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  • Опубліковано 28 вер 2024
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    Super talented Voice Actors:
    Norville 'Shaggy' Rogers - rawvintage - IG + Tiktok @RawVintage
    Daphne Blake and Velma Dinkley - Dahlia Vianne
    The Therapist - cratchett - www.fiverr.com...
    Fred Jones - DigitalVagrant - / digitalvagrant
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    Speedpaint Song:
    Track: SFRNG, Madzi, Just Isac & Custody - No Way Back [NCS Release]
    Music provided by NoCopyrightSounds.
    • SFRNG, Madzi, Just Isa...
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    LORE AGAIN HERE:
    Norville 'Shaggy' Rogers - The Keeper. An aspiring inventor that watched 'Ghost Busters' way too much as a kid. Created a way to 'keep' souls after the traumatic death of his dog.
    A terrifying opponent who is not above keeping your mother's soul for a week solely to make 'Yo mama' jokes.
    Daphne Blake - The Summoner. A young Necromancer that can summon compatible vessels for souls given to her by The Keeper, using her own bones as the catalyst. Takes 13 calcium tablets a day much to the displeasure of her local doctor.
    Fred Jones - The Trapper. Young Master to the infamous Jones Family. Inherited his father's passion for trapping with a tad too much fevour. Traps and binds souls to the vessels created by the Summoner in flesh and blood. Hate's changing his shirt.
    Velma Dinkley - The Harvester. An abomination that sucks the soul out of everything they touch.

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  • @Neytirix
    @Neytirix  Рік тому +28827

    My god this took WAY longer than it should've. I think I hate lips now. I know the interest in dunking on 'Velma' has floated away a bit but OH WELL. I still wanted to draw my take on them! Of course with a bit of lore sprinkled on top just for youu~ Hope you all enjoy!
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    Norville 'Shaggy' Rogers - The Keeper. An aspiring inventor that watched 'Ghost Busters' way too much as a kid. Created a way to 'keep' souls after the traumatic death of his dog.
    A terrifying opponent who is not above keeping your mother's soul for a week solely to make 'Yo mama' jokes.
    Daphne Blake - The Summoner. A young Necromancer that can summon compatible vessels for souls given to her by The Keeper, using her own bones as the catalyst. Takes 13 calcium tablets a day much to the displeasure of her local doctor.
    Fred Jones - The Trapper. Young Master to the infamous Jones Family. Inherited his father's passion for trapping with a tad too much fervour. Traps and binds souls to the vessels created by the Summoner in flesh and blood. Hate's changing his shirt.
    Velma Dinkley - The Harvester. An abomination that sucks the soul out of everything they touch.

  • @maylunaberry5315
    @maylunaberry5315 Рік тому +4625

    "She offered which was already wierd because she's allergic to them, man"
    The way he delivered that line was heartbreaking

    • @boltyboii
      @boltyboii Рік тому +275

      The entirety of his part was honestly perfect, the emotion was so strong, and you could feel what was happening :]

    • @phantom-ri2tg
      @phantom-ri2tg Рік тому +93

      Wait. does this mean it is implied she ate something she is allergic to?

    • @Scarlettheredninja
      @Scarlettheredninja Рік тому +71

      ​@@phantom-ri2tg Velma killed Scoob, bro.

    • @phantom-ri2tg
      @phantom-ri2tg Рік тому +40

      @@Scarlettheredninja Yes I figured eating him would be fatal.

    • @liamnast0929
      @liamnast0929 Рік тому +27

      @@Scarlettheredninja RUH RO RAGGY

  • @blackrose6920
    @blackrose6920 Рік тому +7441

    Now THIS is horror. No jumpscares, emotions that feel real, characters that feel alive, it makes you sit on the edge of your seat and a plot that feels mysterious

    • @aliawahfallacy
      @aliawahfallacy Рік тому +243

      seriously. this is the kind of horror that needs to become the norm. genuine, real feeling fear. I like Five Nights at Freddy's and things like that, but it just isnt the same as genuine horror like this

    • @oblozs10
      @oblozs10 Рік тому +34

      Jumpscares can be good though why do so many people hate them

    • @HarmonizedHero
      @HarmonizedHero Рік тому +67

      honestly, yeah! if this was the kinda horror that was common, id be able to say that i like horror! but unfortunitly, a lotta "horror" stuff isnt actual horror, just "ooh jumpscare, big loud thing go stomp stomp! oh you have access to a gun and ammo and could easily kill it? no. just no. no reason just screw you."

    • @anniesolomon4876
      @anniesolomon4876 Рік тому +30

      ​@@oblozs10 Idk why but I would say probably cause they kill the vibe sometimes?

    • @timberrobles7752
      @timberrobles7752 Рік тому +71

      @@oblozs10 people don’t like them because jumpscares require set up to be good. Like they need a whole buildup but most modern horror doesn’t give jumpscares enough tension for it to be good, thats why it seems really cheap nowadays.

  • @jobfcastro22
    @jobfcastro22 Рік тому +12234

    Seeing all the characters talk about her, then her showing up all smiley creeped me tf out, like the bald guy from silence of the lambs, also very very nice

    • @lolazola7068
      @lolazola7068 Рік тому +151

      You mean "Hannibal"?

    • @aliien2057
      @aliien2057 Рік тому +98

      The bald guy

    • @DoctorNemmo
      @DoctorNemmo Рік тому +134

      The bald guy...? Are you referring to... Doctor Lecter? He's a man of taste, I'm pretty certain that he would have a hard time, uhm, swallowing your description.

    • @eMpTy12189
      @eMpTy12189 Рік тому +8

      A

    • @danluna8840
      @danluna8840 Рік тому +5

      Just…. Wow!😲

  • @HalfLifeOfHumanity
    @HalfLifeOfHumanity 11 місяців тому +337

    I like how the message of Velma having killed Scooby Doo is both literal in their world and figurative in our world.

