A very good story, but there were to many repeats parts for me (that didn't make sense). maybe we need laws on earth like they had a zeta 9 when it came to people having children and bringing them up in the world. a part on what happened to the family as their child grew up would be great. (Mississippi Gulf Coast, USA).
I wonder if this story can be sold on Amazon? I’ve been planning a book series of months and I’ve already started writing the first chapter in the first book.
And This Guy even If Unintentionally Became a Father Even Though The Moment The Child was conceived he didn't know it And This Could Eventually Be Reason Enough for them to Be Allowed To Marry If they were to Go That Far
So yeah I'm with everybody else you literally have repeated the same part of a story eight times for no reason is the story is not a half hour long please don't try and make it a half hour long
soooo,a pregnancy without any sex???? and then repeated the same story after another without telling anything new....boring sorry....how do you stay with your new parnter when there is never any kind of sex.... he as human is playing himself then till he dies of age....boring again...
I know this is fiction but jeez... No marriage, not even a kiss. Glad you didn't try to describe what the child looked like, that would be hard to swallow, with no mention of ever having shared their DNA together. Not one of your better works.
The story is interesting but there are too many repetitive elements just to fill the time.
A person tends to get bored because to so many repetitions upon repetitions.
What's up with the story repeating it self more then once. Not Good. Maybe I'll give you another chance in the future. It was a good story.
Been there, done that! Except she was not alien. A massage can lead to all sorts of things 😂
Happy ending?
@@Controlled_Insanity_003 Well, I have a wonderful 12-year-old daughter who I love to bits. That's as happy as it gets but no regrets.
@@elfrad1714 so... delayed happy ending?
Lol a men of Culture
Dame he was not mad he didn't get legs 😂
Too many segments repeats continuously.
Write how do you like the story?
A very good story, but there were to many repeats parts for me (that didn't make sense). maybe we need laws on earth like they had a zeta 9 when it came to people having children and bringing them up in the world. a part on what happened to the family as their child grew up would be great. (Mississippi Gulf Coast, USA).
Why The Repeats? Why The Repeats?
This is a 15 minute listen without All the repetitiveness. Maybe even less like 12 minutes.
Really sucked with the repetition of the story 🙄
I would say F no it was your responsibility to tell me this before i started
I wonder if this story can be sold on Amazon? I’ve been planning a book series of months and I’ve already started writing the first chapter in the first book.
4 to many times of repeating!!!
The repeats are very annoying
And This Guy even If Unintentionally Became a Father Even Though The Moment The Child was conceived he didn't know it And This Could Eventually Be Reason Enough for them to Be Allowed To Marry If they were to Go That Far
hello storyteller I listen to your story I liked it man thank you for the storyI await the next chapter ...
I don't enjoy the repeating of parts verbatim, it's annoying
Repeat. Repeat. Repeat. Frustrating! Listen to the stories BEFORE you post them.
This story makes no sense the pregnancy by touch
To Think The Greek Goddess Of Love Aphrodite Likely Had A Similar Issue I'd Wonder If She Could've been Impregnated That Easily
Yes. How did daddy's DNA get inside her from a massage?
WAY TOO MUCH repetition...
the editing body needs to be more diligent
*Konbonwa*🌆
Wtf is this? lol a story like a song repeating itself 😂
Sorry that isn't the way men today would act at becoming a Father by touch. I'd need to know who else she'd been touching and if there was a test.
So yeah I'm with everybody else you literally have repeated the same part of a story eight times for no reason is the story is not a half hour long please don't try and make it a half hour long
soooo,a pregnancy without any sex???? and then repeated the same story after another without telling anything new....boring sorry....how do you stay with your new parnter when there is never any kind of sex.... he as human is playing himself then till he dies of age....boring again...
How long was the pregnancy. Do they have sex the old fashioned way.
no she got pregnant through a massage,i doubt she can do it the old fashioned way.
c dans vos reves le nouvel obs?
CONTINUITY!!!!
CRAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I know this is fiction but jeez... No marriage, not even a kiss. Glad you didn't try to describe what the child looked like, that would be hard to swallow, with no mention of ever having shared their DNA together. Not one of your better works.
So many repetitions it’s boooooooring 👎👎👎👎