i can't,,sorry. just want to gave you some advise. you probably will say that english is not your first language, well,, neither do i. but we can improve ourself by learn every day. making mistake is ok, but don't ignore it. fix it and improve yourself. i know you can.
This was not a new topic, but I LOVED LOVED the slant. It did not state the obvious that she overheard his conversation. Instead, it dealt with the consequences. Very creative. Author, that last scene was Hollywood perfection. 👏👏👏
Waah! He took so fast to realise he was hurting his wife with his cold behaviour who was craving for his luv...he was in stress that's why he start to badmouthing about her...ooh! When he try to confess his love she started to behave cold...they was married for 1 year..be he was still a cold person...but when she started to behave cold.. in just 2 days he was craving for her...
I wish rain was a person especially a boy/man making people together like I do for my friends so that we can be together ( my wish ) and he also should be handsome
Why is the girl that cries,the one of the cover of the video,always everywhere? When i see her i always think "oooh maybe i've watched this video already" hahha no hate i love this story💙
Can you make a bonus part...?? Like ending is happy but still their parents wish is in complete right and what about jimin he deserves importance in this ff right I am not saying anything to you but I have read so many stories novel so I think I should have told you so you can improve your skills besides like you will be able to became a good writer right .... I am just sujesting you....if u feel bad that I am out of my limits then I am really very sorry and yes keep going soon to be a famous author....🙂
Please ignore my all grammaticaly mistakes... I purple you army 💜😘😘
Welcome to UA-cam hehe😁
i can't,,sorry. just want to gave you some advise. you probably will say that english is not your first language, well,, neither do i.
but we can improve ourself by learn every day. making mistake is ok, but don't ignore it. fix it and improve yourself. i know you can.
5:32 Ah yes, Mr.Lee. The most famous person in bts ffs
😂😂
The most rich and respect full guy u can ever get to know 😂😂😝
cute he turned him from cold to warm awww.
Finally! A ff where the author doesn't put the lines on the screen for hours!
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The words went too fast try to make lil bit slow next time
Just use playback speed. That's what I use
@@zficsstudios yes i know but atlest add like lil bit more slow some armys cant read that fast hope u dont mind me 💜💜
Reduce playback speed
@@Vibing-y9w thats like 3 months ago
Reducing speed can help till now but hope that author will do from next time 💜
I like how Jimin said congratulations for going to be a newly mother and kissed y/n cheek knowing Taehyung is going to confess one way
🤣 The 🥰 weather 🤣 is 🥰 also 🤣 flirty 🥰 like 🤣 Jiminii 🤣🥰
This was not a new topic, but I LOVED LOVED the slant. It did not state the obvious that she overheard his conversation. Instead, it dealt with the consequences. Very creative. Author, that last scene was Hollywood perfection. 👏👏👏
whaaaaat a perfectttt story. tae got his karma. its so fare. other authors just makes yn melt with just a sorry.
4:35
Feeling lonely (lonely)
Oh I used to have a lover that could hold me (hold me)..
😂😂😂😂 the picture of Jungkook😂😂😂😂😂
The music 🎵 running through the video was awesome 😁 i loved it and enjoyed the video
Author your story is just perfect and you have added the perfect feelings in the story it was amazing keep it up author 💜💜
Couldn't even read the lines enjoying them... Words going too fast...
This made me cry 😭😭😭😭😭😭
Bonus part pls!!! 💜it was superbbb
The story is in complete without bridal style carrying 😁
I am pretty sad abt child
Child be like: huh... there are forget abt me huh ( counfused )🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🥺🥺
Please make a bonus part pls plssss🙏😭
It was sooo cuteee love itt🥺❤️
Waah! He took so fast to realise he was hurting his wife with his cold behaviour who was craving for his luv...he was in stress that's why he start to badmouthing about her...ooh! When he try to confess his love she started to behave cold...they was married for 1 year..be he was still a cold person...but when she started to behave cold.. in just 2 days he was craving for her...
I wish rain was a person especially a boy/man making people together like I do for my friends so that we can be together ( my wish ) and he also should be handsome
and what about taehyung's parents dream of being grand parents??
did they "do it"
oops sorry sorry hehehe you know i m little bit pervert
What about the child 😂😂they planned all
Wow beautiful ❤️❤️❤️ you taehyongaaah 💘💘💘💘💘 uuuu you
I have request that please write a little big😂😂😂
its amazing can you make a bonus part of it
Which song did it play at 12:09?
I don't know but if search by writing sad song music then it'll be come... Bye
@@Bearseverytypesoflovestory thanks a lot
Actually I love all your ff's keep going..😁💜
12:52 jacket ki kami hai varna to maine background me tum hi ho chala rakha hai already.
Why is the girl that cries,the one of the cover of the video,always everywhere? When i see her i always think "oooh maybe i've watched this video already" hahha no hate i love this story💙
What a about grandchildren
Honestly i dont like i dont know why but i cant see taehung in pain😢
The words are a bit blurry for me
Plz can you tell me the name of this music 11:49
I want part 2 🥺😭😭😭 plsss can u make part 2
I was abt to cry in the end
It to fast the writing, try to make slow.
Wow author you did an excellent job it's a nice story good keep it up waiting for your upcoming masterpieces SARANGHAEYO 🔮💜
11:39
In the last part
Can you make a bonus part...?? Like ending is happy but still their parents wish is in complete right and what about jimin he deserves importance in this ff right I am not saying anything to you but I have read so many stories novel so I think I should have told you so you can improve your skills besides like you will be able to became a good writer right .... I am just sujesting you....if u feel bad that I am out of my limits then I am really very sorry and yes keep going soon to be a famous author....🙂
나는 당신의 다른 ff를 좋아하지만 이것은 싫어 ff 나는 그것을 좋아하지 않는다
Why? Is here anything wrong?