  • @apoliteboy2160
    @apoliteboy2160 Рік тому +2078

    This is giving "velma meets original velma" vibes and i'm loving it!

    • @raquimsuil7127
      @raquimsuil7127 Рік тому +49

      I think this is goin to be very creepy

    • @DocWolph
      @DocWolph Рік тому +44

      "Terror Scooby" making tweaks.

    • @0genexix0
      @0genexix0 Рік тому +25

      I saw that little video and I was thinking I would have loved to see that as the actual concept instead of a bad teenage angst and drama

    • @mega6662
      @mega6662 Рік тому +39

      One is a critic to the state of decade old franchises while also being a story of a eldritch creature wanting to have a happy life with mortals he loves but one of this mortals just refuses to forget and let the mistery unresolved yet the beast can help himself but to still love her despite she’s the cause of everything
      Meanwhile the other is a history about a gang of kids being ruined by a thing possessing one of them and killing the dog, and a mistery of what are they gonna do next
      Is he going to recover form he’s pet loss?
      What is her connection with the paranormal?
      Are they gonna save her?
      One is a critic and a history of a impossible wish and the other is a unresolved history of a tragedy

    • @humanperson2480
      @humanperson2480 Рік тому +11

      Avocado studios and neytrix do slightly different types of horror, but they’re both amazing!

  • @anomalythewriter
    @anomalythewriter Рік тому +6219

    I never expected the phrase “Oh, definitely not, I’m vegan!” to be so scary given the context. I hope these characters make some more appearances in other videos of yours, as this was thrilling!

    • @kyuokuo
      @kyuokuo Рік тому +142

      Vegans can be pretty scary sometimes...

    • @m-pc5334
      @m-pc5334 Рік тому +196

      @@kyuokuo you see the scary thing is that she jumped to that of all things

    • @sevenmillionhobbies7840
      @sevenmillionhobbies7840 Рік тому +20

      She ate Scooby-Doo 💀

    • @chaserussell2689
      @chaserussell2689 Рік тому +8

      @@p-__ How little attention do you get in your life?

    • @Juju2927
      @Juju2927 Рік тому +40

      It took me a few seconds to realize "Why would she reply that ?" and, OMG, the implication is horrificly good.

  • @morningstar9849
    @morningstar9849 Рік тому +1874

    The skit at the beginning was a hundred times better than the actual show and as always the artwork is absolutely fucking incredible!

    • @enderdrane
      @enderdrane Рік тому +36

      People say their art is perfect (which it is), but holy shit, the story writing is just top tier!

    • @morningstar9849
      @morningstar9849 Рік тому +1

      @@p-__ sounds like a fetish thing, therefore I choose to stay away from it.

  • @batknight2014
    @batknight2014 5 місяців тому +54

    This... is actually pretty interesting. And not just because comparatively ANYTHING is 10000x more interesting than Velma, I mean this is legit a really good concept and I'd watch this as a show.
    Also love the subtle hints that Velma is trapped in her own body and she's trying to warn everyone that she's possessed. From writing "that's not me" in her journal to crying. Cool ass concept.

  • @liviekumori
    @liviekumori Рік тому +3929

    The "serious adult animation" that we all actually wanted

    • @magicbois
      @magicbois Рік тому +62

      ​@@p-__ I'm Sorry I need you to run that by me again

    • @chaserussell2689
      @chaserussell2689 Рік тому +39

      @@p-__ How little attention do you get in your life?

    • @y.9645
      @y.9645 Рік тому +5

      ​@@p-__ ?

    • @catthemeg336
      @catthemeg336 Рік тому +19

      ​@@p-__ Ok at least the stupid "My videos are better" comments actually make sense 💀

    • @toastedprocastinator
      @toastedprocastinator Рік тому

      @@p-__
      what the fuck, say that again i don't think i get it

  • @ryokukurogane7185
    @ryokukurogane7185 Рік тому +2586

    Shaggy talking about Scooby was very well done. It was like he was slowly spiraling into insanity just thinking about it

    • @ZyMaverick
      @ZyMaverick 9 місяців тому +113

      As someone that has fallen into insanity over a scarily similar situation. He played it perfectly to the point where I had to smoke a fat blunt to calm down. Sounded exactly like me with my therapist ngl. Kodoos to the actor who showed how truely angering to insanity it is to just not know the truth even though deep down you already know it.

  • @EmpyreusAwakening
    @EmpyreusAwakening Рік тому +6408

    The way she tears up indicates two things:
    1) Velma is still in there trying to fight off the monster from invading her mind and taking over her body, once she heard that the others deeply cared for her, she was heartbroken and moved into tears
    2)Shaggy mentions that she’s allergic to dogs, when velma responded to the interviewer about a dog she had, she responds in a way which implies she ate the dog by thinking the interviewer meant if she ate a dog, And when she’s tearing up and says its her allergies, It could very likely be that she’s still eating scooby’s corpse

    • @annieandelsieofarendelle3294
      @annieandelsieofarendelle3294 Рік тому +690

      Or that the true Velma is crying over what her body was forced to do.

    • @waterslime9506
      @waterslime9506 Рік тому +485

      @@annieandelsieofarendelle3294 i mean she says "oh no im vegan" in response to the therapist talking about shaggys dog, then right after she starts crying and says its her allergies... which shaggy said she was allergic to dogs

    • @DinoTamer-22
      @DinoTamer-22 Рік тому +95

      Scooby snacks…oh no…

    • @taddad2641
      @taddad2641 Рік тому +45

      its both i think.

    • @AWBO.
      @AWBO. Рік тому +22

      Oh I thought it was because they weren’t blinking

  • @Rebar--
    @Rebar-- Рік тому +1123

    The whole idea of Velma not being normal was really nicely interpreted with her staring into the camera unlike the others who would look around.

