very well. And it could certainly be due to my lack of ability that I feel so constrained. I just wanted to pass along my take because I love your work and hope to continue to write to it. Keep it up. I really like the teddy swims vibes
@@danfinkle6395thank you !!!! Next time I'll think about what you said !