Love it, but a couple suggestions. I feel the verses could use some more work. It’s feel like a “that’s good enough” scenario. Also maybe give more reign with the splits. I feel like there could be so much more movement and grace with it. Add more splits, honestly, and don’t just make it octaves, let one have a bit of a moving part than the other. One could have the melody while the other gets some movement. I say this all as a guy who has played trumpet since I can remember. I love the song, keep up the good work.
Love it, but a couple suggestions. I feel the verses could use some more work. It’s feel like a “that’s good enough” scenario. Also maybe give more reign with the splits. I feel like there could be so much more movement and grace with it. Add more splits, honestly, and don’t just make it octaves, let one have a bit of a moving part than the other. One could have the melody while the other gets some movement. I say this all as a guy who has played trumpet since I can remember. I love the song, keep up the good work.
Thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it. I plan on expanding upon it