    • @Goldiee.09
      @Goldiee.09 9 місяців тому +51

      the only time she looks away is when she says “I’m completely fine”, and people generally look away from others eyes when they’re lying

    • @pitonpriscal3379
      @pitonpriscal3379 8 місяців тому +15

      You can also see her eyes is in uneven in the end

  • @net_spider
    @net_spider Рік тому +1744

    Love that everyone is jumping on the "Velma as a Horror" track. Its just so good and at least getting something out of that show.

    • @crafteiddave1625
      @crafteiddave1625 Рік тому +59

      It makes sense. It is creepy to have someone you know replaced by an imposter and that is what watching Velma feels like.

    • @quaelgeist3337
      @quaelgeist3337 Рік тому

      I wish they leaned into that instead of a shown by a terf with lots of ableism that romanticizes straight up sexual assault (kissing someone who is in a state that's closely to unconscious is sa by definition, especially because even before the state she didn't give her consent (btw even if she did if the person is now not able to that doesn't matter)) and try being "haha white people" while the director hates herself for not being white

  • @150pages
    @150pages Рік тому +1258

    THIS should have been the show. Dead ass this is so cool. Everything, down to the pacing and dialog. It’s truly haunting and beautiful.

    • @kayleighapthorp7954
      @kayleighapthorp7954 Рік тому +13

      AGREED!

    • @Astra1_14
      @Astra1_14 Рік тому +4

      Yeap

    • @kingj9664
      @kingj9664 Рік тому

      Well if you want something kind of similar to a more darker scooby doo check out scooby doo Apocalypse it's a comic

    • @lonniebeezy9181
      @lonniebeezy9181 Рік тому +13

      DUDE If it was i would've watched the hell out of it

    • @benthemother3fan884
      @benthemother3fan884 Рік тому +13

      Yeah but you actually have to be creative to string a plot like this together. Creativity that Mindy Kailing and a lot of bigwigs lack nowadays

  • @matcha5346
    @matcha5346 Рік тому +3659

    I know this is supposed to be a deep,philosophical,sad animation but I love you for bringing Fred's ascot back

    • @platinumgames1314
      @platinumgames1314 Рік тому +144

      THE HOLY ASCOT!

    • @orangesoda4535
      @orangesoda4535 Рік тому +33

      I don't believe you understand the meaning of the word philosophical.

    • @DolusVulpes
      @DolusVulpes Рік тому +26

      I wouldn't say deep or philosophical are the words I'd use necessarily, since there aren't really any bigger themes here. The story is just exactly what it looks like it is.

    • @kiddosneakybeaky3934
      @kiddosneakybeaky3934 Рік тому +11

      some of y’all really don’t know a joke when y’all hear one, huh.

    • @DolusVulpes
      @DolusVulpes Рік тому +2

      @@kiddosneakybeaky3934 I do when the joke is actually funny

  • @Robin-Does-Stuff
    @Robin-Does-Stuff 11 місяців тому +46

    I love the way you portrayed Fred. Hes not a jerk like in the Tv show. He deeply cares for Velma and even says he is in her friend group. I think thats amazing. Good work love the art and animation. I think i have watched multiple times in about two days. Keep up the good work. Love your videos.

  • @sangmild387
    @sangmild387 Рік тому +707

    this is ten million times better than the actual show so far

  • @sev1011
    @sev1011 Рік тому +711

    "One of them mentioned a dog you had a few weekends ago."
    "Oh no, definitely not. I'm vegan!"
    This is what dark comedy should've been

  • @monochaos9442
    @monochaos9442 Рік тому +358

    This 5 minute video managed to be far more interesting and unique than Velma could ever hope to achieve.

  • @nicholasjohnston1970
    @nicholasjohnston1970 Рік тому +686

    This makes me realize how much better Velma would’ve been if they just kept them as friends

  • @balesplace
    @balesplace Рік тому +352

    This is legitimately such a neat concept. Wish the show had an ounce of this quality-

    • @1Gengar
      @1Gengar Рік тому

      I'm sorry that braindrad moron is your only comment, so have this as well👍

  • @eggguy20
    @eggguy20 Рік тому +156

    The end bit of the journal stating "that's not me" over and over made me feel like it was building up as a sort of action horror reboot on the Scooby-Doo monster apocalypse comic where the gang have to find a way to bring Velma back using the crystals that caused her current state while also avoiding the thing that's supposedly their friend.

  • @toad-on-a-toadstool
    @toad-on-a-toadstool Рік тому +50

    I like the detail in the opening section that Velma is coloured more saturated than the others. Shaggy, Daphne and Fred have these dim and greyish colours like their surroundings blending them in, but Velma is coloured much more harshly and stands out much more than the others, this differentiates her from the others, implying something is wrong.
    There's so much more in this video and the illustrations that come with it, i'm honestly amazed by the work put into these videos. ⦿◽︎⦿

  • @MeepLeDoodle
    @MeepLeDoodle Рік тому +1101

    I have so much intrigue in this single sprinkle of story compared to the dumpster fire they tried to give us lol. This is why I always get so excited for your videos.

  • @WebbedManiac
    @WebbedManiac 7 місяців тому +14

    They could genuinely make a great adult horror story using Scooby-Doo characters. Not every villian in the Scooby-Doo universe is just some clown in a mask. Actual ghosts and demons canonically exist in the verse and the Mystery gang has even encountered them.
    The show could literally start with this premise that Velma encountered a spirit/demon who was too tough to defeat and just straight up possessed her.

