I Gave a Beautiful Alien a Massage, Who Knew She Would Get Pregnant? | Sci-Fi | HFY Story

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  • Опубліковано 29 жов 2024

КОМЕНТАРІ • 44

  • @danielklotzbach4619
    @danielklotzbach4619 3 місяці тому +34

    The story is interesting but there are too many repetitive elements just to fill the time.

  • @jambrenn7843
    @jambrenn7843 3 місяці тому +21

    A person tends to get bored because to so many repetitions upon repetitions.

  • @puck61luck64
    @puck61luck64 3 місяці тому +12

    What's up with the story repeating it self more then once. Not Good. Maybe I'll give you another chance in the future. It was a good story.

  • @elfrad1714
    @elfrad1714 3 місяці тому +7

    Been there, done that! Except she was not alien. A massage can lead to all sorts of things 😂

  • @ygelementdgentertainment7525
    @ygelementdgentertainment7525 3 місяці тому +1

    Dame he was not mad he didn't get legs 😂

  • @larrylightner5638
    @larrylightner5638 3 місяці тому +6

    Too many segments repeats continuously.

  • @SciFiLoreVault
    @SciFiLoreVault  3 місяці тому +2

    Write how do you like the story?

  • @johnmoore8016
    @johnmoore8016 3 місяці тому +4

    A very good story, but there were to many repeats parts for me (that didn't make sense). maybe we need laws on earth like they had a zeta 9 when it came to people having children and bringing them up in the world. a part on what happened to the family as their child grew up would be great. (Mississippi Gulf Coast, USA).

  • @robert1386
    @robert1386 3 місяці тому +7

    Why The Repeats? Why The Repeats?

  • @nethanelmasters5170
    @nethanelmasters5170 3 місяці тому

    This is a 15 minute listen without All the repetitiveness. Maybe even less like 12 minutes.

  • @Scot_WestTexas
    @Scot_WestTexas 3 місяці тому +4

    Really sucked with the repetition of the story 🙄

  • @BenStenson
    @BenStenson 3 місяці тому +1

    I would say F no it was your responsibility to tell me this before i started

  • @ScarletFever109
    @ScarletFever109 3 місяці тому

    I wonder if this story can be sold on Amazon? I’ve been planning a book series of months and I’ve already started writing the first chapter in the first book.

  • @brianblackwell5713
    @brianblackwell5713 3 місяці тому +7

    4 to many times of repeating!!!

  • @DarthRevan-96
    @DarthRevan-96 3 місяці тому +2

    The repeats are very annoying

  • @johnhorton4436
    @johnhorton4436 3 місяці тому +1

    And This Guy even If Unintentionally Became a Father Even Though The Moment The Child was conceived he didn't know it And This Could Eventually Be Reason Enough for them to Be Allowed To Marry If they were to Go That Far

  • @hillbillyhippipe
    @hillbillyhippipe 3 місяці тому

    hello storyteller I listen to your story I liked it man thank you for the storyI await the next chapter ...

  • @Controlled_Insanity_003
    @Controlled_Insanity_003 3 місяці тому +2

    I don't enjoy the repeating of parts verbatim, it's annoying

  • @johnniemcbride2772
    @johnniemcbride2772 3 місяці тому +3

    Repeat. Repeat. Repeat. Frustrating! Listen to the stories BEFORE you post them.

  • @pabloflores2087
    @pabloflores2087 3 місяці тому +3

    This story makes no sense the pregnancy by touch

    • @johnhorton4436
      @johnhorton4436 3 місяці тому +1

      To Think The Greek Goddess Of Love Aphrodite Likely Had A Similar Issue I'd Wonder If She Could've been Impregnated That Easily

    • @Sennmut
      @Sennmut 3 місяці тому

      Yes. How did daddy's DNA get inside her from a massage?

  • @hookahmike
    @hookahmike 3 місяці тому +2

    WAY TOO MUCH repetition...

  • @donaldwalker3738
    @donaldwalker3738 3 місяці тому +2

    the editing body needs to be more diligent

  • @heyokavpeace4822
    @heyokavpeace4822 3 місяці тому +1

    *Konbonwa*🌆

  • @ygelementdgentertainment7525
    @ygelementdgentertainment7525 3 місяці тому

    Wtf is this? lol a story like a song repeating itself 😂

  • @puck61luck64
    @puck61luck64 3 місяці тому +3

    Sorry that isn't the way men today would act at becoming a Father by touch. I'd need to know who else she'd been touching and if there was a test.

  • @brandonheckman6004
    @brandonheckman6004 3 місяці тому

    So yeah I'm with everybody else you literally have repeated the same part of a story eight times for no reason is the story is not a half hour long please don't try and make it a half hour long

  • @serdalkeskin8624
    @serdalkeskin8624 3 місяці тому +2

    soooo,a pregnancy without any sex???? and then repeated the same story after another without telling anything new....boring sorry....how do you stay with your new parnter when there is never any kind of sex.... he as human is playing himself then till he dies of age....boring again...

  • @haroldlamble5163
    @haroldlamble5163 3 місяці тому +2

    How long was the pregnancy. Do they have sex the old fashioned way.

    • @runeingebretsen8378
      @runeingebretsen8378 3 місяці тому +1

      no she got pregnant through a massage,i doubt she can do it the old fashioned way.

  • @chabirandjeanmarc7032
    @chabirandjeanmarc7032 3 місяці тому

    c dans vos reves le nouvel obs?

  • @LiamGardner-u9k
    @LiamGardner-u9k 3 місяці тому +2

    CONTINUITY!!!!

  • @rawdog6746
    @rawdog6746 3 місяці тому

    CRAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • @Time2Live.online
    @Time2Live.online 2 місяці тому +1

    I know this is fiction but jeez... No marriage, not even a kiss. Glad you didn't try to describe what the child looked like, that would be hard to swallow, with no mention of ever having shared their DNA together. Not one of your better works.

  • @senadmusic8879
    @senadmusic8879 3 місяці тому +1

    So many repetitions it’s boooooooring 👎👎👎👎