  • @bartimaeu1
    @bartimaeu1 Рік тому +520

    I like how they're all synergistic in their abilities then Velma just comes along and *chomp*

    • @oliverstray1040
      @oliverstray1040 Рік тому +22

      she's part of the synergy too, i think. others pointed out her design includes his skin and organs, which is probably a play on how she's a literal skinwalker

  • @scarletroseVT
    @scarletroseVT Рік тому +27

    I've rewatched this so many times now. They animated intro with great voice acting, the way the song and speedpaint are edited together, and of course, THE ART ITSELF- fantastic, I would love to see these as posters.
    Also gotta love the concept, I would totally watch an adult Scooby-Doo show with this kind of concept, so much better than the garbage we were given.

  • @SnailWithSalt
    @SnailWithSalt Рік тому +354

    I love how chillingly still velma was when sitting. It gave me a feeling of something not being right when she said "Im vegan" After he mentioned her dog.

  • @codywelsh9057
    @codywelsh9057 Рік тому +324

    This was a lot sadder than I expected

    • @codywelsh9057
      @codywelsh9057 Рік тому +37

      Like I know neys animations can be a little dark but holy shit

  • @oKGCo
    @oKGCo Рік тому +277

    The voice acting, the plot, the way they’re animated, it makes me feel sorry for them. I want to hug them now :C

    • @ravenqueenandapplewhite4258
      @ravenqueenandapplewhite4258 Рік тому +2

      Why make u feel sorry for them. I’m rlly confused on what just happened in this video

    • @oKGCo
      @oKGCo Рік тому +6

      @@ravenqueenandapplewhite4258 is English not your first language? Sorry if I sound rude

  • @s.a.w4528
    @s.a.w4528 2 місяці тому +3

    If somehow they get a season 3 they better use this idea this is infinitely more creative and endearing well done the song is amazing too

  • @fengyuan7838
    @fengyuan7838 Рік тому +232

    The details to the small movements of their eyeballs, eyebrows, and eyelids is amazing. Makes the character so expressive.

  • @aurorareed31127
    @aurorareed31127 Рік тому +289

    OH GODS that was absolutely incredible, from the animation to the voice acting. I had chill running down my back, I'm so glad it popped up in my feed so soon

  • @fishd3075
    @fishd3075 Рік тому +359

    The voice actors are amazing, also absolutely excellent art as always :o

  • @speedfreak1548
    @speedfreak1548 Рік тому +170

    Can’t even classify this as hate, this is just top tier art. Kinda makes me wish they would hit you up to turn this into a follow-up/horror arc.

  • @pikaratchet8995
    @pikaratchet8995 Рік тому +613

    I feel like no one is talking about how daphane said “I’m not stupid, I know how these disorders are actually like. My mom-“ then she looks uncomfortable and tries to change the subject as if not wanting to speak about her mother saying “I know what it’s like.”. I am really curious about what happened to her mother or her. Did her mother have some of those disorders? Maybe.
    Edit: holy moly macaroni, 100+ likes!? Thanks, I’ve never had this many likes before.

    • @mrgreenlake
      @mrgreenlake Рік тому +16

      What if she also remember scoob but scoob got to her

    • @pikaratchet8995
      @pikaratchet8995 Рік тому +14

      @@mrgreenlake that’s a cool theory

    • @UltimateCheetah-zs2iw
      @UltimateCheetah-zs2iw Рік тому +45

      In Mystery Incorporated, it's implied that Daphne's mother has some mental health issues.

    • @beekeeper9540
      @beekeeper9540 Рік тому +9

      @@UltimateCheetah-zs2iw and they spray her with a hose to fix it, apparently

    • @UltimateCheetah-zs2iw
      @UltimateCheetah-zs2iw Рік тому +10

      @@beekeeper9540 I didn't remember that. No wonder she runs off with that highwayman guy in that episode.

  • @riptorgamer3383
    @riptorgamer3383 Рік тому +5

    my god, the detail of everything is so good and the music suits this theme extremely well. well done sir, well done

  • @petercraigg1
    @petercraigg1 Рік тому +321

    This has potential to be a game. Like a click based horror survival. Or even one of those games where you just run from the threats but can't actually fight back.

    • @pugofwarbr
      @pugofwarbr Рік тому +14

      there is a game called In-terror-gation, that is very similar to this animation

    • @neddles33
      @neddles33 Рік тому +3

      I had assumed it was a riff on darkest dungeon, which does have a scooby doo party combo in game

    • @orangesoda4535
      @orangesoda4535 Рік тому

      The wnd one is trash tier horror

    • @petercraigg1
      @petercraigg1 Рік тому

      @@orangesoda4535 what is "wnd"?

    • @petercraigg1
      @petercraigg1 Рік тому

      @@orangesoda4535 is it walk and dodge?

  • @shotaaizawa1206
    @shotaaizawa1206 Рік тому +5

    Ok...
    We need this.
    We want this.
    We LOVE this.
    Take notes Mindy!

  • @isleuntoherself
    @isleuntoherself 16 днів тому +2

    i like how everyone avoids eye contact while being interviewed, except for, obviously, velma. nice detail

  • @simpli_A
    @simpli_A Рік тому +115

    When i first learned about what they did to these characters, I genuinely almost cried

    • @shadowking278
      @shadowking278 Рік тому +3

      I actually kinda like shaggys design.

    • @Cinnaschticks
      @Cinnaschticks Рік тому +6

      ​@@shadowking278 the designs were pretty ok. The writing, however, hurt.

  • @ahijahjoseph2142
    @ahijahjoseph2142 5 місяців тому +6

    What happened to the real Velma is she trapped inside of her mind and what is actually talking if not velma

  • @May-yd4yv
    @May-yd4yv Рік тому +76

    God I love how they all have like, different layers of Scooby, Shaggy has his Soul, Daphne his bones and Freddy his muscle layer meat suit, while Velma seems to have some twisted tormented amalgamation of dog bones and parts

    • @oliverstray1040
      @oliverstray1040 Рік тому +7

      look a bit closer, she has his organs, including his skin.

  • @pathetic.5796
    @pathetic.5796 Рік тому +173

    The lines, the background music that slowly gets louder, the lore, the designs.. are just so perfect and scary! This is what i want.. a cartoon yet gives scary and creepy vibes.. with full of theories and mysteries!

    • @Tavernforlife76
      @Tavernforlife76 Рік тому +1

      Do you know what the background music is?

    • @pathetic.5796
      @pathetic.5796 Рік тому +2

      @@Tavernforlife76 its on the description, no way back.

    • @Newguyatwork
      @Newguyatwork Рік тому

      ​@@Tavernforlife76Obsession by Dayon(the first bgm)

    • @--RL--
      @--RL-- Рік тому

      No. That is the outro music. They mean the track that is progressing through the main video. I have also been looking for the name.@@pathetic.5796

  • @brightthesandwing
    @brightthesandwing Рік тому +90

    Dude everyone is talking about the art and the story, and yea, while that’s definitely true, what really struck me is the frustration and fear in shaggy’s voice
    It’s honestly pretty chilling

  • @Alex-eb3cb
    @Alex-eb3cb 14 днів тому +4

    wish we had a series like this instead of Velma

  • @DocteurNS
    @DocteurNS 3 місяці тому

    The art at the end is absolutely A-MA-ZING!! That's the kind of show I wish we had. The animation too is very poignant. The facial expressions on Fred. Breathtaking.

  • @luminariel3765
    @luminariel3765 Рік тому +2

    This. This is what i was hoping the new show would be like. I mean, they said "adult Scooby Doo" and didn't deliver.

  • @cleverusername2578
    @cleverusername2578 Рік тому +60

    I love how this combines the character designs from Velma with the character personalities of the original series

  • @supersalty5288
    @supersalty5288 Рік тому +45

    I love the small details in this, like how everyone else is shaded duller, and their clothes have more complexity to them (examples: more shading, more line work, more colors etc) while "Velma" has a brighter color palette and her shirt looks very simple

  • @syppy7416
    @syppy7416 Рік тому +70

    I really do love the color contrast between Velma and the others

  • @OddDeity
    @OddDeity 19 днів тому

    I sensed more humanity and effort in this short than the entire two seasons of the show.
    Great job.

  • @Septic-Hearts
    @Septic-Hearts Рік тому +97

    This is such an amazing and creepy concept! I would have loved to see this concept fully realised! There's so much great tension and the line delivery with the artwork and animation of the characters is genuinely unnerving! You did amazing as always, Ney! :D

  • @pokaay3163
    @pokaay3163 Рік тому +50

    this was amazing holy shit, and the improvement in quality with the story focused bits is so cool.. its way more animated! it must have taken a long time. kudos ney!!

  • @Radikus
    @Radikus 6 місяців тому +1

    I want this to be a series so bad.. like a 6 episode run on Netflix.. and the song can be the intro to it.. with 80s episodes highlights, scene for scene, but with this new art style... I'm going to scour Kickstarter I better see you on there with this.. if. not... My allergies may "play up a bit"

  • @suki9950
    @suki9950 Рік тому +184

    I want a full show of just this concept, it's just the horror that people need. ❤

    • @johnfraire6931
      @johnfraire6931 Рік тому

      I think there was a comic run of basically this (DC I think?), in the sense that it was a toned down adult horror version of Scooby Doo

    • @seikotheserval5341
      @seikotheserval5341 Рік тому

      ​@@johnfraire6931 GASP do you have a name of that comic?

    • @johnfraire6931
      @johnfraire6931 Рік тому +1

      @@seikotheserval5341 I'll dig it out for you chief, brb

    • @johnfraire6931
      @johnfraire6931 Рік тому

      @@seikotheserval5341 Scooby Doo: Apocalypse

    • @seikotheserval5341
      @seikotheserval5341 Рік тому +2

      @@johnfraire6931 GASP thank you, you are saviour :D

  • @WolfTrot
    @WolfTrot 3 місяці тому +3

    Did...did she EAT Scooby? "I heard you had a friends dog a couple weeks back" "oh no! Im vegan!"

  • @harutokazuki1868
    @harutokazuki1868 Рік тому +189

    with you, directing this show, this would have being something from another world, i love every single piece of art that you create.

  • @Shoutmonx7f
    @Shoutmonx7f Місяць тому +1

    A detail I love, is that Shaggy's got the soul of Scooby, Daphne's got the bones, and Fred's got the muscles, whereas "Velma" only has the logo, because she harvests, not collects.

  • @dragonstudiowv8342
    @dragonstudiowv8342 Рік тому +553

    Esto está demasiado bien hecho, ese sentimiento de que algo está muy fuera de lugar te da escalofríos... Esos ojos tan detallados y vacios solo te hacen sentir aún peor. Uno de los mejores cortos que he visto.

    • @shadowfox8084
      @shadowfox8084 Рік тому +11

      Translation:
      This is so well done, that feeling that something is so out of place gives you chills... Those vacant detailed eyes only make you feel even worse. One of the best shorts I've ever seen.

  • @Dan_ShiningMoon
    @Dan_ShiningMoon 3 місяці тому +2

    I need to know this Daphne's whole backstory. I NEED IT

    • @twist_ending7545
      @twist_ending7545 3 місяці тому +1

      I think the creator might have taken some inspiration from Mystery Incorporated with the way Daphne mentioned her mom

  • @patriciov.3742
    @patriciov.3742 Рік тому +42

    the voices, the expressions, the ambiance. My god and the art. The only thing i can say is "She as done it again fellas!". Love your art Neytirix.

  • @MCbeccy89
    @MCbeccy89 Рік тому +49

    Now this is the kind of remake I could get behind.
    This was so cool! You made everything feel so real and terrifying in the most subtle ways. The voice actors also did an amazing job with what you gave them! Love every invision you have in these series, can't wait to see more!

  • @Kirby666.
    @Kirby666. Рік тому +4

    If the music wasn’t so intense there it might not be been scary or off putting. That really shows you how important mood is.

  • @Sirine_Eques
    @Sirine_Eques Рік тому +22

    I love your style of horror. Taking characters we know and adding that sprinkle of "somethings not right." Is the perfect psychological thrill all your work has with kick ass designs.

  • @gusmon6898
    @gusmon6898 4 місяці тому

    I love the art in the end how all of them have a part of scooby soul ,bone and flush both horrifying and sad

  • @legendarycryptid2629
    @legendarycryptid2629 Рік тому +29

    This whole thing goes so hard. If you were able to spin this either into a webcomic or full-blown animated webseries without being cracked down on, I'd watch it. This gives me Scooby-Doo Project vibes. Heck, the reference to Mystery Incorporated already got me with the reference of just what was possessing Velma.

    • @penguinstarlette4028
      @penguinstarlette4028 Рік тому +1

      What is it?

    • @ShiningAndStarstruck
      @ShiningAndStarstruck Рік тому

      ​​@@penguinstarlette4028 the ghost of scooby. this COULD tie in to avocado animation's video about velma. plus, a talking dog had to be some sort of otherworldly creature, who's to say scoob isn't really a demon pretending to be a dog who wants to experience human interaction? velma is supposed to be the brainy one of the group, so it would make sense for scoob to possess her due to her knowledge and intelligence.

  • @Taijan1
    @Taijan1 Рік тому +2

    Again. This and the Animation by Avocardo are just billions of times better then the the actual license animation we got. Keep up the good work my friend!

  • @glytchmeister9856
    @glytchmeister9856 Рік тому +70

    0:46 “You don’t mind if I smoke a bit?”
    Me, immediately: “One shudders to imagine what inhuman thoughts lie behind those glasses… what dreams of chronic and sustained cruelty.”

    • @m.m8870
      @m.m8870 11 місяців тому +2

      DO YOU BELIVIE IN MAGIC-

  • @brycevo
    @brycevo 9 місяців тому +1

    This is the best use of the Velma cast

  • @graveyard.guyyyy
    @graveyard.guyyyy Рік тому +49

    The amount of effort you put into your videos is absolutely amazing. Immediately the animation hooks you into this mysterious story and then you get to see SOME BADASS RE-DESIGNS??? Your art is incredibly inspiring, cant wait to see what you post next!! :D

  • @reddwarfff
    @reddwarfff Рік тому +66

    The spectacular voice acting and dialogue all wrapped up in the bow that is the animation. Feels like you're there.

  • @hiwaga7399
    @hiwaga7399 Рік тому +2

    I wonder if Not Velma had anything to do with Scooby clearly not being a normal dog.

  • @doyouneedahug3520
    @doyouneedahug3520 Рік тому +92

    1:51 I"m scared to continue cause I feel like it's gonna switch to an image of the dead dog as soon as the music does it's rising thing

  • @shadowofdakness
    @shadowofdakness 5 місяців тому +3

    See what I hate about fan made stuff like this is often y'all make amazing stuff but I won't see a cartoon or comic based on it. You talented mofos need more spotlight and serializations!

  • @coffekek
    @coffekek Рік тому +45

    Taking inspiration from the show just not being right, is absolutely genius. I can not stress enough how cool this is

  • @mrgold64
    @mrgold64 Рік тому +2

    Shaggy has Scooby's soul, Daphne has Scooby's bones, Freddy has Scooby's skin, what does Velma have?

  • @emoi7th
    @emoi7th Рік тому +67

    I can't get over the fact that this 5 minutes video is better than the whole Velma show

  • @KBsales171
    @KBsales171 5 місяців тому

    This was the Velma we wanted from the beginning, her work is amazing (Neytirix's work)

  • @projeckt80s
    @projeckt80s Рік тому +37

    Now this is something I would love to watch
    It’s different but in a good way
    Still having the essence of the original but with a good twist
    With its own story

  • @Evo-creature
    @Evo-creature Рік тому +51

    Love the stuff! The animation is only getting better and better!!!

  • @jdogwolftombstonesproducti309
    @jdogwolftombstonesproducti309 Рік тому +46

    2:28 If this was ever green lit to be a show I guaranteed this song Neytirix place in there video would probably be the intro or outro music and I would be all down for it!

  • @Gebunator
    @Gebunator 6 місяців тому

    Man, I love this. Especially Daphne's part. I intepreted it like her about to spill the beans of necromancy. Her mom wasn't mentally afflicted, it was something else and Daphne knew those symptoms well enough to deduce that Velma ain't got disorders going on.. But she manages to compose herself before revealing there's indeed supernatural powers and potentially get locked up as delusional person.

  • @Ash2Flame116
    @Ash2Flame116 Місяць тому +1

    This is the "mature" Scooby Do I wanna see.

  • @Moszczynski69
    @Moszczynski69 Рік тому +24

    This is the kind of reboot I would watch in a heartbeat. This is some straight FIRE stuff hidden around the drawings. God tier.

  • @UGNAvalon
    @UGNAvalon Рік тому +22

    This and Avocado Animation made me appreciate the Velma show’s existence that tiny bit more.

  • @Observer_Decay
    @Observer_Decay 5 місяців тому

    I like the idea that when the therapists couldn't help the rest of the gang delves into supernatural methods to either save Velma or destroy her and the creature possessing her.

  • @Angsty_Teen-zn2pv
    @Angsty_Teen-zn2pv 2 місяці тому +1

    Wish this was an actual series.

  • @arushamshafeeq9428
    @arushamshafeeq9428 4 місяці тому +2

    If this was s2 i would watch it

  • @flomstuff-kk7fn
    @flomstuff-kk7fn 4 місяці тому

    I remember seeing this FOREVER AGO and I just found it again in my recommended. I remember first.seeing.it, and thought it was actually from Velma, so when I watched some people react to the actual show, I was waiting for it, because I remembered it existing, but not enough to look it up again

  • @SleepiPotionsXD
    @SleepiPotionsXD Рік тому +3376

    Things i noticed
    1. Velma is the only one that starts looking at the camera.
    2. Velma starts crying when they open the journal. Possibly meaning she wants help and is hoping that they could help.
    3. The tears could be about how her friends care for her
    4. She states she is vegan after the comment about the dog. Possibly meaning she ate the dog.
    5. She doesn't blink
    6. Everyone looks tierd while she looks awake and fine. To the point where she looks creepy

    • @stikthrowsanimationsatthew2461
      @stikthrowsanimationsatthew2461 8 місяців тому +225

      Also the fact her colors are more saturated than the others.

    • @netherlordgaming995
      @netherlordgaming995 7 місяців тому

      shes demon possessed

    • @itzbigchicano001
      @itzbigchicano001 7 місяців тому +70

      Things I noticed.
      The video.
      Dope ass drawings.

    • @amelianekomimi1936
      @amelianekomimi1936 6 місяців тому +61

      If you look at the harvester art - you see scoobys tag in her stomach.

    • @delta8989
      @delta8989 6 місяців тому +92

      Also that the tears are yellow, this can mean A) her head is filled with that yellow liquid, possibly the thing that’s controlling her, B) she’s crying blood, but her blood has zero iron on it, which means that the body is dead and being controlled like a puppet

  • @oigomieggo24
    @oigomieggo24 Рік тому +6495

    Love the part where Daphne explains she’s seen what mental illness is and that Velma is different. The way she says it is so foreboding. Props to the VA

    • @Pastelpurplecryptid
      @Pastelpurplecryptid Рік тому +331

      Reminds me of the times she talks about her mother having mental breakdowns every once in a while in mystery incorporated

    • @aliceramdom.s
      @aliceramdom.s Рік тому +15

      lol

    • @twist_ending7545
      @twist_ending7545 Рік тому +60

      @@Pastelpurplecryptid her occasional odd comments about her parents (mostly her mother I believe) were interesting ngl.

    • @cesarv7685
      @cesarv7685 Рік тому +29

      ​@@Pastelpurplecryptidnever seen much of that series (due to the shows being random but the same on my tv) so I don't know any info about the characters.
      But Daphne knowing what the symptoms look like because of her mother is a good detail.

    • @error-try-again-later
      @error-try-again-later 9 місяців тому +39

      ​@@twist_ending7545 not just her mother, she also said that her dad was left alone in the house for 1 week and they found him crawling around naked or something? 💀 It's a miracle she turned out as stable as she did lmao

  • @destronarok785
    @destronarok785 Рік тому +520

    Not gonna lie, your versions of them look better than the original. Like, Velma for example, her design reminds me of a sweet little girl that won't harm a fly. Actually adorable.

    • @merriquelynn
      @merriquelynn 8 місяців тому +50

      Yes. The lines are smoother somehow. She has those big eyes like what other versions of Velma imply with her glasses. The glasses here are like a mask to hide behind. And I love that in her character design. Large eyes are associated with innocence and curiosity. There are also eyes wide in fear like they can’t believe what they’re seeing. Like, this Velma knows her situation and she’s so afraid and desperate. She’s so cute and looks just so sweet. Like, it’s tragic that this little lady has been possessed. And the body horror of eating your friends dog with no control over your own body. Gosh.

    • @ButterFlyGardenBlossom
      @ButterFlyGardenBlossom 7 місяців тому +32

      Yeah, all of them look so much nicer. Ig I wouldn’t have minded the race swapping if THIS was the style lol. And also if the writing was good ofc.

  • @demonenthusiast1076
    @demonenthusiast1076 Рік тому +2915

    The part were shaggy was like “it doesn’t make sense he should still be there but there’s nothing” gave me straight up chills down my whole body

    • @strangeacelegume
      @strangeacelegume Рік тому +216

      Part of me wonders if he has any cameras inside his house, and if he does that makes it so much more terrifying that he doesn’t know where Scooby went

    • @kings_grove
      @kings_grove Рік тому +84

      @@strangeacelegume he said his place had cameras, along with his neighbors, and since he also mentioned that they didn't leave once meant he checked the cameras and saw nothing happening.
      yet Scooby wasn't there when he arrived, so it's pretty bone chilling terrifying

    • @Un_prønøunceable
      @Un_prønøunceable Рік тому +1

      SAMEEEEEEE

    • @nexusvoid367
      @nexusvoid367 Рік тому +48

      I mean... am I the only one getting the obvious hint that she ate him? Or devoured/harvested in some other way.
      Mostly because either Scooby is somehow hidden in the house and Shaggy cannot find him - but the fervent "He's not there" from Shaggy seems to imply he really isn't there - otherwise him being hidden would be sort of a letdown "No actually he is there." "Oh"
      So if he's not there theres really only a couple way he could have gone, namely down the drains or inside well.... you know.
      Which is perhaps again hinted at when Velma is asked about her "having a Dog"... And he first instinctive response is she's vegan. Now obviously - making fun of the "vegans will always tell you theyre vegans" stereotype is likely. But more likely, especially with how taken aback the psychiatrist is - is that Velma's first thought was genuinely of having... eaten Scooby. Her tears after this moment could also perhaps be "for Scooby", assuming as we see after - that "this" is not the real Velma. And that the real Velma had to watch whatever has overtaken her... eat her friend's dog... Tears, would be appropriate I feel.
      Then again - could just be that she was crying over what a pathetic mess was made out of the show :p God knows thats also a tragedy worth spilling tears over xP

    • @midnights2631
      @midnights2631 Рік тому

      Same

  • @theperyton9895
    @theperyton9895 Рік тому +5404

    I just noticed that the whole gang looks deathly pale and corpse like, but “Velma” looks normal. I like that story telling there, like something is keeping her young and vibrant but everyone else looks like they’re getting the life sucked out of them.

    • @waltuhputyourdsawaywaltuh
      @waltuhputyourdsawaywaltuh Рік тому +163

      Damn I wouldve never noticed it lmao

    • @4Bakers
      @4Bakers Рік тому +417

      I don't think their life force is getting drained, I think that's symptomatic of their emotional response to what's going on. Whatever's controlling her, by contrast, isn't upset, scared or worried at all.

    • @MyUsernameIsGoofy
      @MyUsernameIsGoofy Рік тому +177

      I mean the lore does say Velma sucks out the souls of living things. Maybe the rest of them are slowly being drained by it, kinda like a chain smoking type of thing

    • @ArDeeMee
      @ArDeeMee Рік тому +43

      It’s also hella exhausting trying to cage the beast inside of Velma…

    • @ImperativeGames
      @ImperativeGames Рік тому +74

      I'm pretty sure it's because they are scared, they can't sleep, they think she'll do something to them.
      And probably she already doing something to them...

  • @FelixCatboi
    @FelixCatboi Рік тому +2757

    You see, THIS is the kinda spin the series needed, the way you portray the characters and little quirks or nicknames, it leaves its own story interpretation to be held, its a billion times better than what was regurgitated by Mindy.

    • @KoolKittKat4679
      @KoolKittKat4679 Рік тому +45

      Agreed. I WISH we got this

    • @SlugcatThe_Hunter
      @SlugcatThe_Hunter Рік тому +15

      *Regurgitated*

    • @theapexsurvivor9538
      @theapexsurvivor9538 Рік тому +33

      We need a Scooby-Doo series set in a grim-dark/horror setting, preferably with the gang's work being hampered and covered up by glow in the dark federal agents.

    • @hotnessgaming1396
      @hotnessgaming1396 22 дні тому +4

      Check out “Velma meets original Velma”
      I saw a 20 second clip of it and thought it was actual plot of season 2 and almost started to watch the damn thing 🤣😂

  • @dboeify
    @dboeify Рік тому +6912

    you literally created a more compelling story in under 3 minutes than the entirety of "Velma." If they wanted to elevate scooby-doo to an adult audience, what you did there would have been a MUCH better way to do it. Kudos

    • @ShantesTravelThings
      @ShantesTravelThings Рік тому +7

      🙄

    • @hahahahahahahahaa6580
      @hahahahahahahahaa6580 Рік тому +240

      ​@@ShantesTravelThingsyou got a better idea, buddy? C'mon, we all know you've got more in you than just an eyeroll. Share with the class!

    • @vriska9001
      @vriska9001 Рік тому +139

      saying "it's better than Velma" doesn't mean anything. if the bar is wedged between the floor tiles, even a coin could roll over it.
      i am being a pedant, but otherwise yeah this shit is good!

    • @9Jaker9
      @9Jaker9 Рік тому +28

      Velma isn't cannon because there's no Scooby doo

    • @dboeify
      @dboeify Рік тому +69

      @@9Jaker9 Never said it was cannon. The creators said they wanted to "elevate Scooby Doo to an adult audience." and in order to do that, they got rid of scooby, among other terrible decisions.

  • @T7LI
    @T7LI Рік тому +811

    "THAT'S NOT ME" over and over and over again... this hit me in the throat. imagine the sheer desperation of being possessed and the only thing you can do is write in a book while whatever possessed you is sleeping... filling the ENTIRE book top to bottom, front to back with the only thing you need people to know

    • @timesnewlogan2032
      @timesnewlogan2032 4 місяці тому +41

      There was a little boy, years ago, whose personality changed completely. His mother took him to several doctors, and they all diagnosed him with different mental disorders, and medications as I recall. Nothing changed. Then one day, he walked up to his mother and handed her a sheet of paper, with one word written on it:
      “HELP”
      Turns out, he had streptococcus, which triggered an autoimmune response that was attacking his brain. Thankfully, they were able to save him and he returned to normal, but it likely would have killed him before long.

    • @vincentproud6589
      @vincentproud6589 Місяць тому

      ​@@timesnewlogan2032
      What was his name?

    • @timesnewlogan2032
      @timesnewlogan2032 Місяць тому +1

      @@vincentproud6589 I don't remember the one I saw on TV, since it was around fifteen years ago, but there was one more recent named Parker.
      UPDATE: After poking around, it might have been David. There's a video uploaded in 2022 that shows him grown up, and given the time distance, I think that might be him.

  • @aratinatophat1072
    @aratinatophat1072 Рік тому +3438

    I love how Velma’s got the most vibrant colours of the video, makes her feel even more out of place

    • @megeelee
      @megeelee Рік тому +254

      EXACTLY WHAT I WAS THINKING, the first thing I noticed though was the eyes, bright, gleeful, energized, she’s not the real Velma, though it has her skin

    • @Milk-ck1wv
      @Milk-ck1wv Рік тому +164

      ​@@megeelee I think whatever has Velma is sharing a body with her. She's still there and conscious but it has more control but can't see

    • @strangeacelegume
      @strangeacelegume Рік тому +87

      Also she doesn’t move almost at all. All of the others, even if they aren’t moving as much as Shaggy was, they still had small moves to accompany their speech, but she was almost completely still besides handing the journal over and the slight eye movement she makes when saying “completely fine!” It’s got a large amount of uncanny value in it and it’s fascinating to see it done in such extremely subtle ways.

    • @error-try-again-later
      @error-try-again-later 9 місяців тому +22

      Her eyes also look very wide and fearful even though she's smiling. The other characters had more realistic expressions so it sticks out.